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Saniya

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi people, my name is saniya and i am new to this ff and i am writing for the first time so plz bear with me. i have been reading since and few months and i am in total love with ffs and i am one fiction maniac. lol. so without any more chit chat i'll continue with intro. And it's an AR ff. ma all time fav jodi. sigh.😳

link to thread 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/29911906

INTRO

We see a girl in her mid teens sittings on her bedroom window sill lost in her thoughts and daydreaming when suddenly her eyes fell on the piece of paper in her hand. she sighed as she saw wat she had been doodling since the past 5 mins. it was the letter 'A' written all over the paper with love hearts around it. her anger rose while she sat up abruptly from the window and threw the paper outside her window while clutching the window sill tightly.

"why do i keep writing this letter 'A' again and again and especially while i am daydreaming. gosh wat is it in this letter that as soon as i see it my heartbeats involuntarily gets fast and my bl**dy hormones gets outta control"😡 she thought as she banged her fist against the wall.

"riddhima come down this instance. NOW" her mum called her down and she could sence the temperature around the house getting high cuz when her mum is angry only person can save her and that is GOD. she on an instance fell on her knees and joined her hand in a prayer state.

"oh god bacha lena ha. plz. pakka ajj pura din bilkul swear nahi karoongi aur jhoot, jhoot to mein pura 3 ghante tak nahi bolungi. promise god. save me." she quickly muttered under her breath and slowly and even more slowly she walked towards her kitchen where she saw her mum fuming in anger. as she finally stepped in the battle field where she will be executed for the sin which she can't remember. lol.

"what is this?" her mum asked in a hoarse whisper as her mum shoved the paper her hand.

'wait is this the paper which i threw outside my window? oh crap i am so dead. ridzy you are such a gonner. now wat will mum think?🤢' she thought as she felt beads of sweat on her forehead.

so this is it folks. tell me if you liked it or not. and if i should continue it or not. comments/critisizm welcomed.

love

Saniya

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INDEX

Intro- pg 1

character sketch- pg 1

part 1- pg 2

part 2- pg 3

part 3- pg 5

promo 1-pg 7

part 4- pg 11

promo 2- pg 14

part 5- pg 20

promo 3 - pg 28

part 6- pg 30

promo 4- pg 35

part 7- pg 37

promo 5- pg 42

part 8- pg 107

promo 6- 137

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Posted: 15 years ago

plz comment guys and that goes to silent readers aswell. thanks

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey the intro sounds really interesting... plz do continue... also if u can plz do pm thanx- misha😊

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thanks for your comments and i will sure continue. continue nahi karungi to aur kaha jaungi. lol. thanks again for your support and character sketch comming up soon.

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Character sketch

this story is set in leicester, uk

gupta family

Riddhima Gupta: A 16 year old bubbly girl who loves to live life. she is very optimistic about everything and lives in a pink tinted world where everyone is nice but that doesn't mean she doesn't know the reality of the world. she is an independant girl who can stand up not only for herself but also for her loved ones. her parents are her everything. she can die for them if needed but sometimes she does her own fun behind their back by going a bit against thier wishes. A perfect liar who can lie blatanly without a sign of guilt in her eyes. A swearing machine and especially when someone rubs on her wrong side. soon gonna join college and right now looking for part time to be more independant.

Mrs padma gupta- a typical housewife and a cool mum who understand her daughter well but two things she can't take- riddhima's lies and trash in the house. supports riddhima in her good decisions.

Mr shashank gupta- a middle class man who loves his little family to bits but strict at same time when it comes to values and sanskar.

THE MALIKS.

Armaan Malik- 16 year old hunk and the hearthrob of every girl. gonna join college soon and right now got a part time job. he is hiding something from everyone and you will know that as the story continues. he is arrongant, bossy,he think that things should work his way, very fun loving dude and doesn't go too close to someone cuz he is scared that he might spill the beans. armaan has taken a decision (it's a secret) and his family is ready to support him

Ananya Malik- the world's best mom anyone could have and loves his son to bits. a happy and kind natured lady who is loves to gossip but has got no one in house who shares same interest as her.

Billy Malik- a fun loving dad and very kind hearted man. he is very down to earth person. he supports armaan in his decision and also proud of him.

Bineshwari Malik (in short people calls her Bi)- cool grandmom of armaan and the closest person to him.

Side Characters [ they all are going to join college soon]

Muskaan chadda- same as dmg

Anjali sharma- fun loving spontaneous girl.

