Mahak's One-Shots #2: For Deepika [Mayur] : Pg 59

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Lekha Ishwar

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Congo on new gallery mahi
sweet OS

Lekha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Mahak what a lovely shot

Amazing......Mind-blowing 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Loved the way you described everything

I could actually imagine the whole scene in front of my eyes

These lines just touched my heart

Love is something which cannot be defined [according to me] but can be only experienced. It's a secret language which only two loving hearts can understand.

And about silence its true sometimes silence speak more than words .......

Thanks for the lovely OS.....You made my day dear

keep writing more.........

luv
Nidzy~

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago

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Rafa.LunaPotter

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Lovley OS Mahi..it was brillaint!!

Keep it up..sweet and simple..yet so beautiful!

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anju011

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

hey congrats for the new thread.
& awesome os mahak.
hey why are u saying that this is boring.
it wasn't at all boring, i really enjoyed it.
it was so beautifully written.
what a perfect date, truly awesome.

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Aakriti Mehta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Mahak, such a blissful oneshot... it was simply beautiful..!~

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affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

liked it??luved it..it was sweet,simple yet beautiful...it was lovely

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Amazing OS Mahak 🤗

Just loved the way a very romantic Mayank (esp for Nupur wala) organises such a beautiful date for our Nupur,,,sigh...what a scene u described..I was imagining and hoping to see something as serene as this...no interrruptions...just a simple and beautiful romantic date....

Thank u for loving that line so much that u used it here,... 🤗

I m really touched :)

I always felt that..silence is really the best way to communicate for them. :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Liked?

I adored this one!

Omg I loved it like anything!

it was beautiful!

You define MN in the just correct way.

That's what MN are all about :)

Awesome hun

x x

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Hi mahi,

OMG what an amazing OS yaar

It was sweet

Simple

Nice

Mind-blowing

Lovely

i just speechless.

It was awesome

Each and every bit of it touched my heart.

the way u describe mayurs feelings- hats off to u dear

Yes as like as nidzy these line is my favorite-

Love is something which cannot be defined [according to me] but can be only experienced. It's a secret language which only two loving hearts can understand.

Fantastic job mahi.

Loved it so much

Plzzzzzzzz dp write more.

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago