Mr.and Mrs. Mayank Sharma updated on 22/7/10 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
great! update!
please continue soooon!
thanx for the pm!
Edited by ak12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
lovely update!!!
mayur were awesome...
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
wonderful update dear...
read it frm startin...
luvd it 2 d core..
pls update soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey shinki.

thanks for taking my advice

vinu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

hey shinki.

thanks for taking my advice

vinu

thanks to u to for the wonderful advise
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
THE ROOM IN WHICH MAYANK PULLED NUPUR WAS THE SAME APARTMENT OF THEIR OWN ROOM .BUT NEXT WHAT HAPPENED WAS A BIT UNEXPECTED AS NUPUR WAS STRUGGLING TO GET OFF SHE SUDDENLY FAINTED !! FAINTED !! TO WHICH MAYANK WAS SHOCKED .HE TOOK NUPUR TO THE BEDROOM AND LAID HER ON THE BED HE WAS A BIT CONFUSED AND A BIT SCARED WHAT HAD HAPPEN TO NUPUR .THEN HE NOTICE THAT THE SHEET BY WHICH HE COVERED NUPUR'S FACE WAS SMELLING BADLY OF ALCOHOL AND SHE FAINTED BECUSE OF ALCOHOLIC SMELL .HE HAD A SIGN OF RELIEF
ON THE OTHER HAND GUNJAN WAS A ABLE TO GET OFF THE SHEET AND WAS ANGRY WITH SAM .BUT WITHIN FEW MIN SAM WAS ABLE TO CONVENCE GUNJAN.
MAYANK WAS A BIT NERVOUR THAN THE DOOR BELL RANG
S: bhai main aur gunjan hotel inavihs mai shift kar rahe hai.
M: kyun kya hua
S: woh actually ceo ko pata chal gaya ke hum yahan hai toh unhone request ke hai ke with due respect ke ye hotel bhi hamare hai par ek couple hotel inavihs me shift ho jaye toh they will be happy toh mainy socha ke .....................but agar if you want yur can shift there
M: nahi nahi tum shift ho jaoo
S: bhai kuch problem hai kya
M: nahi nahi actually haan ...................woh jo sheet thee jo mainy nupur pe dali thee ......it was badly smeeling from alcohol toh nupur unconcious hai
S: bhai don't worry bhabhi ko kuch he der main hoosh aa jayga ........................sorry....par ab hm nikalte hai
M: ok then...bye
S: bye
AFTER SOME NUPUR GET CONSCIOUS
M; nupur tum theek ho ....woh actually i am sorry
N: toh ye sab tumhara plan thaaa
M: sorry par mujhe nahi pata thaa ke us blanket mai alcohol hai
N: mayank ek baat bataoou
M: hmm
N: pata nahi kyu but mera sir zoor se dard kar raha hai
M: hmm janta hun ..ruko main abhi aaya
HE GETS THE BAAM AND APPLY ON NUPUR'S FOREHEAD
M: ab theek hia
N; much better
IN THE EVENING MAYANK WENT TO MEET THE MANAGER FOR SOME WORK .SUDDENLY A CLERK CAME RUNNING AND PLEADED BEFORE MAYANK
c: sir pls apni wife ko samjaeia woh woh hamare kitchen main hai kah rahi hai ke woh apne pati ke liye khood khana banaegi .
M: what !!!!!!!!!!!!!
IN THE KITCHEN
COOK-ma'am aap pls rehne degiye main banadeta hun .............................aise toh hamaare Naukri chali jaige
N: aare pata hai na tumhe main kaun hun main nupur hu nupur main tumhare naUkri nahi jane dungi by god
BY THE TIME MAYANK IS IN THE KITCHEN
m: nupur tum yahan kya kar rahi hoo
N: mayank tumhe yaad hai aaj yane 11 april hai aur isi din tumne mujhe propose kiya taa toh mera bhi koi hack banta hai ke main kuck karuu
M: haan par tum kuch aur bhi toh kar sakti ho.......mai tumhare haaTh so khana kha lunga par khana banana
N: mayank pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
M: aacha achaa theek hai par haan only one dish warna main gussa ho jaunga
N: promise sirf ek dish
M: theek hai jaldi aana main room mai wait kar raha hun
AFTER SOME TIME NUPUR ENTERS THE ROOM
M: toh kya manaya hai nupur
N: surprise hai dinner ki time pata chalega
M: toh chalo dinner karte hai
N: 7:00 baje
M:toh kya kare
N: soochO
M: hmm toh romance karte hai iska toh koi time nahi hota ]
N: ye tumhe kisne kaha husband -wife ka romance toh raat main hota hai
M: nupur bas mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai chalo khana hate hai pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls
N: theek hai theek hai chalo
AT DINNING HALL
M;nupur mujhe bhook lagi hai ab jaldi se mujhe aapne soft se pyare se hato se khilaoo
N: haan hann ruko
M: aacha nupur ho gaya abb mujhe woh khana hai jo tumne banaya thaa
N: mayank pehle ye khaoo warna mujhe lage gaa ke tumne mere wajah se khana aache se nahi khaya
M: aacha theek hai baba itna emotional mat babo
yum yum yum mma yum yum
M: ab toh khana bhi kha liya ab pls
N: aacha apni aankhe band karo ...............................aur ab smell karke batoo kya hai
M: ummmmmmmmm gajar ka halwa .................thanks nupur ab aaaaaaaaaaa
yum kitna tasty hai
nupur ye sab tumne merre liye kiya
N: nahi mere patidev ke liye
M: hmmmmmmmmm ab toh mujhe tumhare patidev se jalan ho rahi hai
N: aacha .........................ab chale room me
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IN THE ROOM
M: nupur jaldi se tayar ho jaoo
N: what!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
M; haan nupur tum mere liye gajar ka halwa bana sakti ho toh main tumhare liye kuch bhi nahi kar sakta kya
N: par .abhi.........kaha................kaise
M: nupur i lov u pls jaldi se tayar ho jaoo
N: aacha theek hai
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M: nupur tum aaj bilkul mere nupur lag rahi ho
N: matlab main roj kise aur ke nupur lagte hun
M: nahi roj tum nupur bhusan sharma lagte ho par ajj mere sirf mere nupur of mayank lag rahe ho
nupur blushing
N: chale
M: sure
N: waise hum kahan jaa rahe hai
M: surprise hai phir bhi main batata hun ek choti se jagah jaha sirf main tum aur chahat ho
N: chahat kaun??
M: nupur........mere tumhare chahat hamara pyaar
N: ohhh!!!

