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Part11>>

Scene 1>>

(by mayank)

The hug was sumthing that made all this almost bearable..

Almost..

I had no idea why ..

But I wanted to remain that way with nupur,, I wanted to be the one most close to her always..

Perhaps it was farfetched .

What with her already engaged and stuff

Still a dumbo like me keeps on hoping ..

I actually had no idea how and when I fell in lov with her..

For what reason was I entrapped in her

But I was..

N this was sumthing that couldn't be changed..

This was sumthing that I did not want to change..

Samrat had been right .

There was loads going on in between me and her..

N=it will be ok. everything will be fine..

Her comment made me cum back to reality

And I suddenly remembered my injured brother on the bed beside me

I suddenly remembered that nupur's fiance was one of my friends…

With a jerk I pulled back from the hug..

Strange electricity ran through whole of my body.

I looked at her n she looked hurt..

May be my gesture seemed rude

Well it was rude..

But I didn't meant it to be..

I opened my mouth in a try to explain the sudden action from my side

But the doorbell quenched these miserable tries of me..

She slowly got up from the bed n moved outside the room in order to answer the hall.

A small tear escaped my eyes

Only this one was not for my brother..

But for sumone who would never be mine..

Suddenly I needed samrat too much.

I looked towards me and held his scratched hand..

M=I need u..get well soon pls..

As soon as these words escaped my mouth I heard Dr awasthi's voice..

From the outer loby…

Dr= how did it all happened????

…………………………………………….

SCENE 2>>

(by ranvijay)

Gunjan looked pale, more then usual

Actually much more then usual

It has been 4 hours since I received the phone call about her accident

It has been 4 hours since I had been sitting here along her bed ,holding her hand and doing my best to stop my tears..

Strange it may sound

But gunjan was much more precious to me then my fiance..

Well I know it does sound strange

Because my father had broken all relation with me ,just because I was planning to marry nupur..

Till date I had never met nupur face to face

Just chatted with her few times on the phone

That was it

Still..

Nupur would soon be my wife

Or apparently that was what my father and everyone else thought…

All this started 2 years back

The day of that big fight at my home

The day my mother died

By jumping from the 4th floor of our mansion..

My mother was someone ,who for me was a lady commanding absolute courage

She endured my father's mood swings ,beating ,foul ramifications with a smile

She was never the one to complaint

Yet that day had been to much for her nerves

That day was the day

Nupur's and gunjan's father died in a road accident

He was smashed by a car

A car driven by my dad in a drunken state

………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

Scene 3>>

(by gunjan)

Seriously speaking ,I was enjoying being blacked out

Yes yes I knew I was not conscious

Or well atleast I knew I was not fully conscious ..

Still it felt good

Cause I still didn't remember what had happened with me

I still didn't remember why my back n legs were aching this much.

Or why did I feel that I was being weighed down .

I could hear the shallow breathing of mine

It was irregular,,clearly telling that something was wrong with me…

But what??

I couldn't remember..

There just this name that I could remember

This one name

That felt to be the core of my soul

"SAMRAT"

But who was he??

N why did he feel so important ??

Suddenly I felt restless and wanted to become conscious at any cost..

I was desperate to know abt samrat

Desperate to find whether he was fine..

Desperate to know where was he and what was he doing??

I tried moving my legs

They felt like lead

Too heavy

And the effort made me much more tired and sleepy then I already was..

So I gave up on moving my legs and instead concentrated on my hands..

Well they felt numb

As numb as much my head felt heavy..

My fingers felt as if they were carved out of stone

A sudden fear engulfed me

What was happening to me???

I didn't remember anything

My heart raced as I became more frightened

This time the fear was not for me

But for him

For samrat

If my condition was this bad

Then what the hell was happening with him

Was he alright

And who is hee??

Damm my forgetfulness.

I fidgeted ..

This time I hear few faint voices..

But couldn't understand what they were saying

Idiots atleast speak loudly

I have ears but mm not a bat

Hence mm not able to hear anything below the frequency of twenty hertz..

I wanted to shout this at them but my throat felt too dry to speak..

The buzz around me grew louder and this time the voices almost made sence

Almost..

Rv= doctor why isn't she opening her eyes??

Is she alright??

I knew that voice

I knew him but couldn't quiet place his credentials …

Dr- she is cuming around ,it'll take her sometime.. give that to her..

Finally the relief

This voice was sumthing I didn't recognise..

But the relief was short lived

I felt the control of my legs and arms returning to me

And with that returned the memories of who was who and what had happened to me..

Samrat..

I needed to talk to him needed to find out if he was fine ..

I needed to get up

And with that thought I opened my eyes …

………………………………………………….

Scene 4

(by nupur)

I still felt hurt

The pain of mayank breaking that hug seared through me, blistering through my veins

Why why did that pain me soo much??

Wasn't he just a friend

So why did his moving away from me made my heart hurt with pain??

I wasn't anyone of his league

And he was not one of mine

So why??

To top it all

I was already engaged

That too to a friend of his.

Not that this engagement had any meaning in my life..

Still…

As I thought of my defile engagement to ranvijay rathore,I wondered where was that boy right now??

What was he doing

Had he been successful in his mission ??

wAs my job as his fiance over??

Or was I still on this assignment..

Both of us currently were in same city,,

N my fiance had no idea of my arrival

Strange..

Well whatever

Currently my stupid engagement was the least of my worries

What worried my more was samrat's condition and mayank's reactions

He was still sitting besides samrat holding his hand..

His eyes not once closing to get some rest.

Fear ,guilt ,pain ,anger still written clearly across his features

I was worried about him hell worried ..

N then there was this boy samrat

I didn't even know him that well still seeing him that way made me feel claustrophobic

I wanted to see him awake n smiling and passing stupid comments at me n mayank

Seeing him lieing there quietly looking soo pale was not my cup of tea..

I hope he got well soon

This I hoped for both his mine n his brother's sake…

Strange it was

This day had turned out to be like nothing I would have thought abt..

I had cume here to plan and through a surpise birthday party for my sister gunjan

N now..

Shock ran through me

As I remembered my sister .

As I remembered her lov for the boy lieing unconscious on the bed b4 me

What would she doo on seeing him like this???

Oh god this all sucked so royally what the hell was I going to do???

M=what happened??

I jerked my neck up and looked up at mayank..

He was looking at me worriedly.

N= what..what happened???

M=that's what m I asking u..

N=huh??

Mayank sighed, he stood up and walked to me sitting besides me on the couch..

Then he looked at me and held my hand

A shiver ran down my spine

M= why do u suddenly look so worried??

N=n n nothing .was just nothing.

M= tell me

N= I I was worried abt my abt my novel ,yes was worried abt it.

M= why??

N=why.. cause I have still not completed its last chapter n its deadline is fast approaching..

M= u know what??.. u r the worst lier I have ever met…

I blushed god knows why..

All I manage to do after that was look at him speechless..

No way was I going to tell him about my worries for a stupid goddammed birthday party which would mean nothing to him

Or abt my sis who was a big fan of his bro ..

No way was I going to tell him that

Instead I just stared at him wishing he would stop staring at me..

He didn't..

Mayank= umm u know I still unable to listen without sumone speaking.

Nupur= huh??

M= pls speak n tell me the reason of ur latest worry ..i wont leave u otherwise..

Well I never wanted him to leave me ever..

I opened my mouth to say I couldn't tell him the reason as it was preety stupid when I cut by the sound of sheets rustling..

We looked up to see sam fidgeting on his bed..

He was coming around

Finally..

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PART 2>>>>>>>>>>>>

Scene 5>>

(by samrat)

M=samrat samrat .. tu theek hai na

Samrat speak up pls

Finally finally something meaning full happened in this strained darnkness.

I felt so disoriented

And my head felt like a timebomb ticking away..

Moreover I couldn't see any damm thing ..

Was I turning blind??

Well no stupid.. that's cause ur eyes r still closed

Oh

Well I tried opening them,, but they felt too heavy to even budge

N= samrat

Samrat tum theek ho yeh sab??

Nupur she was here too.. with mayank..

What had happened to me??

Oh damm I had fainted

Embarrassment cascaded through me..

I fainted in front of her??

I fainted in front of her ..

Damm damm damm

M= sam pls answere sam ..

I finally blinked my eyes open as soon as I felt the control of my body parts returning back to me..

Mayank n nupur's faces were my fist sight,,

Their faces were a mix of relief and worry .

Strange people

Seeing nupur made me ashamed of my self all the more

This sense of embarrassment was soo overpowering that I actually turned on the bed n hid my face in my pillow..

