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Posted: 15 years ago
aishh. epilogue part 2? pwease update..pretty please with a cherry on top⭐️

hehe <3

~Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Naina2127

aishh. epilogue part 2? pwease update..pretty please with a cherry on top⭐️

hehe <3

~Naina

Oye! I dont see an update coming from you either, missy!😡
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

Oye! I dont see an update coming from you either, missy!😡



o so very true, im working on it i swear, i didnt like how the first draft ended so here i come!
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Naina: ur comment was so amazingly long, i shall just copy and paste it lol

[awww. =/...ps i imagined suku <3 i loved her as dr. riddhima, but still point being love can suck sometimes. -_-] si😔
[hehehe i lovveed Minnie :) very cute :)] isnt she?
[aww...one can only imagine the pain and i think this entire scene was penned our beautifully... not like happy beautiful, but sad beautiful, as i currently have tears welling up in my eyes as im rereading this...and her emotions and feelings were captured amazingly. 👏]
[hehe one of the few times i was actually smiling! yay! you included rahuull :) i hope you throw in muskaan elsewhere, but still at least rahul is present :)]]
[Even though I'm an SR fan, I'm also a complete Armaan fan, and this totally made me fall in love with him as a character once again...]

K. WOWOWOWOW. AMAZING. Like i shouldn't like this because it was a sad update, but it was written very well 👏👏 and yes, you definitely were able to pull off the emotions, convey the sadness, and just that entire melancholy atmosphere with perfection. and i genuinely had tears in my eyes reading the update, specifically that last paragraph which i read, and reread because it was just i loved it.

And. im not going to go into too much detail, but I LOVE ARMAAN. like totally serious, he's amazing and just an amazing character. his personality, his smile idk it was just awww i fell in love with him all over again :)

so i definitely loved the update and please post the next part soon!

and hehe sheena! I'm firsst, back to my position at the top 😆😆😆 :)

Cheers!
~Naina

Nainu, i give up, i love long comments, but theyre so damn hard to reply to!! so i gave up and heres ur reply:

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUU muskaan isnt showing up:( sorry...

yes i love my armaan too, thats y he ended while it was still good lol
thank you sooo much for the long comment sweets, and for the prodding lol


never mind, i already told u 😆
Edited by malluangel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute.arsh

i dont have words to describe

i was not expecting to end like this
but armaan is a larger then life thanx god dmg dint go like this
i am still crying
awesome part



i cant tell if thats an insult or compliment lol. either way, thank you!!!

Originally posted by: MagicalKash

What???? You killed him????!! 😲
plz don't do that! Let this be some bad dream!! Don't make him die like this.. He deserves to get the happiness in his life!!!

Now coming to the update it was a sad one alright.. But still beautiful nonetheless . You write beautifully! Do continue soon!



he's getting happiness... in a different way.....
lol thank youuuuuuu

Originally posted by: romiosugar

Aish, yes I am kinda surprised to see your long update that too really quick !!! But but you have done it beautifully dear :)) It's really awesome. I throughly enjoyed reading it. Keep updating....I am forward to read more ann more update😳 Awesome dowsome update👏


haha sabz, u n everyone else. but thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks 4 da pm



thank youuuuuuuuu

Originally posted by: nikita_88

AIsh reserved shall be back!

*Unreserved*

Aish The epilouge was beautiful, I can't wait for you to finish it off.

I loved how you brought minnie back and a girl who fell in love with Armaan and Rahul as well. I loved the SidMaan dynamics, it was beautifully written.

I can't believe this is the end of your FF, one more part but I am sure going to miss waiting to see what happens next,

Anyways post the next part soon and then I can bug you about a new FF! 😆



geez, u really want me to be gone
alright....😭

lol thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

and dont worry that will be up soon!

Originally posted by: sidma_love

Aish 🤗

Awesome update & a long one too😉

Loved it


thank you harshu!!!

Originally posted by: Angelic_J

Awww this part was so sad😔😔😔 Why coudn't he have his happily ever after?😔



so impatient.....😉


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

So sad.......Sorry I cant say much........I never really liked SR, just thought cuz he was Abhi's brother, he would be cute........

