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Part 10

Everyone walks off to their rooms

Benji was still angry as to why was dodo getting a whole room to himself while he had too share his room with that lambu

B= yeh bhi koi baat hai ,, mein bechara kismata ka mara

Kabhi dia to kabhi dodo se haara

Yeh na insaafi humeshan mere saath hi kyun hoti hai???

A== akele akele khada kis se baat kar raha hai??

B==Kismet se.

A=kya??

B=kuch nahin

Benji rolls his eyes and was about to move when dia suddenly cumes and stands b4 him , she was glaring at him like anything

First confused at this sudden appearance of dia n then preety soon he gets completely lost in her wonderful eyes'

Dia keeps on standing there for few minutes waiting for some kind of reaction from benji but when she gets none she stomps her foot on benji's and makes him shriek in pain

B=AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH

DiA YEH KYA KIYA

Adi giggles and gets glares from benji in return

D= tumhare jaisa ghatiya insaan maine aaj tak apni zindagi mein nahi dekha

B= what??? Maine kya kia ab??

D= kahan jaa rahe the tum ??

B= apne kamre mein..

D= vahan jakar kya karoge??

B= sounga , bahut neend aa rahi hai kitni thand hai n mein apna favourite night suit daal k sounga

Dia rolls her eyes n slaps benji on his shoulder

D=aur mere saath kiye gaye tumhare promise ka kya??

B== ouch kaunsa promise??

D= yahi k shimla pahunch k tum mujhe shopping karwaoge n jo samman mera tumhari vajha se mumbai mein hi reh gaya tha vo dubara mangvaoge?

B= ohh voo

D= haan vo

B(smiling a bit)= to tum seedha seedha kaho na k tum mere saath date pe jaane ka bahanna dhundh rahi ho , itna chilaqane ki kya zarurat thi??

D=(shrieking even loder then b4)WHATTTTTTTTT?? Mr benji , get this straight dia ko bilkul pasand nahin hai k koi us se faltu ka mazak kare samjhe tum??

B=(shocked at dis'a outburst)=dia mein to bas '

D= mein to bas kya?? Tumhari vajha se mera saara saman Mumbai mein reh gaya aur tumhe sone ki padi hai?? Mujhe laga tha k tum itne bhi bure nahin ho but I was wrong u r the most pathetic person I ever met,,

Uday listens to dia benji's fight n cums running their , he is soon joined by suhani n gunji too

U== deedz suno

D= shut up dodo mein tum se baat nahi kar rahi.

Benji mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahin thi actually mujhe tumse yahi umeed thi , thanks for being so helpful

Dia was abt to go from there when benji gets hold of her hand n turns her around

B= dia I am sorry mera vo matlab nahi tha, aur meine kab kaha k mein tumhari help nahin karunga??meine tumhe apni jacket din a

dia looks down at the black jacket of benji she was still wearing n by now dia was beside herself in anger

she wasn't angry at benji for her lugaage thing , she was indeed angry at herself , at those undefinable feelings that made her attracted to benji soo much ..

so much that when benji said that he wont sit with her in the jeep it really hurted her a lot.

Hence this unexplainable anger,,

Dia jerked benji's hand away n in a huff removed his jacket n threw it on the floor

D= thanks mr benji for so much help from u,, n seriously I liked it k u made me realise how much u care for me

U= deedz pls meri baat suno benji ne mujhe.

D= oh dodo shut up.. tumhe is baat ka matlab samjh nahin aata??

Dia scolded dodo n then returned her glare to benji, she wanted to shout some more on him but benji's expression made her voice catch in her throat ,'

He looked totally completely hurt

And he wasn't looking at dia any more

He was looking at the thrown away jacket gathering dust few meters away from his feet

Dia instantly felt sorry

D(in her mind?)= uh god yeh maine kya kar diya??i never meant to hurt him soo much .dia why cant u keep ur big mouth shut??

Dia was thinking all this but apparently she had no courage to say all this out aloud to him,

Pride u know!!!!

Uday when finally saw that his sister had stopped verbally assaulting benji he spoke in .

U=deedz benji ne kuch galat nahi kiya , vo bas aapke saath mazak kar raha tha

Dia looked at uday(apparently just for the want of looking towards sumone else rather then benji)

U== haan deedz infact benji ko raj sir ne bata diya tha k I would be joining u guys when he came to klnow abt samrat's injury.. tabhi benji ne mujhe phone karke kaha k mein aate samay railway station k lost section se tumhara luggage dhundh k saath le aaun.

Completely shocked dia kept on staring at uday, this time feeling completely horrible for her non sensical outburst,'.

