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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
@Honey -- Thanks! Yes......Nikki doesn't want to get too comfy with him because she believes that he could trample over her heart again --but isn't that what we're all afraid of when someone leaves us? Like Abhi was at the swimming pool scene in DMG.....he didn't want her to betray him (or so he thought).......
Yup....I love the cone too! As for the update.......coming today!!!

@Shale......Thats my point of view too! As I told Honey, she's scared that if she includes him in their lives, he might go away again and she wont be able to handle that. I had to make Nikki tell him about Amit because he would find out eventually, then he would question her. Rather than that, she figured that if she went ahead and told him she had a son, he wouldnt try to get close to them. But this is Dr. Modi....he's not gonna accept defeat so quickly......😉

@Aisha -- thanks! Yea, kind of akward seeing the love of your life who left you, after 4 years..........Yes, some people do completely change when their trust is shattered....and Nikki, in this case, found out she was pregnant right after he left, making it hard for her living on her own, without the father of her child........

Thanks guys, for your comments! Next part is coming in a few hours!

Love,
Sheena⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys! In this part, the flashbacks will start… The flashbacks will be in third person, not from AN's POV…..
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Her words repeat in my mind.

I have a son.

Wait – is he mine?

No…….probably not. Even if she was carrying my child, she would have aborted it.

Then whose is he? I guess she must have found someone else after me. But why should I care? I left her, didn't I? And I didn't go back for her…….

So, we don't have a chance. Damn. We were probably never meant to be. But if she's not married, then I can still be a part of her life. And her son's…….

I wonder what his name is.

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Oh, God.

What have I done? I hope he doesn't think that Amit is his.

I can see him thinking over all this in his mind.

God, please please please please please , don't let him find out. I have never asked for anything – well, yes I have, but still….Just don't let him find out.

Flashback:

"Nikki!" Abhi called out.

"Haan?" she replied, while perching on the stool to get the aata from the pantry.

"I'm back!"

"Yes, I can see that" she glared at him. "Now can you please let me make dinner?"

"Sure, when was I stopping you? I was just telling you I was here."

"Yes, you aren't stopping me, but you are blocking my way, so if you would kindly let me pass, you can get some food to eat!"

"But I don't want food to eat, I want to eat you!"

"ABHI!! Stop it, seriously!!!"

"Why?" he asked, hugging her from the back.

"Because I have to cook………" Nikki said, mixing the flour.

"Fine, let's make a deal. If I let you cook right now, you'll give me my dessert afterwards?" he smirked.

"Of course." Nikki replied unknowingly.

"Good." Abhi smiled and let her move out of his grip.

Nikki finished cooking and they ate. When they were finished, Abhi grabbed her around her waist and picked her up.

"Abhi, put me down!" Nikki ordered.

"Kyun? You promised me my dessert!" Abhi replied.

"Yes, I did….But how are you going to eat your dessert if you're carrying me?"

"You promised me dessert……But I didn't specify what kind of dessert ," he whispered seductively in here ear.

Nikki gasped and blushed. Abhi chuckled at her feeble attempts to get out of his arms.

"I'm not putting you down. You promised me dessert, so I am going to have it!" he declared.

Nikki turned red as he carried her upstairs into their room and closed the door.
End of Flashback

I notice Abhi still in his musing.

"Abhi," I shake his hand gently.

He looks at me, brows furrowed. "Yes?"

"Umm……don't you think we should be getting back now?" I suggest, happy to get away from these personal issues.

"Oh, yes……let's go," he gets up and we walk back to the car.

As we sit in the car, I can feel his eyes roving my face, searching for an answer to the inherent question connected to my statement of having a son.

He doesn't ask anything; I don't say anything. We sit quietly until we reach Sanjeevani.

I get out of the car.

"Bye….and thanks."

He looks at me with a troubled look. "Bye," he answers.

Before I can walk away, he says my name.

"Nikki – wait."

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Should I ask her?

I look into her eyes. She knows I'm about to ask. Her eyes are begging me not to ask her.

But I can't give in. If he is mine, and I let it go, I will be making the biggest mistake of my life. I'm going to ask her. I don't want to lose her again. I have to risk it.
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His eyes are searching mine. No, I pray. God, don't let him see the truth…

Finally he asks me.

"Nikki," he says. "Is he mine?"






Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
oooh mind blowing ... dint expect niki to reveal it all so soon .....
but u left us hanging in suspense
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
@Mitzi -- thanks! She had to reveal it because she didnt want him to interfere in her and Amit's lives, but this is Dr. Modi we're talking about...........next part is coming up! and the suspense will be cleared............😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
this is a mature ff , handled maturely
the other is fun filed n handled d same way ...really comendable sheena
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Aww.....thanks Mitzi........glad to see you like it......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
hey sheena di..nice part..
AN drove to the ice-cream place..n nikki didn't even know why she went out with him..she had a son amit who he didn't know of..but i guess he deserved to..
abhi was bugged of the silence..n broke it..but she wasn't really in the mood of talking..he took his normal flavour n she took something simple too which he hadn't expected!..well people change over time..
nikki tried to fake that things were okay..but she knew that was far from the truth..
he wanted to get back with her..n he even said he didn't go on purpose..bt she didn't really believe him..n he promised to make her fall 4 him agn..nice..
she finally told him abt her son..wonder what his reaction will be.
3rd part coming up?..cant wait!
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Okaaaaaay...interesting idea...Nikki has Abhi's son...hmmm...
Now I have no idea what Abhi's reaction will be...I guess he'll be staring at her with his jaw hanging open for at least an hour...
But I liked the ice cream parlour scene....it was sweet. And why don't they like the cone?? *pouts* Me loves it!!!
Update sooon Sheena...it's a nice concept you're got here...very interesting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Hey Guys! In this part, the flashbacks will start… The flashbacks will be in third person, not from AN's POV…..
*************************************************************************************


Her words repeat in my mind.

I have a son.

Wait – is he mine?

No…….probably not. Even if she was carrying my child, she would have aborted it.

Then whose is he? I guess she must have found someone else after me. But why should I care? I left her, didn't I? And I didn't go back for her…….

So, we don't have a chance. Damn. We were probably never meant to be. But if she's not married, then I can still be a part of her life. And her son's…….

I wonder what his name is.

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Oh, God.

What have I done? I hope he doesn't think that Amit is his.

I can see him thinking over all this in his mind.

God, please please please please please , don't let him find out. I have never asked for anything – well, yes I have, but still….Just don't let him find out.

Flashback:

"Nikki!" Abhi called out.

"Haan?" she replied, while perching on the stool to get the aata from the pantry.

"I'm back!"

"Yes, I can see that" she glared at him. "Now can you please let me make dinner?"

"Sure, when was I stopping you? I was just telling you I was here."

"Yes, you aren't stopping me, but you are blocking my way, so if you would kindly let me pass, you can get some food to eat!"

"But I don't want food to eat, I want to eat you!"

"ABHI!! Stop it, seriously!!!"

"Why?" he asked, hugging her from the back.

"Because I have to cook………" Nikki said, mixing the flour.

"Fine, let's make a deal. If I let you cook right now, you'll give me my dessert afterwards?" he smirked.

"Of course." Nikki replied unknowingly.

"Good." Abhi smiled and let her move out of his grip.

Nikki finished cooking and they ate. When they were finished, Abhi grabbed her around her waist and picked her up.

"Abhi, put me down!" Nikki ordered.

"Kyun? You promised me my dessert!" Abhi replied.

"Yes, I did….But how are you going to eat your dessert if you're carrying me?"

"You promised me dessert……But I didn't specify what kind of dessert ," he whispered seductively in here ear.

Nikki gasped and blushed. Abhi chuckled at her feeble attempts to get out of his arms.

"I'm not putting you down. You promised me dessert, so I am going to have it!" he declared.

Nikki turned red as he carried her upstairs into their room and closed the door.
End of Flashback

I notice Abhi still in his musing.

"Abhi," I shake his hand gently.

He looks at me, brows furrowed. "Yes?"

"Umm……don't you think we should be getting back now?" I suggest, happy to get away from these personal issues.

"Oh, yes……let's go," he gets up and we walk back to the car.

As we sit in the car, I can feel his eyes roving my face, searching for an answer to the inherent question connected to my statement of having a son.

He doesn't ask anything; I don't say anything. We sit quietly until we reach Sanjeevani.

I get out of the car.

"Bye….and thanks."

He looks at me with a troubled look. "Bye," he answers.

Before I can walk away, he says my name.

"Nikki – wait."

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Should I ask her?

I look into her eyes. She knows I'm about to ask. Her eyes are begging me not to ask her.

But I can't give in. If he is mine, and I let it go, I will be making the biggest mistake of my life. I'm going to ask her. I don't want to lose her again. I have to risk it.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

His eyes are searching mine. No, I pray. God, don't let him see the truth…

Finally he asks me.

"Nikki," he says. "Is he mine?"






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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
heyy!!
great job!!
loved the part..
too short though =P
but ya..
cant believe he is his son!!!
=D
cant wait for the nxt part! =)
cont soon,,,
oh.. just noticed..
first to comment!! =D
lol..
HiNaL

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