AR FF: Fatal End ? Pt 12 Pg 109 11/10 :) - Page 16

Part 1

A nice and well penned part. Riddhima finally joined office and that prank of Rahul-Abhi really scared me. I actually felt it was Armaan maybe, but i had no clue that her boss would end up doing this..lolz. Nikita is a nice friend. So, there is still a lot of suspense regarding Rahul-Abhi's prank. What are they actually upto? Riddhima is nearly perfect for..what? I guess i need to read the next parts to know more. Over all, a nice update. I'll start with the 2nd part tomorrow and will then post my comments.

-Sanjana

Part 2

woaaahh! So much happened in this part. I hate this Rahul, he is sick! First he asked Riddhima to get married to him and behaved so well with her so that she accepts it. Later, he gets married to Muskaan and no one knows about this wedding. Muskaan was bearing his child, ok, so he got married. But what about Riddhima? I never felt him to be so ridiculous who would ruin her life. Doesn't she have a right to know about his past affair? He is so shameless that he didn't even tell Riddhima anything about it and also left her this way. I was really shocked at this behavior. Then comes his brother Armaan, who is no less than him and uses his money and power to force Riddhima to get married to him. This is sick. He says that he is marrying her to save his family's reputation. But, that's has already been damaged because of Rahul's act. I felt disgusted the way Armaan forced Riddhima into this. You ended it just in between, it was getting more interesting, for the way he would behave with her. One thing i am sure about, it will definitely be annoying. I don't think he would cross his limits. He is just getting close to her to irritate her and for fun. I'll read the next part soon.

-Sanjana

hey sweetie!

Part 2 (the rest)

Nicely penned one. Good job done. Armaan has been behaving really badly with her. Always shouting at her and accusing her for every single thing. On the other side, Riddhima is listening to him in a resigned manner, not complaining. A True Indian Wife. :) Well, the part ended on a very exciting thing. Armaan wanted to marry Riddhima? His mother didn't ask him to. Hmm...there is some suspense in this. I'll read the next one soon.

-Sanjana

Part 3

I loved it a lot. The way you blended the past and the present was nice. So, there was someone who took that file from Riddhima's desk. Who was it? Armaan has some other reason to marry her. Its obvious that we won't fall in his trap of getting married to her for his mother's happiness. There is definitely something more to it. Disclose it soon. Armaan can't help himself looking and admiring Riddhima. So, sweet. At the end, Armaan's accident. I hope he is fine.Maybe, this accident might bring AR close to each other.

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finally i have completed reading all the parts

-Sanjana

hey please add me to ur FF list...its a great story

hiii mell amazing part

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-Amna