❤️ Ehsaas Dilon Ke (FF On MoNaya)❤️ - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
hi mehek
awesome job
totally loved it
continue soon!!
great job!!
lots of love pari
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
Hey Mehek! i didnt get time sorry didnt review for the prev chap....Just caught up!
I love the way u didnt make it a love at first sight thing, m excited to see wat happens in the meet!
wil they be friends, i have a feeling its a no.
Mindblowing updates buddy!
I loved it:D
continue sooon!!!
Luv
ZeeJay!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Amazinnggg huun....
You didnt PM me before yaar...
I didnt know kee tum write kartiii hoo my twinnie....
Loved it....
Please more soon.... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Amazing Yaar
Keep It Up...
Loved It.
Thanxzz For The PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Wowwwwwwwwwwwww Mindblasting Upd.

Luved It To The Core...
Mohit n Sanaya's Frndship Hayeeeeeeeeeeeee....!!!
Awesummmm Blosssom.... ❤️
Plz Try To Upd. Soon...!!!
Really Luv The Way U Rite..!
Thanxz For The PM
❤️Sania❤️
Edited by sukirti_sanaya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Great Update!!
continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
part 5
M-Arre Navz ko keh toh diya ke mein Sanaya se frndship karunga..par kya woh ghamandi mujhse dosti karengi..??

Here Sanaya is thinking the same..

S-Mohit..pata nahi mujhse dosti karega bhi yaa nahi..

She was going through the canteen n frm there only Mohit was coming..n they both were staring at each other...

Both 2gehter said- Actuallyy mein..

N both laughed..

M-Pehle tum bolo..

S-nahi pehle tum bolo plz..

M-Okk, woh actually....tum mujhse fight nahi kar rahi..??

S-kyun tumhe fight karni hai kya..?

M-hhmmm..nahi..

S-good..actually woh kya hain naa mein ladko par jaldi bharosa nahi kar pati..

M-aur mein jab tum jaisi beautiful ko dekhta hu toh i directly comment on that..sorry if u felt bad..

S-ohhh nahi actually mujhe bura nahi laga kyunki i'm beautiful...(Mohit Seeing her Smiling) par kahana ke mein ladko par jaldi trust nahi karti..

M-hm.ab yahaan khade hokar baat karne se acha hai ke hum canteen chale..

S-haan chalo..

Both go n sit in the canteen..

M-so tum kuch khaogi..?

S-nahi par pineapple juice piyungi..,thats my favourite..

M-Dont tell me thats my favourite too..

S-ohh gr8..,acha Mohit tum mujhse dosti karoge...?

M-actually mein bhi tumse yahin kehne jaa raha tha....

S-U mean haan..

M-haan waise tumhari jaisi beautiful meri dost banegi toh i'll love to b ur frnd...

S-hmmm..thik hai par itna flirt mat karo..

M-kya flirt aur main..nah nah..

S-ok ok phir se fight mat shuru karo..

M-acha tum mujhe apne baare mein aur batao..

S-ohh Mohit i would love to telll u more about me par abhi mujhe ek classs attend karna hai..

M-classs..? mazzak kar rahi ho..?

S-Nahi..sach mein mujhe jaana hai..

M-toh kaho aaj mere saath bahar chalogi..?

S-haan mein bhi yahin soch rahi thi..toh kahan mile...aur kitne baje..?

M-woh mein decide karunga...okk 7 baje mein tumhe lene aata hun..tum ready rehna..

S-okk dear...byee

M-byee beautiful....

M to himself-she is not that bad...chalo aaj uske saath bahar jaakar dekhta hun..she is very nice..!!

N at that moment only Navina come there..

N-hmm toh Mohit kiske khayalo mein khoye hue ho..?

M-Navz tum kitni shai thi Sanaya jitni beautiful upar se hai utni hi heart say hai..

N-dekha maine kaha tha naa aur tum ho ki maan hi nahi rahe the..

M-yup!! bt mein aaj uske saath bahar jaa raha hu..

N-gr8 kahan jaa rahe ho..?

Benji interrupts.

B-haan dude kahan jaa rahe ho..?

M-tum koi jagah batao..

B-okk chalo mere saath..

M-okk Byee Navz..

N-yaa Byee..

M to himself-hope ke hum ache frnds bane..

S to herself-Mohit is not that bad..hope hum ache dost bane..

-------------------------------------------------------------------------- okk guys this was my update. hope u guys liked it.. Love u allll..<333
-Mehek-
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
Superrrrrbbbbbbbbbb.....
MoNaya Ki Dosti....Waaaaaooooo.......
Awesum Upd. Dear..
Luved To Read It...
Had Loads Of Funnn..... <33
Alltogether,FANTASTICCC....!!
Do Cont. Soon..
n Thanks For The PM..!
❤️Sania❤️
Edited by sukirti_sanaya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
Hey,
i read your ff... its lovely..
please continue soon and please pm me whn u upd8 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum part ddear
loved monaya in ur ff
cont soooon

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