Where are AN? Shouldnt she have been here while her bff was dying?
So if this is part 1, cannot wait for p.2!!!!
Love, sheena



aww sheena, come on girl!
well yes, but then rememeber, armaan was concerned only about rhidz n sid. an unfortunately didnt pass his mind 😕

Originally posted by: ...Noorya...

OMG GIRL!

i am just sooo speechless...
i loved every part of ur FF
coz first bcoz i love SR
and second coz ur a MINDBLOWIN writer
but this part......😲
OMG this part was the BEST!
everythin was here
love, pain, friendship, sadness.....
and dude every emotion was really
very well written👏👏👏...
Gosh i felt really stupid cryin in front of screen😆😆
but u seriously did and AWESOME job dear
i was actually imaginin all the scenes
Bein a Sid fan
i just Loved Armaan in this part...
and specialy his convo with Minnie
when he makes his lil wish list...
that was terribly sad😭😭
And the last paragraph....
that remind me of
Kal Ho Naa Ho...
when at the end SRK dies...
OMG readin this i was cryin like a baby yaar
😭
Hats off to u dear
it was my fav part and u did and
FANTABULOUS JOB!
PS : i hope this comment is enough long😆
and i was actually surprised that
u updated soo soon😆😆



o thank you, ur comment brought tears to my eyes!
i tried really hard, thanks sooooooooooooooooo much for the appreciation!
ok whats with everyone being surprised... god! lol

Originally posted by: divi4u

Hey Aish

very nice update thnx 4 d PM uodate soon waiting 4 ur PM



thank youuuuuuuuu


Originally posted by: StarshineHues

OMG............I just read the entire story in one go........it was so heart-wrenchingly beautiful. One of the most beautiful stories I've read, ever.

-Aditi



omg thank you so much for the effort!

Originally posted by: kiran255

Very unexpected and very sad update

was not expecting at all , i was thinking of sid-rid romance
and what u give me a dying man :((
but what can i say its u who always surprise me with un expected updates .
now coming to the write up very well written
perfect emotions , gr8 combo of new characters
gr8 job girl
u can actually become a gr8 writer
mark my words
cuz ppl are flooded with gr8 ideas but giving them words is always hard
looking forward for the next update



yea... im unpredictible! thank you thank you thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
i loveeeee your comment 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

First of all:

The AN FC/writing contest. Check it out guys, Naina and I are writing! Hopefully now that things have settled into a rhythm, we can continue.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1438785/an-writing-challenge-closed-update-pg-150

Secondly: And a vm by Arp, I didn't ask her permission, sorry Arp! It's not for anything, I just really love it lol

https://www.youtube.com/user/arp04srocks#p/u/4/Rz74SPSTBd8

Thirdly: My Annual Rant

Today is a sad day, it is. I mean, not only has DMG officially ended on September 10th, 2010 [Don't argue with me. It Ended. And everyone lived happily ever after. Live with it.] Basically I won't be watching DMG until they come up with its season 3/sequel called Siddhimaland. Now my ff is ending too L aren't we all sad?

Well too bad cuz I have another one all in store 😃

Anyway after I threw that bit that hopefully no one expected in all your faces last time, then gave u all heart attacks by updating so early, I held back on this one. Because I wanted to leave a mark… and ended up brutally butchering what I had beyond point of recognition! Yay ME!


Ok, so this next part, i can guarantee most SR fans are going to beat the shit out of me, like its guaranteed. so just go with the flow people, leave all hate messages in the comment box.

ENJOY!

Ps @Naina and Sheena, thank you for filling this thread with massages and conversations. U guys rock lol.

R.I.P: this dude

Introducing: hello sweetness!!!

And this prettiness:

EPILOGUE PART 2:

Winds stirred the curtains as a sleeping body awoke. Lazily stretching his limbs the young man flipped around in bed, revealing his toned abs and chiseled face. His eyes blinked open slowly as he yawned, falling on the nearby clock; the dark gray orbs widened as he read the time. He leapt out of bed, thinking, 'aaj tho main gaya!' In less than ten minutes he had showered and was bounding down the stairs; diving into the bright yellow sports car courtesy his parents, he rushed to work.

