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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

Hey nidzyy!!
Sorri for late comment was beeze!!
Okay now the part wasssss grtt!!
Omgsh I don't think I have ever loved nups this much!
You portrayed her soooo beautifully in this updtt
Want my mayur back together soon na!! pleaseeeeeeeeee
Pleaseeeeeeeeee missing them yaar! Hope nups forgives him soon!
Do updt soon
Thanxz for the pm
-sanam-






Hey Sanam dont be sorry yaar....

Glad you liked my work...

Thanks a lot for the comment....

Nupur is going through a tough time

lets see how MAyur will unite....

it my pleasure to pm you

Love ya...
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi278

hey nidzy,
sorry for the late comment,
the part was fabulous,
awwwwwww.....loved the arjun and mayur convo,
loooooooooooooved this part,
this story is tooooooooooooo interesting...
plzzzzzzzz continue asap.....



Hey Shivangi..........

Thanks lot for you comment & dont me sorry dear....

im glad you loved this update....

wil cont asap

Luv
Nidzy~
Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: chelsi

this is my favorite ff aab to mayank nupur ko mila do plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz



Hey sweety....

Thanks a lot hun.....

in glad you liked my work ....

Its your fav one.....ab tou MAYUR ko milana hi padega.....

will continue soon dear....

luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_shwets

Dear loved it to d core.......its awesome.......read dis ff at a stretch........loved every part of it.......n ha plzzzzz do pm me d nxt time you update



Hi dear

Thanks a lot for reading my Ff

im glad you liked it....

will surely pm you

Luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow...nidzy,grt update!!!.....arjun!!!! luv him!!!! 🤗 m sure he'll bring his mom n dad 2gedr again...do continue soon dear.... 👏
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelArTi1988

wow...nidzy,grt update!!!.....arjun!!!! luv him!!!! 🤗 m sure he'll bring his mom n dad 2gedr again...do continue soon dear.... 👏
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗



Thanks a lot dear

I'm glad you liked it

will update soon

luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 15

Firtly I want to thank all my readers for pressing the like tab & commenting I'm glad you all like my work keep reading......

Ok this part there's gonna be a new entry so get ready...........

N- go Mayank go away …. she shouted & moved back with each step she took back he felt his life was going away from him he was nothing more than a dead man ….. he lost his every hope of getting her back …. his life will be empty like it was in these 5 years

His eyes were filled with tears he could see how hurt she was but even he was hurt ….he was incomplete without her….. but she had decided he didn't mean anything to her…..no this cant be true…….

Mayank's cell buzzed making him come back to his sense he picked up the call

M-kya??…Maa…he felt numb…

He was disturbed ….Nupur could see the feared expression on his face

M-kaise ???OK ..I'm coming

Saying this he ran out as if something very bad had happened ….

Before Nupur could stop him he had already left

She kept thinking what could have been the problem

Shayad koi business problem hogi but Mayank looked scared…….....is Maa alright

She knew for Mayank his Mom was more than his own life she kept thinking …..

Nupur loved Shilpa as her own mother she kept thinking about her that night she hardly slept………

In the morning

Nupur didn't have courage to talk to Mayank she called Mayank's office

R-Hello how can can I help you ??

N-Wo mai Maa……can I talk to Mrs Shilpa Sharma…….

R-Sorry Shilpa Maam is not available…. unhe heart attack ayaa hai she's not well she's in the hospital

N-kya???...she was shocked

R-hello..hello.... are you there

N-kaunse….. kaunse hospital mein hai wo..????

R-City Hospital

N-Thankyou …….

Maa hospital mein hai unn ki tabiyat theek nai hai aur mai unn se milne bhi nai jaa sakti ….. Maa ne mujhe hamesha ek beti ki tarha pyaar kiya

Kya karu mai wapas India kaise jau …..nai mai itni selfish nai ban sakti... Ek baar hi sahi sirf dekh kar wapas aa jaungi

Waise bhi kal se Arjun ke vacation start hai

She decided to just meet her once & come back

Nupur went & picked up Arjun from school

A-Mamma today I asked my teacher who is daddy she told every family has daddy mummy grand ma grand pa….where is my daddy

Nupur somehow felt guilty for keeping him away from all these relations

N-Arjun we are going to India to see your grand ma…..

