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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
wow
sorry little late
loved it
thanx for the pm
conttd soon
do pm me plz!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

heyya guys this is the first update by pari..... the next one will be by mina..... hope you will lyk it......... (mina send pm to all in yur pm list,,,)

here it goes..

enjoy..

,mayank was in the canteen.......
samrat: heyy dude kese ho??
m: kuch nhi yaar...... wo sir ne mujhe nupur ka project partner bannaa diya,,
s and all the others in the canteen: kya>??>>>>>>>
mayank looked at everyone: tum logo ko kya hua???
everybody got seated,,,
s: dude teri wajah se hum sab ko suffer karna padta hai.....
m: tumhe kyu???
s: dekh lena,,
wen nupur came with gunjan
n: gunjan apne bhai se keh dena mein iske ghar nhi aane waali project banaana hai to mere ghar aa jaaye,,,,
m: gunjan apni dost ko bol mein iska naukar nahi hoon...
everyone was listneing to this...
n: tumhe fail hona ho to mere ghar mat aana kyuki mein tumhaare ghar nhi aaungi........
m: tum mere ghar aaogi,,
n: tum,,
m: tum,..
n: mayank ek baar keh dia na ki tum mere ghar aaoge..
m: dekho nupur..
n: kya dekhoon>??????
m: chup karo junglee billi,,.
n: junglii bille hoge tum... bandar,,,,,,,, (she said throwing the burger on him)
m: aur tum kon ho jhansi ki rani??? (he said throwing pepper on her)
n: tumhe aaj bhagwaan bhi nhi bachaa sakta.......
m: booh.........
nupur was running behind mayank and throwing things which were actually hitting others,,,
s: gunjan sweetheart yeh sab kab tak chalega??
g: mujhse mat poocho..............
n: fine.......... mein tumhaare ghar aa rhi hoon..... apna kamra saaf karke rakhna kyuki mujhe badboo pasand nhi.....
mayank's house..
g: bhai tum ne yeh apne kamre ki kya haalat banaa rakhi hai??? aur yeh phata moza..... yeh to bahut puraana hai na..... aur yeh sa kya hai,,,
m: gunjan issi din ka to mujhe intezaar tha....... aaj nupur aa rhi hai..... aur usse iss kamre mein padai karni hai..... ein iss room ko itna ganda kar doonga ki wo khud apne ghar chali jaayegee...
g" bhai tum paagal ho,,
nupur came.........
n: cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,,,,,,, kitna ganda room hai,,
while mayank was controlling his laughter,,
m: mene to pehle hi kaha tha tumhaare ghar pe padenge..
n: bhaad mein jaao mr.sadu... mein project banaa hi nahi rahi..
and she left with gunjan......
m: (laughed hard)
n: gunjan tera bhai mahaan hai...... uske jesa sadu,,,
g: nupru wo mera bhai hai........
n: isiliye to chup hoon warna,,
m: warna kya??? (he said following them)
n: warne ttumhaare baal noch leti......
m: aur mein tumhe chod deta kya??? mein bhi tumhaare ... mein tumhaare sir pe garam kadai rakh deta......
n: iski to mein,,
she said moving towaards him wen gunjan stopped him,,
n: dekha gunjan issiliye mein tere ghar nhi aati.........
m: to mein konsa phool bicha kar khada hoon,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
n: tum... (she saw the water jug on the table,,, and she emptied it on mayank)
m: aaaahhh....... (he took the jug of orange juice and emptied it on npur..)
n: ahen........besharam....... bevakoof,,,, jaanwar,,,, bandar,,,,,,,,,,, tu aaj mujhse nahi bachega..
and there started a tom and jerry fight............. nupur pulling mayank's hair and mayank pulling hers........
m: nupur mere baalon ko mat chua..
n: aur tum to mujhe ladoo khilaaoge is baat ke..................
gunjan put her hands on her head,,,,,,,,
m: nupur tumhe pata hai tum kitni badi eeeee............
n: apne mooh se ek shabd mat nikaaalna........ (she said showing him the knife) warna gala kaat doongi......
m: aur mein tumhe chod doonga..... (he said showing her spoon.... then saw it then replaced it with a fork..)
n: mein ghar jaa rhi hoon gunjan.................
m: to jaao ........
n: ab to mein nahi jaaungi...... mein yahiin par apna ghar basaaungi tumhe isse kya???
m: to bassaa lo....................... iss ghar ke bete se shaadi karlo mera kya hai,,,
n: kya???
m: matlab,,,, matlab tumhaari marzi hai wo karo.... wese bhi aaj jo tumhaari wajah se mene apna kamra bigaada hai usse saaf karna hai..
