Mayur SS Part 23pg 98 - Page 34

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update!!!
plzzz continue soon
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hey swets..lovely update...
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after so long u updated
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lovely update enjoyed mayur n mm nupur scenes
wish they had shown same in mjht
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Vinu
very nice and cute update.
loved the picnic and cricket scene
it was very nice and entertaining
waiting to know about mayanks surprise and nups reaction
try to update son
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Hey nice update... can't wait to see what the surprise is and how Nupur reacts.. continue soon.😃
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nice updt
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ahh.. atlast an update after a long tym.. vinu..
it ws shooo sweet...😳👏
mayur playin cricket ws just awesum!😍
just luvd it 2 d bits..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks for all your comments guys your comments really mean a lot to mesorry guys could not reply to everyones comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Here's the next part

part 11

The very next day mayank and nupur left for Mumbai. They reached Mumbai and directly went to samrat's outhouse.

Next day

Nupur and mayank got ready for the college. both reached the college and saw the gang waiting for them.

"Congrats guys is baar fir se tumhi logone Acdemic meet jeeta" said samrat

"Thanks samrat, Meet you later need to go and meet prince" said nupur and both mayank and nupur went to meet the principal's cabin

Principal's cabin.

"Well done mayank and nupur. I'm proud of you both. Is baar fir se tum dono ne academic meet jeeta hai. Tum dono ki jodi ko koi hara nahi sakta" said prince patting mayank's back

"Thank You sir" said both

"Ok now you both go to your classes." Said prince and both mayank and nupur left for their class

After the college mayank asked nupur to wait for him as he wanted to show her something and nupur too agreed to wait in the college. She first went to library and took some books and started making notes. Since after 6 the library was to get closed she went to college garden and waited for mayank there. Mayank after finshing his work came and saw nupur waiting for him. He smiled and went and sat besides her.

"Sorry bohot time wait karna pada naa" said mayank

"Mayank it's ok chalo tum mujhe kuch dikhana chahte the naa, dikhao kya dikhana chahte ho" said nupur

"Nupur ok let's go" said mayank and both took the auto. After reaching the destination mayank paid the driver.

"Mayank hum yahan kya kar rahe hai aur tum mujhe kuch dikhana chahte the tum mujhe yahan kya dikhana chahte ho" said nupur in one breathe

"Nupur thodi saans to lo" said mayank and then blindfolded her

"Mayank tum kahan le jaa rahe ho" said nupur

"Nupur plz thodi door aur fir tumhe pata chal jaayega" said mayank and took her into a building and stood before a flat. He took out the keys and opened the door of the flat. He switched on the lights and then opened the blindfold.

"Mayank yeh kya pagalpan tha tumne mujhe blindfold kyun kiya" saids nupur slowly opening her eyes but was shocked to see the whole scene before her. she was inside a flat whose walls were fully decorated with her and mayank's pics.

"Mayank yeh sab kya hai" asked nupur confused

"Humara naya ghar mana ke rent pe hai par hum ise kum se kum aapna toh keh sakte hai naa" said mayank. Nupur looked at him lovingly and just hugged him.

"Mayank tumhe meri wajah se bohot saari problems face karni pad rahi hai naa. Tum kabhi itni jaldi shaddi nahi karna chahte the par asirf meri wajah se tumhe itni jaldi mujse shaadi karni padi aura b meri wajah se yeh job jiske wajah se tum aapni studies ko puri tarah se time nahi de pa rahe aur bauji" said nupur while tears flowed down her cheek

"Ssshhhhhhhh nupur tumhe kisne kaha tumhari wajah se meri life main problems bad gayi hai balki tumhare mere life main aane ki wajah se meri life ki problems kum ho gayi hai. Aur main shaadi se bohot khush hoon aur haan jab mere pass tumhari tarah wife ho jo mere liye notes banati hai mere saath baithe padhai karti hai toh mere studies pe koi asar kaise hoga" said mayank and wiped her tears

"ab fir kabhi yeh mat sochna ya kehna kit um mere liye ek problem ho. Tum hi toh ho jiske saath main aapni life ki har problem share kar sakta hoon aur uska solution bhi jaan sakta hoon" said mayank and gave a peck on her cheek

"Ab bato tumhe yeh surprise kaise laga" Asked mayank hugging her from behind and resting his chin on her shoulder

"Mayank bohot hi aacha hai yeh surprise aur haan ab is ghar ko main khud sajaoongi" said nupur

"Nahi nupur hum dono milke is ghar ko decorate karenge. Kal hi main humara saaman yaha shift kar doonga" said mayank. After spending sometime they returned to outhouse.

Next day

Mayank and nupur as usual got up early and got ready for the college. They entered the canteen and saw samrat sitting there who seemed to be little upset.

"Hey samrat koi problem hai kya you look upset" asked mayank

"Mayank agar tumhe outhouse main koi problem thi toh mujhe bata dete I would have tried to solve it par naye flat main woh bhi rented flat main shift hone ki kya jarorrat hai" said samrat

"Samrat outhouse main koi problem nahi hai" said mayank

"Mayank jab koi problem nahi hai toh tum outhouse chod ke kahi aur kyun jaa rahe ho" said samrat

"Samrat main chata hoon ki main nupu ko har khushi doon ek aisi jagah doon jise who aapna keh sake fir chahe woh rented hi kyun naa ho" said mayank

"Mayank kya mera ghar tumhara aapna nahi tha" asked samrat

"Samrat baat yeh nahi hai ki woh ghar humara aapna tha ya nahi. Samrat main nahi chati ki bauji mayank ko fir se kuch kahe. Please samrat humari tarah bhi to thoda socho. Kya tumhe aacha lagega agar tumhare dost ko koi galat kahe" said nupur

"Par di, agar aap chahe toh main bauji ko samjha sakti hoon" said gunjan

"Nahi gunjan main nahi chahti ki koi bauji se humare liye baat karein. Bauji ko yeh manana hoga ke is baar woh galat hai aur hum sahi. Main nahi chahti bauji hume kisi ke kehne pe accept kare. Main unhe sabit karna chahti hoon ki mayank hi mere liye perfect hai aur woh hi mere liye sahi hai" said nupur

"Par di.." said gunjan

"Gunjan please is baat pe main koi behes nahi karna chahti." Said nupur

"Ok agar tum logo ne decide kar hi liya hai toh thik hai par haan hum har Sunday tumhare ghar aayenge toh hume coffee jarror deni padegi" said samrat

"Agar tum nahi bhi kehte toh bhi main tumhe coffee pilati" said nupur.

"Nupur aur mera burger aur pizza" said uday

"Ofcourse uday bhaiyya aur Sunday hi kyun agar aap kabhi bhi aaye toh bhi aapka burger aur pizza humesha ready rahega" said nupur. After having some tea all of them left for their classes. After the college nupur went home while mayank was in the college doing his work.

Nupur reached home and started packing the things. She kept each and every things in different boxes. After 2 hours almost the packing work was done. Mayank reache house and was surprised to see the packing done.

"Mayank jaake fresh ho jao main khaana laga ti hoon" said nupur and started arranging the table. Mayank went and freshen up. He came down and saw nupur still arranging the table. He slowly moved towards her and hugged her from behind.

"Mayank yeh kya kar rahe ho" said nupur

" Thanks nupur for every thing" said mayank

"Welcome my dear husband ab khana khaa le thanda ho raha hai" said nupur patting his cheek. Both had there dinner and chatted for while and then went to sleep as next day they had lot of work of shifting and fortunately it was Saturday and they had holiday.


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