"Where is Dr. Armaan?" Chocolate brown eyes raked inquisitively over the five interns lined up in front of her. Looking down the interns exchanged glances with each other; once again the generally undisputed leader of their gang was late!

"Where is Dr. Armaan?" the question was repeated, this time more forcefully. The man in question suddenly appeared, skidding to a stop next to the other interns, who stood facing the senior doctor.

"Oh!" She exclaimed, "Thank you Dr. Armaan! You have graced us with your presence! We all waiting for you, because that is, of course, the only thing we have to do here at Sanjeevani."

"Di- I mean Maam, I'm-"

"No Excuses Dr. Armaan" Dr. Ashita interrupted. As punishment you will have night duty and rectal exams, am I clear?"

He looked down sullenly, "Yes maam."

"Good." She turned to the other interns, assigning them their duties and heading off to complete her own. Giving Armaan a pat on the back, Mayank whispered, "Sorry dude," before walking off hand in hand with his girlfriend and partner for the day Nupur, Maan and Geet threw him sympathetic looks before walking off together. Only Shilpa snickered quietly at his misfortune, in return he threw her a murderous look. In reply she shrugged, walking off; he glared after her, muttering "'chudail," through his clenched teeth.

"He didn't!" A familiar voice came from behind him, it continued gasping, and "He did! You know," the voice said sagely, "the last person I called chudail was you mother, and you obviously know how that ended up!"

Armaan turned to face his father, standing behind him, "yea." He replied. "But you and mom are different." He turned to look after Shilpa, "I HATE her! Thinks she's some big shot doctor, walking in with I'm too good for you attitude and…" he continued mumbling about her as he headed to general ward.

Siddhant Modi leaned onto the nurses' station counter, watching his son fondly, mischief stirring in his mind. A devious yet wily grin emerged on his face, his son wasn't letting down on family traditions, everyone knew Modi men had once wanted to kill their wives!

…….

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As he headed to the general ward, Armaan changed direction, turning he stormed towards the private offices, bursting through the one with a door that read 'Rhiddima Modi.' Gray eyes that matched his gazed up at him, her eyebrow rising inquisitively at her son. He stepped in front of her desk, she watched on curiously as he pointedly took off his lab coat, stethoscope, ID card, and pager, setting them on the table in front of her, signifying that technically, he wasn't a doctor anymore. Arms folded he slumped into a chair in front of her.

"Mom why didn't you wake me up?" he whined.

Rhiddima burst out laughing at his antics, he was twenty two, but like his father, half the time acted five. The arrival of Armaan Modi barely three days after the demise of Armaan Malik had his father so emotionally and physically exhausted, that in a state of semi deliria Siddhant had ended up naming his only son after the only male name that had been running through his head at the moment- Armaan. And somewhere in Siddhant's fatigued mind it made sense, because he still believed that Armaan the baby wouldn't exist without Armaan the man, in a way it was poetic justice…kind of. It made sense when he thought of it, and it had seemed to make sense when he explained it to Rhiddima.

"Mom it's not funny, ok?" He said with an adorable frown on his face. Rhiddima sobered up, her laughter dying down, "you were sleeping." She said.

"Well obviously that's why I need you to wake me up!"He snapped angrily, "phirse uss Shilpa ki saamne-"

"Armaan." Rhiddima interrupted his rant before he started, "I'm pretty sure you're supposed to be on duty right now, so go be a doctor. And Armaan, you're twenty two, I think you can handle getting up by yourself, you're a big boy."

"But MOM!"

"No buts! Go."

She watched endearingly as he pouted, angrily stuffed on his lab coat and grabbing everything else, stalked out of her cabin, still grumbling. On the way, Armaan passed his dad, who guffawed at the expression on his son's face. Siddhant walked into Rhiddima's cabin, carefully shutting the door and turning to face her, "he got to chudailllll" he squealed like a teenage girl, doing a little jig.

"Siddhant you're acting twelve." She said.

