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charmee

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Posted: 15 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: cutekins
lol
jhansi ki rani....

u made last holi rememder me

thanx 4 the pm

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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yeah...even i love dat jhansi ki rani dialouge😛 thanx for d sweet comment..

will cont soon..

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charmee

@charmee_sammy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: surbhi123

sorry for late comment dear............

awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee , fantastic , lovely and mindblowingggg... 👏👏👏👏👏 👏👏👏

sam entry was just too good and awesome..................

gunji does nt believe samrat...

par no prob jaan hi jayegi kabhi na kabhi......

loved it a lot

keep it up dear

continueeee soonnn...jaan......................

meeeeeeee waiting for it eagerly....😛

awwwwwwwwwwww surbhi...i really love ur comments yaar😃😃😳

thanx....m glad u lykd sam'e entry...

yeah...usse kabhi na kabhi to jaanke maana hi hoga...ki sam me itni saari qualities hai😉

yeah...will try to cont soon..😊

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charmee

@charmee_sammy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Luv-a mystrey
Ok finally i read it....................*sign of releif*............
Awesum jaan loved it..............
Haye gunji doesn't beleive ke sam mein itni qualities hai............😆😳
Dying to see what happens when they meet................
Update first jaana.............
Ab to tu kar hi degi........😉
Awesum indedd............👏

finally...finally...tune comment kar hi diya...!!!!

ab jaake mai nxt updt kar sakti hun...

thanx...i knoe u'll lyk it...m not at all glad...lol😆

sorry jaana...u'll hav to wait a lil more for sajan's meet...

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Anindita

@MyArchangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy
finally...finally...tune comment kar hi diya...!!!!
ab jaake mai nxt updt kar sakti hun...

thanx...i knoe u'll lyk it...m not at all glad...lol😆

sorry jaana...u'll hav to wait a lil more for sajan's meet...

LOL..............😆
Thik hai i can wait 4 the sajan meet but not for 222222 long ok?????????
OMG i love your writing yaar..............
Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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charmee

@charmee_sammy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: samrat_anki
samrat ki entry😳

awesome update charu...
loved it

thanx anki... glad u lykd d entry dear..😊

Originally posted by: mohitsanaya4evr
awesome yaar😉

thanx dear....

Originally posted by: meens1981
hey cute ud charmee.....cool work😉

thanx dear...glad u lykd it😊

Originally posted by: marisol45
amazing update.
just waiting fr sam to reach morena.
continue soon😊

thanx dear..

yeah...sam will soon reach morena😉

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani
chramee good update ... aab tho sajan ki bhi entry karwa de jaldese.😍

thanx dear...sajan ki entry...u'll hav to wait a bit😉

Originally posted by: LOVEBARBIE
awesome thanks for pm

thanx for lyking it😊

Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowowow tht was amazing part i love it

awwwwwwwww thanx a lo dear...glad u lykd it..😊

Originally posted by: sweetsonal156
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeee
.please continue next part soon.can't wait to read sajan meeting....

thanx sonal...m really glad...gr888 ff writters lyk u lykd it..😃

yeah will cont soon..

bt u'll will hav to wait a bit for sajan's meet..

Originally posted by: riteshhere
Good going... continue 😊

thanx...ya willl cont soon...😊

Originally posted by: Aditi_sajanfan
superb part!!
thanx or d pm!!!

plz update soon!!

thanx dear...yeah will cont soon😊

Originally posted by: doyel_777
BEAutifullllllll!!!!!!!!! loved it yaar!!! 🤗

thanx doyel...glad u lykd it😛

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26
niceeeee updatee charmzz plss yaar do cont it soonnn

thanx for lyking it dear...will try to cont soon..😊

Originally posted by: cutekins
hey charmee
sorry 4 replying so late
exams r going on

but nice update

hey its very ok yaar...

no need to say sorry...

thanx...m glad u lykd it😊

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charmee

@charmee_sammy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: Luv-a mystrey

LOL..............😆
Thik hai i can wait 4 the sajan meet but not for 222222 long ok?????????
OMG i love your writing yaar..............
Hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

arre not a long wait yaar....i meant ki nxt updt me dey won't meet...may be dey'll meet in nxnt to nxt updt😊

awwwwwwwwwwwww u loved my writting

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Anindita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy
arre not a long wait yaar....i meant ki nxt updt me dey won't meet...may be dey'll meet in nxnt to nxt updt😊
awwwwwwwwwwwww u loved my writting😳😳😳

Yes you write januable stuff jaan.....!!!!😊

Edited by Luv-a mystrey - 15 years ago

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charmee

@charmee_sammy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#198

Updt 5
sorry..guys for d late updt...!!!! thanx tonnnnnnnnn for d precious comments...thanx for ur love n support guys...
so lets start wid d nxt updt...

flashbck...

s:tym for announsement...

d:yeah...chalo....