A-then my dad

N-you will see him too…

A-yeah…..he said getting excited

Nupur thought I have to lie to you ….i'll meet ma & return I don't wanna face Mayank again I cant I don't have strength now I'll break once again…

Nupur was lucky she got the next flight for India that day..... by the time she reached Mumbai it was late in the evening

She inquired about the room No. at the reception... Shilpa was in the intensive care Unit

Nu-Maam aap andar nai jaa sakti patient ko abhi hosh nai ayaa hai

N-mai sirf dou minute ke liye mil lu please ….

Nu-theek hai jaldi kariye …said the Nurse who allowed Nupur to see Shilpa

Nupur made Arjun sit on a chair outside the ICU

N-Arjun stay here till I come back

A-Ok mamma

Nupur went inside

Her mother-in-law lay there on the bed with number of wires attached to her tears filled her eyes seeing her in this condition she slowly paced towards the bed without making any noise & sat beside her she caressed her forehead she took her hand in hers Maa.. these were the only words which came out of her mouth

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Arjun was sitting outside the room

At some distance away from him he saw a man sitting with his head buried in his hands he looked familiar to him

Arjun went near that man he poked his finger & tried to move him he didn't move

He pulled his shirt the man slowly lifted his head his eyes watery…. & red

It was Mayank he was shocked to see Arjun he felt was if he was dreaming

A-aale uncle aap….he said with a smile on his face

M-Arjun!!!!! MAyank couldn't believe his eyes ….

He immediately hugged him

M-where is ur Mamma.....asked Mayank with tears in his eyes

A-she went inside .....he said pointing towards the ICU

Mayank felt happy that Nupur came back & had forgiven him.. he rushed towards the ward

Doctor entered the Cabin

N-doctor inko hosh kab aaye ga

D- hum abhi kuch nahi keh sakte ,agar 2 hours mein inko hosh nahi aaya tou in sorry hume inhe ventilator per rakhna hoga…….

N-Nahi….

D-just pray ki unhe hosh aa jaaye....he said & left from there

Nupur was crying hysterically she remembered how maa used to take care of her...they both used to pull Mayanks leg & tease him….

Mayank…Mayank kaha hoga she was getting worried about him

N- maa please hosh mein aao….dekho mai apse milne aayi Apki Nupur aayi hai ankhe kholo na maa…..tears running down her cheeks suddenly she felt slight movment in her hand ……….Shilpa moved a bit

Maa…..Nupur said out loud

Maa please aankhein kholiye

Nupur …Mayu ….she said in a weak voice as she opened her eyes

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Mayank made Arjun sit outside as he was not allowed in

M-tum yaha baitho mai abhi aata hu….

Mayank entered the cabin

N-Doctor …doctor.....she called out

M-kya hua Nupur ….

Nupur came towards him

N- Mayank maa ko hosh aa raha hai….

S-Mayu …. Mayu…..Mayank rushed to her side

M-Maa mai hu yaha tumhre paas ….tears rolled down his eyes

S-Nupur tum aa gayi …..

N-haan Maa …..

The doctor came & did the checkup

D-Mrs.Sharma ab aap bilkul theek hai … aap ko rest ki zaroorat hai

S-mera beta aur bahu mere paas hai mujhe aur kuch nai chahiye

She was very happy & so was Mayank ….

Arjun was still outside he tried to push the heavy glass door of the Intensive care unit he managed to push it a little with his shoulder & peeped inside

Mayank went & picked up Arjun & brought him near Shilpa

M-Maa dekho yeh Arjun tumhara grand son…..

Arjun was confused he was just staring at the women on the bed with so many wires attached to her he stretched his hands towards Nupur & went into her arms he wrapped his hand around her neck & hid his face in her shoulder

N-Arjun dekho ur grand ma... she's your dadi..

He looked at her from the corner of his eyes

A-you are my dadi … he said with a smile on his face

Nupur bend him a little as Shilpa touched his face with her shaky hands... tears of happiness glistered in her eyes

She thanked God for bringing her family back together again

The doctor asked Mayank & Nupur to accompany him

Aap log mere saath chaliye patient ko ab araam ki zaroorat hai

Nupur & Mayank came out the doctor said they should take very good care of her & keep her happy don't give her any kind of tension...its not good for her health....

M-ok Doc we will take care of her he said looking at Nupur

As the doc left Mayank hugged Nupur

M-Thanks Nupur tum yaha aayi …..mai aaj bohot khush hu ……..tum ne mujhe maaf kar diya

N-dekho Mayank mai yaha sirf Maa ke liye aayi hu…. Maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha aura b bhi keh rahi hu mere dil mein tumhare liye kuch nai hai ….Maa theek hote hi mai London wapas chali jaungi

Her each word pierced his heart into pieces ….she didn't want to hurt him but she wanted to make it clear

M-Nupur tum

N- Mayank hum iss baare mein aur baat nai karenge mai yaha sirf Maa ke liye hu…….she turned other side & wiped her tears it was very difficult for her to talk in such a manner to the person she loved……….

Mayank thought……tum wapas aa gayi yehi mere liye bohut hai peechli baar tum meri waje se chali gayi thi is baar mai tumhe kahin jaane nahi dunga & that's a promise….

As they were leaving Arjun asked

A-If she is my dadi then who is my daddy??

Nupur turned towards Mayank but she didn't tell anything

Mayank bent down & said

I'm your daddy ….he was happy that at least Arjun was with him & his son would know the difference between Daddy & teddy ……only if Nupur would have said this he would have been much happier

A-wat you are my daddy but you are my uncle na

N-No Arjun he is your dad………

Mayank was glad to hear that she atleast accepted him as her son's father

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After 2-3 days Shilpa was discharged from the hospital she was fine now they came home Nupur stayed in the hospital only she didn't leave Shilpa alone for a second also ………..

In these days Mayank & Nupur hardly talked with each other but they took good care of Shilpa together

S-Nupur pata hai yeh ghar kitna suna padh gaya tha tere jaane ke baad

M-Maa aap ke theek hone ki khushi mein ek party rakhte hai aap bhi better feel karengi

S-mere theek hone ki khushi mein nai mere bahu ke wapas aane ki khushi mein

Wapas aane ki khushi ?? Nupur was in a dilemma now was it a wise decision for her to stay back ….but she couldn't leave Maa alone when she was in such a condition she cant be so selfish….. but how can she stay with Mayank bcoz Maa thinks everything is fine between them which is not true & she cant tell her the truth not at this moment .

A-Wow this house is sho big …..he said looking around the whole house

Nupur took Shilpa to her room & made her lie down on the bed

N-Maa mai aap ke saath hi rehti hu …… Mayank knew why she said that & it hurted him ….

S-nai beta mai bilkul theeek hu ab aur tumne bhi 3 din se araam nai kiya jao tum apne kamre mein jao

N-Lekin Maa aap

S-mai theek hu Nupur kisi cheez ki zaroorat hogi toh mai bula lungi jaa beta bohot late ho gayi tujhe bhi araam ki zaroorat hai….

N-theek hai Maa……she said & left

Nupur entered Mayank's room which was once their room

Every thing was as it was 5 years back nothing had changed she looked at the photo frame kept on mayank's side table it was their honeymoon pic which they took on a hill top …….

All her clothes were as it is intact in the cupboard

She looked around as all her memories good & bad flashed in front of her eyes

She went opened the cupboard took some clothes & went to take a shower thinking it may ease her stress & freshen her up a bit

Living with Mayank after all what happened was very difficult for her but she has to do it for Maa…she cant probably leave her alone at this time when she needed her the most…she decided once Maa gets well she will talk to her & leave……

Mayank & Arjun were sitting on the bed when Nupur came out of the shower

Mayank Pov

She came out of the shower wearing a purple nighty wet hair water dripping from her long locks except for her cold attitude towards me nothing had changed she looked as young & gorgeous as 5 years back

I wish I could say her how much I missed her in these 5 years how much I missed that heavenly look of hers how much I missed the first morning kiss how much I missed the way she helped me wear my coat before I left for office how much it hurted me when I returned from office & she was not there waiting for dinner .........

Nupur looked at Mayank his eyes were saying so much but she didn't want to read it she didn't want to believe him again she didn't want to get hurt again…..she turned her face away from him

Arjun was jumping on the bed

A-Mamma thiss house is sho naish….. we will shtay here Mamma

N-don't jump Arjun …she said to which Arjun immediately sat down on the bed

A-uncle…he said which made Mayank raise his eyebrows ….oops Sholly Daddy tell me that days shtory na Mamma will also hear ….. a smile crept on Mayank's face hearing daddy from his son…

As Mayank started telling the story….. Nupur went & lied down on her extreme corner of the king size bed within no time Arjun fell asleep between Mayank & Nupur

Mayank looked at Nupur her back was facing him she was sleeping at the far off corner she didn't even talk to him as if he was a stranger to her ….

still he was happy that atleast he had his sons love and for his wife's love he was ready to wait for it his whole life………..

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Slowly Arjun got used to his father & dadi in these days.....

He had always liked Mayank since he first met him ....but now he was happy that Mayank was his father

One morning after few days

Nupur got up early she went down & made breakfast

She woke up Arjun got him dressed Mayank was still sleeping with a cute smile at his lips … she remembered it was this cute smile which attracted her towards him for the first time ……

N-Arjun wake up your dad …she said to him & went down to help Maa get up

A-Daddy…..he shook him up

M-sone do na Nupur …he said & turned towards the other side

A-I'm not Nupur I'm Arjun …daddy daddy

M-do minute Nupur …..

Arjun finally jumped on him with full force which made Mayank jerk out of his sleep

M-Ouch…..come here you naughty boy ……he ran behind him

A-Aaaa….he screamed & ran out of the room with Mayank running behind him

Mamma….. Dadi……shave me

Nupur & Shilpa were watching Mayank & Arjun's chase

A- daddy is gone mad …..he said

Shilpa was lying on the couch…there was a wide smile on her face…she was so haapy to see her son smiling & enjoying again…..

A-aale mujhe bachao….he went & hid behind Nupur…………...

S-Mayank kyu sata raha hai mere pothe ko….Shilpa scolded him

M-aap ke ladle pothe ne subha subh mera kya haal kiya poochiye .. he said holding his stomach

S-wat did you do Arjun

A-nothing Dadi…..Daddy was not getting up he was calling me Nupur Nupur so I jumped on his stomach …I'm not Nupur na …Mamma is Nupur…..he said laughing in between

Nupur & Mayank looked at each other Shilpa just smiled

S-Mayu jaldi taiyaar ho ke aa jaa Nupur ne aaj Aloo ke parathe banaye hai tere favorite…..a smile crept on his face

N-Maa yeh Arjun ke bhi favorite hai …she said trying to justify she didn't make it for Mayank specially

A-haan I love Aloo ke palathe ………..

Mayank went to his room got ready & came back

All of them had breakfast

M-ache hai... aaj bhi tumhare haath mein wohi mazaa hai …he said trying to convey how much he missed wat she made

N-Thanks …..she said & turned towards Shilpa….Maa aap lijiye na….

M-chalo kuch toh bola…he thought to himself

S-Mayank party ki sab preparations ho gayi

M-haan Maa aaj sham ke liye maine sab ko invite kar diya hai

The party was In the evening

Nupur got ready she was wearing a black saree & was looking exceptionally beautiful Mayank was just lost in her...... he remembered the days when they were together...

Flash back

Nupur & Mayank had to go in a function Mayanks friends wedding….

Nupur wore red & green combo sari……she was looking extremely gorgeous

She came towards Mayank

N- Batao na Mayu mai kaisi lag rahi hoon

Mayank raised his head & saw her he was lost in her beauty she looked like an angel the sari perfectly suited her it was she carried every attire with elegance…

N-Bataou na Mayank mai kaisi lag rahi hoon…..

M-theek hi lag rahi ho…..

N-kya …..mai achi nahi lagri

M-kaha na theek hi…

N- theek hai ka kya matlab

M-theek hi matlab theek hi….not so god not so bad

N-jao maine pooch kar hi galti ki…

She was about to move.....when he held her wrist….

M-Nupur mai mazaak kar raha tha….

N-chodo mujhe jana hai…..

M-aare meri jaan bura man gayi kya??

N-mujhe kyu bura lage ga tum hote koun ho jiski baatou ka mai bura manungi…ab chodo mera hath…

M-mai tumhara ……he twirled her and brought her into his arms …..pati hu…..she turned red with his closeness….

He traced his finger across her face making her go weak in her knees

N-kya kar rahe ho Mayank…....

M-mujhe haq hai……he whispered in her ears giving her shivers She just closed her eyes trying to feel his touch

M-aur tum aaj bohot khubsoorat lag rahi ho…… dil kar raha tumhari tareef karta jau karta jau aur karta jau ....... she blushed & lowered her face

N-toh phir pehle aise kyu kaha …..

M-mujhe pata hai tum mere muh se tareef sunne ka intezaar kar rahi thi toh socha pehle tumhe thoda sata lu

N-mai koi intezaar nai kar rahi thi

M-acha nai kar rahi thi …..he said moving closer to her

N-nahi…..she said blushing deep red

M-pakka nai kar rahi thi…..he moved more closer

N-kaha na nai…..she said with difficulty as he was very close to her

M-are you sure……..he tilted his face & was gazing passionately in her eyes

N-acha baba kar rahi thi bas…..she said looking back into those passionate eyes

M-you look beautiful....he said & gave a soft peck on her cheek..........