U= yahi nahi di , bnji ne abhi abhi sir se keh kar tumhara samman tumhare kamre mein bhi bhijwa diya hai.. tum itna kyun gussa ho rahi thi use???mera bechara dost kitna acha hai sacha hai n tum deedz

Not fair

Jao ab mein apna burger tumse nahi benji se share karunga..

B=WHAT?????????

U=kya hua tujhe ab

B(trying to hide his hurt n laughing again , actually trying to save dia from the embarrassment)

=the uday bhushan kisi se apna burger share karega,??adhiraj zara dekh k to aa k suraj aaj chadha bhi hai k nahi!!

Su= benji missal to theek se diya karo .yeh kaho k suraj aaj kahin paschim se to nahi chadha

B= are dia vo kahawat to mamuli baton k liye hoti hai,, yeh to shocker of the millennium tha..

Iske liye to suraj ki himaat bhi nahin hui hogi chadhanne ki..

Everyone starts laughing at benji's super pj, while dia feeling really embarresed tries to smile..

B==acha chalo ab hum sab chalke so jaate hain , mera pyara night suit mer intezaar kar raha hai..

A=oh god

Su= by benji

U=raat ko milte hain n benji vo meine bhavnao mein behkar keh diya tha

Dekh mein apna burger kisi se share nahi karne vala samjha

Benji just laughs

Everyone goes from there leaving only benia behind

Dia wanted to go away from there too lekin she was feeling too shocked, embarrassed to even move..

Benji looks at her , knows sumhow that she was feeling guilty, he was angry at her yet still her guilt stricken expressions

On other hand'..

Nupur's pov

Omg mayank'' mayank Sharma Is hugging someone..??? how could he do so'????that too to me.. he cheated me' y god..???? y..??? yeh mera saath hi kyun hua kyun..????? Im just goen kill mayank usne mujhe dhokha diya aur ab iss bichari ladki ko bhi de raha hain'. mayank ab tumhari khair nahi tum gaya by god' main rakhsha karungi iss bechari abla nari ki..!!!!

Nupur started walking towards mayank

Pov end

Ni:hey mayank really missed u yaar but kya baat hain kafi muscles shacels bana liye hain..????kahin kisi ladki ka chakar toh nahi'??????

M:kya..kya baat kar rahi ho nikkie..??? tumhain bukhar toh nahi hain nah..?? main aur kisi ladki ka liye muscles banao huh '.no way u really need a doc..!!!

He said in some what shaky tone'

Ni:pehli baat tum itnakaam kyun rahe ho bolte bolte dosri baat tumhain doc ki bikul zarurath nahi hain kyun ki tumhain thik karna wali koi aa rahi hain..!!!!!

M:s:kya..???????

Ni:stupid..!!!!mujhe kya dekh rahe ho akhain phad phad kar turn hoge toh dikhegi nah ladki..!!!!

Mayank n sam immidately turned to find a fuming nupur coming towards them..

Mayank was shock n little confuse n sam brust out laughing

Nupur came upto them

N:tumhas kyun rahe ho

She said in real anger

S:main..??? nahi toh' main kha has raha hoon'??? see im not laughing'!!!!!!

He said trying to control his laugh'

N:very funny aur tum (she said turning towards mayank)tumhain toh main baad main dekh lungi samjhe ..!!!!

By saying so she went from there..

M:maina kya kiya

Nikkie just just smile seeing how buddhu is mayank in love matter so she just gave a hint before going on her own way'

Ni:pyaar main aisa hota hain dear relax..!!

Nikkie went from there smiling knowing that this line had really effected mayank..!!!!!!

nupur entered the room in real anger at that time gunji was just keeping their thing in place like keeping clothes in almari n keeping there makeup thing which r not a lot on dressing table etc etc'when she notice nupur sitting on bed which a really red face..!!!

G:kya hua di tum bahut gussamain lag rahi ho

N:main'main hoon gussa main tujhe kyun waise bhi yeh tera jane layak baat nhi hain

She was taking out her anger on gunjan

Gunji was really hurt by her word but did not said a word in reply

Finally realizing nupur her own mistake said

N:im sorry gunjan..!!!!!

G:di aap sorry kyun bol rahi hain..?????

N:tub hi nah gunjan itni bholi bana ki koi zarurat nahi hain I know maina kisi aur ka gussa tujhe par nikal diya aur phir bhi tu ek lafz mujhe palta kar nahi boli

Im scared gunjan aisa hi raha toh agge chal kar tera kya hoga..????

G:di aap toh khamakha hi pareshaan hoti rehti ho aapho nahmera saath hamesha ka liye phir mujhe kya ho saktahain aur jab tak aap mera saath ho mujhekisi sa kabhi darna ki zarurathtak nahi..??? right'?????