"You're just worried you're going to loooooose." He said, grinning, "Remember now, vacation in Mauritius for two weeks, no less, can be more, but no less."

"Sid-" She said warily as he approached her.

"You agreed." He interrupted; he gave her a quick peck and pranced out. "Batameez!" she whispered at his receding back. He stuck him head back in, "I heard that Mrs. Chudail Batameez Modi."

"SID!"

"Bye!"

TEN MONTHS LATER

Armaan walked up and down the hospital corridors, checking for his parents, where had they gone? He finally found him sister, drinking coffee with her fianc, Yuvraj Dev, and their cousin Niti, "Di! Where are mom and dad?"

Ashi set her mug down, looking him up and down, he looked plain frantic! "Well…mom headed home a couple minutes ago looking mad, therefore reasonably, dad should be heading home with her or after her apologizing profusely for something or another. Basically you should try the house."

"Thanks." he said as he rolled his eyes, stalking out, she couldn't have just said the house first thing.

Ashi and Niti burst out giggling at his receding back, Yuvi shook his head, it had taken him long enough.

…….

Armaan stood respectfully in front of his parents, looking nervously at both of them, "Mom," he began, "Dad. I have something to tell you. Well ask you."

Siddhant leaned back in his seat, his curious but calm exterior covering up his real feelings. Inside he was jumping up and down shouting "MAURITIUS HERE I COME!"

Beside him Rhiddima sighed silently, already calculating when they could take their vacation without conflicting with any major cases. And Armaan would be staying alone for two weeks; she should get a house sitter…

Armaan cleared his throat again, making certain he had full attention from his parents. "I…umm… we… Shilpa. I-"

Siddhant rolled his eyes impatiently, "just say it, son." Rhiddima nodded in agreement.

"ShilpaandIloveeachotherandwewouldliketogetmarried! Oh, and couldyoutalktohermomandmeandad?" He finished anxiously

Rhiddima and Siddhant exchanged glances, unable to hold it in any longer Siddhant jumped up and gave Armaan a bear hug, yelling, "MAURITIUS HERE I COME BABY!!!!!!! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!" he pulled back, still holding onto an amazingly confused Armaan, "and just in time too! This is when the water is perfectly clear and the coconuts are ideal!"

"Wha…"

Rhiddima explained, "Your father and I made a bet. He said that you would fall in love with Shilpa, and I said he couldn't be sure. So we bet on it, and his consolation prize is a trip to Mauritius. Congratulations by the way."

"You knew?"

"It was obvious beta." She replied, Siddhant was still busy dancing excitedly, but managed to calm down enough to join the conversation.

"You see, your mother got me arrested um... two? Yes two times, or was it three?" He said, "Not to mention beat me up any chance she got. We hated each other. And if you ask your Uncle and Aunt, both sets, they'll tell you they hated each other too!" he laughed suddenly, turning to Rhiddima he asked, "you remember our fifth anniversary? When you all got drunk? Bhabhi spent the whole elevator ride telling bhai she would kill him haha!"

Armaan stared at his parents, feeling aghast. Everything just going too fast for him to grasp. They knew? Arrested? Fights? And wait did dad just say mom got drunk? "What?"

Rhiddima glared at her husband, "Nothing. So anyway, you want us to talk to the Malhotras? No problem beta!" She gave her son a hug, "I'm proud of you."

"Thanks…"

Siddhant gave Armaan another hug, "Way to keep Modi tradition son!"

Armaan stared after them open mouthed as they headed to the kitchen, his father's arm already snaking around his mother's shoulders. They were one unpredictable couple. And then he realized what had just happened. HE WAS GETTING MARRIED!

…..

Siddhant and Rhiddima grimaced together as a shout erupted from the living room, followed by a loud thud. Yup, it had just hit him what he had asked for. They smiled at each other fondly, her head rested on his shoulder as they watched the sun set from their kitchen window. They would go check to make sure he hadn't hurt himself, but not now… in a while. For now it was current Mr. and Mrs. Modi time.

………

"Mrs. Malhotra! How are you?" Rhiddima headed determinedly towards the woman who was slightly older than her.

