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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ud
loved it
contineu soon
n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear!!
emotional part..
=(
nd dun wry.. i dont think he is a coward..
very well depicted..
and i wish gunji had let him explain.. but then her POV also makes sense.. cuz she's not "that" type of grl =P
anyways..
do cont soon! like always =D
<3
HiNaL

ohh... nd the reply yu gave to my comment last time..
i agree with yu.. i also think uday is cute in MJHT.. of course not more than sammy.. but still cute =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great Update!!!
Gunjan really is upset
she needs to atleast listen to wat Samrat has to say
i hope things better btwn them =D
n u can call me Marukh =)
plzzz continue soon
THANKS for the PM!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
@vital- thnx :)

@cuteangel- thnx a lot dear :D glad u r liking it!

@HinaL- aww u understand them so well!!:D glad i could clear both the pov's :D:D

@Marukh:)- i wanted to ask ur name.bt then i thought ...ya well i was thinking abt it..Actually agreed she has to listen...but u will come to knw....later ohh i mean in the last few chaps u will knw why she doesnt wanna listen:)sorry long wait for tht....eh but enjoy the current track...:D thnx m glad u liked the chap:D

Guys i said i will post in the mornng.....well m so sorry but actually ryt now my morning happened:P i mean i just woke up. really sorry
posting the next chap now:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 8-
SECRETS Kept and Confessions MADE
MORNING 9:00

