Nazron Se Dil Tak(AR)PART 55-PG124, NOTE-132[4/12]

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PART 17[PAST TRACK]

shilpakaran
a-riddhima what did he say
r-armaan woh mera fav song play kar raha tha.......only he knows i love that song.
a-tum daro mat.i will see what can be done
after some time anjali comes come and armaan leaves for his place
next day:
all the interns r in the locker room.atul had just cracked a joke and evryone was laughing on that,just then a wardboy comes and gives riddhima a bouque.it was covered with a foil paper so she couldnt see what kind of flowers were in it.
everyone started teasing her abt the bouque.
m-kisne bheja hai bouque madam ko.
r-pata nahi muskan ...........naam nahi likha hai.
she then removed the foil paper and was shocked.instead of flowers there were thorns in it.the bouque just fell from her hands.everyone was shocked.
there was a card attached on it"tumhari vajah se meri life mein kaantein aa gaye hain ab mein dekhta hoon ki tumhari life mein phool kahan se aate hain.
a-mein jaanta hoon yeh kisne bheja hai.

waniya mir
Ar: went to ridz who was really scared he called ridhima.

Ridz: who was lost in her thoughts said haan.

Ar: ridz plz compose ur self yahana kisi ko us bata kay baray main nahi pata hai jo just relax.

Muski: array ridz yeh kia yeh tujhyay kon bhaij saqta hai.

Ar: came forward mainay bhaija hai wo kia hai na guyz basket mujhay har wact tang karti hai koi mouqa nahi janay daiti mujhay tang karta na to mujhay bhi to kuch karma than a. he pretended to smile so that no one got any idea.
Anji came forward nd pretend as if he is angry wid armaan.

Anji: armaan I'll not leave u tum kiyun mairi bechari sis ko tang kartay rehtay ho. Then atul came hana Armana jahana anji wahana us ka atul main bhi tum say naraaz hun.

Ar: array yaar champ tu nay bhi maira sath choor dia aik becharay abla mard pay kitna zulm kia is basket nay mager I know har yug main aysa hi hota haio becharay mardoon kay sath.

Armaan was acting nd making faces as if he is in real pain nd suffering

Ridz finally smiled nd anji nd ar relieved dat they handled the situation wisely.

Rirdz was busy in her locker room when she heard some noise.

She got scared ho na ho yeh raaj hai wo yahana a gaya hai main kia karun ab. Armaan tum kahana ho plz a jao.

She was lost in her own thoughts she just closed her eues.

Sum 1 came closer to her nd asked hey r u ok.

She is breathing very fast but then she realized dat its armaan's voice she just open her eyes nd found him near.

Ar: basket r u ok kia hoa?

Ridz: armaan wo aya thaw o yahana aya tha.

Ar: kon ridhima raaj ?

Ridz: haan armaan wo aya thaw o mujhay nahi choray ga she just hugged him tightly as is she is really safe in his arms.

Ar: ridhima wo yahaan nahi hai aur wo kabhi yahan a bhi nahi saqta hai u know na us ko sanjevai say nikala dia gaya hai.

Ridz: realized dat nd said wo armaan…………..

Ar: just hold her 4m soulders ns said daikho ridhima tumhian mainay pehlay bhi yeh samjhaya hai yahaan us baat kay baray main kisi ko kuch bhi nahi pata hai so plz aysa pose mat karo plz yaar I know u r a brave girl a fighter . is bata ko jitni jaldi ho saqay bhula do aur koshish karo kisi o is baray main kuch na pata chalay.

Ridz: ok armaan I'll try but yeh main intentionally nahi karti Armana us raat kay bada main shayad khud kay sayay say bhi darnay lagi hun.

Ar: I know its deficult 4 u but not impossible na . aur tumhian darnay ki kia zarorat hai hum sba hain na tumharay sath.

Ridz: asked tum mairay sath om na armaan.

Ar: got surprised but then by realizing her mental state he said haan baba I'll always be there 4 u any time.

Its 7 pm nd all the interns were leaving.

Anji nd nd armaan are leaving anji asked armaan we will drop u to home.

Ar anji nd ridz in the car all are enjoying.

Ar: hey anji yaar aaj icecream ka man kar raha hai.

Anji: haan maira bhi gud idea chalo chaltay hain. Ridzi tub hi khayay gi na.

Ridz u was lost in herthoughts said aaa hana di chalain na ghar.

