My Little Bride[AR-FF] Part2 Pg15 14|3

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Nruti

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

sounds intersting....

wud love to read it

put me in the PM list

thnaks

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nyxx

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

great concept:)

please send me a pm as well!

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mkp1995

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi Rohit,
i really liked the intro.. sounds very interesting... plzzzz do add me to ur pm list thanx cant wait... misha

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blessing-beauty

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

NICE CONCEPT ROHIT

EAGER 2 READ MORE

CONT SOON

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Isha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

luv it muchoo! lol! cont soon n thnx!

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Shivani Dhawan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

it sounds awesome like i said on the other thread :) pls add me to ur pm list :) and update soon

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Rohit86

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: kshanikaa
Oh.....u planned ur comeback after KSG? 😆

welcome back....a really longggggg time.....good story...........and do u mind if i ask you that what about the rest 4 u started? 😆😳

p.s- i checked twice if it was you only 😆

Ohh yeah i did!!

Will look at the rest too....Stucked with contract dont know where to take it. its becoming to long. I would try to finish the Fic soon.

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Rohit86

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Part 1

"Hey Riddhima!! Where are you going?" A hysterical muskaan enquired riddhima who was running as if there was no tomorrow.

Turning around she answered her . "Muskiii? Tu yaha? Match dekhne nahi gayi kya?" Giving her a curioes look she took off again just to be stopped, "Holy Crap!! Mein toh bhool hi gayi!" she confessed to herself and looked at riddhima finding her running again.

"Ridzi??" Riddhima didnt even bothered to turn around and ordered her to run along with her, "Abhi kya vahi khadi rahegi? I dont want to miss any off his moves. Jaldi chal!!"

"Haan! Haan!! Pata hai aaj tera Hot dude match khel raha hai!!" She said to her following behind just to get a smack from her.

"Kya??" Muskaan looked at riddhima who was oogling at her wide eyed, as if she was ready to kill her if she didnt step off the work she was doing, to pull of her leg!!

"Mujhe pata hai! Tu itna bhag kyun rahi hai!!" she said to her walking again.

"Kyun?" Riddhima enquired

"Aaj Ammie joh match khel raha hai! I know you just cant miss any moves of his.So what if he is playing against our school team" she giggled answering and moved away from her to survive from the blow that she would get rom her.

"What?? Tujhe kya lagta hai main us Cockroach ke liye match dekhne ja rahi hoon? Haan!" she glared at her charging up.

"Aur nahi toh kya? I know you cant get enough of him" She teased her again knowing that this was the topic that has always made her go red. 'Anyone teasing her of Armaan- Her childhood friend!"

"Muskii?" she ran after her seeing her getting away from her and gave her a smack at her back. "Main kyun us 'machaar' ke liye match dekho? I have lot of other work to do apart from that!"

"Arey Thik hai Thik hai! Why are you hitting me?" she caressed her back.

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Ladies and gentlemen the match is just going to start. Yes its "Team oxford Senoir" playing against . "Team oxford junior Francis school".

Armaan braced himself up, It was not too hard for him to do this. He had defeated lot of colleges already and these are merely some interschool boys not some his own schools boys. He made his first move swiftly and game had begun.He was master in playing basketball. He dodged the oponent player several times to score enumerous baskets.He was really rocking.

Riddhima wailed as she saw that she was already late. It was just 20 mins remaining now thanks to this muskaan who was teasing her all the way to make her even more late. "Dekh late ho gaye naa!! I have already told you to hurry up."

Muskaan giggled looking at her childishness, she was her only close friend since her early school days and it was her best job to tease her. They settled right at the centre of the seats to have better view of what was going on. Riddhima looked at the scoreboard displaying 72-68 in favour of Armaan's team team oxford senior. She cringed "Huh?? He is winning" promising someting to herself she started cheering for team oxford junior "Francis school". They were her classmate.

"Go rahul Go!!" Muskaan looked at riddhima sceptical. She thought that they were here to cheer for Armaan. Yes he was playing against their classteam and they should be cheering Oxford junior but he was there friend atlast.

Riddhima stood from her seat and shouted at the top of her voice. "Go rahul Go. Dont leave him. We have to win!!"

Muskaan looked at her shocked to her wits. 'what is she doing? has she gone mad?' she thought to herself then tried to pull her down to control her from doing something stupid but was not able to do so. Finally she spoke "Riddhi?? Tu kya kar rahi hai? Pagal ho gayi hai kya? why are you shouting?" she asked her beliwered at her stupidity, "Dekh sab dekh rahe hai!"

Riddhima looked down at muskaan with a scuff visible in her forehead seeing her directing something nervously she looked around at the numerous pairs of eyes those were bored on her throwing daggers at her, nervously she sat down embaressed to core and wispered making a sorry face to muskaan. "Oops Sorry"

"you better be" muskaan answered looking at her.

