My ff : Realisation of love (last part pg #30) - Page 16

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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry forthe late reply read ur part.....was really nice..luks interesting- plzz update the next part soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 8................

Sajan's are at their house..............

Samrat is all tensed and was Gunjan.............

The weather outside was fantastic...........It wasn't raining but still the weather was very beautiful.....

Smarat is in the living room and Gunjan is in the kitchen......She got some work so she was going to upstairs but she accidently fell down and her ankle got injured..........She called out Smarat's name.......

Samrat looked at her and ran towards her...............

Gunjan was holding her elg and was in pain....He came and touch her ankel.

Smarat : Chashmish kya hua??????////

Gunjan : Smarat mera pairr ........bohot dard kar raha hai.............

Samrat heard her and then without wasting anytime he lifted her up in his arms........While doing that they got very cloes to eachother..............He took her in his arms and make his way to the room..........

They had a eye contact........They both lost into eachothers eyes...............

Gunjan totally forget about her pain...............

Then Samrat get her down on the bed and make her sit....He get the spray and hold Gunjan's leg on his hand.......

Gunjan felt realy good by that.........

He took her leg and sprayed the spray and then was touching her ankle smoothly......

Then he sat beside her..................

Samrat : Ab kaisa lag rahahai?

Gunjan : Pehle se behtar............

Smarat : Tum ruko mein doctor ko bula kar aata hun......

Gunjan : Nahi Samrat mein thik hun...........

Smarat : Are you sure?

Gunjan : Haan..............

Their's room window was open.........The fresh air was blowing inside..........Gunjan kinda cold..Smarat noticed that..............Firstly he placed her hair behind her ear......Gunjan was looking at him constantly.............Then Samrat went to the window and closed the window............And then said to Gunjan,...]

Samrat : Ab tumhe thand nahi lagegi..............

Gunjan : Mein khana lagati hun........

Samrat : Chashmish jab tumhare pass Smarat hai toh tumhe taklif uthane ki koi zarurat nahi..

Gunjan : Par Smarat...............

[Hep ut his finger on her lips.........]

Samrat : SssHhhhhhhhh...........Mein khana lata hun............

Then he went outside the room to the kitchen............Gunjan was feeling sometihng about Samrat and said to herself.............

Gunjan : Kya dee or Mayank sahi the?????????

2nd part............

Nupur was still crying about the whole thing.........Mayank cant see her in that way.....He wentto her room with the meal......And sat beside her.........She wiped out her tears as she saw Mayank sat beside her.............

Mayank : Nupur chalo khana kha lo?

Nupur : Mujhe nahi khana.

Mayank : Nupur tumne subha se khuch nahi khaya...............

Nuupr : Mayank maine kaha na mujhe nahi khana............

Mayank ; Nupur bachpana chodo................

Nupur : Mayank maine ek baar kaha na mujhe nahi khana toh nahi khana.........can't you understand? (shouted)

Mayank : Nupur dekho mein janta hun ki tum Smarat or Gunjan ko lekar pareshan ho........Par tum uski wajha se khudko or humare pyaar ko kyun taklif de rahi ho..........

Nupur : Humara pyaar hi toh sabse badi taklif hai Mayank (she stood up)

Mayank ; Kya? (stood up)

Nupur : Haan Mayank...........Yeh sab humare pyaar ke wajha s e hua hai............

Mayank ; So you're regretting our love, huh?

Nupur : Yes, bcoz of that i lost my friend and most of all i lost my Gunjan..............I lost the sister whom i love more than anything...........I curse myself for the day when i said i love you.....

Mayank was in deep pain after hearing that.........He never wanted to heard that.......His eyes filled with tears............Nupur left the room in anger...............Mayank threw the plate on the floor......]

The song 'Tere liye' is started playing in the background...........

Through the music it Mayank standing with tears in his eyes on hia room looking outside the window...............The room was dark..........and air was blowing..........Nupur was on the terest sitting on the wall.............Crying..................

Dil mein basi meri har ek saas,

Hai tere liye...................

Tu jo kahe chod dun mein yeh jahan,

Tere liye..................(2)

Mayank was stanidng on the window lookingo utside.............Thinking about Nupur.......Crying and was thinking about moment when Nupur said all those words............

Jannatein sajai maine tere liye...................

Chod di khudai maine tere liye...

Mayank saw the photoframe on the table and moved forward to that.............

Jannatein sajai maine tere liye...........

Chod di khudaiiiiiiiii.......................

Mayank hold that photoframe in his hand.................

Zara pass toh aa mere...............

