AR FF:Is it love? Final part updated Pg 57

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

I Loved d parts Munz...sorry comment karne me der hogai...par ab jaldi se AR ku milwao....cant wait to see ki ye kaise hota hai!!

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Part 8
A few days later....
Their terminal practical exams were here
On their way to the lab....
Mu:Arre wah!Tere dost ne tujhe ring di to pehen li.Maine
jo tujhe keychain di wo abhi tak mujhe nahi dikhi.Ye
Armaan seems to be a potential threat to our friendship.
[in a dramatic way]
Ri:Huh?Sorry maine suna nahi.Kya keh rahi thi?Wo mera
dhyaan kahin aur tha.
Mu:Nahi nahi main to ye keh rahi thi ki main aaj bilkul
achchi nahi dikh rahi hun.Dekh na,mere baal kitne
bikhre hue hain.[no,they were perfect,koi exams ke
waqt aise nahi aa sakta na]
At:Sahi hai Muski thoda theek kar le.
Ri:Hmm.You are right.achche nahi lag rage hain.[tries to
do something with them]
Mu:Oye!Mere baal theek hain.Meri burai suni gayi par Armaan
ke waqt madam ko kuch sunai hi nahi diya.[gesturing with
her hands]
Ri:Muski tu kya bol rahi hai mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.
Mu:Rehne de.Kuch nahi.
Ridz stops suddenly and says.
Ri:Muski! Ye ring mere haath me hai.Agar ma'am
ne dekh liya to meri band baj jayegi.Plz Muski nikaal de na.
Mu:Oye! Teri ring hai tu nikaal.
An:Hey guys!Kya hua?
Ridz shows her the ring and she understands.
The girls were there.They all tried to remove the ring but all
in vain.
Nu:By God! Ye ring hai ya chewing gum? Bilkul chipak hi gaya
hai.
Ri:Muski,sirf tu hi nikaal sakti hai.
Muski hadn't tried till now.
Mu:Theek hai.La dikha apna haath.
Boys come running towards them.
Ma:Guys kya kar rahe ho?Chalo jaldi.Ma'am wait kar rahi hain.
Ben:Hey Ridz kya hua?
Di:Kuch nahi Benji.Tum log jao aage.Hum aa rahe hain.
They all started walking with Muskaan and Riddhima behind them.
With just one force the ring came out.[Muskaan you are a pehelwaan]
They had reached the boys by now.
Gu:Wow Muski ! Tumne to 1 hi baar me nikaal diya.
Nu:Haan kya khaati ho?
Ma:Khaana jo tum nahi khaati.
Nu:Maine tumse nahi pucha.
Ma:Lekin maine jawab tumhe hi diya.
Nu:Tum...urgh...
Mu:Le rakh jaldi apne bag me.
Ri:Thanks Muski! You are truly wonderful.
Mu:[collar upar karke] I know!
**************
Abhi:Kuch hi mahino me exams hain.Phir pata nahi hum sab kahan
honge.
Ud:Kahan honge matlab?Ofcourse apne ghar me Gunjan ke haath
ka bana burger khaate hue.
Sam:Uday! Hum log future ki baat kar rahe hain.
Ra:Haan jo tumhari samajh me nahi aayega.
Mu:Arre yaar!Tum log abhi se kyun tension le rahe ho?
An:Right guys! Hum sab 1 hi area me rehte hain.Milte to
rahenge hi.
At:Kitni sahi baat kahi Anjali ne.Hai na?
Gu:Ridz tumhe kya hua?
Ri:Wo actually meri aunt expire ho gayi hain.
All:Oh! Sorry.
Ri:Aur baat ye hai ki....
Sap:Ki?
Ri:Kal Armaan ka call aya tha.Usne bataya ki since wo bhi
hamare hi relations me aate hain to wo kuch din hamare
ghar rahega.
[Riddhima and Armaan were dur ke relatives]
Mu:To?Isme tension ki kya baat hai?
Ri:Nahi tension ki baat nahi hai.Aise hi.
Ra:Riddhima tum bohot sochti ho.
Mu:Haan take a chill pill.
************
Kya hoga jab Armaan Riddhima ke ghar hoga?
************
Chota part hai kya?
Agar hai to thoda intezaar karo....😆
Keep smiling and commenting !!!

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

oh wow
i am waiting to see what happens when Armaan rahege Riddhima ke ghar
awesome
thanks for the pm
n cont soon
pooja

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Shivani Dhawan

@shivi17

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#54

haan haan aur jale pe namak chidko wait karwa ke!! part acha tha par armaan and ridz ka actual convo bhi dikha do ab tak sab falshback main dikha rahe the!!

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Killer

@Hello_01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Loved the update !!!

very interesting... looking forward to next Part

aur haan yrr chottha part haai 😆 intazaar? muskil kaam hai - but will try 😆

Update sooooooon

Thanks for the Pm...

Love Maha....😳

Edited by Hello_01 - 15 years ago

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Hello_01
res... will comment in a while ... have to read two more parts !

haan i read it !

YOu pmed me about the FF

thank you soo much - ! i loved it

Great Story and i m sooo sorry that i didn't notice

it before you have gone up to 7 parts? i mean great work yrrr

👏

👏

I m looking forward too it !

Please keep pming me about ur updates ..

PS: Appki Dannt pm mai milli Phadna hee Tah - ! 😆 Thanks

Love Maha😳

Hey Maha
Cholly par mujhe daantna pada koi padhta hi nahi😭
Par chalo Thank God I'm getting readers now😃
I've Pmed you about my latest update.Hope to see your comment soon😊

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyyy dear,
nice one
continue soon

love
Riddss

Hey Riddss
Thank you soooooo much😃

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Killer

@Hello_01

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Hey Maha
Cholly par mujhe daantna pada koi padhta hi nahi😭
Par chalo Thank God I'm getting readers now😃
I've Pmed you about my latest update.Hope to see your comment soon😊

areee tou look now i am reading !!! naa soon others will come too

i read it and even commented its on page 7

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG
kool loved it
cont soon

n thx for pm

lu dhruvika

Hey Dhruvika
Thank you verrrrrrrrrry much😃

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Hello_01
Loved the update !!!
very interesting... looking forward to next Part

aur haan yrr chottha part haai 😆 intazaar? muskil kaam hai - but will try 😆

Update sooooooon

Thanks for the Pm...

Love Maha....😳