Ar: basket hum iceacreams khanay ki bata kar rahay hain aur kiqar na karo hum tumhian paisay dainay konahi kahin gay jot um humara plan kharaba kar rahi ho.

Anji knew dat armaan was just trying to bring ridz in her mood so she said chal ridzi aja ki iceceram Armana ki taraf say ab to tub hi khayaygi na.

Ar: array ab tu double scop khayay gi I know her.

They went to iceacream parlour armaan ordered the iceacream choc for armaan mint for anji nd strawberry 4 ridz.

Soon ridz forgot all her sorrows nd worries nd it was aal becoz of ramaan. It now 8:40 so they decided to leave.

Anji droped armaan on the road infront of his house nd when armaan was walking towards his house ridz saw a car cuming very fast nd I was about to hit armaan she screemed armaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.

But the next moment she found armaan on the road.

Ridz: shouted armaan nd ran towards him.

Anji also followed her. Armaan was lying on the road a car hit him really badly nd he got injuries on his head nd leg.

Ridz started crying help help sumbody plz help……………..

Anji: ridzi yahaan is wact kisi kay anya ka wait kia to sahi nahi ho ga armaan kay liyay us ka buhat blood nikal raha hai I think humain khud hi manage karma ho ga.

Then they picked armaan and take him to the hospital. Ridz was sitting in the back with armaan's head in her lap nd tears were rolling 4m her eyes she is praying to God..

Anji: ridzi daikh Armaan ko hosh aya hai kia.

Ridz: nahi di main koshish kar rahi hun. Armaan plz plz Armana utho kia tum theik ho.

Armaan wasn't responding.

Ridz: yeh sab mairi wajah say hoa hai na di.

Anji: kia matlab tumhari wajah say kuch nahi hoa.

Ridz: I know yeh mairi wajah say hoa hai I am sure yeh car raaj kit hi us nay Armana ki yeh halat ki hai main ussay kabhi muaff nahi karun gi di. Kabhi nahi.

Anji: relax ridzi hum is kay baray main baad main baat kartay hain.pehlay sab say important kam Armana ko layjana hai .

Ridz: wishpered hana di is wact armaan ka thiek hona sab say ziyada zaroori hai .

shilpakaran
they reached sanjeevani within no time...........armaan was rushed to the ot and dr keerti was doing his surgery.after sm time the opertion was completed.dr keerti came out and informed riddhima and anjali that armaan was safe........there were minor injuries,nothing to alarm them.
riddhima rushed to the mandir outside sanjeevani.
r-bhagwanji thank u so much...........aapne mere armaan ko baccha liya.thanku so much.
saying this she ran back to see armaan.anjali was there with him settling him in his room.he was still unconscious.dr keerti came there to talk to them.
k-aaj toh saare interns ghar chale gaye hain..........toh aap dono mein se kissi ko yahan rukna hoga.
b4 any1 could say anything ridz said"mein rahoongi armaan ke saath"anjali did not argue with her but b4 leaving she spoke to dr keerti
a-ma'am kya aap plz kissi ko yahan riddhima ke sath rakh saktein hain..........plz ma'am.
k-kya hua dr anjali............why r u saying this.
a-ma'am yeh batana thoda mushkil hai but plz ma'am its urgent.riddhima should not be left alone.
k-theek hai dr anjali............i will ask the security guard to stay here.
after that anjali left.

armaan rox
riddhima was very worried for him..hours passed by but he was still lifeless…she sat beside him..praying that he soon opens his eyes…
After 5 long hours he gained his senses…
Riddhima was very happy…her eyes were swollen now…she couldn't stop crying…

Armaan: main theek hu..tum chinta mat karo..(in a low voice)
Riddhima: bas armaan..main tumhari dressing change kar deti hu..fir tum bas aaram karo..

Riddhima then made him sit on the bed….
Riddhima dimmed the light to examine armaan's eyes…riddhima brought the torch infront of his eyes..his blue hazy eyes…there was something captivating. something different…his eyes were so gorgeous….
Armaan's eyes were stuck on riddhima's face..riddhima then slowly ordered him to look at left…then right..

