AR FF: Fatal End ? Pt 12 Pg 109 11/10 :) - Page 17

hey caramel,i think its more than two weeks plz update this ff of urs first,god i am dieing with the suspense
plz update soon,missing ur updates
swetha

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@aamirkhan; thanks for the reply hun, i am glad you enjoyed the part. the reason will be revealed soon as the story is gonna progress, so keep reading.

@naureen; thanks for the reply naureen. i am glad you enjoyed the part. well i can't say much right now, wait for the next update.

@nina- even i am reserving.

@sani- thanks for the reply sani. i am glad you enjoyed the part. you may be somewhere close or may be not. i can't say much coz my story keeps on changing after ever part. so even i have no idea what's gonna happen later in the fic, so keep reading and love you too.

@sisgeo; thanks for the reply dear. i am glad you enjoyed the part, yes he met with an accident and there something gonna happen in the next part. i am sure you'll like it . will try to update soon. i told you by when 😉. so keep reading

@sammy ; thanks for the reply dear, i am glad you enjoyed the part.

@swetha; thanks for the reply swetha, i am glad you enjoyed the part. the mystery will be revealed soon, keep reading

@aanchal: thanks for the reply aanchal, i am glad you enjoyed my fic. will pm you.

@kashndsel4eva; thanks for the reply dear, i am glad you enjoyed the part. why he married will be revealed soon.

@nruti: thanks for the reply nruti, i am glad you enjoyed the part. the reason will come out soon, i can't say much coz then there won't be any story left. yes he is behaving nicely with them but why differently with riddhima, you'll know in the next part or so..

thank you everyone for taking time out and replying. thank you sooo much...

loads of love..
Mel..

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@dhruvika: thanks for the reply dear, i am glad you enjoyed the part.

@Shel: thanks for the reply dear, i am glad you enjoyed the part. me too, even i like her character.yes armaan is feeling something, can't say about riddhima though, he'll be okay after all he is hero : P.

@moonlight; thanks for the reply dear, i am glad you enjoyed the part. and i'll update soon.

@maryam: thanks for the reply maryam, i am glad you enjoyed the part..he do feel attracted towards her, let's see when he falls in love with her.

@tahmina: thanks for the reply dear, i am glad you enjoyed the part. that i did * grins*, i love stopping at the cliffhangers, i guess i am too inspired by K-shows ;P.

@robin: thanks for the reply robin, i am glad you enjoyed the part.

@armaanksgfan: thanks for the reply dear, i am glad you enjoyed the part. totally man, he is such a weirdo..yes he met with an accident. keep reading to know what happens next.

@anumeha: thanks for the reply dear, i am glad you enjoyed the part. you are the first one who replied about the guy at the window i am soo happy . it will be revealed soon and yes he met with an accident. let's see what happens next..

thank you everyone for taking time out and replying to the fic , it means a lot to me.

loads of love..
Mel..

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

@swetha: thanks for the reply swetha, i am glad you enjoyed the part. totally this fic is more on the suspence side, happy to know that i am able to hold the suspense till now : D, the person at the window will be revealed soon, you know i so like writing the arrogant armaan, totally different from my earlier fics but majority are not liking it, so i am changing it a little bit, not much just a little bit. the part is halfway done. I know i said in two weeks but meri siggi dekh na, that's the main reason for the delay, i'll update soon.

mel,
oh really i enjoyed it a lot and it is compelling me to ask u for update
yeah,u must be,but try it on weekends,well i am so selfish that i am asking ur weekends too😆
but yeah do it when u r free
i totally love armaan as arrogant u know,it suits him like carrying attitude and all
dont change it much u can have him as good boy later,after couple of parts,after knowing the real reason and all but now he is fine this way,well a little is ok for the other readers
waiting for urs update of all three ffs
swetha

mel update this ff,yaar,i am really missing and excited to read this one
swetha

wen do i get an update.??i want it before 15plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

PART 4

Running frantically through the hospital door, her legs stopped at the ICU as she saw her in-laws sitting outside. His mom was sitting impatiently as his father was sitting besides her holding her by her shoulder. Feeling the loud thumping of her heart she walked slowly which was more like dragging herself and looked at them, especially his dad who was sitting quietly but the creases on his forehead didn't went unnoticed by her.