NUPUR WAS READY IN THE LIGHT BLUE SAREE AND THEY PROCED TOWARD THE CAR

M: nupur u r looking beautiful

N: thanks''''..par mayank hum jaa kahan rahe hai

M: hummm surprise ''..jaise tumne diya thaa

N: oh toh copy cats

M: hummmmmmmmm

MAYANK STOP THE CAR ON THE SIDE OF BEACH AND BLIND FOLD NUPUR'S EYES.AND TOOK HER TO A COTTAGE OPEN FROM ALL THE SIDES COVERED WITH STRAWS, DRY GRASS, AND WOOD PEAKS.

N: MAYANK kya kar rahe ho mere aankhe kholo

M: kyu darr lag raha hai

N: nahi par mere aankhe ro rahi hai

M: kyu

N: kyunki itneder band hoke chalne ke aadat nahi hai na unko

M: nupur bas hum pahuch gaye

HE TAKE OFF THE CLOTH FROM EYES

M: Hummm toh ye hai mera surprise '''''''I know tumhare surprise jitna aacha nahi hai '''.lekin yahan sirf main aur tum hai

N: wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mayank its just beautiful . ye ye kitna pyaara hai aais a lagta hai jaise kahi door asman pe chand aur chandani mil rahe ho

M: wah nupur tum toh mere sath rahkar philosopher ban gaye

N: mayank it was a poor joke

M; i know..............par main yaha mazak karne nahi aaya hun

N ;humnnnnnnnn

M: something serious nupur i mean u r my wife so don't i have any right on u to love u to romance with u in private well on our first night v all were tired i want to make this night a rememberable night for u for us

N: just listening

M: nupur may i ......

N: sure mayank i am all yours . i am your wife

mayank lit the fire ....he was still touched by those lines of nupur that how much she trusted on him ...................and just went to nupur and hug her tightly

Mayank breaks the hug and kisses her on her forehead and then her cheek...

Mayank lifts her and puts her onto the bed....

Mayank first kisses her neck and blows... Nupur starts breathing heavily...

He then brushes his lips on hers and kisses, They keep kissing till they loose their breathe and break apart...

Nupur blushes and hides herself into Mayank's chest... Mayank hugs her tight then breaks the hug' Picks her up in his strong arms and put her on the grass

Mayank slowly and lightely touch nupur's lips then nupur respond to those They start exploring each others mouth and the kiss becomes a very passionate one!

They keep going on! and on and Nupur's hand going through mayank's hair... and mayank"s on her back

Mayank lean more close to nupur and bring her saree down and kisses her on her shoulder and neck...

Mayank gives a pair of kisses on her face and kisses the side of her neck...