When she was over with it she made a move…armaan had a strong urge to grasp her hands..to hold her tight to hug her…but no..he controlled his feelings..this was the first time they were so close and didn't want to spoil the moment

Armaan had got some bruises on his chest..riddhima had to open his shirt to do the dressing..she was hesitant in opening the laces of his shirt…but armaan he was so clever he didn't even touched his shirt he was sitting erect waiting for the poor girl to do the privilege…..
After gathering little courage..she pulled the strings slowly…armaan was staring at her with loving eyes…she was trembling …she was feeling something ..something for armaan..and when she saw his bare chest…she melted..she delicately touched his chest…armaan closed his eyes…her touch made him forget all the pain..her soft and tender touch was so blissful.. riddhima felt armaan's beating heart..she could feel blood gushing through his veins…armaan then gently placed his hands over her…riddhima slowly whispered his name…

Just then a nurse entered the room..riddhima drew her hand back with a jerk..she felt guilty..she ordered the nurse to do his dressings and then she hurriedly left…
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asma_227
Ridz rushed into the locker room n sat on the bench
Her Soliloqey
yeh nujhe kya ho raha hai.kyun aaj main istarah.
kuch samajh nahin aaraha.main kyun uski taraf khichti chali ja rahi hoon.kyun uski bahon mein khud ko sabse zyada mehfooz feel karne lagi hoon.aisa pehle to kabhi nahin hua yahan tak ki jab Raj.
Tears rolled down her cheek.
kyun hota hai mere saath aisa.Raaj jo mere bachpan ka dost tha usne mere saath...che..
aur Armaan.She thinks abt the earlierdays
jab main Sanjeevani aayi thi main usse har waqt ladti rehti thi.maine usey kitna ghalat samjha.uske flirt nature ki wajah se main ussey aur bhi zyada irritate hoti thi aur usne meri itni madat ki meri wajah se woh is waqt I.C.U. mein hai.main usey aise nahin dekh sakti.
Shayadmain hi paagal hoon mujhe ache burey mein fark karna mahin aata.to kya hua agar woh ladkiyon ke saath flirt karta hai par he respects women.
woh ahar se jaisa dikhta hai andar se bilkul alag hai.woh ek bahut acha insaan hai.
yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai.kyun achanak main kisi k liye itna soch rahu hoon.kahin main Armaan se...
nhin aisa nahin ho sakta hum ache dost ban aye hain bas..
lekin uski aankhein pata nahin kya hai unmein...
offo main kya soch rahi hoon mujhe Armaan k paashona chahiye is waqt.
She wiped off her tears then went to I.C.U.
Armaan was asleep.She was awake the whole night.Her eyes had swollen.
it was seven o'clock now.
she was readn his reports wen Anjie arrived.

waniya mir
anji: hello armaan hello ridzi h r u guyz?

ridz: turned back me f9 di.n armaan is much better.

anji: aray yeh tu armaan kab say ho gayi hai double role.mainay armaan say pocha tunay kiyun bataya.

ridz: is liyaydi kiyun kay main uski doc bhi hun mujhay ziyada pata ho ga na kiyun armaan.

armaan who was smiling at their nok jhok said yes basket u r right.nd when armaan tried to get up he felt some pain ouchhhhhhhhhhhh.

ridz: armaan daihaan say kuch cahyay tumhian?

ar: wishpered hana tum.

ridz: kia kia kaha tum nay. i mean basket tum mairi doc ho to tumhain pata hona cahyay na kay mujhay kia cahyay hai.

now its anji's turn to smile nd she said haan haan ridzi bool na armana ko kia cahyay tujhay pata ho ga na.

ridz got confused . shayada tumhian pani cahyay tha nahi shayad ..................

armaan nd anji laughed at her.

ridz: that means u guyz r pulling my leg. not fair di apa bhi is kay sath mil gayi hain.

nd she pretended to be angry wid them especially wid armaan.

purplegirl
Anji: Riddhima, tumhe ab ghar jaana chahiye, maine Dr.Keerti se baat ki, I'll handle Armaan's case for sometime.

Armaan looked sadly at Riddhima, not wanting her to leave, Riddhima, looked at him helplessly.

Riddhima: Di, are you sure? Mein ruk sakti hun..

Armaan: Haan Anji, Riddhima ko problem nahi hai toh rehne do.

Anjali: Tumne iski haalat dekhi hai? Nahi Ridddhima, you go home!

Riddhima: Acha di, bye Armaan.

Armaan gave her the angry look, he really wanted her to stay..

Riddhima: I'll be back!

She was leaving with this when she followed Riddhima out,

(outside Armaan's room)

Anjali: Riddhima.....woh aaj raat ko Rahul ke liye canteen mein choti si party hai.

Riddhima: Par kyun di?

Anjali: Woh, aaj uska birthday hai.

Riddhima: Oh! Phir Armaan ko bhi bataa detein hai.

Anjali: Nahi...usse nahi bata saktein, woh kaise aayega? Iss liye toh maine room mein nahi bataaya.

Riddhima was feeling very bad, she didn't want Armaan to be left out, but she didn't have any choice.

waniya mir
Ridz: di kahin armaan ko bura na lagay.

Anji: o cumon ridz us ki tabiyat theik nahi hai usko araam karnay do nd now no more discussions humain buhat sa kaam karma hai muski wait kar rahi ho gi.

Ridz agreed but she was sure dat when armaan heard about that party he'll be upset wid us.

Muski anji nd ridz arranged a small party 4 rahul nd atul was given the duty to keep Rahul busy so da he can't come dere .

Scene shifts to armaan's room.

Ar: pata nahi yeh basket kahaan reh gayi hai kitni dair say ayi nahi hai.

Sis came in to change his drip.

Ar: sis kia aap nay dr ridhima ko daikha hai.

Sis: kiyun dr armaan aap ko kuch cahyay kia.

Ar: haan mujhay unsay kuch discuss karn atha kia apa nay unhain daikha hai.?

Sis: wo mainay abhi unko locker room main jatay daikha hai.

Sis left nd armaan decided to go in the locker room to meet her.

He some how managed to get up. He was walking lamely. Even he can't name dat emotion its just dat he wanted to see her hold her hand.

Scene shifted to locker room where ridz was changing and anji was waiting her outside. She got page nd left the locker room without informing ridz.

Ridz heard some noise nd thought it must be anji.

Ridz: di r u sure humain Armana ko nahi batana cahyay hai.

When Armaan heard his name he didn't speak.

Ridz: pata nahi di mujhay acha nahi lag raha armaan kay bagair. Pata di mujhay yaqeen nahi ata kay armaan kay baray mainmain aysa sooch saqti hun. Mager he is a nice guy na di. I know u must be surprised. But aysa kuch nahi jaisa aap sooch rahay ho bas hum achay doct hain itnay kam wact main hum buhat achay dost ban gayay hain na di?

Ar was listening dis nd smiled.

Ridz: di plz maiir help kar dain nay yeh knot nahi lag rahi hai plz isko band kar dain.

Armaan didn't want to gi inside but ridz was calling di plz I can't see mairay hair mujhya tang kar rahay hain.

Armaan went in he was hesitant to touch her back. Then he hold her with his both hands nd ridz realized it must be sum1 else.

She immediately turned back n saw Armana was standing right infront of her. She was shocked nd Mortified.

Ridz: armaan tum?
Ar: just touch her checks with his finger tips. As if he is in some trance. Ridhima kia tumhian aaj say pehlay kisi nay yeh batay ahai kay tum kitni khubsorat ho.

Ridz lost in his words.

Ar: kia tumhian yeh pata hai kay kay tumhari ankhian kitni gehri hain. Koi bhi inko daikh daikhtay apni pori umar guzara saqta hai.

They both r lost in each other when anji entered in the locker room
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purplegirl
Anjali: Guys, yeh kya ho raha hai? Armaan, tum ward se bahar kya kar rahe ho?

Armaan, covering his face, trying to look away, then prentending as though he's not heard Anji,

Armaan: Oh..Anji....tum kab aayi? .......well .............mein yahaan.....kya?? Haan...woh actually, umm...Riddhima bohot der se aayi nahi thi naa....iss liye, maine socha , ki mein hee usse dhoond lun..

Riddhima gave him a strange look, she didn't have any clue about why he had come, she was actually keenly listening..

Riddhima: oh!

Anjali: Acha, tumhe dhoond rahe hein Armaan, I think you should go.

Armaan felt very hurt, but he decided to leave.

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An hour later.

A wad boy came to Armaan's room, and Armaan came to know about the party through him. He couldn't believe, that his friends didn't tell him, he knew it was Rahul's birthday, he had wished him, but then they had all said, that they would celebrte once he got okay. He decided to go and check it out. He was obviously wasn't in the best attire for a party, in that yellow Sanjeevani suit.

He went to the changing room and changed into his favourite pair of jeans and white jacket. He moved to the cafeteria.

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At the cafetaria.

