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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

heyy dear

sounds cool
do cont it
n also m me whenever u update
thxx
dhruvika

thanks druvika and i will surely continue it. just keep comenting. it means a lot. uhmm so friends?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: coolgal96

I LUV UR CONCEPT..PLZZ PM ME WHEN U UPDATE NEXT!

woah woah calm down. and i have already added u on my pm list buddy.😆 thanks so much for your comment it means a hell lot for me. btw wats your name? and one more question do you understand hindi dialoges?
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

Part 3

1 month later

She dug her head in her pillow as the rays of sunlight filtered through the clouds and seeped through her blinds disturbing her beauty sleep. She twisted and turned to avoid any encounter with light but sun was in full mood for neck to neck competition with her. Finally giving up (which she normally don't ) she opened her eyes and blinked a couple of times to clear the blur. Then she lied on her back when the memories of the past month came flooding back through her mind.

After the cursed night when she had a little tiff with her mother, she made a decision that she will financially support her family and swore that she will do her best to come out from crisis. From after that day she left no stone unturned to find a job. Even though she was 16 she passed her GCSEs with a bunch of A*s, so it was that hard. Today she has an interview in one of the biggest company in the world who even have an office in Leicester and thanks to her nerdy side she got a call for interview. Her chain of thoughts was broken by the sound of alarm.

TRINGGG TRINGG

"uff koi band karo is dabbe ko varna aaj to window se niche gaya and I don't care if it kills mum's smelly plants" she barked as she slammed the alarm clock shut.

Who let the dogs out
(woof, woof, woof, woof)
(woof, woof, woof, woof)
(woof, woof, woof, woof)
(woof, woof, woof, woof)

Who let the dogs out (woof, woof, woof, woof)
Who let the dogs out (woof, woof, woof, woof)

(woof, woof, woof, woof)

'where is it? Where did I keep that F**king phone? God this ringtone is getting on ma nerves! Which dork kept it? Oops I did. Hehehe. Ok enough back to topic missy. WHERE IS THAT F**KING PHO' oh found it. Wonder how it went under my pillow? Kahi iske pair to nahi nikal aaye. Hmm I wonder, latest techno gadgets you see.' With that she quickly pulled the phone from underneath the pillow and was ready to give that person on other hand a piece of her mind for killing her morning with that doggish song. So without even looking at the caller's name she barked

"WHAT? DO YOU KNOW THAT CIVILLISED PEOPLE SLEEP AT 7 IN THE MORNING?"

"I know that why I called you cuz you are nowhere near civilised you see" the girl on the other side said as a matter of fact as it is the most obvious thing.

"WHAT THE F**K? who the hell do you think you are? Calling me uncivilised. Apne aap ko dekha hai bhenji! Hehehe" Riddhima bursted out laughing imagining her best friend's face sulking. Her laughter eventually came to stop and getting no response from other side she said hesitantly not sure if she is still there or not.

"heloooooooooooo anybody homeeee? muskaan you still there or I am again talking to air like last time".

"I am still here swearing machine!" muskaan said with slight giggles.

"ARGH how many times do I have to tell you I am not a swearing machine. Ok I hardly swears." ridzy lied blatantly through her teeth.

"Acha! So when was the last time you swore?"

"in the morning when that f**king alarm pissed me off" she bit her tongue for getting caught red handed.

'man ridzy you are losing your self control. If you were so despo to swear then atleast would have waited for muskaan to end the call. Now she is gonna eat your brain the whole day. Well gal you said it, to ab bhugat (bear).'

"SEE SEE u sweared! Hah I am always right. Didn't anyone tell you not to mess with THE muskaan".

"ya ya wateva now back to to topic why did ya call me and dat also dis early? Did your mum just bought a rooster which I don't know about huh?"

"shut up ridz. I woke sooooooooo early jus for you baby and you are taunting me. Pata hai I kept 6 alarms and then I woke up. I even threw 3 outside the window and 1 across the room which broke I think. Now mummyji will surely kill me. Ha if I die, would you come to ma funeral, would you cry, ohho ohhho"

"shut up besuri I don't want it to rain today and well for your question sowwie you die today, I can't come. Man understand I gotta interview today. Hehehe." Ridzy laughed imagining her red face.

"Fine don't come aur waise bhi mein to sirf gana gaa rahi thi. Now in your words, if we go the main reason for me calling, is that I called to best of luck for your interview"

"oww thanks you are sometimes such a sweetheart"

"only sometimes?" muskaan asked tapping her feet waiting impatiently for her to correct her unpardonable mistake.

"kya karu muskaan ab isse jyada jhoot nahi bola jata hahaha" after that she was in fits. Muskaan shook her head calling her "incorrigible" and kept the phone down.

After 10 minutes of uncontrollable laughter, ridz staggered in to the bathroom to have a quick shower. Soon her smile turned in to a frown as she remembered that she has an interview today. She quickly wrapped the towel around herself and pulled out whatever closest to her from her wardrobe. Ridzy is never a fussy person when it comes clothes. She just can't get her head around that why people care so much about what other people think about them. It's her life and she can dress however she like; whether it's classy or scruffy who cares? Well she doesn't!

This is what Riddhima wore.

http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_7_GKlEfykFE/SFp6wegTe-I/AAAAAAAAD0E/_xkb-zXgdtU/s1600/1casual.jpg
'now I just hope mum doesn't see me in this. What will she think? Damn you ridz you are a such a hypocrite. Who was saying "I don't care what other people thinks about me" and look now. Well mum doesn't come in other people ok. She is special. Afterall she ma mum.' Her silent monologue was broken by the noise of breaking plate.