Armaan's gang

Rahul garewal- armaan's best friend and best advisor when armaan needs it.

Atul Joshi- environment freak and armaan's best friend, very kind guy.

Mac- armaan's friend

Vivek- armaa's friend and tries to be like armaan.

so this is the character sketch and tell me how it is. make sure you comment. it encourages me a lot. love you guys

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saniya

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Saniya

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Posted: 15 years ago

guys why aren't you commenting😒. plz comment as you see i am a very impatient soul. sowwie you all have to bear with me. lol😆

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Saniya

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Part 1

'ok think ridzy, wat can you say umm that I didn't threw the paper but CRAP I promised to god not to lie for the next 3 hours. AAGH my big gob, now I'll have to say the truth that I was that culprit who dared to throw the paper outside my window and litter my front garden which my mum loves like hell. Sometimes I wonder who is the daughter me or that fu**ing garden. OH NO I just broke my resolution about not swearing for the day. Damn you ridz, can't even keep a frigging promise.' Her chain of thoughts were broken when padma snapped her fingers in front of her face to bring her back to earth.

"are you even listening to me or inventing a new lie. Well if you are then don't even about it cuz remember what happened last time you lied. Huh?" she said with an evil smirk on her face as drops of sweat trickled down from riddhima's temple and got seeped into her top.

"OH NO! Not getting locked into the garden again mom. You that blue and green creepy plant of yours stink to no extent" she said changing the topic from the paper to plants knowing very well that her mum will forget about the world when it comes to her garden. She could already see the effect of the bomb she just threw when she saw mum gritting her teeth and clenching her fists. Padma slowly moved towards riddhima as she tentatively took a few steps back not knowing whats coming next.

'will she slap me? No no ridz, you are 16 not 6 and you only insulted a plant by calling it smelly and creepy which is sooooo true, trust me. Ok shall I make a run for it? Nah she'll get you when you will come back to pounce on dinner like a greedy animal. GOSH! How much you eat man. Look your tummy is getting slightly flabby. WAT I mean WAT the F**K? how can I jump from one topic to another like a cat. Stick to the topic women. Look she is still staring at you with those narrowed eyes. Ooooh ooooooh creepy.lol. gosh girl do something, uhmm ya ask her what the hell is she doing'

"aaa uhmm mummy aap yeh kya kar rahe ho? Aap mere aise kareeb kyo aa rahe ho? Chi chi mum I mean mummy app ko yeh sab shobha nahi deta. Hehehe" she bursted aout laughing but soon her lauhing riot came to an end as her mum wacked her with the spatula in her hand.

WHACK

"ooww ooww, mum what was that for? You know I was just messin and anyway why were you coming so close to me?" she asked while rubbing her arm where padma has mercilessly whacked her.

"for this" she said as she handed ridz the spatula in her hand while pointing towards the cooker.

"you mean cccookk? Say no plz" she begged her mum but padma left the kitchen just by saying,

"we want dinner at half seven and make sure it's edible otherwise we have to throw in the bon like last time. You know we can't even feed your 'food which I don't think it's anywhere near food' to dogs; who knows they might die after eating it." She huffed and retreated from the kitchen.

' ARGH ARGH subah subah kiski shakal dekhi thi meine jo aaj pura din is kitchen ki shakal dekni padegi. Wait subah apni shakal dekhiti meine. Ugh god ab kya mein shakal bhi na dekho ? huh? Tell tell?' with that returned to her cooking which she detested to the core but took a sigh of relief as she noticed the scrunched up paper in her hand.

'phew atleast mum forgot all about this, but the cost at which she forgot is very high as I have to cook dinner which I am not even sure that I'll will even make it edible enough for dogs to eat forget my parents'. She quickly opened the lid of the bin and threw the paper in and went back to resume her punishment.

'ab is 'A' ke bache ka kuch karna padega. I mean can you believe last time mum thought that I fancy some guy whose name start with A. I mean what the****. Not only that but also she gave me a pretty boring 20 mins lecture about concentrate on studies and not on boys and blah blah cuz the rest I couldn't asked to hear as I was just staring at her facing and counting her pimples pretending to listen. Jeez haven't she heard of something call anti spots wipes'.

Kk so here was part one and I know I know you must be swearing that where the hell is armaan but patience people cuz Mr. MALIK is on his way. Can't promise when will he be introduced but I'll try my best. Hope you liked it. Plz leave you comments as they are very encouraging. Thanks.

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saniya

Edited by Sani_Rani - 15 years ago