Riddhima was sitting all by herself. Everyone else was on the dance floor. She was a fab dancer, but she just wasn't gettting the feel for it.
Armaan saw her sitting. He was just looking from a corner, nobody could notice him. Rahul asked Riddhima for a dance, but she politely refused. She could sense Armaan's presence around. Her eyes started looking for him.
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Terrace.

She went up to the terrace. She wanted fresh air. She wondered what was happening to her? Why did she imagine Armaan around? She wanted to find answers to all her questions. She was looking out, at the stars, when she felt a warm breath on her neck.

Armaan: Tum mujhe dhoond rahi thi naa?

She immediately turned to face him. How did he always know?

Riddhima: Well, mein tumhe kyun dhoondun gi?

Armaan: Lemme think...kyuki tum mujhe miss kar rahi thi!

Riddhima: Well Dr.Armaan, abhi aapko apne room mein, bed par, hona chahiye. Aur mein tumhe miss kyun karungi, Rahul ki party chal rahi hai.....and I was enjoying with everybody.

Armaan: Haan, dekha maine, ki tum kitna enjoy kar rahi thi..

Riddhima: Tum mujh par nazar rakh rahe they?

Armaan: Well, jab doctor itni sundar ho, toh patient ko hee dhyan rakhna padta hai!

Riddhima: Tum mere saath flirt kar rahe ho?

Armaan: Lo, tumhe ab samajh aaya? Dum-dum.

Riddhima: Yeh kya bula rahe ho tum mujhe?

Armaan: Dum-dum, tumhara naya pet name!

shilpakaran
r-kya??????dum-dum.......ohhhhhhhhhh lagta hai basket se bore ho gaye.
armaan coming closer to her"mein kabhi bhi basket se bore nahi ho sakta hoon"
r-armaan tumhe na mein maar dalongi.
a-kya........abhi bhi tumhara dill nahi bhara riddhima,mera accident karvane ke baad bhi...huh.
riddhima started crying after hearing this.
a-omg riddhima plz ro mat..........mein toh bas mazak kar raha tha.
r-nahi armaan tumhe meri vajah se hi lagi hai.na tum meri help karte or na raaj tumhara yeh haal karta.
armaan cups riddhima's face with his hands"riddhima agar tumhe kuch bhi ho jata na toh mein........"
r-aur agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh.
both r lost in each others eyes.......suddenly riddhima gets out of the trance.
a-vaise tumhe pata hai tumne raaj ki life bacha di.
r-matlab
a-agar usne tumhare saath kuch bhi kiya hota toh mein.......i would have killed him riddhima.
hearing this riddhima hugged armaan.both were lost in each other for smtime.
then riddhima gets paged.
r-ab hamein neeche chalna cahiye.sab hamein dhoond rahe honge.aur tumhe rest leni cahiye.......u have to get well soon.
a-theek hai magar plz tum mera case kisi aur ko handle nahi karne dogi.i trust u with my life completely.
both went back to the ward.

waniya mir
Ridz: at the terrace chalo ab jao room main aur armaan karo achay bachoon ki terhaan.

Ar: achay bachon ki terhana main araam zaror kar lun mager phir tumhain pata hai na is kay tumhari baat mannay kay badlay yeh bachya kuch bhi maang saqta hai.

Ridz: hana mujhay pata hai bachya kia mangtayhain chocolates nd icecream na?

Ar: wo kia hai na dr ridhima yeh bacha kuch naughty hai in cheezoon say nahi manta isko kuch aur cahyay.

Ridz: kia?

Armaan was about to say dat a date wid u but ridz phone ringed it was anji asking her whereabouts.

Ridz: ji di main wo main main washroom main hun abhi a rahi hun bas.

Ar: tumnay jhoot kiyun bola?

Ridz: wo mainay jhoot thoori bola main to washroom main janay kay liyya ayi thi mager tum a gayay .ok now main ja rahi hun aur plz tum bhi jao rest karo ok issay pehlay kay koi tumhain daikhay jao.

Ridz leave the terrace nd armaan was thinking.alone nahi dr ridhima aap kay jhoot bolnay kay peechay koi reason thi aur wo main janta hun aap say kehalwana kuch mushkil ha imager dr armaan kay liyay kuch bhi mushkil nahi.

