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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mayur oneshot

While the whole gang was at resort mayur decided to go out for walk. As usual nupur kept on talking and mayank simply stared at her. Nupur unknowingly went to middle of the road while talking.

Mayank saw that nupur was in the middle of the road at the same time he saw a bike with full speed coming in that direction only.he soon ran towards nupur and pulled her back when the bike was about to hit her.

"nupur tum dekh ke nahi chal sakti, agar tumhe kuch ho jata to" shouted mayank which surprised nupur

"mayank tumhe ho kya gaya hai, tum itna ghussa kyun ho" asked nupur with concern. Mayank did not answer and went towards the resort. He was afraid of loosing nupur but he did not show it. Nupur too understood that there was something wrong with him but decided to ask him later since she thought this was not the proper time to ask as mayank was still angry.

After the dinner nupur saw mayank sitting in the balcony of the room. She went to balcony and sat besides mayank resting her head on his shoulder while mayank wrapped his arms around he shoulder.

"Mayank kya hua?" asked nupur as she knew something was wrong with him.

" Nupur main tumhe khona nahi chahata" said mayank. The pain of loosing her could be seen in his eyes

"Mayank achanak tum yeh sab……. But mayank stopped her in between

"Nupur jab gunjan mujhe yeh bataya ki JD ke gunde tumhare piche hai aur jab maine tumhe zakhmi halat main tv pe dekha to mujhe ek pal ke liye aisa laga ki main tumhe kho dene waala hoon" said mayank while tears formed in his eyes

"I'm sorry nupur jab tumhe meri sabse jyaada jarrorat thi tab main tumhare paaas nahi tha aur nahi main tumhe un JD ke gundon se baccha paya aur aaj jab maine us bike ko tumhari ore aate dekha to mujhe laga main tumhe fir se kho dunga" said mayank while nupur just stared at him

"tum mujhe chod ke kabhi jaaogi to nahin naa nupur" asked mayank while nupur rested her head on his shoulder.

"Mayank aisa sochna bhi mat ki main tumhe kabhi chod ke jaaungi" said nupur while mayank wrapped his arm around nupur's shoulder which made her feel secure. They both stared at the sky and they themselves did'nt know when did they went to sleep.

hope you would like it

plz do comment

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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was really cute
loved it
so sweet
1st one to comment!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was too good vinu ........... i wish creatves show this plz do mail to the creatives as well........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: stuti123

it was too good vinu ........... i wish creatves show this plz do mail to the creatives as well........

glad you liked it
i have mailed them
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjana25

it was really cute
loved it
so sweet
1st one to comment!

thanx
glad you liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its soo cute!!
loved da one shot!!!
plzz do write more n pm me wen u do!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7
it as toooo nice!!!
luvd it!!
thanx 4 d pm... :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good work vinu....
it was very cute....
keep up the good work.....
thankssss for the pm.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi vinu,
awesome shot dar.
just too good.
it was so touchy and emotional.
loved mayank a lot.
he really very nice hubby.
wonderful update.
keep updating
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing Vinu, short, sweet and simple...............can u plz mail it across at that id.............plz do

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