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Aaj bhi wo mere muh se tareef sunne ka intezaar karti hai kya ….he thought...

The way he was looking at her was making it more & more difficult for Nupur

He went near her

M-Nupur wo tum aaj …

N-Mayank humein neeche chalna chahiye sab intezaar kar rahe honge …..saying this she turned to leave

Nupur ek baar maine tumhe apni zindagi se jaane ki galti ki iss baar mai tumhe nai jaane dunga

Though you are not in my arms not closer to me …you are in front of my eyes that's enough for me……..

The party was not a hip hop like it was a calm & quite party where mostly people came to inquire about Shilpa's health & give their best wishes to Sharma family

Nupur went down she met many people Shilpa was very happy…..

Mayank also came down he was wearing a classy black shirt & formal black pant gelled hair looking very handsome Arjun was enjoying the party he loved parties fun & masti ….

Mayank met some people..his friend & relatives….. their neighbours had also come…

Prithvi & Damini they were another cute couple moved into the bungalow adjacent to Sharmas just few months back

Mayank introduced Nupur & Arjun to them

M-Hi Prithvi ….

P-Hey Mayank

both the gentlemen had a friendly hug Mayank & Prithvi were good friends though Mayank didn't have any social life in these 5 years he used to meet Prithvi on every morning walk

M-meet my wife Nupur…….. And my son Arjun ….

Nupur could see the smile on his face how happily he was introducing his family

D-Hi Nupur Good to see you…said Damini

N-Hi…same here

D-yeh meri beti hai Rati…..

A small girl almost of Arjun's age was standing with them she was fair & chubby sparkling eyes & beautiful features she was wearing a frilled frock two small ponytails made her look more cute …..

D-beta Say Hi …

R-Hi aunty

N-Hi beta you are very cute.... she said planting a kiss on her cheek

R-Thankyou

N-Arjun say Hi beta

A-Hi

R-Hi...

N-you are of almost Arjun's age both can have good time together

A-Mamma can I play with Lati …..

R-its Rati …she said raising her eyebrows & correcting him

A-sholly….Ra..La..Ratii…he said with difficulty shaking his head

D-ya you both go and play …

Rati went ahead Arjun followed her though she was of his age she was quite shorter than him

A-why do you have two ponytails….he asked her touching one of her ponytail

R-because I'm a girl …..she said flaunting her cute ponytails

A-My mamma is also girl your mamma is also girl they don't have ponytails...he laughed

R-Pagal ….she said going away from there

A-Lati …Lati ..lati…..Arjun said following her

R-how many times do I have to say its Rati….

A-Oh…Sholly again & I'm not pagal I'm Arjun ….he said flashing his cute little dimples

R-whtever ….

A-come I will show you my loom

R-loom???

A-ya there are sho many toysh in my loom

R-Oh….Room….

A-that is wat I said

R-no you said loom

A-I said Rloom...rloom....rloom.....he said mixing r & l together

R-Ok OK dont shout....she said closing her ears

A-Sholly

R-its ....she stopped it was no use correcting him...come lets play.......they both went inside the room & arjun showed her all his toys

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They party was going on & everyone was enjoying it to the fullest

Nupur looked around her mother-in law she looked so happy she had to force up a fake smile on her face but deep inside she was fighting with her emotions

To others Mayank & Nupur looked like a happy couple which was not true….it was very difficult for Nupur to do all this

And what could she do with the love she had for him in her heart sometimes she wanted to forget everything & run and hug him ,,,,5 years without him were like hell for her.... today also she loved him madly

She looked at Mayank he was playing with Arjun both were very happy Arjun was growing up he needed his father too she thought should she forget everything & live a happy life with her husband & son …..

At that moment Mayank looked at Nupur he was trying to convey so much through his eyes......his happiness to be with his son

But it wasn't easy for her to forget what happened 5 years back and how much she suffered in those 5 years

This song is from Nupur's POV you will actually come to know about Nupur's present state & the pain she is going through

Please do listen to this song sung by Divya di in her beautiful voice thanks Divya di for giving your voice to my FF ..mere FF ko char chand lag gaye….😳

Aye Dil Dil Ki Duniya Mein
Aisa Haal Bhi Hota Hai
Baahar Koi Hansta Hai
Andar Koi Rota Hai
Aye Dil Koi Pehchaana Nahin
Kisi Ne Yeh Maana Nahin
Kisi Ne Yeh Jaana Nahin
kisi Ko Batana Nahin
Dard Chhupa Hai Kahan

