Originally posted by: dolly18
re *edited*
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii finally mm the first on yaar whooooooooooooooopppy dooooooopy snooooooooppy yeh yaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh congo jaan 🥳
ok mm shutting up
sabse pehleto u just .. just jusstttt stop makin me angry k?????????maina kya kiya*making childish face*
kisne kaha logon ko bas mere parts pasand aate hainlol maina toh nahi kaha i was just saying ka tera scenes bhi acche hain as u were continuously making pulls of my tareefs 🤣isse ghatiya english mai toh koi reply nahi kiya hoga nh dolly 😆😆😆😆😆
go n read the replies again
by god dil to kar raha hai nupur ki tarhan tujhe mayank samjhkar tere upar chad kar baith jaun
literally😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡awwwwwwwww sorry jaan mera maksad tera dil dukhane ka bilkul nahi tha kaan pakad ka sorry
k now mm starting line wise on ur scenes skipping mine k????lol yaar u would have wrote what was in ur mind about ur scenes😉😆
sabse pehle to the way nupsi scolded that taxi valla
yaar by god usko uski naani yaad aa gayi hogi hana??????yeh nani ki bhi nani yaad aa gayi hogi by god....
i was really having a hard time controlling my laughter
poor poor poor taxi vala ...
n then ur punjabi 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
oh god i am going to teach u pu njabi seriously ....lol u know punjabi mujhe nahi ati just heard in films bas uska alava i never read punjabi thing anywhere so.....😆😆😆
but i really really liked ur attempt at it jaan it was sho shweet😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
n then the benia scene poor dia n poor benji
but thanks jaan tune humare ss ki sabse badi problem ko solve kar diya lolsc'mon yaar its our ss kuch tu kar rahi hai toh kuch mai i hope wer going well response toh accha hi aa raha hai and did u checked first update like button 48(lolz its 50 now i checked it again mai behosh ho jaingi dolly ab koi mujhe sambhalo)😆😆😆😆😆 logon nah dabaya omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg i never accepted that i have just now noticed yaar 😆
n now cmg to my favourite part in the post ..
!!!!UDAY BHAYIA!!!!!!
by god vo ladka mujhe mil jaye ek baar i am goin to so so so much kiss hiom mreally awwwwwwwwwwwwww me too goen do same thing muhhhhhhhhhh
cycle pe vo nups ka khali bag dene aaya???how sweet of him nah
how can someone be soo januable yaar?? sho sho sho sho januable sho much januable????BINGO
i really really loved that scene from todays update okkkkkkkkkk
n sanu the best things abput ur updates
1)the diologues u right ..
they r the best they can capture anyone n everyone jaana at any momentreally is it im never know this 😳
2)ur bg commentry i alwys liked reading them..
3)the way u get into te chracter completey abt whom u r writing jaan
i have never been able to do it jhootiiiiiiiii u too really express everyone feeling u alwayswrite gr8 povs of the character did u forgot or what
4)abt this i am not sure but there is sth in ur😡(our) updates that binds the reader
seriously no idea what it is but its still there jaan hmm well dosre ff yeh ss ka toh pata nahi but in this ss the readers r getting addicted because of US got it US.
n u still think u r not a godd writer??????? 😆😆😆 im still confuse *in mischeive tone*
loav u loads n loads n loads ahem ahem bas kar tera dosre friends jalas ho jayainga 😉
dolly muhhhhhhhhhh🤗
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