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Posted: 14 years ago
ps- i dont watch supernatural not till now atleast .. my friend does made this stuff on her suggestion ..🤣
and i am trying to get my hand on the series hopefully i'll succseed
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please Update Soon Dolly! We are waiting eagerly..
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Posted: 13 years ago
the whole ff is going amazing
luved it
plzzz update it
and do pm me when u update it
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys an update coming by tomorrow :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
oopsi got delayed again sorry people :(
umm trying to work something out soon ..
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey fellas i am here again with another part .. phew finally updating . as usual sorry guys for the delay .. man all my updates start with this sorry word🤔
sorry again !!!
give me all the gallies wou want .. kya pata galliyan khake hi sudhar jaun!!!
n before starting with the part here's an importent announcement
guys i am creation a new user id named dollyupdates to take care of all my fictions.. it will be a lot easier to send pm's that way n not disturb non readears ..
so pls pls press like button to this post if u want to recieve pm ..
pls pls guys else it will be too difficult for me..!!!

another announcement !!
i made a new banner for the story n i liked it😆
i make decent things sometimes..😆 shocked na !! me too
so here's PART 17 of the story..
ENJOY N PLSSS COMMENT OR CRITISUZE, N NO MATTER WHAT PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON

NEXT UPDATE>>

Sam hesitatingly moved forward towards nupur. N then hugged her with one hand.. she gave in easily ,sobbing on his shoulder and finally letting her gaurds down.. mayank's rudeness had hurt her so much .. and samrat felt sorry for her.. just one night and sam never knew when he started caring for her .. no it wasn't like his feelings for gunjan.. not even close .. but it was s friendship .. he felt as if something in him n her connected on a different level and that they understood each other too well..

Samrat moved back a little to straighten nupur, then he took her face in his hands..

S= hey? Hey don't be like this . listen i am here n well whatever happened back there we'll find a way through it wont we??

Nupur simply nodded ,

N= i just .. i don't know what happened there. One minute he was fine n next second he was all... sam can u pls help me n cal a cab ?

S= u really don't need to go u know?

N= but i do. I am not going to tolerate his attitude , that to when i have no idea what my fault actually is.

S= i am sorry about him.

N= no its not ur fault really, may be its not his too . i was sort of a burden on u two after yesterday i guess. Specially with u being so unwell n i ending up in Mumbai begging u two to come to my rescue.

S= u r just like my brother. Really pissing me off .

I really don't want u to go.. i will feel all responsible n may be i will end up killing my brother, if u remain here atleast i'll have some one for a anger check ?

N= u two don't need to fight over me ?

S= sure we doo. Its just so exiting to fight over a beautiful girl don't u know??

And nupur laughed . she liked sam , he made her laugh ..he made her remember her dad. He had been one of the most jovial personalities she had ever known

S= if u don't mind me asking ? am i still invited to ur sister's birthday party ,, i mean it would really such a waste if my birthday invitation got crapped out coz of my jerk brother..

N= u still want to come,, aww sam thank u soo much u r a darling..

Saying so she she hugged sam who turned red..

N=are u... u are blushing?? Man i need to take a photograph..

S= no no taking pictures allowed on this property mam, u r trespassing the rules of his highness samrat shergill that way .u could earn a deadly punishment..

N=(laughing now) n that punishment would be??

S= u'd be made to eat food prepared by my gorgeous hands, n u'll probably end up dead coz of indigestion..

N they both laughed..

Samrat called a cab for her and promised nupur he'd be by her house by eight in the evening , none of them turned to look behind ,, if they did they would have seen mayank standing near the window silently smiling and one tear rolling down his cheek...

SCENE 2>>

Mayank returned to his room , he knew it was a matter of only few minutes before samrat would com banging his doors and shouting at him , mayank had been a jerk , he knew it but what other option did he have??

Just few seconds before nupur asked him to accompany her to the market mayank had seen her cell, it had buzzed , there was a text ... from her fiance..

" call me as soon as u can nupur . I need u"

Mayank's good feelings had fallen apart then , for few hours he had forgotten that nupur was already someone's bethroted . and he knew nupur had felt the same too, the sparks of passion between them last night had been undenbiable.. he had felt he was in heaven even with all the misery around him . but now??

