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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome OS loved it

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
perfect family and passionate love, both are really nice. write more and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Oye neetu - passionate love is ur old OS
u wrote it or me- pher post kya ???
waise accha hai- i read it again and enjoyed each n every bit of it
veryyyyyyyy cute.


Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuu sooooooooooooooo much jaan for liking it.
and i hope you understood that 'someone' is you whom i referred at the end.....😉 i know you would have understood.... even if you didn't no problem..... still i love you

Ya its an old os
infact these two were old and that's the reason why i didn't pm anyone about these two
and i was waiting to complete this incomplete os😆😆 and i thought after i finish this i'll post those old ones here........ finally all my shots are together.........

Edited by mayurg2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurg2010


Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuu sooooooooooooooo much jaan for liking it.
and i hope you understood that 'someone' is you whom i referred at the end.....😉 i know you would have understood.... even if you didn't no problem..... still i love you

Ya its an old os
infact these two were old and that's the reason why i didn't pm anyone about these two
and i was waiting to complete this incomplete os😆😆 and i thought after i finish this i'll post those old ones here........ finally all my shots are together.........



Awwww My sweetu is really very sweet
i love u so much neetu- u r d best
muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
oops...I Missed the Perfect family Os earlier...
It's a very cute OS...
Mayur had a little princess just like Mayank wanted...how sweet!
Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishita16

oops...I Missed the Perfect family Os earlier...

It's a very cute OS...
Mayur had a little princess just like Mayank wanted...how sweet!


Thanks Ishi.....
I am glad you liked it....
And please do write OS yaar...
your works are just amazing....eagerly waiting for your shots....
please yaar, 'falling for your best friend' was just out of the world.....
i loved it very much so please don't stop writing one shots......
Edited by mayurg2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I just read ur OS!
it was beautiful..
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely one
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Spending time with my love:

I walked into the reception hall with a bouquet of red roses. I just got an off from shoot and now this reception! I would have not attended if this fellow didn't come to know that I got an off. I wonder how he got to know that I am free today. I won't spare this idiot for sure. Let him enjoy his wedding celebrations. I will see his end later. With a sullen face I looked here and there to find any empty seat to make myself comfortable. Finally I got one place and happily sat down with the bouquet on my lap.

I looked here and there and I didn't spot one recognizable face in the whole party. I am waiting for the crowd to get cleared so that I go and congratulate this idiot and slip from here. If anyone gives me chance then I'll sleep right here. I don't mind a bit. After such hectic shooting schedules, what else can you expect from an actor? My eyes are carving for sleep. OMG when will this party finishes? And adding to this my 'so called' girl friend didn't call me since 2 days. We met one week before and even at that time she slipped without giving me a good bye kiss. Girls are so mean. My thoughts got distracted…

Suddenly a girl came to me and screamed 'Mayaaankkk….' I was shocked and scared. I didn't know what was happening. I slowly came back from the shock and composed myself and smiled at the girl who just blasted my eardrums.

'You are mayank, right?' she asked. I didn't know what to answer. Should I say yes or no? I was in a confused state and before my reply she corrected herself saving me. 'I mean you are arjun who played mayank in mjht, haina?'. Finally I calmed down and smiled at my ardent fan. I am so lucky to have such wonderful fans. They love from their heart and ofcourse they love our couple too. I asked her name, 'oh.. am so sorry, I am faria.' She forwarded her hand for a shake and I willing did the same. I could see her gleaming face. She instantly took her some paper and asked, 'autograph please'. 'You need not please me faria, that's my pleasure'. I wrote, 'with love, arjun bijlani… keep smilingJ, have a great life ahead'. She happily took it back and thanked me with her heart. I saw the happiness in her eyes.

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I was standing there smiling thinking about my girl who irritates me to the peak. I felt a tap on my shoulder and I knew there's one more scream waiting for me and I turned back only to scream. 'tum???'