God how was I ever going to show my face to nupur???

There was a stunned silence around me

Obviously they must have been shocked at my action..

Well whatever

I didn't plan to come out of that pillow for few centuries

N= samrat tum yeh kya kar rahe ho

She sounded confused

Just as I guessed

M= samrat kya ho raha hai tu theek to hai .. kahin tujhe zyada dard to nahi ho raha??

He sounded o worried that I almost forgot about mt embaressment ..almost

M= samrat pls kuch bol na'

His voice cracked .. n I groaned

Damm my twin n his super worrying nature..

I finally opened my mouth to speak, my face still hidden safely in pillow..

S= pehle nupur ko bol bahar jaye.

M and N= WHAT??

S= kya what ask her to go outside nahi to mein kisi se baat nahi karunga..

n- how rude.

M= samrat tu kya bol raha hai.. nupur kyun jayegi bahar

I remained silent

M=(sounding frustrated) sammmm!!!

S=(after internally groaning) mujhe sharam aati hai..

N= what??

S= tumhe ek baar kahe pe samaj nahi aati ???

N= par mee hone se tumhe sharam kyun aati hai??

U r not ven changing clothes..

M= nupur yeh ho kya raha hai??

N= by god mayank mujhe lagta hai iske sir ki chot kuch zyada hi gehri hai!!

M= hmmmm

S= mujhe sab sun raha hai samjhe.. n nupsi go out..

N= don't cal me that

S= then go out first

n'ughhhhhhh

after that I heard a pair of feet marching away from me..

when I was fully sure that she had gone

I turned around and faced mayank..

Who currently looked more worried abt my messed up brains then mine body..

S=what???

M=Have u actually lost ur mind due to head injury???

I scowled ..

S= no I haven't.

M= then what the hell was this??

S= umm actually,,ii'

M=SAMRAT TELL ME OR I AM GONNA MURDER YOU..

S= I was feeling embarrassed, I actually blackled out in front of her..

I said all this soo fast that I was sure that mayank still hadn't got the reason..

Well he did.

Coz next second he broke down into loud bouts of laughter..

Great..

Well atleast he relaxed..

I was sure on seeing my condition he was as worried as hell.

That thought made me wonder about why was I in this condition..

Slowly the memories cam back to me..

And with them returned the horror of last night.

I froze..

Chashmish'

''''''''''''''''''''

Scene 6>>

(by gunjan)

The doctors wee irritating me in real sense..

Seriously it had been 12 times that I had already told him I didn't want to lodge a police complaint, that I felt perfectly fine, but no he didn't listen

And kept on persuading me to complain..

As such youngsters who sped down the road should be punished..

The git'

Dr= see gunjan , its really not a good act if u decide to close this matter here only

The person who did this to you needs to be taught a lesson ..

G(finally losing my cool)= hell doctor why r u not getting me .. the person was not at fault , I was the one jaywalking on the road , with those earphones plugeed in my ears..

He honked his horn a dozen times but I didn't hear .. I got what I deserved

Now will u pls forget this issue??

The doctor felt silent , actually he looked highly embarrassed..

Good.

Good for him..

I looked at ranvijay, he was still looking at me from the corner of the room.

He stood near the door of the emergency ward, through the time the doctor performed his check up on me..

Finally he departed.

I looked at rv ,completely sure that it was his turn to rain down his questions on me.

He didn't just came near me n sat down on the stool.

Then holding my hand he asked softly.

rv= r u fine??

I looked at him , ranvijay had been one of my best friends after benji and dia,..

But since both of them were currently abroad ,rv was the only person in Mumbai so close to me..

His concern for me braught back the memories of the accident..

And with that came back the memories of him of samrat.

I needed to talk to him ..

'''''''''''''''

Scene 7>>

(by mayank)

His answer had been so stupid that I couldn't control but laugh freely at it,, completely amazed that I was actually laughing while I was shit worried about him and every thing else..

Believe samrat to induce smile in the worst possible situations even ..

Finally feeling a little control on my laughter bout I looked at my brother.

And what I saw ended the laughter bout in a jiffy.

Sam was completely still, as if frozen to ice.

His face a mask of pain I had never seen across his features b4..

His eyes wet,

I gulped.

But still gathering enough courage I move closer to him and sat besides him at the end of the bed..