n: to jaao...... wese bhi tumhe kisi bhi kaam karne mein saal lag jaate hai....... pata nhi tumhaari patni ke saath tum...
m: kya??????
n: abb....... wo.. tum jaao kamra saaf karo......
m: haan to....... jaa hi raha hoon...........
he went to his room//////////
n: arrey mein to apna purse mayank sadu ke kamre mein hi bhool gyi..
she went to take the purse. after cleaning herself... (orange juice remember)
she saw mayank cleaning his room......... and he took her purse........
m: yeh ladki ka kya hoga.... mein isse purse waapis dene nahi jaaunga... chahiye to khud aake le legi.......
n: haan to aa gyi lene.... tumse kisne poocha.......
m: hehe..... duffer.......
n: kya kaha,,,,,, mein duffer aur tum tum chor.......
m: chor??
n: aur nhi to kya mera purse chori kar rhe the.. (she knew he was not thieving but still)
m: mein chori??? tum apna purse bhool gyi thi madam.........
n: shut up........ tumse baat karne ke liye nhi aayi hoom///
m: to mujhe bhi tumse gossip karne ka shok nahi hai......
n: ah..........( she left from there completely irritated)
m: ab yeh to kuch nhi karegi project mujhe hi banaana hai......
n" aur suno.. (she said cumng back) ab saara project tum banaaoge mein kuch nhi karungi........
m: aapka hukum saraakhon par.......
n: tumse baat karna matlab deewar par apna sar fodna hai.......
m: accha????? mujhe to pata hi nahi tha... aur tumse baat karna kya hai??? bell ke aage been bajaana???
n: ahennnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.......... (she left)
at evening..
g: bhai tum pub chal rhe ho??
m: of course....
g: waha nupur bhi aayegi....
m; to mein usse nahi darta..
g: wo pata hai..... par hum tum dono se darte hai...............
m: gunji plz......
g; chalo.....
at the pub,,,,,,,,,,,,
n: tum bhi yahaan aaye ho mayank??
m: nhi mera bhoot aaaya hai..
n: ohh kya hai na tumhaara chehra bhoot jesa hi dikhta hai to mein differentiate nhi kar paati.......
m: ohh aur tumhaara cehra chudail jesa dikhta hai na to mee andar ka bhoot tum par line maarne ke liye aa jaata hai..
n: to apne andar ke bhoot ko keh do mein usse nhi patnewaali kyuki wo TUMHAARA bhoot hai....
m: aur mera bhoot bhi tum par line nhi maarta wo to usko tumme usko apni gf yaad aati hai.... so u know wo thoda senti ho jaata hai...
n: ohhh..... bechaara. par usse kitna bura lagta hoga na ki tumhaari koi gf hi nahi hai.......
m: aur tumhaare to bf ki line lag rhi hai............. ek bf tha rv..... aur usne kya kia tumhe sab ke saamne dump kia.......
nupur was quite..... she left......
g: kya mayank... tum jaante ho nupur rv se kitna pyaar karti thi..... yeh baat bolna zaroori tha kya?? aur rv ko tum bhi jaante ho wo kitna mean hai............
mayank felt guilty,,,,,,,,,,'
mayank went to nupur..
m: wo.. um.. actually.... mera wo matlab nhi tha....
she did not say anything,,,,,,
m; ab tum itna bolti ho to,.,,
n: kya mein bolti hoon?????
m: aur nhi to kon bolta hai??
n: thik hai...... ek competition ho jaaye.........
m: of course.......... par abhi nahi..... sabke saamne nahi kyuki humaari wajah se sab ko bahut pareshaani hoti hai.........
n: done........ kon kitna drink kar sakta hai........
m: done..... mujhe isme koi nahi hara sakta......
n: nupur bhushan haraa sakti hai....... to aajaao aaj ghar pe........
m: tumhaare ghar??
n: kyu aaj mein tumhaare ghar aayi thi to ab tum aaogi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
m: thikk hai... tumhe haraane ke liye kuch bhi.......
n: haarega kon wo to ab pata chalega........
m: hmm....... dekhte hai............
n: aur jo haara wo sabke saamne dusre koo sorry bolega...........
m: done.............
at night.... nupur's home........
mayank and nupur were drinking and drinking and drinking..........
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okkk guys,,,,, plz comment/critisise and press the lyk tab.... hope i was upto the mark of mina...... but still........ hope you all lyk it..... and mina too...... (actually we had not discussed abt the parts and will not discuss to encourage excitement... and so the next part will be by mina so ask her to update quickly not me....😆 we both just hav the outline of the story means we hav an idea of wat the other will write but not the exaggerations...... kk mina its yur turn now)...