N:right..!!!tu kyun kisi sa daregi tujhe koi haath toh lagaye main uska haath tod dungi aaj tak koi aisa paida nahi hua joh nupur bhushan ka hotehua gunjan bhushan ko chu sake'!!!!!!!

G:I knew it'.

Gunur smiled at each other n hugged..!!!!!

G:ab boliye di aap ko kya baat pareshaan kar rahi hain'????

She said broking the hug'..

N:mujhe..mujhe kya baat pareshan karegi koi baat nahi hain

She said going away from gunji n standing near window..

G:di aap jab bhi jhoot bolti hain aap mujhsa ankhain nahi milati so boliye kya baat hain

N:fine mujhe mayank par bahut gussa aa raha hain

G:woh kyun..?????

N:kyun ki wo'woh bahut bura insane hain

G:kya..???????di aap thik toh hain aap mayank ko bura insane bol rahi hain'????? mayank ko'???? Jis nah hamari itni help ki..!!!!!

Nupur start thinking how mayank n sam helped them in R.V issue'..

N:hmm

G:hmm nahiyes they r good guys

N:mayank ka toh pata nahi but sam is nice guy

G:hai nah I knew it..!!!!!

Gunji said immidately n nupur laughed on her sudden reaction

G:ky hua..?????

N:kuch nahi..!!(tujhe kuch kuch ho gaya hain gunji I mean LOVE nupur said to herself)

N:gunjan chal kahin ghum ate hain

G:hmm ok but first hm naha toh le

N:yeh ok

She said lazily

Samrat was just walking cooly

Flirting with every girl passing by them

N the irriate mayank behind him was carrying all bags

As he don't want him to get more hurt

Because of bags load

But seeing samrat he really wantto hit the bag on face hard

Here he struggling with bags for him

N there he is flirting with girls cooly

S:mayank itna math sochon mujhe marna sa pehla warna sochte reh jaoge

M:shut up win mera dimah math khao already im dam upset

S:nupur ki wajah sa

M:n..nahi nahi toh..???????

S:phir kis wajah sa..??????

M:shut up twin

S:as u wish

They reached room

M:samrat room kholo

S:tum kholo nah mera haath main toh mar hain

M:aur mera haath main bags

R.v:main khol doon waise bhi tum log kisi bhi chij ka layak nahi ho

Sayank turned to find r.v with his gang standing just few inches away

S:lagta hain maar kafi nahi hain tum logon ko aur kuch bhi khana hain kya

R.v:ofcource gunjan ka haath ka bna hua khana

S:u bloody'.

Mayank stopped him in going futher

Sam looked at mayank

N relaxed a bit

M:samrat khutte bhote rehte hain humain dhayan nahi dena chaiye

R.v:ofcource tum logon ko mera aur gunjan ka beech joh bhi hone wala hain us par dhyan nahi dena chaiye..

Dia entered the room really embrass

N really crying by her heart for making fool of herself

Specially infront of benji

N she said so much thing to him

He don't deserve this

Its all her fault

Y she had to get anger on him this much y..????

Suhani was too really feeling pity on dia

She never saw her this low

Su:dia r u ok..??????

D:yup im fine

She said smiling fakely

N she ran into wash room

Su:DIA

D:main kuch dair akeli rehna chati hoon suhani plz

Su:par

D:plz

Su:ok

A:hmm room toh accha hain but not my cool room

B:accha isse accha room hain tera

A:ofcource

Benji gaved a fake smile

B:really aww so sweet nah ek pant sofa pa pada hota hain ek shirt table par ek chad'..

A:shut up

He said keeping his right hand on his mouth

B:hmm mmmm

A:chodunga but stop describing my room

B:hmm mmm

A:ok chod raha hoon

When he left

B:stupid kahin ka

By saying so he went in wash room

N adi face was red in embaressment thinking how benji got to know about his room

When he got the answer "SUHANI"'.

A:dam ussi nah bola hoga yehab kuch seesh..!!

He said in anger

A:benji jaldi nikal bahar I got to go to meet suhani

B:yeh yeh coming

A:be soon

A:suhani u r goennnnnnn

Uday enter his room to find it dark

U:mummy yeh room itna kala kyun hain..?????

Duffer uday room ki light off hongi toh room kala hi hoga nah gora toh nahi nah..????

wow uday kya sahi kaha tuna tujhe toh award dena chaiye issi baat par briiliabt shabash (he said slapping himself onhis shoulder)'...

Relax dude bahut batain ho gayi ab mujhe iss room ko apni khubsurat sakal dikhani hogi jis par har ladki marti hain

Ok fine last line was a little line..

Shut up uday room ko kaise maloom hogaki tu ki tu kitna unpopular hain ladkiyon main u can tell lie

but gunjan bolti hain jhoot bolna paap hain..!!!!

So I will go with no paaps'I mean no lies..!!!!!!

Hey room myself uday..uday chopra nahi uday bhushan bad joke nahi ok so pehla light toh kholun..???????

After opening light..

I know I know main kafi handsome hoon but tum logon ko pata nahi main kitna duffer hoon ab tum logon sa kya chipana

Oh shit yeh lightkyun chali gayi mummyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

Rajsir came running o hs room n started banging

R:uday kya hua

U:sir yeh yahan kya karrahe hain

Uday pened the door

U:hello sir

R:uday tum thik toh hona

U:ofcource aap toh thik hain nahi mean koi tang toh nahi kar raha nah aap ko

R:uday tumna abhi chikh mari kyun

U:maina kab..?????

Uday thought in hain kaise pata chala..?????

R:kyun ki main behra nahi hoon mujhe sunayi deta hain..

U:yeh mera thought kaise sun rahe hain

R:kyun kit um man main bol nahi rahe ho duffer

U:sorrysir didzz hi mujhe duffer bula sakti hain

R:dam it u r nuts

U:well sir donuts toh mujhe pasand hain but what r this nuts sorry sir i don't eat only nuts

R:urrgh''..bye

U:sirrrr

Raj sir banged the door on his faceof his room..!!!!

After 2 mins

R:offo yeh kaun khatka maar raha hain

He opened the door

U:yes

R:no

R:what

U:sir aapna yes kahamaina no yeh toh rhyming words ho gaye wowwwwwww

Raj was glaring at him in anger so uday said innocently

U:sir mujhe patti chaiye

R:what'??????

U:chai banane sir

R:order karlo

N raj was about to close the room

U:sir sir sirrrrrrrr

R:ab kya hain

U:sir im bore

R:toh main kya karun tumhain entertain karna nachu..?????

U:well niceidea sir imust say u have gr8 sense of humour

He said patting on his shoulder

R:what..???

U:hmm kuch nahi dust tha joh ab hala gaya

R:tum bhi chale jao

He banged the door

Again there was knock

R:kya hain

He said opening the door

U:sir im bore

R:tumhain zyada hi boriayat sata rahi hain ek min

He went inn n uday was trying to see what he is doing or goen to bring but he failed to see so n raj sir came with 3 heavy books

R:ye loh yeh sab pado tumhari boriyat bhag jayegi

As soon as uday took hold of books raj sir immidately closed his room door n signed in relief..!!!

After seeing books for a min uday said

U:wow niceidea booksmuscles banana kaam ayainga

N he went into his room..

Again there was an knock on door raj sir door

R:dam it phir aa gaya he is finish

He took 3 ,4 heavy books n opened the door without seeing who it is he banged the books in his hands who was standing at door after few min when heat touched his hands he realised that he was a waiter who brought tea for him which he ordred for uday n he banged thebook on tray of tea..!!!lolz

R:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

He shouted as his hand were started burning like hell ..!!!!

Uday came running

U:kya hua sir

R:not again

N he fainted

U:sir sir sirrrrrrr

Just than someone hit hard on R.v face

G:tumhare aur mera beech kuch hoga iss galth fami main math rehna samjh u scundral..!!!!!!

Gunji was scared after realizing what she did how can she slap someone that too R.V..???? N SHE REPLIED BACK TOO OMGGG dam it she thought

M :oh god yeh kya kiya gunjan nah..!!!!

S:wow chashmish aur itni bahadur I love it'!!!! But y is she scared now'?????

Su n dia just came down who were dam shock as much as adi n ben were after witnessing this

They never thought gunji can do this big thing in her whole life'!!!!!!

R.V was about to slap her before sayank could react someone caught his hand n it was non other than nupur

All were shock except gunji she knows no matters what until n unless nupur is there no one can touch her

N:tumhari himmat kaise hui meri behan ko haath lagana ki

R:kyun tumhain kya problem hain kya yeh kisi ki prvate property hain

N:mind ur bloody language R.V warna dosre gal ko laal karna mujhe dair nahi lagagi

R:teri itna himath

He was about to slap her when sayank came in btw n caught his

R:dam it dekh unga tum logon aur gunjan tu nah acha nahi kiya mujhe thapad maarkar now I will show u who I M..??????

By saying so he went

Gunji was scared n crying'!!!!!

Nupur was proud on having a sayank like friend'!!!!!!1

Mayank was smiling seeing proudness in nupur eyes n feeling good on a newreason don't know he himself..!!!!

N sam was feeling restless as he was to console gunji somewhere alone..!!!!

Loads of love

Dolly n sanu..!!!!😃

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Amazing job Dolly and Sanu