Aye Dil Dil Ki Duniya Mein
Aisa Haal Bhi Hota Hai
Baahar Koi Hansta Hai
Andar Koi Rota Hai


Seene Mein Uthte Hai Armaan Aise
Dariya Mein Aate Hai Toofan Jaise
Kabhi Kabhi Khud Hi Maajhi
kashti Ko Dubota Hai
Aye Dil Dil Ki Duniya Mein
Aisa Haal Bhi Hota Hai
Baahar Koi Hansta Hai
Andar Koi Rota Hai



Hogi Kisi Ko Pehchaan Kaise
Pyaar Mein Hote Hain Kurbaan Kaise
Hum Ko Yeh Maaloom Na Tha
Pyaar Bhi Ek Samjhauta Hai
Aye Dil Dil Ki Duniya Mein
Aisa Haal Bhi Hota Hai
Bahar Koi Hansta Hai
Andar Koi Rota Hai
Aye Dil Koi Pehchaana Nahin
Kisi Ne Yeh Maana Nahin
Kisi Ne Yeh Jaana Nahin
Kisi Ko Batana Nahin
Dard Chhupa Hai Kahan
Aye Dil Dil Ki Duniya Mein
Aisa Haal Bhi Hota Hai
Baahar Koi Hansta Hai
Andar Koi Rota Hai

Nagme hain, shikwe hain

Kisse hain, baatein hain

Baatein bhool jaati hain

Yaadein yaad aati hain

Yeh yaadein kisi dil-o-jaanam ke

Chal jaane ke baad aati hain

Yaadein, yaadein, yaadein

[She remembered all her moments with Mayank in the beginning how rude he was to her..... but she cared about him & had feelings for him from the very first day …… then eventually he fell in love with her and she became his life …their best holiday in Manali some unforgettable memories….. their tough time when they faced business problems in which they supported each other & then that very dreadful day which turned her life upside down ]

That's it for today guys

Hope the part was long enough

I hope you liked the small cute new entry thats the reason I've named their son Arjun .....😳😆

do let me know ......

Your turn to hit the like tab & comment …..

Plz it means a lot to me ….😃

Love you all

Nidzy ~

Edited by mayurarti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Finally, I edited my post.. kitna easy hain to Leserve and then edit kalna....So Sholly for commenting so late...

Coming to the update, that was a SuLpLise entLy.. I so loved ALjun and Lati's sweet talks.... and the best paLt was the two pont-tails and ALjun asking why his mom and Lati's mom don't have pony-tails.. So, full of innocence... they ale leally sweet and cute.. and I so loved them and theil toys and Lati's telling Aljun its not Lati.. its Rati.. and finally she understood, ArLjun cannot tell LRati...
And now coming to elders, I so loved the concerning Nupur.. who inspite of the differences with her hubby went to see her Shilpa mom (i dont like using the terms sasuma, mother-in-law).. this is what i refer to as Indian Bahu's 😊😊😊 (meri jhalak dekhi tujhe Nupz mein..😉😉😉😉😉).....
And, then I really loved the new entries... that was a nice suLpLise....
And thank you for the chance u gave me... dekha free mein publicity bhi ho gayi... jokes apart, no need to thank me.. anything for u.. any time..
Lovely update...
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Amazing update Nidzy.... loved it to the core... very emotional update....

Glad to see Nupur caring for her MIL and returning to India just for her... but deep down inside, she is worried for Mayank too....and wants to share his grief too.... although she doesn't admit it...
Hopefully something after the party will bring them closer.... I like that Mayank is not giving up....
AWW.... Arjun and Rati are so adorable kids.... love how Arjun can't pronounce some words properly yet.... Lati was cute.... 😆
update soon....
Edited by -Jess- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nidzy
amazing update dear
lovely
so this is ur new entry?
oh tune to mujhe tension me hi daal diya tha
maine socha kahi koi 3rd angel to nehi aagya mayur ke bech me
agar aisa hota to main tera khoon pee jati
cahlo ab mayur ek sath to hai
pls ab jaldi se sab kuch thik karde
pls der maat karna
main wo lovey dovey mayur ko bohot miss karrahi hu
arjun was so cute
love the mayank and arjun scene
Arjun and Lati scene was also cute
oops Rati................. he he he
i loved arjun
loved the whole update
pls do cont soon
and pls TM ka update kar
pls pls pls

Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago

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