"Mrs. Modi! I am fine, thank you so much for inviting my husband and me." The woman replied with a smile.

Rhiddima gave her a sweet smile, it couldn't hurt to talk up the mother, 'baap tho bilkul gabbar ki tarah khada hai' she thought before replying, "It was our pleasure. Siddhant is around here somewhere I do believe."

"No, no it's alright; he must be busy with all these preparations going on."

"O please, this has all been ready since last night; I don't know where he keeps on disappearing to…"

Her eyes scanned the room again, passing over, and then returning to fall on the side door directly across from her. The Malhotra's thankfully had their backs to that door; otherwise they would have surely seen Siddhant and Armaan Modi crouched beside it, peeking around the corner to observe her conversation.

"Mrs. Modi-" Mrs. Malhotra continued.

"Please call me Rhiddima," Rhiddima replied distractedly,

"Yes, Rhiddima, you can call me Anita, you have two children right? Armaan and…"

"Ashita, yes, two. But sometimes I feel like I have three," smiling amiably she returned her attention back to the Malhotra's again, Anita smiled back at her tightly; she had a gabbar of a husband, poor thing. Behind them, Armaan and Siddhant still crouched, now seemingly bickering.

"I'll be right back," Rhiddima said to the Malhotra's, Anitah smiled, Mr. Malhotra's grave face didn't change.

……....

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"What are you doing?"

Siddhant and Armaan froze, their eyes widened as they realized they had been caught; looking down like meek children they straightened up. Siddhant dared to look up first, he had no choice, Armaan was already trying to hide behind him. "Rhi-Rhi-Rhiddima, we…"

She cocked her eyebrow questioningly, "we?"

Armaan rolled his eyes at his stuttering father, pushing him out of the way, Armaan asked the question running in both their minds, "what did the Malhotras say?!"

"Nothing. We barely talked."

"MOM!"

Rhiddima shook her head, and then slipped out the door, shutting it gently. "Look I refuse to just march up and ask for their daughter's hand!"

"Why?" Armaan whined.

Rhiddima's eyes turned to slits, "humph! You know what! Just do it yourself!" With a stomp of her feet she turned and walked off.

"Great." Siddhant said, "thank you," glaring at his son before he set off after her, "Rhiddima!"

………

Siddhant cleared his throat before reaching for the microphone; he grinned at the score of eyes focused on him. "HELLO!" he shouted out.

"HEYYYYYY," a sea of voices, both young and old screamed in reply.

"Are we having fun?!?"

"YESSSSSSSSSSS," the crowd smiled at him gleefully.

"Good," he grinned back, "as you all know, this is a really exciting week for us." The crowd roared in reply. "It's Armaan's birthday!" the room erupted in applause.

"And, the interns have all taken their exams…" the room was filled with sighs of relief. "So, Let's Celebrate!"

The room was filled with cries of excitement; the Modi's were known for throwing fun, exciting parties, it was practically a rule that everyone had to have fun. The dance floor was constantly covered with groups of friends, both and young and old, the tables littering the hall were filled with friends and family who sat enjoying each other's company. Siddhant, Atul, Yuvraj and Abhimanyu had each shown up early, along with Rhiddima, Anjali, Naina, and Nikkita. They were soon joined by Ashi, Geet, Niti, and Nupur, all escorted by Niti and Nupur's older brother Aarvind who, taking after his dad, Abhi, was the universal older brother. Now it was time for the younger guys to make their entrance, Armaan had left earlier without one. Sid and Abhi appeared next to their respective wives, "where are the boys?" Sid asked, "they should've been here ages ago!"

"They wanted to be fashionably late I guess Uncle," Nupur thought out loud. Siddhant grinned at his favorite niece, "Well they must be the hottest things on the market!"

Rhiddima, already enveloped in the crook of his arm, laughed softly. Ashi rolled her eyes, "Bro probably lost his keys again," she said.

"Or they got lost and refused to ask for directions," Geet said adding her input.

"God, this is just embarrassing, it's a party for Armaan and the interns, where are half of them?" Abhi groaned.