Armaan came to his room nd keep thinking about ridz pehlay main nahi janta tha ridz kay yeh piyaar ha imager haan aaj main keh saqta hun . kay tum hi aik wo larki ho jis kay sath main apni pori zindagi guzaar saqta hun. Mujhay pata hi nahi chala aur kab main tumharay baray main aysa soochnay laga hun. I know tum bhi mujh say utna hi piyaar karti ho bas yeh baat keh nahi pa raho ho.

Armaan decided da he will tell ridz about his feelings tomorrow morning.

Its 8pm ridz was about to leave when she found a kletter in her locker

Dear ridhima main tum say kuch important baat karma cahta hun mager sab kay samnay nahi so plz subha tum sab say pehlay a jana 8 bajay phir tum hospital main anay kay bajayy aik car black color ki khari ho gi us main beeth jana baat kar kay hum under sath main chalin gay. Ok

From armaan.

Ridz got confused she decided to call him nd ask him about dat letter but then she thought ager wo keh raha hai kay sab kay samnya bata nahi kar saqta to theik hai main subha hi us say pooch lun gi.

Ridz was unaware dat the letter she got was actually sent by raaj .it was his plan to trap ridz.

The whole noght ridz keep thinking about the armaan's kletter she was wondering what armaan will say. May be he feels the same 4 me. May be he will confess his feelings.

Next morning in gupta's house anji was sleeping when ridz came to her.

Ridz: di chalian uthain tayaar nahi hona kia dair ho jayay gi.

Anji opend her eyes .kia ridzi kitnay mazay ki neend a rahi thi. Aur yeh kia tu tayaar bhi ho gayi hai .

Ridz: a haan di wo kia hai na mujhay hospital kuch jaldi jana hai is liyay .

Anji: jaldi jana hai mager kiyun? Acha chal ruk main tayaar hoti hun phir aik sath nikaltay hain.

Ridz: nahi di mujhay dai rho jayay gi is liyaymain nikalti hun.

Ridz whispered shular hai bach gayi aur di nay ziyada sawaalnahi kiyay main kia batati kay main kiyun ja rahi hun. Ab ridhima niklo is say pehlay kay nani ya papa daikh kay kuch sawaal karain.

Ridz was on her way to the hospital with all her beautiful thoughts without knowing the danger.

On the other hand armaan was anxiously waiting ridhima to come in the hospital.

Ridz was very excited. So dr armaan aaj apa kia kehnay walay hain. Aap ko lagta hai mujhay pata nahi ho ga main sab janti hun. Kal rata bhi aap yeh bata mujh say kehnay cahtay thay mager main chali gayi. Ab apa say itna intizaar bhi nahi ho rahaho ga kay main hospital ayoon aura pa mujh say baat karain.

On the other hand armaan is waiting. Yaar yeh baslket abhi tak kiyun nahi ayi hai kitna time ho gayahai.

Armaan: sisi kia dr ridhima a gayihain?

Sis: nahi dr armaan abhi nahi ayihain. Kia bata hai apa yeh baat mujh say subha say 10 baar pooch chukay hain> kia kuch cahyya hai apa ko?

Ar: wishpered o God mainay 10 baar is say poocha mujhya pata bhi nahi chala. A haan nahi bas mujhay kuch kam tha aapo jayay.

Armaan to himself. Beta armaan kia beechani hai kiyun sab ko shak main daal rahay ho. Yaar yeh time bhi to nahi guzar raha hai na daikho abhi sirf 8 bajay hain abhi to 1 hour hai us kay anay main.

Ar: kia yara mujhay us say kal hi bata kar laini cahyay thi pata nahi mujhay itni beechani kiyun ho rahi hai. Phone lagaoon us ko?

Then Armana called ridhima.

Ridz: lo ab insay intizaar nahi ho raha ho ga.

Ar: on the other hand pick up the phone ridhima.

Ridz: ji dr armaan main bas puhanchnay wali hun apa nay 8 ka kaha tha ab itna wait bhi n ahi ho raha milti hun aap say waisay apa kahana kharay hain? O hana wo khari hai ap ki car.ok main ati hun.

Armaan was lilstening and woindering why ridhima is saying all dis main kahaan khara hun mainay us ko kab milnay ka kaha tha aur yeh car …… yeh kia kissa hai mujhya kuch gar bar lag rahi hai.kahin ridhima kisi mushkil main to nahi hai.