s:hello...hello...hello guys....m glad to have u all here...
so...guys...enjoying independence....???😉
u:yaar sam tune bola nai...aaj independence day bhi hzi...?????😕
d:jus shut up dodo n listen...
s:....yeah independence...
independence...from studies...lectures...professors..assignments...etc etc...
no more studies...tym to chill...n enjoy..!!!😉😆
d:yeas guys...now...only parties...fun n enjoyment...tym to rock..
m: [to himself] ye log baat to aise kar rahe hai...jaise...pure saal bahot padhai ki ho...pure saal bhi to in logo ne enjoy kiya tha...inhe khud bhi nai yaad hoga..aaj tak kitne lectures attend kiye honge...canteen me 100% attendance aur class me...0.0001%😆😆😆
muje to abhi shak hai..ye log pass kaise ho gaye..😕
s:so guys...enjoy d party...

scene shifts to gunur's room...
g:di plz muje mumbai nai aana...mai yahi thik hun...
n:gunjan...muje kuch nai sunna mai yaha tuje lene aayi hun...ab aage ki padhai tu mumbai me hi karegi...
g:par di mai yahi...morena me rehkar padhna chahti hun...
n:gunjan tu mujpar vishwas karti hai naa....mai keh rahi hun..to chalna mumbai...
g:di tum par muje pura vishwas hai...par mumbai par, vaha ke logo par nahi...
n:gunjan....vaha ke log ache hai...
g:par di muje....muje...muje nai aana....
n:mai tujse puch nai rahi hun gunjan...tuje bata rahi hun...mumbai to tuje ana hi hoga...
g:par di...
n:gud nite gunjan..!!!!!!!!!
[nupur sleeps...avoiding gunjan's refusal....den gunjan too sleeps..though both of dem r still awake....]

mumbai...sam's house after party....
m:so samrat mai chalta hun...
s:dude...itni kya jaldi hai...wait for few mins naa..!!
m:nahi samrat...i think i should leave now...
s:kya baat..too eager to go...kahin aisa to nai...ki tumhe party me acha nai laga...
shayad bore hogaye hoge..???
m:no dude...independence to tum logo ke liye hai...muje assignments compkete karna hai...!!
aur tumhari party...maza aya...i wasn't at all bored..
s:thanx dude...bt thodi der ruk jao...assignment complete karna is not a big deal for u rite? n ab wese bhi thak gaye hoge...assignment kal complete kar lena...
m:i know samrat par....sirf meri baat nai hai...assignment to mai yunhi complete kar lu...par...
s:par....
m:par iss baar...nupur ke liye bhi...
s:oooohhhhhh nupur ke liye....😳...ok den u can go....
m:samrat aisi koi baat nai hai.....nupur ko ye topic par data nai mil rahe the to wo mera assignment copy karne waali hai....aur uday bhi...
s:oh...ohk...!!!
m:ok so....i'll leave....
s:yeah...sure...we'll meet tomorrow in collg...
d-u-b: ok sam even will leave...
s:ok...so kal collg me...
d:shaam ko pub...party...n movie...
d:fir dinner...
s:ok guys....
[dey all leave....]

scene shifts to bauji n sam's dad's convo...
b:to fir kab karwa rahe ho humari mulakat...samrat se...??

sd:hmmmmmm....samrat ko jald hi yahaan morena bulwa lunga...

vese bhi...unke vocations chal rahe hai...

b:haan...ye thik hai...bhaiii mai to samrat se milne ke liye bahot utsahit hun..!!

sd:samrat ko to bula lunga....par mere pass samrat ki tasveer hai...

b:kya baat hai..!! to fir kal hi uski tasveer dekhenge...subeh...sabse pehle..!!!

sd:thik hai...mai aaj hi samrat ko cal kardunga...shayad kal tak wo morena pahoch bhi jaye...

aur baaki tasveer to tum kal dekh hi loge..!!!
b:thik hai....bas ab kal ka intazaar hai....

later sam's dad....calls him.....
ring ring...ring ring....

s:hello
sm:samat beta...
s:dad aap...namastey dad...how r u..???
n where r u..???
sm:relax son...mai morena me hun..remember maine kaha tha...hamara purana ghar bechna hai...
s:oh yeah dad...
sm:so...hhows my son..
s:as always dad...cool..!!!
sm:missing dad...
s:ofcourse dad....aap india aaye n mujse milne se pehle morena chale gaye...ofcourse miss u dad...
sm:gr88 den why don't u cum to morena...
s:me...???!!!
sm:yeah...actually tumse milna bhi tha...aur yahan property ko leke n papers ko leke kuch problem hai...so u can help me...
s:bt dad...muje in sab me koi knowledge nai hai...how can i...???
sm:oh c'mon son...i know my son very well...he can do everything...he is capable of doing everything rite...
s:yeah rite dad....bt i really don't want to cum...
plzzzzz dad...
sm:cum naa son..
s:dad i don't hav any problem...par aap to jaante hi hai naa....abhi hi 12th khatam hua hai...
dad...need sum tym to chill, party, relax...spend sum tym wid frnds...
n dad...aap to mumbai aa hi rahe ho in few days rite...
n m sure u will sought out d problem...
sm:i knoe beta...tumhe apni life enjoy karni hai...aur mai yaha sab sambhal bhi lunga...bt tum hote...it would be much reasier for me to handle...
s:dad wo...
sm:ohk....mai yaha sab sambhal lunga....u enjoy ur life....n i guess...i'll cum der within a week...or more...
s:ok dad...m really sorry...
sm:ok bye son..
s:bye dad....love u..
sm:love u too beta...

