My ff : Realisation of love (last part pg #30) - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
thanxs for PM cont sooooon it was gud!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 9
Gunjan is deeply hurted by all this thing........In that she mostly want to talk witn Nupur but she can't.............She was feeling very bad for treating Nupur like this..........She took a decision which have shaken the world of Samrat's..........
Gunjan : Samrat mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai?
Samrat : Bolo chashmish.........
Gunjan : Woh ab toh jo bhi hua maine usse accept karne ki bohot koshish ki par Samrat ab nahi..........
Samrat : Tum kehna kya cahti ho?
Gunjan : Mein morena ja rahi hun.........hamesha ke liye..........
Samrat : Par kyun chashmish..............?
Gunjan : Pata nahi.....mujhe yahan ukch accha nahi lag raha....Is mein Mayank ya dee ki koi galti nahi hai.........bas mujhe accha nahi lag raha hai..........
Samrat : Tum vahaan ja kar bui ko kya bolo gi?
Gunjan ; Woh maine abhi tak socha nahi hai.......Par tum uski chinta mat karo........Mein woh handle kar lungi........
Samrat : Chashmish tum kyun ja rahi ho??I mean tumhare bina mera kya hoga?
Gunjan : Kya???
Samrat : Kuch-Kuch nahi.................Kab ja rahi ho tum?
Gunjan : Kal shaam ki train se................
Samrat : Thik hai..............(felt realy bad)
Gunjan called Nupur to inform her also.................
Gunjan : Dee..............
Nupur : Gunjan-Gunjan..........tu kaise hai??Or itne din mujhse baat kyun nahi ki??Tu abhi bhi gussa hai mujhse??
Gunjan : Nahi dee.........Maine bas tumhe kuch batane ke liye phone kiya hai......
Nupur : Kya??
Gunjan : Mein.........mein Morena ja rahihun.............hamesha ke liye....
Nupur : Kya???Gunjan dekh mein jnatyi hun tu mujhse abhi bhi gussa hai par...........
Gunjan : Nahi dee aise koi baat nahi hai............Bas mujhe yahan ab acchanahi algta............
Nupur : Dekh Gunjan tu mujhe chod kar nahi ja sakti..........
Gunjan : Nahi dee.....ab iss bar mujhe koi nahi rok sakta.....
Nupur : Gunjan but.............
Gunjan disconnected the call..............Gunjan was right no noe could stop her right now..............but in her deep voice she nkew that if Smarat stopped her as a his love anf friend..........then might be she'll leave.......................
Nupur is crying in her room....Mayank enters and get worried about her..........He sat beside her..............
Mayank : Nupur kya hua?
Nupur : Mayank..........
She said and hugged him tightly............
Mayank : Nupur kya hua???
Nupur : Mayank Gunjan ja rahi hai...........
Mayank : Kaha???
Nupur : Woh morena ja rahihai......humesha ke liye.............
Mayank : Par kyun?
Nupur : Pata nahi..............Mayank hume use rokna hoga...............Hum Gunjan ko aise jane nahi de sakte.......
Mayank : Nupur koi agar Gunjan ko rok sakta hai toh woh hai Samrat....
Nupur : Samrat????
Mayank : Gunjan ko shayad yeh pata ha chuka hai ki woh bhi Samrat se pyaar karti hai.........lekin usse apne pyaar pe vishwas nahi hai..........isiliye woh jana cahti hai.............
Nupur : Mayank ab hum kya karenge???
Mayank : Nupur, Gunjan rukegi o usse rokne wala koi or nahi khud Samrat hoga..............
Nupur was confused...................
It evening time.............Gunjan is in her room packing...........Then Samrat enters.............And stopped her from doing the packing.......
Gunjan : Samrat yeh tum............
Samrat : SssHhhh!!! Mere saath aao.............
Gunjan : Par kaha..............
Samrat : Bas chup chap mere saath aao...................
He took her hand..........And then he took her to the terest.......And Gunjan saw that the terest was fully decorated...........
Gunjan : Samrat yeh sab..............?
Samrat : Tum kal ja rahi ho chashmish........So maine socha usse pehle tumhar liye ek chot isi party kyun na hojye........ek aise party jisse celebrate sirf mein or tum karenge......
Gunjan : Pari ski kya zarurat thi Samrat..........?
Samrat : Zarurat thi..............Now no more qns ..........lets go...........
He put on the music..........And asked her to give her hand........They were dancing in a slow rythm..........Then Smarat said to her..........
Samrat : Mein tumhe bohot miss karunga chashmish........
Gunjan : mein bhi..........
[Then he turned her around.........She totally get lost into him.........He was holding her from back.........Gunjan kept her eyes closed........Then dont know what happens Smarat smelled her hairsoftly.........And he was so into her.........He touched her hand softly..........In that moment he so badly dont wanted her to go.........And Gunjan dont wanted to break this great feelings............She was feeling comfortable in his arms............Then touhed her earings...........He turned her around and this time they were facing eachothers face..........He moved further adn touched her cheeks softly........This was the first time Samrat had ever touched her like this.....Then started moving closer to her.............but then Gunjan thought it was wrong.......She stoppedhim and ran away fron there..............Samrat was dissappointd by himself.........
Samrat : Shit Samrat yeh tujhe kya hogaya tha.........Tu kyun uske itne kareeb gaya,,,,,,,kyun???
The answer was right inside him....But he didnt find......
Next evening...........Smarat came home from work.......And saw Gunjan was not there.........There was a note in the table............
The note,
Samrat sorry i'm leaving without telling you.It hard for me to leave you but i have to......I wishes you life time happiness...........Yuor best friend Gunjan............
Samrat : Tum hi agar zindagi mein nahi rahogi toh happiness kahan se aayengi........
Nupur : Sahi kaha.....
He heard Nupur's voice from backside so he turned and saw Nupur was standing there........He was shocked........
To be continued..............
Next part is gonig to be my last part..........😭
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Posted: 15 years ago

first to comment.......... yay

wat an update yaar........ 👏
mayur were too cute.......
glad gunjan forgave nupur.......
i hope everything will be fine by the next update........
plzzzzzz update soon........
and no thx for the pm.......😉......... cause i didn't get one........ 😉
love
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwwww komal. this was such a romantic update.
& y r u ending this FF. y soo sooon. plzzz continue. plzzz dont stop it.
abhi to actual kahani shuru hogi.

plzzzzzzzzzz think again.

loads of love
vinu
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update....but next part is the last part..??? cant believe it dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyyyy komal
Really lovely update
Samrat falling for gunjan but didn't realise
Plzzzzzx continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome, marvellous superb!!!!👍🏼👍🏼👏!!
luved it to da core...🤗
thanks for da pm...
do continue....
it was a cute one....
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh thanxs for PM cont soon giv last part as usuall best u r really gr8t thanxs for it n it was superb know he will feel the love for gunjan
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum just read the whole ff now!!!!loved it!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Komal
lovely Update.
loved both the jodies-specially mayur.
they are always sweet and cute.
loved mayank when he console nups.
wonderful part.
too good
keep it up

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