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Ridz saw the car n sat in it.
The driver was lukn at the other side.She recognised that it was not Armaan.
Suddenly the car gates were locked.
RI:kaun ho tum??
Raj:itney jaldi bhool gayin apne purane dost ko!!
he gave her a wicked smile...
RI:Raj tum.
She tried to open the car but in vain...
Raj:koi fayeda nahin gadi mein automatic lock hai jiski chabhimmere paas hai toh chalein.
He started to drive...
RI:yeh tummkahan le jarahe ho mujhe roko gadi
Raj:nahin Dr. Riddhima aaj koi nahin aayega tumhein bachne k liye woh Armaan bhi nahin woh toh bistar pe pada hai bechara.
RI:Raj bhagwan k liye gadi roko.tum mere saath aisa kyun kar rahe ho.Raaj tumhein hamari dosti ka wasta.
Raj:dosti woh dosti nahin thi Riddhima mera pyaar tha main tumse pyaar karta hoon tum woh pehli ladki ho jiske qareeb main kabhi ja nahin saka aur ab jab tumhein apne qareeb karne ka waqt aaya hai toh us tum us Armaan ko mujhse zyada importance de rahi theen.
RI:Raaj plz gai roko aur maine tumhare liye aisa kabhi nahin socha.tum mujhe aur Armaan ko bhi misinterpret kar rahe ho,hum sirf ache dost hain aur jise tum pyaar keh rahe ho wo pyaar nahin hawas hai.yeh tumhare liye haar aur jeet ki baat hai.tum har cheez ko khel samajhtey ho.maine tumhein apna sabse acha dost mana aur tum plz tum gadi roko.main tumse pyaar nahin karti
Raj then smirked n tried to touch her face but she dejected his hand.

Here Armaan was worried abt Ridz as she had not turned up yet n he was thinkn abt their conversation.
AR(thnkn):mera dil keh raha hai ki Riddhima museebat mein hai bas ab mujhe khud hi jake dekhna hoga.
then he decided to go n search 4 her.Anjie was also worried she tried 2 stop him but in vain.He went 2 the locker room 2 change his yellow clothes then lukd in Ridzy's locker.He found the letter there n understud that it was Raaj.
He thought how to find their whereabouts.
Anjie came into the locker room n understud that sumthn is wrong by Armaan's face.
Ammy showed him the letter n she was shocked.
AN:Armaan ab hum kya karein kahaan dhoonde unhein kisi ko kuch bata bhi nahin sakte.Dr. Kirti bhi aaj off pe hain.main ****i kaise loon.
ARon't worry Anjie main toh duty pe nahin hoon na main Riddhima ko wapas sahi salamat launga yeh mera vaada hai.tum mujhe yeh batao ki Mumbai mein koi aisi place hai jahaan Raj aur Riddhima bachpan mein mila karte they.
AN:haan Raaj ka purana ghar andheri mein hai hum wahan pe bahut masti kartey they.yaqeen nahin aata ki yeh wahi Raaj hai.woh Ridzy ke saath Armaan tum plz Ridzy ko bacha lo.woh abhi zyada door nahinn gaye honge.
AR:main abhi nikalta hoon.

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swarobi1

@swarobi1

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

that was an awesome update.

thanks for the pm

but yaar u stopped at such an interesting point, now how long do we have to wait for the update.

plsssssssssssssss update soon.

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Priyanka

@..KaJenDelena..

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

hey hun.

ok firstly Thank you for ur amaizing comment on my FF it made me real happy :) secondly amaizing FF love the fact thats a open FF and your part was great! Update soon. xx Priyanka

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AMOON

@Amoon.88

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

loved it....

loved da terrace scene...

n yaaay!!! go armaan....save riddhima 4rm dat raj.

thnx 4 da pm

continue soon

AMOON

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

woowww that was simply amazing...

marvelous part...

armi met an accident..

n i guess both r gonna confess....but raj na...tang arane se baaz nahin ata...

hope armi ridz ko jaldi se bacha le.....

thnx for the pm...........

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Gaurav Shanbhag

@AR_LOVER

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

awesome part

plz update soon

cant wait 4 next part

raj ki achi pitai kar dena

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Asma Khan

@crazy4KASH_AR

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: swarobi1
that was an awesome update.
thanks for the pm
but yaar u stopped at such an interesting point, now how long do we have to wait for the update.

plsssssssssssssss update soon.

Finally u r commenting here.Thanks a lot dear.
I'm glad that u loved this part.
Don't worry u'll not have to wait long.
I'll update the next part soonest.
Love Asma.