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Posted: 15 years ago
simply mindblowing
sayank on a scooter🤣🤣🤣
omg omg omg
continue soon😊
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😳hey guys welcome to the next update of mohabatein.....phew wow we both finished ...
n we really hope u guys will like it ...
pls people do comment n critisize ....
vaise sanu meri behna meri jaan dill kar raha hai tere liye ek poem gaun
oh meri pyari behna
tu hai mera gehna
humeshan mere dil mein rehna
kuch apni kehna
kuch meri sun na
dil bol tunna tunna ta ta tuna😳😳😳😳
k guys mm shutting up n here is ur next update...
k guys the one in blue is writtn by my princess my sweetheart (my behna which makes ny heart go tuna tuna)..in short by sana...
n the one in purple is written by me😆
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At station>>>

SCENE 1>>

(by narrator)

Sayank>>

Mayank n samrat finally reached the station , it was already 11:15

Both of them were damm sure that they had missed the train..

But this was india ..n trains usually got delayed here..

So riding high on that hope mayank n samrat dashed in the staion..

N heaved a sigh of relief when they found that the train was indeed half an hour late..

*phew*

Both of them walked in the station n started searching the passenger crowd in order to spot their college team members'.

Gunur

>>

N:accha sun gunjan

G:hmm

N:mai zara maya pari khareed kar ati hoon dekh waha dikh rahi hain n saath mein chuddiyon ki bhi dukaan hai

G:thik hai di jaldi ana

N:okkkkkkkk tu chal mai bas yun gayi yun ayi

G:thik hai(they started going in opposite way)

Sayank >>

Samrat called his sister ,, suhani apparently picked up the cell but due to the extreme noices at the station both of them were unable to hear each others vioce..

Frustrated samrat switched of the phone n rounded up on mayank..

"tu kisi kaam ka nahin hai!!!"

"kya .. samrat tum yeh kya bol rahe ho????? Maine kya kiya?"

"sahi bol raha hun .. subha suhani milli thi na tujhe .. us se pooch ni sakta tha k kaunse compartment mein hum logon ki reservations hai????"

"dekho samrat tumhari behan na tumhari behan hi hai.. mujhe pata bhi nahin chala k subha vo mujhe kab milli aur kab apne boyfriend ki gaadi mein baith kar chali gayi. Tumhari tarhan vo bhi hawa pe swaa rehti hai... upar se tum mujh par kya chilla rahe ho' behan tumhari ,,tickets hum sab ki tumhari behan n would be jiju ne book karwayi n galti meri k tumko compartment number nahin pata???"

"acha acha theek hai zyaada chillane ki zaruurat nahin hai' vo subha se kuch khaya nahin hai na to dimag khrab ho raha hai .. upar se yeh headache"

"samrat tum un logon ko dhundo tab tak mein tumharee liye kuch khaane k liye laata hun..vo mil jayen to mujhe compartment number message kar dena k???"

"k dude "

SCENE 2>>

In bhushan mansion

Dia hurriedly got ready as soon as she can and started packing her bag it took 15 min first time in her life she packed her bag in 15 min .crap ..she is getting late, she ran out of house and sat in car and zommed out of her house.

In benji house

B:mom meri jeans kahan hain mom meri charger mom mera

M:benji chilana bandh karo maine packing kardi hain

B:how sweet of u

M:ok ok bas bahut ho gaya ab jao warna lateho jaoge

B:ok byeeeeeeeee mom(he left house hurriedly in taxi)

STATION

SCENE 3>>

Gunjan started walking towards the compartment after nupur left ..

she got a collie in btw when she was searching her compartment n also met adhani their..n the other members from their college team were also present there.

Adhani went inside the compartment with other students .

Gunjan was standing alone outside ,, she was talking to the coolie n instructing him about where to keep all there luggage in the compartment..

Just then some other college students who too r actually going to the meet in same train started eyeing gunji disdainfully. they were seeing her from up to down .gunji got scared n looked away when one of the guys whistled..

.

Sam's pov

Samrat had text messaged suhani who replied back to him n told her the compartment number..

Sam was walking in towards the compartment rather lazily, playing game on his mobile when he heard the whistle. he stopped and turned his gaze to look what actually was going on'

he noticed that some 6 to 7 guys were eyeing a girl openly

he knew the girl.. she was gunjan .. one of the morenna sisters..

he cant really blame the guys for gawking at her as she really was an angel from every corner .

she was looking nervous n she was wearing glasses (CHASHMISH)

he smiled than he noticed she is wearing white colour chudidaar 'suited her well .its really behanji type but cut that crap it is suiting her she looking an an an oh god koi suitable word bhi nahi milraha mujhe use describe karna right now hmm if she would be right now wearing a skirt nah cut the rap he thought she will look good for sure but it doesn't go with her image dam what the hell is he thinking he was trying hard to move his gaze from her but he cant yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy though????.

Than again his thoughts got disturbed one of those pathetic guys whistled again.. he couldn't take it anymore ,so he went upto gunjan and stood in front of her blocking the view of those students completely.. he himself don't know y the hell he was helping this unknown girl but he couldn't take this crap of the guys anymore

Gunjan was first shocked but when samrat started helping her silently without saying anything she kept quiet . she felt an unknown attraction towards him maybe because of it she wasn't able to say anything to him they were having an eye lock when

Student1:oyye hoyyee kya baat hai dikhna mai toh kafi shareef lag rahi thi but dekh iska ashique aa gaya

S2:haan yaar aaj kal ki ladkiyan *sign* aisi hi hain bas apne aap ko kuch zyada hi sati sawvitri dikhati hain

S3:haan yaar pata nahi kyun yeh suit pehne hain.. kuch jhakaas pehen na chaiye tha jaise koi skirt yeh shorts kitni sexy lagti nah

S1:arry yaar abhi bhi kuch kaam nahi lag rahi hai. man toh kar raha hai ka shuru ho jaun bas

Dam sam couldn't take it any more he turned around to face the guys n punched one of them them badly but as the no. of students from other colleges started gathering around them so he took hold of gunji hand and ran from there he really didn't want a scene invovling her..

SCENE 4>>

MAYUR

(by mayank)

I stopped in front of the food selling stalls n was about to ask the vendor to pack some chip packets n coke bottles for me when I heard her nupur'

She was bickering with another shopkeeper over something'

I sighed'

Poor poor shopkeeper..

"itne paise kyun dun mein tumhein???"

"lekin memsahib yeh chuddiyan sirf dedh rupaye ki hi hain"

"lekin humaare morena mein bilkul aisi chuddiyon ki kimat dhayi rupaye hoti thi.. sharam nahin aati umhein logon ko lut te huye???"

I looked towards her fascinated.. this drama was going to be really interesting ..she was standing in front of the shop selling bangles..

Her luggage bag was still slung over her shoulders..

"are madam ji.. mein aapko dhedh rupaye ki cheez dhayi rupaye mein kaise de dun???"

"kyun nahin doge???.... aisi haalat karungi na tumhari k tumhe tumhari nani yaad aa jayegi by god"

The shopkeeper looked back at her completely flabbergasted

As far as I was concerned I was seriously having a hard time controlling my laughter..

But finally I decided that the poor shopkeeper had gone through to much torture n I had to help him out..

Moreover the train was about to leave aur agar hum dono yahin khade rahe to humari college ki team mein kamiyan aa jayengi..

So I moved forward n stood besides her.. then leaning forward towards her I whispered silently in her ear..

"vaise miss morena express..dhai rupaye dhedh rupaye se zyaada hote hain"

She looked at me stunned.. n well she looked ultra cute being stunned that way..

Then she recovered from the shock of what I said quickly n looked towards the shopkeeper doubtfully'

:"dhai rupaye dhedh rupaye se zyaada hote hain kya???"

Shopkeeper="yahi to madam ji hum kab se aapko kehna chahte hain par aap hain ki'"

She looked sheepishly at both of us in turn n then steadied herself n was back to her usual perky self'

"haan haan vo to mujhe pata hi tha mein to bas yehi dekh rahi thi k tum kitne imaandaar ho' good good tum test mein pass huye .. tum bahut taraki karoge"

I rolled my eyes at her '..

Is ladki ka kuch nahin ho sakta ..n then I saw her looking confused at a bunch of coins held in her hand'..

Shaking my head I leaned forward towards her again n said..

"dedh rupaya matlab 1.5 rupees pls"

She looked up at me relieved nn then muttered

"patah hai patah hai"

I smiled to myself while she handed the coin to the shopkeeper n moved on to a magazine stall.

The girl was a real sample by god//

N then I realised that I was grinning like an idiot looking towards her'.

"tu kyun apne daant bahar nikal raha hai mayank??? Comedy chal rahi hai kya yahan pe???"

I heard the train's final whistle then

SCENE5>>

Benia

Benji and dia reached station together and were shocked to see each other when they crashed on mistakenly and they in unision said after seeing each others faces

d:tum not again

B:god koi mujhe bacho

D:nahi god isse math bachao isse utholo mujhe bacchao

B:tumhain toh main

Suddenly they heard the train whistle, the train started and was about to go when benji took hold of dia's hand and took his luggage an started running towards one of the compartments in the train..