'oh god arjun, have some decency. Why the hell are you screaming so much? I've never seen any guy welcoming his girl friend with a scream'

'oh really!! Then have a look at me… I do welcome my gf in this way… presenting Mr. Arjun bijlani' I bowed my head in front of her to annoy her even more. 'can we talk normally now?' she asked with a cute face. And that expression made my sleep run away. Finally I am here smiling with my heart after one week. We walked and a place where no one was there, away from the hustle-bustle. When I confirmed that no one can watch us even from far I immediately cornered her to the wall and kept my hands blocking her. 'Arjun , move.. What if anyone comes?'. I completely ignored her statement. I am in no mood to let her go. 'Ms. Rati pandey, let me clear you some things. 1. I am your boy friend and 2. If anyone comes then I'll simply ask them to move from here else I'll make sure that they don't walk for the rest of their life time. Got it?' she smiled making me melt. 'cho chweet of you. I know that you are missing me and that's the reason why I asked your friend to make sure that you come. I wanted to give you a surprise. So, did you like it?'

'I loved it as much as I love you' I answered with a smile on my face and she instantly kissed my dimples, and tried to run away from me but before she could move away from me, I caught her hand and pulled her towards myself. Though she kissed me many times, she couldn't help herself blushing due to my gaze. ' Arjun, leave me… this is not our private place, let me go.' She ordered in a warning tone. 'Try something else darling… how can you expect me to let you free when you met me after one long week? It's merely impossible.' I added with a grin. I pulled her into a hug and rested my chin on her shoulder feeling her near me. It felt so wonderful in her arms. She has some magic in her which pulls me towards her. After a long passionate hug, she moved creating some space between us. I again pulled her by her waist and she collided with my chest. She gave me 'now-what' look. 'Missed you so much sweet heart' I said. ' I missed you too' 'a lot' she added after a small pause. 'Can we have some private moments together?' I asked her making her blush. 'Stop blushing dear.. You'll have to blush continuously once we get married. So, store your blush as of now'. She started hitting me on my arm and I caught her waist and was moved forward to kiss her but she pulled herself away. 'That was so rude' I complained. 'You deserve it' she smiled.

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'God!! When will this lift reach?' 'Calm down jun, why are you getting so impatient?' I looked at her with a blank expression and I was about to reply her but the lift sound stopped me. Doors got opened and people moved out of the lift making us way. We entered and she pressed '1' button and immediately I blocked her just the way I did few moments ago, and with one hand I pressed 'stop' button. That made her shock. She couldn't have expected this but that's what I am, unpredictable…' 'jun, what are you doing? Have you gone mad? Are you….. 'I didn't let her complete her sentence. I pressed my lips on hers. That's the only way to stop her. She was shocked at first and tried to let me go off her. But being so stubborn, I didn't let her win. I slipped one hand along her waist and reduced the gap between us and I entwined her hand with my other hand and pressed it to the lift wall. We broke to grab some air. She glared at me angrily and I smiled mischievously and winked at her. This brought a smile on her lips. 'That was for cheating me the other day and went away without giving me a farewell hug or a kiss.' I scanned her from top to bottom. She is wearing a red colored sleeveless dress till her knee length. 'Are you checking me out?' 'Any problem?' I asked her and she nodded in a no for that. 'By the way you are looking so sexy today, trying to impress me?' I asked. 'I don't need to impress you because you are already impressed'. I moved forward to feel her so close one more time and she stopped me by keeping a finger on my lips. 'And what is this for?' 'This is for celebrating the success of team india for winning a world cup' with that I kissed her one more time, passionately. The boquet of roses and reception were long forgotten. We are busy cherishing our little moments together. I don't know how many people are waiting for the lift to come down. But I care a damn. I am with my love romancing after a long time. This is my moment right now. I'll soon invite you all for my wedding and please do attend and bless us with your love.

Hello all.. this is my first ArTi shot. I didn't know what to write. So I took one and half hour to write this one. And I really don't know how it turned out. And for the first time I wrote the whole shot in pov of a person. I never did that. I hope it was good. And please do press the like tab if you like it and do leave in your comments. Either good or bad, I don't mind.

Thanks

Neetu. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
i so love the os
you are a gr8 writer

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