"Aur yeh kya tha? Go rahul Go!! Haan?" she asked her.

"Arey i was chearing him yaar. He is our team captain man. usse nahi toh kisse chear karoon?" she answered her as a matter of fact.

"Ohh is it so??" she asked her mocking, "Toh yeh Rahul prem kabse jag gaya tera?" Teasing riddhima.

"Just few hours back! "

"OOOOHHH" she made a face and then broke out laughing with riddhima.

The match was about to end, it was last minute remaining and ball was in hands of Sahil and score showed 96-96

"TIED"

Armaan was just meters away from sahil who was blocked by Sid a defender from franklin and rahul was behind armaan trying to cover him. Sahil dribbled the ball, his eyes was focused on the timer reflecting 59 sec left. He knew what he had to do. Ridhima looked nervously at the scoreboard and then at Armaan who was smiling at her. She knew what they were upto and she knew what she has to do.

Sahil dribbled the ball who was blocked by sid in every manner. He knew this was last option now. He played adeceptive move to throw Sid off balance and allow Armaan to shoot or receive a pass; by using his eyes to trick him but as it reached armaan he was distracted by a loud noice that rocked his ear. "Dabbboooo" Yeah that was the sound, his concentration was distracted by that for a fraction of second which was enough for rahul to take guard swiftly he took control of ball and dribbled through armaan beating him in the context and did the winning basket.

Beliwered Armaan looked down at the girl standing at the commentry box with the winning smile on her face. None other then Riddhima. She smiled victoriously. 'I won the Bet!!' She beamed to herself giving him a mocking smile. Armaan looked at her with burning eyes. He wont leave her this time.

Muskaan looked shocked, "What did she just do? she just shouted on the mic!!" she looked horified at her guts while everyone cheared for the junior teams victory and oxford senior fans looked at the girl in the commentry box with fire in their eyes. This is the girl that costed them the match.

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Shashank looked sceptical at padma and then at Shubankar mallik his best buddy. He didnt knew what was going to happen now. He prayed to god to save them from these situation. 'How could they do this?? How??' He thought to himself and then looked at padma who was looking at him with her solemn expression. She didnt knew what was going to happen but she was determined she wont let it distroy everthing. How can she even think of it.?? How??

"Shashank how can you even think of this??" She asked shashank who was looking equally onfused as she was.

"I dont know padma what we should do." He sounded defeated with the circumstances they were in.

" I cant let this happen! This will spoil everything." She was beliwered with the evnt that has taken place in the recent time. She stood up from the seat of the sofa that was lined at the corner of the ICCU and took steps toward the door of the iccu looking inside she let out a sigh. She didnt knew what to do.

Shashank let out a sigh. He knew it wont be easy task now. He looked at his friend and buddy, his mate, his elder brother like 'Shubankar mallik'. who looked back at him and nooded, beside him was Keerti sitting with the same solemn expression like padma.

They all were having quality time at home untill 2 hrs before when things suddenly turned upside down. she thought to herself 'was there any way they could avoid these? How could they do this to there own blood when they knew that things wont be easy for them. They are too small for these.

Shashank went near padma and kept his hand on her shoulder who looked back at him in his eyes, She knew she was not going to do this at any cost and so she withdrew her eyes from his.

"Padma?? Suno toh!!" Shashank nudged her just to be stoped by her.

"Shashank!! I just cant let this happen. They are too small for this thing. How can we get them into all these. They dont even know meaning of Marriage."

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Muskaan pulled riddhima out of the c**try ground. She knew that this girl. Her dear was little mad but she didnt ever thought of her doing what she did. She shouted "dabbooooo:" She let out a laugh. Dabboooo. She knew that armaan always gets irritated when anyone calls her of that name. that was the name his grandfather has given him and he was being teased with that name all around in home and always get angry when ever anyone does it and here Riddhima shouted in front of whole college??

"She might be dead now!!"

"Riddhima tum kya kar arhi thi? Because of you Armaan lost the match." She scolded her not happy by what she did.

"Usse toh harna hi tha! Aab jab woh Riddhima Gupta se bet lagayega to aur kya hoga. You know naa Riddhima never likes to loose." She beamed to herself just to be left shocked as she was swept of the ground by the hands that took hold of her.

"Ahhhhhhh" she screamed.

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So this was what i had written, it constitute the part 1 of the pic. Do read and feel free to press the "like" tab and leave your precious comments as that is what keeps a writer moving.

Love All.

Rohit

Edited by Rohit86 - 15 years ago

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

woah Rockstar ur back with Karan its superb one and i happy to see u back now at least we get other ff's too and regarding this ff its cool one sound interesting plz continue it soon & add me in pm list do i need to say no add kar lena ok

Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago