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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
awesome one shot dear............
loved it 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys on request of afsha and mehak(mn_arti) i'm adding 2 more parts to this oneshot.

Part 2

In the morning when nupur open she saw mayank sleeping peacefully. She did not wish to disturb his sleep. So she slowly got up and went to freshen up. She went to the kitchen and prepared breakfast and then went to have a bath. When she came out wearing a white chuddidar and her hair were wet she saw mayank still sleeping she decided to go and wake him up. So she went near him and tried to wake him.

"Mayank utho,aaj college jaane ka mood nahi hai kya" asked nupur ruffling his hair

"Nupur plz baalon ko mat chuo aur mujhe tode der sone do plz" said mayank moving little back.

"Mayank 7.30 bajh chuke hai , hum college ke liye late ho jaayenge" said nupur trying to wake him up

"Nupur please sone do na" said mayank pulling the blanket on his face

"Thik hai mayank tum yahan so te raho main jaa rahi hoon" said nupur pretending to be angry and got up from the bed and was about to go when mayank caught her wrist and pulled her towards him which caused nupur to fall on him , since nupur's hair were wet a drop water fell on mayank's face. Mayank just kept staring at nupur then he slowly raise his hand and moved the hair falling on her face. He caressed he face with his finger making nupur blush.

"m-ay-a-nk" said nupur hardly able to speak

"You look beautiful" said mayank still staring at her.

He then kissed her on cheek making nupur blush hard he then moved towards her lips and was about to kiss her when door bell rang nupur immediately got up and went to open the door while mayank was surely gonna kill the person who disturbed his sweet romantic movement. Nupur opened the door and saw uday with the whole gang at the door.

"aare uday bhayyia aap itne subh, aayie andar" said nupur

"Nupur tumhe yaad hai maine kal tumse pucha tha ki agar tumhe koi yeh kahae ki mayank ne kisi aur ko kiss kiya to tum kya karogi" said uday while the gang was trying to stop him from saying anything

"haan to uday bhayiaa" said nupur while mayank too came after freshening up and stood besides nupur.

"To aaj main kehta hoon ke mayank ne holi ke din tumhe chod ke kisi aur ladki ko kiss kiya" said uday

"Uday bhayiaa maine us din bhi kaha tha aur aaj bhi keh rahi hoon agar bhagwaan khud bhi aake mujhse yeh kahega to main nahi maanongi, mujhe aapne mayank pe pura bharosa hai" said nupur looking at mayank

"par maere pass proof hai aur tum bhi chaho to dekh lo" said uday handing over the video cam to nupur. Nupur fully trusted mayank just for uday's sake she took the video cam and saw the video. While watching the video nupur's face turned red not of anger but she was blushing watching the video. She recognized the girl whom mayank was kissing was none other then she herself. She stopped the video and handed it to mayank and went away from there with smile to bring breakfast for every one while every one was shocked to see nupur blushing and smiling after watching the video. While mayank was busy watching the video.

"Lagta hai video dekh ke meri behen shock bardash nahi kar paayi, is liye shaayad who pagal ho gayi" said uday while dia and benji both hit uday while mayank gave angry glare to uday. Seeing mayank's angry glare uday soon hid behind samrat.

"samrat is uday ko abhi isi waqt yahan se le jaa warna main ise aaj chodunga nahi" said mayank giving uday "I would kill you" scaring uday more.

"maine to bas……" he stopped as he saw mayank's angry glare.

After having the breakfast the whole gang went to the college. One month passed the same routine continued with nupur making notes and cooking the dinner while mayank used to come late in the evening due loads of work. Both used to have dinner together and then before going to bed they would always discuss about how their day was.

One day.

In the morning nupur nupur saw mayank sleeping peacefully she did not wake him up as he had slept late yesterday as he was having heavy workload from past few days so she got ready and prepared breakfast and then she went to wake mayank. She went near him and started waking him. Mayank opened his eyes and saw at his beautiful eyes.nupur slowly moved her hands towards his forehead when she realized his head was burning hot.

"Mayank tumhe to bukhar hai, chalo tum so jao" said nupur making mayank rest on the bed and went to bring thermometer

"Nupur mujhe kuch nahi hua hai" said mayank trying to get up from the bed

" Aacha kuch nahi hua hai abhi pata chal jaayega mayank" said nupur checking mayank's temperature

"kuch nahi hua mayank, to yeh kya hai .mayank tumhe 104 degree bukhar hai aur tum keh rahe tumhe kuch nahi hua" said nupur with concern.

"Nupur aaj college main bohot important class hai aur meri job bhi to hai" said mayank again trying to get up

" Maine kaha na tum aaj college nahi jaaoge matlab nahi aur nahi main jaane waali hoon agar main yahan se gayi naa to fir tum paaka rest nahi karoge" said nupur making mayank rest and went to call a doctor and inform the gang. The doctor came and checked mayank and then gave some medicines. Nupur sat besides mayank and placed wet cloth on his forehead and kept changing the cloth time to time. She then went to kitchen and made soup. She then came and sat besides mayank and woke him up to have the soup and medicine.

"Mayank utho aur soup pe lo" said nupur waking mayank and making him have the soup.

" aur yeh lo ab ye davai kha ke so jao" said nupur giving mayank the medicines.

"Nupur please davai nahi, yeh bohot kadvi hoti hai please main davai nahi lene wala" said mayank like a small kid does when he dislikes having something.

"Mayank chup-chap kha lo aaj main tumhari koi baat nahi sunane waali, kitni baar kaha hai itna kam mat kiya karo , lekin tum ho ke meri baat sunte hi nahi." Said nupur while tears formed in her eyes.

"nupur…"

"Mayank ab chup chap so jao" said nupur making mayank sleep. She did not knw when she too fell asleep. Till the evening even mayank's fever had come down.he slowly opened his eyes just to see nupur sleeping with her head on the bed near him.he slowly moved towards her and just moved his hands through her hairs and then kissed her on forehead

next part: mayank singing song for nupur
hope you like it
plz do comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
Lovely os
loved the mayur bonding
mayur r so cute
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Hey sweetheart

Thanx for listening to me n continuing ur OS as SS

Thanx a lottt

Liked the update it was fab

Thank God Mayu controlled his anger warna he wuld hav killed Uday😆😆

N Big Thank U that there wasnt there any misunderstanding between Mayur
Liked the way Nups was cared for Mayu
Loved it
Update nxt parts soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Nice part Vinu...

Nupur taking care of Mayank...

And Uff... ye Uday na kabhi nahi sudhrege na... Kitna sweet momnet spoil kar diya...

Wow! Mayank singing a song for Nupur... Can't wait.

Continue soon, dear...

Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
awesome.very nice.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Fabulous shot vinaya....
continue soon!
waiting for mayank to sing a song for nups!!!!!
love
mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
lovely update i so wish Cvs realised this simplicity is MN.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Hi Vinu
I was awesome shot dear.
loved it so much.
it was so nice and amazing
now looking forward for ur next part.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
heyy!
loved the OS,,,
it was very cute.. nd wonderful =P
especially how nupur said that she trusts mayu completely =P
thx for sendin me the pm =)
HiNaL

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