"HAI RABBA MENU CHAK LE" her mum screamed as the plate slipped from padma's hand shattered into pieces.

'SH*T now wat' think ridz think'. Before she makes you dress in a salwar thingy I better make a run for it. Ya that's it. GO RUN WOMEN'

"bye mum gotta go. I have an interview to attend" with that she slammed the front door behind and ran out of the apartment as fast as her legs could take her.

'GOSH that was close. Phew bach gayi warna imagine going to an interview in salwar thingy. Eewww gross. Ok not gross but really EEWW.'

She took bus and sat on the end seat from where she could see those despo boys trying to get a glimpse of creamy legs.

'lusted ba**ards' she snidded thinking how low life they have got .

'GOD now look at that joker and the way he is gawking at my legs looks. Dil to kar raha hai ki zor se chillao "ghus jao tango mein agar inti fascinating lag rahi to" such dogs they are. Now that's it if one more person looks at me with those fu**king lustful eyes and they are sooooo dead. I won't think twice before showing them some blackbelt moves. HUH'

As her stop came, she stormed out of the bus swearing under her breath. Now she was standing in front of the 15 storey high elegant and classy building where she could clearly see written 'MALLIK EMPIRE'.

"godji please yeh job dilado mein 5 ka prasaad chadaoongi mandir mein kal. Plz huh" she said under her breath but what she didn't knew was that it was audible enough for the person who was behind her.

"yeh job tumhe godji nahi sirf Mr mallik dila sakte hai as you see he is the owner" the sudden voice caught her off guard and Riddhima turned around abruptly but the person was standing right behind her which was too close for comfort. So immediately pulled herself back due to which she lost her balance and fell.

THUD

"oww oh mummy my butt hurts", she whined while rubbing her back and slowly stood up. Then she saw the reason due to which she fell. There she saw a boy around her age standing with his hands in his jeans pocket and smirking at her.

Riddhima went red due to embarrassment.

'ridzy you fool. Itne handsome ladke ke samne gir gayi. Wo kya soch raha hoga'.. kitni giri hui hai tu. But wait why the hell is he smirking at me like that.' Her trance was broken by his husky voice.

"chillax bbz, many girls loose their balance when they see armaan for first time. You're not the only one. And now stop blushing, look you've gone all red" and with that he coolly went in the building, leaving horrified Riddhima behind.

'the nerve of that F**king BA**ARD. Who the hell does he thinks he is? Wait he can't walk off like that. He need some Riddhima special treatment from me. Now just wait and watch armaan whateva, I will make you eat you're words. AND THAT'S A PROMISE'

So guys how is it. Did you like it or not. And do comments plz it means a lot for me. And I want loooong comments plz. Pletty please with a cherry on top. Lol. Jus felt like sayin that. So enjoy. And how did you find armaan's first impression. Lol he didn't catch her. I bet you all must be thinking that he'll catch from falling and those chessy moments, but don't forget armaan is an aroogant dude.

Lots of love

Saniya

xxx

Edited by Sani_Rani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
guys if any of the readers need me to add them to my pm list tell me ok. enjoy.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

thanks rav omg i am actually talking to ya. i am such a big fan your writings. i know i sound like some lovestruck teenage girl who saw her crush.lol. well i am 16 so am teenager well not lovestruck defo. back to topic- thanks so much reading and hope you like part one so keep commenting.
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saniya

I have a fan???😆😆 aww thankyou sweety.. you sure you got the right girl though?😛 anyhoo you're duin a fab job n m off to read parts 2 n 3.. den will be back with my reply... tc saniya... x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
HEYYYYYYYYY SANI
SUPURB UPDATE
LIKE IT DEAR
KEEP CONTINUE
THANKS FOR THE PM
LOTS OF LOVE
PRINZ😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ahh saniya... you my sweets are a gem.. hmm m guessing u is british.. snap... so am i... you frm Leicster? :P just guessing... Ahh i can relate to ridz in soo many ways here.... swearing 24/7.. thats me.. putting alarm clock on snooze in the middle of a-levels... yep me... hehe.... (i only snoozed it once though.. :P) Ahh... i can't wait for you to continue it sweety.. shaping up smoothly.. way to go... take care hun... n P:S: and would it always haunt you baby.. that you missed your chance to save me... :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
hey guys,
well someone just told me that i should add a link to my pm so that you don't have to spend hours looking for it. sorry for my mistake guys. i am writng for the first time, so plz forgive me for these errors. i'll try my best to keep up with you guys.
and i am sooooooo happy that you guys are loving my ff. i am over the mooon. someone bring me down before i get lost in space. lol.
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saniya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: -rav-

I have a fan???😆😆 aww thankyou sweety.. you sure you got the right girl though?😛 anyhoo you're duin a fab job n m off to read parts 2 n 3.. den will be back with my reply... tc saniya... x

of course you are the right person. no doubts about it. and sooooooooo much for your reply.
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sani
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Prinnia

HEYYYYYYYYY SANI

SUPURB UPDATE
LIKE IT DEAR
KEEP CONTINUE
THANKS FOR THE PM
LOTS OF LOVE
PRINZ😳

hey prinz meri jaan.lol [don't take it in a wrong way]😆
thankyou sooooo much for your comment. i mean sometimes, i wonder are you sure it's that good, or you're exaggerating it? huh?jokes just messin. anyway stay hooked cuz there is still lots to come. this is just the beggining.
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your sani😃

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