scene shifts to gunur's room...
g:diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
n:kya hua gunjan..???😲
g:di kal...
n:kal kya...???
g:di wo...
n:kal kya kuch hone waala hai...tu itni nervous kyu ho rahi hai..???
g:di...
n:hmmmmmmmmm
g:tum bhul gayi di...kal mera result hai...
n:hey bhagwan...yeh ladki bhi naa..!!!!
g:di tum hass kyu rahi ho...!!!
n:gunjan ye koi pehli baar hai ki tera result hai....to itni nervous kyu ho rahi hai..!!]
g:di kyunki kal mera result aane waala hai..!!!
n:to tuje kua darr...tu to morena me 1st aayegi...dekh lena...to tuje kiss baat ki nervousness hai...
g:pata nai di....muje kal ko lekar kuch ajeeb lag raha hai...
n:gunjan tu bhi naa...tera result acha hi hoga...tu darr mat...aur chain ki neend soja...
g:par di...
n:gunjan...
g:thik hai di...[both sleeps...]

sam's bedrum....
s:to himself...muje dad ko iss tarah manna nai karna chaiye tha...dad ne mujpe trust karke muje apni help karne bula ya aur mai..!!!!
s:par....agar nahi bhi gaya to kya hua....muje yakeen hai..dad jo bhi problem ho...wo solve kar lenge....
s:aur...fir maine sab ko kaha bhi hai...kal canteen me chill karenge...masti mazak karenge...
fir pub....movie...party karenge....!!agar mai kal nai gaya to sab ko bura lagega....
s:aur dad ko...unhe bhi to bura laga hoga...!!!
s:par mai yaha frnds ke sath masti larna chahta hun..
s:par masti karne ke liye to pura vocation hai..!!
s:aur agar mai chala bhi gaya to mera dil to yahi laga hoga....mumbai me...
s:par dad...wo inte saalon baad india aaye hai...aur mujse milna bhi chahte hai....aur samrat tu bhi to dad ko miss kar raha hai....
s:muje morena jaana chaiye.....

sam picks his cell...n calls dad....
sm:to himself...seeing samrat's no. flashing in d screen...
mai jaanta tha....tum call zarur karoge....aur yaha aane ke liye maann bh jaoge...i knew my son...u won't refuse me...for anything....
picks d call....
s:hello dad...
sm:yeah son...any prob...
s:no dad no prob...i think..
sm:wat beta...???
s:dad i'll cum to morena....
sm:oh...dats great my son...mai jaanta tha...tum apne dad ko niraash nahi karoge...
s:thik hai dad to mai aaj hi nikalta hun...aur kal subeh tak morena pahoch jaunga...
sm:thanx beta...thanx for cuming...i really needed ur help..aur tumse milna bhi hai...
s:yeah dad...even m dieing to meet u...
sm:yeah...
s:so cyaa tomorrow morning dad...
sm:gr88...will be waiting son...
s:ohk dad...gud nite....[gud nite disconnects d call...]

sm: to himself...tumhe yaha kamse bulana to ek bahana hai beta....
mai chahta hun..tum yaha aao...aur gunjan se milo....
mai jaanta hun...gunjan hi tumhare liye sahi ladki hai...
tum dono ek sath bahot ache lagoge...
mai jaanta hun...jab tum gunjan se miloge...to...tumhe bhi yakeen ho jayega....ki gunjan se achi ladki tumhe kabhi mil hi nai sakti....

gunjan....while leing on d bed....
g:to herself....pata nahi kyu di...par muje ek ajeeb tarah ki baicheni ho rahi hai....
jaise kal kuch to alag hone waala hai meri zindagi me...
jaise kal ke baad....meri zindagi ek alag hi rukh le legi....
kuch to naya hone waala hai meri zindagi mai....
ek ajeeb si feeling...ho rahi hai....thodi bechaini...thodi..excitment....
bas ab kal ka intazaar hai...jaane kal kya hone waala jhai...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ok guys...hope u'll lyked d updt....
so nxt updt....sajan meet...😳😳
i knoe u'll must be too excited....
n m too nervous...i hope...i be able to write well...i go to u'll expectation...m to nervous to write abt sajan's 1st meet...*fingers crossed* i hope i write well..!!!

Edited by charmee_sammy - 15 years ago