D:mera bag(dia shouted)

B:shut up bag ko le kar bhage toh yahin reh jayenge run dam

D:par mera kafi important saman hain uss main mera make up wagera

B:offo woh HUM waha sa khareed lainga

D:oh ye waha bahut bade malls hoainga right but(before she could say anything)

B:shut up dia jitna tej iss waqt tumhara dimag chal raha haina untna hi tej apna pair chalao samjhi

D:ok

They started running at last they caught the train in time and sighed in relief and looked at each other and at their joined hands and smiled.

Sajan

They were running like anything ,those nasty students were at their back .sam took gunji in the train as it started and those nasty students got in train too but in other compartment seeing that sajan sighed in relief suddenly gunji lost her balance as she missed a footing on the entrance to the compartment .she was about to fall when sam took hold of her by her waist and made her safe.. both looked in each other's eyes n had a cute eye lock there'.

Mayur>>>>

(by mayank)

I heard the train's final whistle the n was really horrified to see that the train was already moving away from the plat form '.

"darn it'."

I ran towards the train n was almost near the compartment when I remembered nupur..

"damm it "

I turned around n saw her still talking to the magazine vendor ..

I screamed at the top of my voice

"NUPURRRRRRRRRR.. PLS JALDI KARO TRAIN CHUTH JAYEGI NAHIN TO"

She turned around n looked towards me n the moving train .. n then she ran towards us ..

I looked back at the train ..

Most of the train had already gone a head .. just the last compartment of the train was within my reach..

I sprinted forward n caught hold of the railing pushing myself in'

I saw nupur then she was running behind the train which was speeding up clearly..

I held out my hand to her ..

She was almost there .. almost besides me..

"COMMON NUPUR.. MERA HAATH PAKDO .."

N she caught hold of my hand finally..

I pulled her up n we both were finally on the train that we were just about to miss..

The compartment was completely empty.. there was nothing In here .. not even any berths to sit upon'

Nupur's bag was stuck on the door of the bogie..

We both tried to free it hastily..

N then we both felt a jolt as the bag came free of the hinge ..

n we both staggered on the compartment floor'..

She fell over me n our eyes met..

I had no idea what happened then , but it became completely impossible for both of us to break that eye lock..

It was as if we both got freezed there''

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hey guys thats it for today
do tell how u liked it
loads n loads n loads of love
dolly n sanu 😳😛😊

Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
reserved yippieeeeeeeeeeeee im first😆😆😆
*edited*
ahem ahem
mera bhasan shuru ho raha hai dolly tu dil thaam kar padhna dont worry kuch aisa waise nahi bolne nahi wali hoon 😉🤣
well loved sayank small fight on ticket dam ultra cute mayank replies were first i was anger how roughfly he was replying than sam nah bhi kuch thik sa baat nahi ki thi so i thought chalo mayank was right 😕😆 in replying roughfy yaar 🤣
dolly really right dimag kharab ho gaya hain mera so plz meri kisi baat ko dil pe math lena
than mayur scene hayye that nupur scene was by god mindblowing the way she was fighting with chudiwala was muuhhhhhhhhh😆
she is really indeed something n mayank awwwwwwwwwwww he was just ahem ahem 🤣is ka matlab math puchna mai bata nahi paungi tu sun nahi payegi 😉😆🤣
n than that last scene train ka peeche bhagne wala 😆 it was to too cute by god hamesha mayur saath hote hain toh kuch nah kuch gadnad zarur hoti hai....tuna tuna😆😆😆😆
bas itna hi bolna tha speech bahut choti hai aaj ki meri n thanx for making SG scene in red and benia in blue
n ur scenes were 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏no words to desrbie it im speechless ahem ahem
(oh meri pyari behna
tu hai mera gehna
humeshan mere dil mein rehna
kuch apni kehna
kuch meri sun na
dil bol tunna tunna ta ta tuna)😳😳😳😳😉
(my princess my sweetheart)nnnnnn yeh joh bracket mai words haina plz mera liya itna acche words math likha kar i will be dead one day for sure 😳😳😳
loveeeeeeeeeeeeee uuuuuuuuuuuuu yaar
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
lots of love
urs sanu😉😳.
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome yaar thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
lol dolly u have started pming too to fast jaan
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeee updt
luved it..
do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
sanu ur sajan scene is in red
done danna done jaana
n i have already finished sending all the pms babes
mm not fast u r too slow
meri tuna tuna
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow........
really fantastic yaar.........
perfect update.......
loved all the couples.......
sajan were so cute........
benia were rocking.......
and my mayur were so full of nautanki........
the best part was dhai rupee dadh se zyada hote hai..........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

sanu ur sajan scene is in red

done danna done jaana
n i have already finished sending all the pms babes
mm not fast u r too slow
meri tuna tuna

yup im really slow tuna tuna😆
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it..
sam saved gunji from those guys hayee..
loved mayur scene too...
lovely..continue soon..

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