M= kya hua??

He didn't answer just looked at me , his eyes so completely immersed in fear that I could feel goosebumps erecting on my arms..

M= samrat yeh sab kya hai?? Pls tell me I cant take it any more. What happened . and why r u worried so much.

With a sudden urgency in his voice , samrat said

S= mayank I need my phone .. I need to talk to somebody pls..

M= but sam

S= pls

As if in daze I handed him my cell , sam took it and started dialing a number feverishly on it..

''''''''''''''''

Scene 8>>

(by samrat)

How could I be soo pathetic??

How could I actually forget her and try to make my tense brother and friend laugh on a petty issue of my embarresment??

.chashmish was

I don't know where

I don't even know if she was fine,

What the hell was I going to do??

I needed to talk to her

Mayank was sitting in front of me, apparently he had noticed the change in my features

S= mayank I need my phone .. I need to talk to somebody pls..

M= but sam

S= pls

He handed me his cell, like a possessed person I dialled the number gunjan told me .

The number that I had memorised there and then '

"the number you r trying to reach is currently switched off"

''''''''''''''..

Scene 9>>

(by rv)

Gunjan was really being strange as soon as the doctor had gone out of the room she called me and the first thing that she said to me was this>>

G= rv where is my mobile , I need it urgently

R= its charge finished off , its lieing on the couch , got switched off

She groaned..

Rv= what happened?

G= give me your cell . and for heavens sake tell me that its charged.

Rv= it is . here

She took my cell and dialled a number feverishly..

''''''''''''''''''..

Scene 10>>

(by nupur)

I was sitting in the lobby when I heard mayank's laugh.. were the two gits for brothers actually laughing at my expense??

Should I be angry??

Well I didn't feel angry..

I was happy that atleast mayank smiled after all that worry.

And moreover samrat looked to darn cute while he hid his face in that pillow

But why??

I was already dieing to know the reason ..

Well may be I could catch hold of mayank later on and torture the reason out of him

May be

If I ever get free of staring in those brown eyes..

A ring from somewhere around me distracted me from my stupid mental babble .

A cell ringing??

I got up n searched around for the source of the sound..

It was coming from the laundry basket..

Laundry basket??

I went there and understood everything

Earlier that night I had kept samrat's jacket in the wash basket and had forgotten to check its pockets for valuables..

Apparently sam's cell was still in.

I found it in the upper right side pocket.

I was a private number

Great..

Well whatever atleast this gave me a chance to go back inside the room n check out whats happening.

I went back to their room

N= sam there is a call for u..

''''''''''''''''''''''''..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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finally after so many days i got my first place
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 🥳

*edited*

dollyyyyyyyyyy where the hell is sajan convo
i want to read it 😭
do tell me tuna kya mujhe gussa dilana ka than lliya hain..??????
i want sajan convo soon
i cant see them away
okok zyada nahi dantungi ab baba relax
im notanger
woh toh bas uhi tujhe sata rahi thi
but still do make themhave a good convo soon
n about samrat n mayur scene
when he got uup was wowwwwwwww
im speecless
it was realy good n beautyfull one
he was shy n embaress
awwwwwwwww my sammyyyyyyyyyyyyy
muhhhhhhhhhh love him
c'mon dont be jeolous of him
i lov u too
muhhhhhhhhhhhh
nyaar uupdate bbahut hi mast tha
every ones point of view was fantastic
it was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
im speechless still
n sorry late edit karna ka liye
subha sa ghar main koi nah koi mehmaan aa hi rahe hain
u know EID n all
anyways leave
uupdate was outstanding
keep it up
n plz like this one
i want another update soon
n thank uso much forthe pm


lov uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Ur's n only ur's
Sanu. 😉
Edited by sana_sajan - 14 years ago
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aaaaaaaaaaaa tuu aa gayiii jaaan
finally mm ol i wrote this last night lekin kya karti net hi off ho gaya tha tab hee hee
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and see my sigg dabba made a new sg sigg
bata kaisi hai??
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ohk
n yup siggies r awesomeeeeeeee yaaaarrrrrrrr
n sun will comment on ur update later
im little busy right now
aur bol how r u..??????
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mm fine jii

mein bhi jaldi offline ho jaungi
i want ur special comments on the scne when sammy wakes up k??
thats my fav part in whole update hee hee

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