Every story dont have happy endings(MN.Prt 5#pg10) - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
😭 mayanks accident...oh god...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

well written.......... but so sad yaar.......

plzzzzzzz continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Part 5(the last one)
Nupur ran towards Mayank........he was felling downo n the ground in pain............Nupur went to him and took his head on her arms...............
Nupur : Maya-----------Mayank......yeh kya hogaya Mayank.........
Mayank was looking at her in deep pain................
Mayank : Tum-tum yahan kyakar rahi ho??
Nupur : Mayank baat baad mein karenge pehle hospital chalte hain.....
Mayank : Nahi...pelhe batao...............
Nupur : Mein yahan tumse kuch kehne aai thi.............
Mayank : Kya??(in deep pain)
Nupur : That i love you Mayank..............
Mayank : What abt Nihal..........?
Nupur : Woh kabhi mera pyaar tha hi nahi Mayank...humesha se tumh i the............
Mayank : Happy ot know that you love me......
Nupur : Mayank chalo ab hospital chalte hain............
Mayank : Nahi Nupur.......maine wqoh sun liya jo mujhe sunna cahiye tha...........ab mein aaram se marr sakta hun......
Nupur : Shut up.
Mayank : No seriously, maine humesha se caha tha ki marne s e pehle tum mujhe woh three magical words kaho......And you completed my wish.....
Nupur : Tum mujhe chod ke nahi ja sakta Mayank/........
Mayank : I dont wanna bur i have to.
Nupur : Tumhe pata hai mein tumhare bina nah ijee paungi.......
Mayank : Janta hun....par strong banna padega Nupur.......you have to live happyli that would make me happy.
Nupur : Kaise ?(crying hardly)
Mayank : I will always be with you..Dont you ever feel alone.You know after my death i would become a star .Whenever you want to be with me just see the most shinig star at night.And sometimes i'll give you smile as i know you love my smile..(he giggles)
Nupur was crying hardly..................
Mayank : Hey!Dont cy...what matters if god didnt make us together in this life...........but i promise in our next life and i every life you'll be only and only mine.....
Nupur : Tumhe kaise pata?
Mayank: Woh god ne mere saath ek deal sign ki hai........(giggle again)Jokes apart........ourl ove is true and i have believe in god .He was harsh with me in this life but i know he cant be harsh next time.
Nupur ; Mayank tum chup karo or chalo hospital chalo..mein tumhari help karti hun uthne mein.......
Mayank : Nahi Nupur.....mujhe meri zindagi ke last minutes tumhe dekhke bitaane hai.......
Nupur : You're not mad on god??
Mayankn : Nope..bcoz he's alwayls right..maybe not this time.........but itna toh chalta hai na (try to make her laugh)
Nupur : Tum pagal ho?
Mayank : Janta hun........pyaar har ashiq pagal hota hai...........or mere jaise aship ke liye pagal ek comlpement hai..
Then all in sudden Mayank felt the biggest pain inside him but he didnt scream in pain...............he was still smiling........
Nupur : Tum aise moment pe smile kaise sakte ho??
Mayank : Kyunki tum mere saath ho.....My love is with me in the last moment of my life..........
Nupur started crying hardly.............Mayank took his hamd and kissed it...............and said..................
Mayank get ot know that he's not going ot stay with her anymore,.......
Mayank : Byeeeee.......i love you..............
Mayank eyes was filled with tears but he was still smiling while he was saying his last word..............He closed his eyes and his hand left Nupur's.........
Nupur started crying hardly............she was out of control....in that time she thinks what Mayank siad to her.............😭
Pyaar chale jaha se mile hume uski respect karni cahiye......Kyunki agar woh pyaar ek baar tumse dur hogaya toh shayad wapaash nahi milta..................💔
Now in present time................Gunjan Nupur's sis was telling this story to her boyfriend Samrat................
Gunjan : So aisa tha Mayank ka pyaar............
Samrat : Phir Nupur ka kya hua>?
Gunjan : Dee yeh gum seh nahi pai........Or unhone suicide attempt kar liya...........
Samrat : oh..............
Gunjan : Par mein janti hun woh log abhi bhi ek saath hai.........Kyunki unka pyaar amar tha...................or amar rahega...........
Smarat : I promise Chashmish tumhe kabhi bhi khud se dur jane nah idunga..............
Gunjan : Mein bhi.............
Then they hugged eachother................
The End..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

firse first to comment..........

phele tere dusre ff par aur aab es par........
thx for the pm.........
the story was sad but mayur love was so pure......
great ending yaar.......
but so sad.........
so sad that your ff ended.......
do write more.......
you are a great writer
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
how could u do this to our mayur??? i am crying now....it was so much emotional..but 1 question dear...is nupur alive???
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
OMG Mayuu died Nooo why::))))😭 and Nups to:)))
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
awesome update dear!!!
was emotional!!!!
thanks for da pm
do continue....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
😭😭 emotional dear but u shouldn't do that with mayur may be onother couple on tv but soooooooooooooo saaaaaaaaad yaaaar mayank and nupur died 😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
noooooooooooo mayu cant die
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
That was soooooo emotional
Why did Mayu have to die



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