Gunjan,Nupur & Mayank were seated on the dining table having breakfast. They hadnt spoke a word abt the night before to Gunjan, meanwhile gunjan dint seem to b at ease at all she kept looking at the door after evry few seconds.
Nupur- Gunjan, baar baar darwaze ki taraf kyun dekh rahi ho?
Gunjan turns to nupur
"woh.woh main.. main di benji aur sheena abhi tak aaye nahin wahi dekh rahi thi"
Nupur- achha
Gunjan- hann unhonne nashta bhi nahin kiya
Mayank- hann woh jogging karne gaye hain itni jaldi nahin aaengey
Nupur- hmm baaki sab to so rahe hain! nupur sighs
Gunjan- safar ki thakan hogey di
Uday enters the kitchen looking all fresh
Uday- Hey guys Good morning!
Mayank- hii, aa nashta kar le
Uday- "sure" he gets seated
Nupur- Uday bhaiya aap kal kitne baje soye the?
Uday- 2 baje woh CJ se baat kar raha tha
Nupur- kya uday bhaiya aap bhi na, no wonder ki woh abhi tak so rahi hai
Uday- arrey maine to usse kaha tha par woh mani hi nahin sabke baare main pooch rahi thi
Mayank- hmm samrat kahan hai?
Gunjan looks at the door again, she had been waiting for him right here but he hadnt showed up yet.
Uday- Samrat! woh to kamre main nahin hai, mujhey laga yahan hoga
Nupur- kamre main nahin hai?phir kahan gaya?
Mayank- nupur woh chhota bachcha nahin hai gaya hoga kahin aa jayega
Door opens n samrat enters with a packet in his hand
Samrat- Hey Guys!
Gunjan sighed in relief.
Nupur- "so saal jeogey! tumhari hi baat kar rahe tha"
Samrat smiles "to phir meri umar tumhe lag jaaye"
Nupur- haye! waise kahan gaye the aur haath main kya hai?
Samrat grins n lifts his hand "Garma garam Jalebi"
Uday- Arrey wah yeh hui na baat
Nupur gets up "lao main plate main rakh ke lati hoon"
Samrat handsover the packet to nupur n gets seated. He takes a sideward glance at gunjan, she was looking at her plate which was empty.On the dining table sandwhiches, boiled eggs & pancakes.
"Lets dig in!"
Nupur gets the Jalebi's in a plate.
CJ joins them too
"Hey evry1"
S-"Hey CJ come hv some jalebi"
CJ-Jalebi!! Yummy!
CJ takes a seat.
cj- "Just love em, so crispy n sweet!"
Samrat- Just like our Jannuable Gunjan" i stopped realising wat i had said
Everyone at the table stared at samrat.
Mayank- eh ehmm hann aur hum sab nupur ko bhi to woh ramesh ki dukan ki chatpati chaat kehte the, full of variety
CJ- hann
The converstaion came to a wierd stop, everyone sombred up.
Gunjan looks at everyone silently having breakfast.
Gunjan u hv taken a decision now follow it
Gunjan- exactly aur samrat ko bhi to hum rasgulle se compare karte the, ek dum soft n sweet.
Instead of the situation becoming lighter it became even more wierd
Samrat-if gunjan wants this then it will b so
"comeon guys tum sab chup kyun ho? yahi to kehte the hum sab ek doosre ko!"
Nupur- ya
Uday- hey tumlog mujhey kya bulate the? woh main bhool gaya
CJ- bhool gaye chalo koi baat nahin hum yaad dila dete hain
They all say together "Nariyal!"
Uday- wat? nariyal!
CJ grins- "hann nariyal ki tarah bahar se strong aur hard par andar se empty and soft!"
Everyone laughs at the table.
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In the meanwhile
I turned to Benji he was looking far at the sea as if searchin for an end. We were sitting on the same high black stone.
Sh- to tum roz jogging karte ho?
Benji smiles n turns to her "nahin, I thought of accompanying u"
Sheena smiles"Its almost 9:00 now"
Benji- ya
Sh- lets go hv some breakfast
Benji hesitates n then looks up "sure"
I jumped off the stone, Benji jumps too and then unexpectedly grabs my hand n looks at me angrily.
I was aware of the close proximity among us but dint mind,
Benji- Aise kyun jump kiya lag jaati to?
Sheena- aise kaise lag jaati?aur lag bhi jaati to koi baat nahin
Benji- Koi baat nahin aise kaise? Sheena the stone is of ur height! itni height se jump nahin karna aaj ke baad!"
Sheena- ok ok relax nahin karoongey.
Benji calms down n then finds tht he was holding sheena too close, he steps back looking away.
Sh- Benji r u okay?
Benji- m sorry
he bents his head stil not looking at me.
Sh- sorry for what?
Benji-I hv hurt u a lot
Sh- nahin to? I try to cover up
Benji- main jaanta hoon sheena
Sh- benji woh..
Benji- Maine tumhe sumi ke baare main kuch nahin bataya, tumhe kitna bura laga hoga mujhey pata hai, afterall tumne bhi apni feelings mere saath share ki thi
Sh- ohh thnk god"Koi baat nahin hota hai, aur mujhey bilkul bhi bura nahin laga...infact..m happy for u!"
Benji looks up at this "Really?"
Sh- ofcoz
B- ok let me make it up then, i want to share my feelings today with u, i want to b frank wid u just like u were...wud u like to listen?
My heart wrenched at his words, he wanted to share his feelings with me! sure feelings abt sumi, but still he would do something which he perhaps dint do with anyone.So wat if it hurt!
Sh- ofcoz yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai
we both sat down on the sand
Benji plays with the sand n makes different shapes n figures, i waited for him to speak.
He stops n looks up after a while
Benji- u knw m really happy tht we all r back together
"yes me too but there is something tht is disturbing u, wat is it?"
Benji sighed "main suru se batata hoon" he waits for me to reply i nod not able to speak i knew he was going to talk abt sumi.
B-"main jab yahan se delhi gaya tha to RJ station main mujhey sumi miley"
The very words ached my heart, he had fallen in love with her 3 yrs back just after we had ended our relationship.
Benji- "I used to hate her then" Benji confessed
This shocked me n relieved me quite the same
Sheena- kya?
B- ya she was just like me, i dint like it
Sh- really?
B- ya she even used to talk like a guy u knw all tht, howz u duude n 'm cool' like tht
Sheena- hmmm tell me more about her
Benji started playing with the sand again "you want to know?" he asked without looking up, there was a certain hope in his voice
Sheena- ya
I want to knw her know the one whom u love.
Benji- she is one in a million, shes more like my friend, she understands me,sees right thru me i used to hate her coz of this very reason at first.
Sheena- ohh
with every word i understood his feelings he had the same feelings as i have for him, though it didn't matter that every word of his seemed to have cut through my heart
B- she used to even dress like a guy u knw but then she changed & became more like a girl & thts when i realised tht i actually started liking her.
Sh- when exactly?
Benji- after 1 year
Sh- 1 year!
B- ya quite a long time eh?
Sh- ya, par problem kya hai?
B- actually m not sure
Sh- matlab?
B- m not sure if i want to get further involved into this relationship should i take a step ahead n make her a part of my life..is she the one? how do i knw?

My world stood at a halt in front of me.Was it all planned by god, for me to answer this! how ironic The one whom i love is asking me whether he should go ahead in his relationship with other!
Sh- why arent u sure? wats stopping u?
Benji sighed "I want u all to meet her n tell me if shes the one" he paused "can she come here for a few days? so tht u all can meet her?"
I saw the anxiety in his face "sure" If it makes u happy, then anything!
B- thts great i will call her later then n ask to come over.
Sh- ok lets go n hv breakfast then.
B- yeah lets go
They enter the house, n head towards the Dining area.
Samrat, Uday, CJ n mayank were having breakfast
They greet each other.
Mayank was talking to CJ about his work n office. Samrat & uday were eating
"To guys aaj kya plan hai?"Benji asks grabbing a sandwhich n gets seated.
Sh- "pata nahin how abt staying in 2day, we can watch a movie n order pizza?"
S- thts a gr8 idea
U- yeah.
B- RV & diya r sleeping?
S- yeah they had a long journey must b tired.
B- hmmm
At tht moment RV enters
RV- Hey guys!
Everyone greet him. RV gets seated n looks at the breakfast table
RV-"Pancakes! nice!"
Ranvijay helps himself with some.
Sh- wheres diya?
RV- Shes in the shower.
Sh- ok
so RV did u propose to Diya?
RV stops & looks at Sheena
"ermm no"
CJ and mayank turn to the group at the change of topic.
CJ- why?
RV- well u knw, we cant b like tht,I mean it wont suit our career.
S- ohh
RV- ya though i dont think theres a need for tht, we both love each other and will always b together.
M- ya its not important to b engaged, you are committed to her thts more than enough.
RV- ya, Diya and i mutually agree with this decision
Sh- Diya agreed?
RV- ya, y wudnt she?
Sh- hmm no nothing!
RV- wat abt u Sheena found anyone?
Sh- not yet
RV- hope u find soon, coz its an amazing feeling to fall in love n b loved.
Benji changes the topic knowing tht sheena was not comfortable.
"Nupur aur Gunjan kahan hai?"
S- "woh donon kitchen main hain, juice lene gaye thi, pata nahin abhi tak aaye nahin"
CJ- "Areey haan yaad aaya, Kal Gunjan aur tere beech kya baat hui?"
Samrat- "kuch bhi to nahin'
Benji- Humse jhooth bolega?
Samrat- ok we r frnds now
Sh- thts gr8
RV- ya Diya was very tensed about it, I told her not to worry, gud tht u two solved the problem
Samrat forces a smile
Mayank- kuch aur hi baat hai,yeh to main jaanta hoon pata lagana padega.
He nudges CJ. CJ looks at him n then turns to Uday and nods.
At 3:00 after lunch
Samrat,RV n Benji were playing playstation. Diya & Gunjan were reading magazines.
Nupur was filling up sheena abt evrything tht happened the night before.
CJ, Maynk & Uday were up in CJ's room.
M-Guys yeh to clear hai ki samrat sach nahin bol raha
CJ- hmm
U- Lekin sach kya hai?
M-pata nahin samrat subah se ghayab tha na?
U- haan
M-zaroor kuch hua hai
CJ- hmm mujhey lagta hai Gunjan se baat hui hai uski, lekin woh poora sach nahin bata raha
U- hann woh to hui hai par dost ban gaye theres something wrong there,bhala 2 saal ki naraazgi ek raat main khatam?aisa kaise ho sakta hai!
M- u r right
CJ- Samrat kuch nahin bataega aur na hi Gunjan! Hume khud hi pata lagana padega
U- kaise?
M- Dekho abhi to woh dost hain, unhen milane ki koshish karte hai, dheere dheere sach bhi samne aa jayega
CJ- ok aur tu bata nupur ko ab next kab propose karega?
M- pata nahin, not in the next few days
CJ- kyun?
M- sab kuch normal hona chahiye pehley.
CJ- but evrythin is normal
Mayank raises his eyebrows at her
CJ- hmm ok
POV ENDS
Guys do review!!
Positive criticisms are always welcomed:)
Next chap i.e. chapter 9 is
I didnt know wat to name it so lets all it VIDEOMIX
Precap-
S- well basketball has always been my passion, i could leave it at no cost!
U- ya i dint knw wat to do & gave basketball a try n here i am!
N- Well but we cant say tht we r satisfied with our lives are we?
Nupur looked at mayank questioningly
None of them spoke a word
M- no we can never say tht, coz nothin can b perfect.

Well guys dont wanna give out the meaning of the title:D
guess wats it??
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeee updt dear.
luved it..
cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
thnx a lot jyotika, glad u liked it! :D:D
next chap tomorrow....:)

@nikki- thnx for the *like*

luv u guys!!:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ud
mindblowingggggggggggggg
ples yr sajan ko jaldie se mila do, i cant wait
thanks 4 the pm
n cont sooooooooooon
loove
sonal
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ud
loved it
continue soon
n thanx 4 the pm

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