Mayank's tears drop on the photoframe............

Tere liye jhumu deewana banke,

Tere liye vaada hai mera main hun,

Tere liyeeeeeeeeee

Hona kabhi tu judaaaaaaaaaaa..........(2)

Mayank is imagining that they are dancing...........They're flirting...............In the end of his imagination he imagine that Mayank told Nupur to look over there , Nupur looked and he pecked onher cheeks................

Mayank smiled on that moment.........His eyes is still fill with tears.....

Vaadon ka kya karun,

Vaadein kabhi dikhte nahi,

Nupur is sitting on the wall,crying............She thinks about Mayank in the whole time.....

Dikhte hain sapne magar,

Sapno mein tu dikhta nahi....

Nupur closed her eyes.......But she didnt saw anyone...No teven Mayank........

Khwaab sajaye the tere liye.........

Jannatein sajai thi tere liye...........

Nupur opened her eyes...........And deeply get into the tohughts of Mayank........And she was crying............as she flet guilty...........

Apne bhulaye maine tere liye............

Sab hai paraye.................

Ab mere liye................

Nupur firstly thinks about Samrat and then About Gunjan.............

Tere liye jhumu deewana banke,

Tere liye vaada hai mera mein hun,

Tere liyeeeeeeeee,

Ho nak abhi bhi judaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..............

She thinks about the every single moment she spend with Mayank...........

The marriage one..........The 'i love you' one, the very first time when he kissed her.....

Tere liye jhumu deewana banke,

Tere liye jannatein sajai,

Tere liye,

Zara pass toh aa mere.................

She imagine that she and Mayank are looking into eachothers eyes........ANd then in the end they hugged eachother sweetly............

Nupur went downstairs.........And saw that Mayank is sleeping on the dining table.......She noticed that he hadnt eat the mel also...........She went to the dinig table took a plate and served food.................She woke up Mayank...............

Mayank opens his eyes.........And saw Nupur............

Nupur : Tumne khana kyun nahi khaya?

Mayank ; Woh mujhe bhuk nahi hai........

Nupur : Chalo khana khao...........

Mayank ; Tumne khaya?

Nupur : Nahi.........

Mayank : Toh pehle tum khao.......

Nupur : Mayank...........

Mayank : Ssshhhhhhhhhhh..........

Mayank took a bite and offered that to Nupur bu his hand........Nupur ate........And then Nupur did the same

They done thier meal.........And was going ot sleep.........But before that Nupur wanted to say something to him.........

Nupur : Mayank i'm sorry............

Mayank ; Sorry kyun?

Nupur : Woh maine pehle jo bhi kaha tha.........Par Mayank i swear to god mein aisa kuch nahi bona cahti thi..........Woh toh gusse mein aakar..........

Mayank ; Janta hun ki tumne jo bih kaha woh gusse mein kahatha...........

Nupur : Tumhe bura nahi laga?

Mayank : Bura toh laga...........Par phir socha ki yeh Nupur hai jo gusse mein kisi ki bhi jaan le sakti hai.............

Nupur : Huh...............

Mayank ; Mujhe apne pyaar pe vishwas hai Nupur.........Isiliye oth tumhari baat ka mujhe utna bura nahi laga..........

Nupur: Thanks...............or ab se aisa kabhi nahi hoga.........

Mayank ; I know..............Accha toh tum bed pe so jao or mein couch pe thik hai.....?

Nupur : Tum couch pe kyun?

Mayank ; I mean laga tum mere saath abhi comfortable nahi rahogi isliye.........

Nupur : Mayank tum bed pe hi so ge woh bhi mere saath..........kyunki yeh tumhara hakh hai....

Mayank smiled and so did Nupur............

Nupur : Or jahan tak baat hai Comfort ki..........toh woh sirf mujhe tumse milta hai.....

[Then they hugged eacother..............]

To be continued............

The biggest turning point of Sajan's love life will take place.........😊

Edited by komal_luv_mayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hw sweet they fed wach other.. 😍 ...lovely part dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hmm amazing.. saja nka inta chotta part tha....
lamba part dena chaiye the na..anywayz nyc continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi kamal
nice update.
loved mayur a lot.
sajan r also good
good update
keep updating
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Posted: 15 years ago
Minblowing update dear
Can't wait for the urrning point in SaJan's life
Continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow! awesome update komal...mayur were so emotional and sajan were as usual januable!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok so mayur are sorted out.
Ab sirf SaJan.....
amazing update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeee
cont soon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
komal amazing part next part update soon dear thank u

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