"Mom.." it was a mere whisper which made his mom look up at her. She stood up and hugged her, sobbing. The tears which his mom was trying to control slowly made way down her cheeks. Holding her tightly, Riddhima looked at his dad who assured him that everything gonna be alright. Her dad talked to his dad as her mom was standing behind his mom, supporting her. When Riddhima got to know about the accident, she felt like her life was leaving her body. Although they don't share a normal husband-wife relationship, he was her husband no matter how he spoke to her and above all she is the type of person who won't think bad about everyone even when that person is the cause of the her pain. The lights went off and the doc's came out of the room.

"Don't worry Mr. Malik he is fine now. We'll shift him to the room and then you can meet him" a sense of relief rushed through everyone's faces. Riddhima looked above silently thanking god as even though she was her face depicted the calmness only she knew what she was going through from the time she came to know about the accident.

Armaan was still unconscious when he was shifted to the private room. He was still in a deep slumber coz of the medicines, waiting for him to come back to the conscious state the whole night wouldn't have made sense so Riddhima made everyone go home and stayed back.

The whole night riddhima sat on the couch, her eyes fixed on him. There was a restlessness and fear inside her. Her body was aching coz of the functions but sleep was miles away from her. Hearing weak whispers, she stood up and moving towards him saw a slight movement in him. She called for the doc and sat beside him, moving her hand slowly on his forehead to calm him down. The doc came with the nurse and examine him, his condition depicting about him having some dreadful dream.

"Mr. Malik.." the doc shook him slightly.. "Open your eyes Mr. Malik" he repeated as riddhima watched him standing beside the doc. The doc shook him one more time, this time a bit vigorously making him open his eyes. Armaan looked at his surrounding and saw everything white. His eyes shifted to the source of sound and saw the doc standing in front of him. He looked around for some familiar faces when his eyes stopped at Riddhima who was standing beside the doc, looking at him in concerned, the ceases of tension clearly visible on her forehead. Seeing him back into the conscious state, she slowly thank the almighty looking above which didn't went unnoticed by armaan.

"Mr. Malik how are you feeling now?" he heard the doc making him shift his gaze from her. Looking at the doc he nodded weakly as a sharp pain rushed through his body making him close his eyes. The doc checked him and making sure he was okay left the room. Riddhima silently sat on the stool beside him and looked at him. He was looking at her intently, the tiredness clearly visible on her face, the dark shadow under her eyes and the red eyes being the proof.

"ab aap kaise hain?" she asked. Her soft voice was soothing his ears when the last night events came back in front of his eyes.

"Why the fake concern Riddhima? Stop pretending that you actually care, at least when no one is around" he said coldly, turning his face the other side. Hearing his harsh words made her eyes wet. This wasn't the first time his reply stung her. But what really surprised her everytime was the fact that it was just towards her his behavior was so harsh. He never behaved like this with anyone else, then why her? What did she do to be always at the receiving end of his coldness? She was trying her best to make this relationship work but every time it was him who said or did something, making their relationship go back to square one.

Feeling someone's presence at the door, she quickly wiped her eyes and looked behind her. The nurse came with his medicines and riddhima left the room. Wiping the tears from her cheeks and clearing her throat she called at home telling them about his health.

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He was discharged from the hospital after a week. His dad and her dad came as the ladies were busy preparing at home. His mom had kept a pooja for him coz of her belief. Although Armaan never believed in this stuff, his mom was sure that it's coz of someone's evil eye, he met with an accident and this pooja is gonna help in removing it.

Hearing the horn of the car, his mom quickly stood at the door with the aarti. She did his aarti and made him enter the house. As the door opened, the first person he wanted to see was riddhima, he himself didn't know why? But after the incident in the hospital he felt bad about talking to her like that. She was concerned about him and he knew that still in front of her it was getting difficult for him to control his temper.

Riddhima silently came and stood behind his mom, her eyes fixed at the ground. He looked at her and knew she was avoiding him and felt guilt of pang in his heart. After that incident even in the hospital she never came in his room alone. She was always accompanied by her in-laws. This wasn't the first time she was hearing harsh words from his mouth but his words saying that she doesn't care for him was something that made her believe that how much he hates her and as much as she tries, he won't change at all. If he doesn't want her to be around him and if he believes that her presence is affecting him in a bad way, she won't come in front of him. The first two days, she made excuses of not going but avoiding it every day wasn't possible leaving her with no other option but to go with his parents. In the hospital, she kept a maintaining distance from him. His mom did notice the change and tried talking to her but she dismissed it telling that it's all coz of stress and tension and nothing else.

As the pooja was going on, riddhima was sitting beside him, her eyes fixed on her lap. Armaan was noticing her behavior through the corner of his eyes. The way she was fidgeting, trying to avoid him and the nervousness on her face may get unnoticeable by everyone but not him. He wanted to apologize for his behavior in the hospital itself but all his attempts failed. Riddhima wasn't giving him any chance to be alone with him. The guiltiness inside him was eating him from inside. He had to talk to her and now. He looked at his parents who were sitting on the opposite side. Touching his forehead he pressed his temples pretending of having a headache. His mom looked at him in concern and felt sorry for keeping this pooja today but the panditji words for keeping the pooja as early as possible forced her to keep it today.

The moment the pooja got over, she told him to go to his room and rest and she'll send the food to his room. Armaan entered the room and laid on his bed as the medicines effects were making him dizzy. Riddhima entered the room and found him sleeping on the bed, his one hand on his face hiding his face from her. She slowly kept the tray on the side table and stood in front of him.

"Armaan.." she whispered but there was no movement from him.

"Armaan.." she whispered again and the same response. "What should I do?" she thought. Standing beside him and bringing her face closer to his face, the loose tendrils from her pony tail touching his cheek brought a slight smile on his face which went unnoticed by her as her eyes were fixed on his eyes, she whispered in his ear "Armaan..".

Feeling her so close to him, her smell was intoxicating his senses as he felt his sudden urge to hold her in his arms. He wasn't sleeping in the first place. The moment he heard the click of the door, he knew it was her. He just wanted to know her reaction and closed his eyes but never expected her so close to him. He himself didn't know when he removed his hand from his face and turned his face slowly towards her. Feeling some movement she moved back and stopped as she saw him looking at her intently. Being so close to her, his eyes were fixed on her big expressive eyes as he saw a pool of emotions in her them, there were question waiting to be answered, sadness, tiredness and not to forget the fright.

As she felt some movement in him, she quickly tried moving back before he opens his eyes but it was too late as she saw him looking at her. The feeling of giving him another reason of spoiling his mood frightened her, forcing her to look anywhere but not at his face. She knew he was looking at her making her nervous.

"I am sorry" she whispered avoiding his gaze. "I thought..you..vo mein..lunch." fumbling with her words, she was finding it difficult to even speak properly. Her breathing was getting shallower by the second and the close proximity wasn't helping her at all. She tried getting up only to be pulled back as her saree pallu got stuck under him coz of the turning making her fall back on him.

"It's okay" she heard. His words made her look at him and for the first time she saw a different set of emotions. She saw calmness in his eyes. He wasn't mad at her like always; there was not a slight hint of anger or frustration in his eyes or voice. His words were followed by a brief moment of silence with the two of them finding the meaning of each other emotions in the other's eye. As the words and their meaning registered in her mind the fright in her eyes a moment ago changed to awkwardness and he saw the reason behind it as he noticed the position they were in. Riddhima was almost lying on him with her hands on his chest supporting her to avoid falling on him completely. Feeling his touch on her hand, she looked at her hand as he held it tightly and looked at him. He slowly turned and with his free hand took out the saree pallu and turning back handed it in her hand.

Feeling something soft in her hand, she saw the pallu in her hand and quickly got up from him. "voh mein..i mean lunch and" she said avoiding his gaze, fidgeting with the pallu in her hand. Her cute behavior brought a smile on his face which he himself was unaware off. His smiling face made her more confuse and turning, she walked out of the room without even looking back.

"Riddhima.." she stopped at the door and slowly turned around. "I can't eat with this hand" he said showing his bandaged hand. Riddhima looked at his bandaged hand not knowing what to do.

"will you..?" he asked. Sighing, she walked towards him, the nervousness not leaving her for a sec, as armaan was noticing her every move. Picking up the tray from the side table, she kept it in front of them avoiding his gaze the whole time. Making a morsel, she brought it to his mouth, her downcast face looking the food and he took the piece in his mouth, his lips touching her fingers making her gasp.