Mayank moves downward' Kisses her Navel'

due to romantic weather and cool wind the fire blew off so nothing could be seen.............................................................................................................i mean

personal and private happenning

IN THE MORNING
NUPUR WOKE UP EARLIER AND WENT TO WEAR HER SAREE PROPERLY ............................................................SHE CAME BACK AND SAW MAYANK WAS STILL SLEEPING WITH A SIMPLEY CUTE SMILE. SHE SITS BESIDE HIM AND THINKS ABT THE LAST NIGHT AND A SMILE APPEAR ON HER FACE AND SHE BLUSHED...........MEANTIME MAYANK WAKE UP AND STARTED STARING AT NUPUR WHO WAS STILL BLUSHING

M: ahem......ahem..........kinke khayalo main blush kar rahi h0

N: main blush nahi kar rahi

M: oh toh tum holi khel ke aaye ho........................nahi toh tumhare cheeks itne pink pink kyu hai

N: mayank pls chidaoo mat

M: ok ok sorry ..........................aacha aacha mujhe toh bhook lage hai tumhe

N: hmmm.................toh ab chale

M: kaha

N: hotel

M: kyu

N: bhook nahi lage

M: haan par main sab preparation ke saath aaya hun

N:what???????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M: tum yahi ruko main car leke aata hun side main

N: aaise .................i mean shirt toh pehan lo

M: offffffffffff nupur mujhe shirt dhoondhna padega

N: aacha tum dhoondo main car leke aati hun.................................................................keys pls

M; ye lo .................................pls akele main mere car ke saath aisa waisa matt karna

N: main waise bhi aisa waisa nahi ------------------------waisa waisa karne ka sooch rahi thee

M: chalo theek hai jo aapke marzi

N: main abhi aaye

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N: mayank kahan ho tum i am back with your car aur mainy iske saath kuch bhi nahi kiya sachi

M: main yaha hun .........................

N: humm ye lo tumhare car jis se tumhe hai bada he pyaar only like a yaar

M: thank you

N: toh what r the preparation

MAYANK WHILE OPENING THE STORAGE OF CAR

M: TADAAAAA

N: wow mayank chocolates !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

M: tumhe sirf chocolates he dickhe chips wagara nahi dickhe

N: kam ke cheez pehle dickte hai na...............................................................par phir bhi mayank i am so tired aur hamare pass sirf aaj ka din hai kyuki kal raat toh

hamare flight hai ...........................i mean hamne koi shopping nahi ke

M: aacha theek hai hum hotel chalte hai ....waha thoda rest karte hai .............phir shopping karne chalenge .........then raat ko sab saath dinner karenge matlab

sam , gunjan ke saath bahar kahi

N: nahi ..................i mean thoda sa change dinner yahi karenge

M: theek hai...................................chale

N: after you

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
! AS PER THE SCHEDULE THEY WENT TO HOTEL RESTED ........WENT FOR SHOPPING................HAD DINNER WITH ALL
! AND WENT TO SLEEP
! NEXT DAY ALL WERE BUSY IN THEIR PACKING SPECIALLY MAYANK AND NUPUR AS NUPUR HAD A LOT OF
! SHOPPING SO DIFFICULT TO PACK IT UP . THEY DAY PASSES AND AND IT WAS THE TIME FOR FLIGHT ALL MET AT
! AIRPORT
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


S: toh bhabhi aapka honeymoon kaisa thaa .....i mean aam hum

N: pata hai samrat hamara honeymoon bhi bilkul aasa thaa jaisa tumhara aur gunjan ka kyu .........

S: toh ab flight main chalte hai aur phir ghar

N: chalo chalo

AT MID 12:00 THEY REACH HOME

M: SO WE ARE BACK TO HOME

M>N>S>G : home sweet home

MOM OPEN THE DOOR

MOM: aree aree dheere sab padose so gaye hai

N: maa aap abhi tak sohi nahi

M: nupur woh maa hai 11:00 baje se woo hall me chakar laga rahe hoga

MAA : baas baas ab andar chalo

AFTER SOME GENERAL TALKS

N: maa yahan Mr. khattawani aaye thee kya

MAA: haan par tumhe kaise pata

N: maa unke mozze { socks] ke smell abhi bhi aa rahi hai

MAA: nupur

N: maa sach mai

SU: exactly bhabhi mujhee bhi aa rahi hai

MAA: huuuuuuuuuuuuuu

N : aacha aacha sorry

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thats all for today

next part jaldi layenge

Edited by SHINKI - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

as usual a perfect romantic update......

i am first to comment....... yay........
the dialogues were fantastic.......
mayur were cute as usual......
update soon.......
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
update vz g8 n very romantic...
Mayank ka surprise acha tha....
Den finally they reached home....
Mr khatwani talk vz funny.....
Thanx 4 d pm...n continue soon....

Kulsum
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Romantic and awesome update...
Please write more..
Keep it up.. 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
dialogues were cute... the part was awesome!

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