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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
Hey Pari...
Sorry.. Had to go out for some work in the evening! Now i'm back to write a long comment!
Mayank and Nupur ne to hadd kar di yaar... Kitna ladte hai... Bechare SaJan... Hahahaha....
My Favourite Part of the update was:
n: mein ghar jaa rhi hoon gunjan.................
m: to jaao ........
n: ab to mein nahi jaaungi...... mein yahiin par apna ghar basaaungi tumhe isse kya???
m: to bassaa lo....................... iss ghar ke bete se shaadi karlo mera kya hai,,,
n: kya???
m: matlab,,,, matlab tumhaari marzi hai wo karo.... wese bhi aaj jo tumhaari wajah se mene apna kamra bigaada hai usse saaf karna hai..
n: to jaao...... wese bhi tumhe kisi bhi kaam karne mein saal lag jaate hai....... pata nhi tumhaari patni ke saath tum...
m: kya??????
n: abb....... wo.. tum jaao kamra saaf karo......
m: haan to....... jaa hi raha hoon...........
Mayank himself tells Nups.... Is ghar ke bete se shaadi karlo...
MayUr will obviously be together in the end....
Fabulous update!
Loved it completely....
Will continue soon!
Muah.....
Mina
Edited by mina_18secret - 15 years ago
kiarathediva thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

come on mina...... quick i m waiting

bhavana92 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
waah waah! is part ko padhte aisa lag raha tha jaise World War 3 ke saath saath ek bada sa tufan bhi aa gaya ho!😆
continue soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56


He he, Pari Great first part.. Mayur don't like each othere at all

Loved Majan convo.
g: bhai tum pub chal rhe ho??
m: of course....
g: waha nupur bhi aayegi....
m; to mein usse nahi darta..
g: wo pata hai..... par hum tum dono se darte hai...............


Mina, UPDATE SOON.... I am waiting...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Great part Pari . Funny one .

n: ab to mein nahi jaaungi...... mein yahiin par apna ghar basaaungi tumhe isse kya???
m: to bassaa lo....................... iss ghar ke bete se shaadi karlo mera kya hai,,,


n: ohh kya hai na tumhaara chehra bhoot jesa hi dikhta hai to mein differentiate nhi kar paati.......
m: ohh aur tumhaara cehra chudail jesa dikhta hai na to mee andar ka bhoot tum par line maarne ke liye aa jaata hai..

LOVED THESE LINE . Do post the next part soon Mina di . Will be waiting . Thanks for the pms Pari and Mina di .


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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome star yaar
lovvvvvvvv mayur fight
fabulasssssssssssss
update nxt prt sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
its gr88888
-sam- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
I really enjoyed it.....
Mina, please continue soon.................
Ayesha. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Nice part !!

continue soon !!

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