Ranvijay's one message had banished him from his heaven . how could he cheat on ranvijay?? That boy who used to save his twin brother from humiliation at school. They had played as kids, and had been companions almost all their adult life . n now he would be the reason of his heart break ...

But this was not the only reason which made him turn into a rude jerk to the only girl he ever loved..

There existed even a greater reason then that.. no way in hell mayank could have let nupur feel guilty.. he knew she had feelings for him , the spark between them was simply undeniable. It seemed like they could visibally se a silver thread connecting them from heart to heart . but he also knew nupur would feel way to guilty for betraying RV. Even more then he ever would . not to mention the fact , the if RV blamed nupur for this mess, it won't go down well for him .. all in all the only way to deal with this mess was to make nupur hate him .. that way it would be easier for her to let him go !!!

S= U IDIOT U DUMB U JERK COME OUT OF UR HOLE RIGHT NOW !!

Mayank sighed. Belive his brother to make things extra dramatic always. He had a plan to tackle him though ..he would simply go out , let his brother shout at him n then he would hug his brother n go out of the house.. this will confuse Sam n he would no longer know how to react or act next ..

Kudos mayank to ur gray matter...

S= OPEN THE DOOR U GOOD FOR NOTHING RUDE JERK..

M= its already open dumb . all u have to do is push it inside.

S=oh!

Samrat felt stupid , and mayank's indifferent voice always made him feel like he was talking to walls , he might as well bang his head somewhere n the walls won't bother. Still right now the anger he was feeling towards mayank didn't let him ignore him this time.. he moved inside , n threw the books on mayank's table to floor.

M=(standing immediately shocked at the noice) WTH?

S=ya now i managed to get u attention did i??. Seriously i feel so oblidged ..

M= what u want sam , right now i am in know mood to fight with..

S= really n u think i care about what ur mood is ?? what are u doing mayank? What happened.? Why did u..

M= stop it sam don't turn this thing into something its not.. i was just tired and she was getting on my nerves.. i mean u already were so week from ur accident n there she was ordering me around..

S=do i look stupid to u??

M=ya sometimes..

S=shut up! What i meant is i know how u look at her. I knew even a small tension in her life makes u jump around like someone had aimed a rocket on ur hind quarters!..

M=SAM WHAT ARE U SAYING?!!

S=ahem sorry bad example.. okay lemme try again .. i am not that good at this brother talk.. where was i.

Point is don't give me the crap about nupur getting on ur nerves.. u love her! N thats the most clear thing i have ever seen in ur eyes.. what happened to u ?? why did u do that..tell me twin now!!

Mayank looked at his brother , he so wanted to tell him everything . but he couldn't , not until he was sure he wont go running n tell everything to nupur ...

It was the time to perform the action !!!

He would simply go n hug him . that was all he wanted to do at this moment anyway..

He stepped forward , but one hand over his chest stopped him..

He looked at his brother quizzically..

S=no .. no we r not doing that today !u are not gonna hug me n get me confused. This time we r going to have a serious brother talk. N u r going to tell me everything .. lets start from the main reason of why u suddenly started acting like git..

Mayank looked at his brother n smiled.. how could his brother be so sweet ??

...

Scene 3>>

Constable= but sir , i think u got it wrong . samrat shergill is a big name .. he was at the concert . n no way he could have been responsible for that accident n still managed to reach the venue on time !!

Moreover this DP guy. He is crooked , he just want to tarnish this boy's image..

Inspector= dubey! U a fan of mr rockstar??

C=no no sir .. but all i was saying is.

I= u don't need to say anything u see!! U have ur orders. Ascort ravi n make the arrest.. we will havea concert at this police station tonight ..

C= but sir ..

I=get out of this room dubey n perform ur duty.. or i'll make sure u reach a situation where u r no lonegr to perform any duty??

...

loads of love
dolly
xoxo
😳


Edited by -nautankidollz- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i like SaNu...cute n sweet ever...feeling bad for Mayank...hope u ' ll cont soon...!
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Posted: 13 years ago

lovely update...loved sam nupur convo...and sam mayak convo alot...but no gunjan scene:(...plz cont soon...lived your ff alot

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing!
SaYank conversation was the best! :D :D
Thanks for the PM!
Continue Soon! <3

-Niv!
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Posted: 13 years ago
really nice
do write soon dear

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