She was wishing this to get over as quickly as possible. His behavior was completely different from what she was expecting, scaring her. Just one week back, he didn't left a single chance to humiliate her and now all of a sudden this sudden change. Still in her thoughts she didn't knew when she made him eat the last morsel as she brought her hand closer to his mouth only to hear a small chuckle.

"riddhima, we finished" he said and she noticed the dimple on his face. She moved her hand back and got up from the bed. Her cheeks had turned red coz of embarrassment and avoiding him she quickly picked up the tray and left the room without even looking back as she knew he must be having a gala time watching and enjoying her foolishness. The whole day she made excuses to avoid her which wasn't so difficult considering most of the time he was sleeping on the bed coz of the medicines.

It was dinner time and armaan came down to have it with everyone, riddhima was serving everyone while making a plate for him to take it to his room. Watching him walking down the stairs limping a bit, she gulped as the nervousness slowly crept inside her thinking that now she'll have to make him eat in front of everyone. Sitting on the chair where she was standing, armaan noticed the nervousness in her and smiled.

"beta how are you feeling now?" his mom asked ruffling his hair. He kept his head on her shoulder nodding, his eyes fixed on Riddhima. Serving everyone, she sat beside Armaan and looked at him from the corner of her eyes and noticed the frown on his face as he tried picking up the spoon. Looking at his mom who was sitting on the other side, she brought her hand up from under the table to help him but stopped as she saw his mom taking the spoon and feeding him. Armaan noticed her as a faint smile appeared on his face which he hid by turning his face the other way.

"Riddima' " he said making the spoon fall from her hand into the plate bringing her back to earth and pointed at the empty glass in his hand. Taking the glass in her hand, she filled it with water and held in front of him. Taking the glass from her hand, her fingers came in contact with his making her release the glass from the hand wetting his trouser.

"I am sorry'" she said looking down at his trouser that got wet by her, scared to even look at him.

It's okay..riddhima..hota hai" she looked at him in shock hearing the words and saw the same faint smile on his face that she was noticing from the morning. What's wrong with him? She thought as she saw him heading towards their room.

Standing in front of the bedroom door, she sighed heavily before turning the knob as his today's behaviour was crepping the hell out of her. For the first time and for the entire day he didn't shout or taunt her with hurtful words instead he was smiling at her. The sudden change in his behavior was not going down her throat and if this was a dream, she was silently praying to never let her come out of this dream.

Turning the knob slowly she entered the room and found him on the bed sleeping. Without making any noise, she quietly moved to the bed and took the pillow. Sitting on the couch, her body not ready to sleep with questions haunting her regarding him, regarding them as in what's gonna happen next, she looked at the cell-phone in her hand as her mind was still in a dilemma whether to call or not. Hearing the beep, she looked at the caller and immediately got up from the couch. While moving her eyes fixed on him she walked out in the balcony closing the door behind her.

"we need to talk' there's something wrong'.yes it's about him'I don't know he is behaving so differently..it's like I don't know.. .yes everything was like it was planned but today'you just listen to me, you look into this and call me asap'okay I am going.." she cut the call and turned around as a horrified expression formed on her face.

End Of Part 4

Okay so today is my lucky day ..yaayyyy. Finally a much delayed part is posted. I am extremely sorry for the delay, there's too much going on and the little bit free time gets over in lazing around. * bitten by lazy bug* : P

On a serious note, the parts are taking too much of my thinking power which i am not liking at all. This part took me almost three weeks and the best thing about this part - even after writing tits and bits for three week, I had to erase all the previous versions, finally settling on this one which btw I wrote this weekend *Writer's block.* : C

Hope you enjoyed the part and the ending..I don't wish to end it here as few of my very close and dearest reader's gets too excited and takes out their excitement in their replies ;P which I am hoping to read this time too but I couldn't control myself *grins*.

So the ending' hmmm'quite interesting I suppose. Do let me know what you think about this new twist.

Looking forward to your views.

Loads of love..

Mel..

PS: the Pm list is posted just above after going through all the pages * wipes the forehead*. If I have missed out someone which i am sure i must have please do tell me.

Some readers have not replied after the intro or the first part. I have Pmed them this time but if there is no response from them, I'll stop the Pm service from the next part.

and new readers if you want the Pm do mention it when replying.