As if in answer to his question, the double doors to the hall swung open, to revealing a dashing Armaan, dressed to kill in a light yellow shirt covered with a black sports jacket. It sounded like it would make him look like a bumblebee, but this was Armaan Modi, he could do anything. That and he really liked the color yellow…

Behind him emerged Maan, seeing him looking just as dashing in his signature black and black mix, his mother Anjali awed. Behind Maan came Mayank and Yuvi, as usual wrestling with each other. Noticing the open door they stood up, Mayank straightening his red button up shirt and Yuvi fixing his almost identical dark blue one. Mayank's mother Naina doted on her son and nephew, and always ended up shopping for both of them.

The guys sauntered over, Armaan's eyes scanning the room for Shilpa, Mayank winking slyly at Nupur, and Maan smiling sweetly at a grinning Geet. Yuvi, who refused to let his guard down till he was officially married, went over to Siddhant and Rhiddima first, seeing this Ashi giggled. The group conversed for a while but soon separated, everyone had their own agendas.

……….

The partygoers stopped moving as suddenly the lights cut off, visible in the room was only a spotlight, shining on a seemingly petrified Shilpa who shot constant glances to her parent's faces. Her father did not look happy. That did not deter the man of the hour however, Armaan strode confidently towards her, signaling the DJ and he held out his hand to her.

She looked at it hesitantly, taking another glance around before moving to clasp it. He smiled reassuringly at her, giving it a gentle squeeze as he pulled her towards him. His parents weren't going to do it, no problem, 'he would do it Armaan style,' he thought as he winked with devilish charm.

Tum Jo Mile: [Thank you VIDYA for the awesome VM 😛

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aY4LQTggGng

The hall erupted with applause as the song ended, and Armaan and Shilpa stood alone in the center of the dance floor, eyes refusing to part. Siddhant and Rhiddima's eyes flew from the couple to Shilpa's parents, then back to them again. Holding each other closer they rushed towards the young couple. And just in time too, Mr. Malhotra had just taken a deep breath, there was barely a second left before the screaming started when Siddhant yelled, "I CAN EXPLAIN!"

By God, I know you wish you knew the rest of that story. But that it just that, another story, not this one. In this one, you are now free to assume everyone lived happily ever after and Siddhant and Rhiddima aka Siddhima grew old together. Because Fate can be Cruel, but it's not inhumane, only humans are. We always have the ability to choose our paths, it's just sometimes we don't see it. Fate just gives us our options, it's up to us to choose them. Now, ending on a happy not, take this really pretty song they ruined in DMG and imagine our beautiful couple to it.

Bheegi Si, Bhaagi Si:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kh6F_bm9bEE

For clarification, [Sheena 15 was too much, poor Nikki would be nonexistent]

THE KIDS:

Siddhima: Ashi Armaan

AN: Arvind Nupur Niti

YuNa: Geet Mayank

AA: Maan

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Ehem. First! Reserved :)

hehe sheena...frst again d:

*Edit*

Boo. I'm unreserving quite late pour moi, but unreserving just the same. Before I say anything about the epilogue as a whole...I want to mention some of my favorite parts. (LMAO.this sounds so formal...like i have a little speech written out🤣)

The AN FC/writing contest. Check it out guys, Naina and I are writing! Hopefully now that things have settled into a rhythm, we can continue.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1438785/an-writing-challenge-closed-update-pg-150

hehe thanks for mentioning this =D we'll definitely update soon!

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Uff..completely agree with your annual rant...btw, love the VM, but yes the rant. uff if the promo is the way the show is going to go -_- im done.

oh hehe no need to thank me and Sheena...we love spamming anyways😆😆😆

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The Actual Epilogue:

LMFAO. I didn't realize Dr. Ashita was like Sid-Riddhima's daughter, until like the middle of the epilogue...and then i had a moment hehe :)

"No Excuses Dr. Armaan" Dr. Ashita interrupted. As punishment you will have night duty and rectal exams, am I clear?"

o.O a mean sister....that's always awesome😆😆 rectal examss...hahaha poor armaan<333

ACK! You include Mayur AND Maaneet! hehe totototally love you for this🤗

Siddhant Modi leaned onto the nurses' station counter, watching his son fondly, mischief stirring in his mind. A devious yet wily grin emerged on his face, his son wasn't letting down on family traditions, everyone knew Modi men had once wanted to kill their wives!

hahahaha. i could tottallly imagine sid doing that and LMFAO Modi men and their wivesss hehe just realized how true that was 👏👏 awesome Aish for even recognizing that.....

The arrival of Armaan Modi barely three days after the demise of Armaan Malik had his father so emotionally and physically exhausted, that in a state of semi deliria Siddhant had ended up naming his only son after the only male name that had been running through his head at the moment- Armaan. And somewhere in Siddhant's fatigued mind it made sense, because he still believed that Armaan the baby wouldn't exist without Armaan the man, in a way it was poetic justice…kind of. It made sense when he thought of it, and it had seemed to make sense when he explained it to Rhiddima.

awww. that was a really sweet explanation and extremely nice of Siddhant to name his son Armaan...and in a weird way it does make sense...because at like first glance, you're like why would you name your son the same thing as your ex-lover? but then you realize he passed away, and he wasn't all that bad in the first place....😭 i wish Armaan didn't die....anyways. moving on. LMAO i think this is like the first FF where Armaan is Riddhima's son 🤣🤣 (even though it's not THE armaan it's still armaan)

Armaan stood respectfully in front of his parents, looking nervously at both of them, "Mom," he began, "Dad. I have something to tell you. Well ask you."

Siddhant leaned back in his seat, his curious but calm exterior covering up his real feelings. Inside he was jumping up and down shouting "MAURITIUS HERE I COME!"

Beside him Rhiddima sighed silently, already calculating when they could take their vacation without conflicting with any major cases. And Armaan would be staying alone for two weeks; she should get a house sitter…

Armaan cleared his throat again, making certain he had full attention from his parents. "I…umm… we… Shilpa. I-"

Siddhant rolled his eyes impatiently, "just say it, son." Rhiddima nodded in agreement.

"ShilpaandIloveeachotherandwewouldliketogetmarried! Oh, and couldyoutalktohermomandmeandad?" He finished anxiously

Rhiddima and Siddhant exchanged glances, unable to hold it in any longer Siddhant jumped up and gave Armaan a bear hug, yelling, "MAURITIUS HERE I COME BABY!!!!!!! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!" he pulled back, still holding onto an amazingly confused Armaan, "and just in time too! This is when the water is perfectly clear and the coconuts are ideal!"

"Wha…"

Rhiddima explained, "Your father and I made a bet. He said that you would fall in love with Shilpa, and I said he couldn't be sure. So we bet on it, and his consolation prize is a trip to Mauritius. Congratulations by the way."

LMFAOLMFAOLMFAO. wow. definitely the best part of the entiree epilogue =D Absolutely LOVED sid's excitement and enthusiasm, and like i could just picture armaan nervous, while sid and riddhima stare at him expectantly, waiting for him to blurt out something they already know😆😆😆 and yayy Mauritius! another honeymoon 😍😍

By God, I know you wish you knew the rest of that story. But that it just that, another story, not this one. In this one, you are now free to assume everyone lived happily ever after and Siddhant and Rhiddima aka Siddhima grew old together. Because Fate can be Cruel, but it's not inhumane, only humans are. We always have the ability to choose our paths, it's just sometimes we don't see it. Fate just gives us our options, it's up to us to choose them. Now, ending on a happy not, take this really pretty song they ruined in DMG and imagine our beautiful couple to it.


Danng. mad intense girl, but true and very very fitting. So I absolutely loved the epilogue and the entire story. But I do wish there was a tad bit more siddhima romance, but i do realize that the story was NOT about siddhima romance but about Armaan coming back......

I loved how you showed all the kids of all the couples and everything....people like me like closure in every sense of the word, and finding out who everyone was getting married to was honestly perfect😃😃

Great job with this FF...cannot waitt to read more by you =D And yeah i would be repeating myself so um Awesomio!


Cheers!

~Naina

Edited by Naina2127 - 15 years ago

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