Was It You Or Her part 1 pg 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi ppl.... this is my third FF on AR hope u ppl will like it.........

i know i've not updated the other two yet.... but this one is very close to my heart . this was the first ever thing i started to write but never posted coz i felt no one would like this.. but after seeing ur comments i thought i should post this one two....
i hope that there will be the same response which i had for my b4 FF's...

love

ishu....

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this will be a small intro the story... and this story will be from armaan's side.......

here goes the little intro.....

Armaan y cant u listen to my dad n join those Computer courses after all he's telling for our future'. He'll surely be impressed by u. aur who tumay nah kabhi nahi karsakhtay hai after all u'll become his favorite boy'..

Lekin riddhima . mujhe yeh computer classes pasand nahi hai'' n I don't want to join those to just create a imperssio.. he'll accept me as his son in law in a way I'm '

Lekin armaan..

That's it riddhima'.i'm leaving' gud ni8'''. Waisa bi meri paas is faltoo baat kayliya time nahi nahi' I've to go to coll early 2mrw for urgent work' saying this he left her alone in her thoughts'.

Very next day night'

Armaan came late n noticed riddhima sitting in lawn' as he was busy he could not meet her the whole day''

Riddhima' who mein' .. I'm sorry.. who kal raath'..

Without even hearing him.. she ran inside her room n closed the door'.

Rahul where is armaan'' I've been looking for him for past two hours'.

Hmmm riddhi he's went to apply for that computer course'. He did not sleep all night n did not allow me to sleep n was keep on saying that he hurted u n he made u cry'. In morning suddenly he got his idea n went to apply for that course'.

Thanks rahul''.

She started from her home, Even not noticing that some one's following her.. She just walked as fast as she could as this is her last day of meeting armaan '.

A car from no were approached by her side with in a fraction she was pulled inside it

The guy started harassing her.. she struggled hard to free herself but to her bad fate he was more strong' with heavy struggle she tried to open the window of the car n shouted for help'.. may be that was her good fate that driver drove the car near the place where armaan was going to apply for his computer course

As she put her head outstide n called for help.. armaan saw her in that state n ran as fast as he could to help her out'

Without noticing a car approaching him.. he was suddenly hit by car'. got badly hurt'..

She some wat managed to open the door.. She jumped out only to be hit by the lorry the other side'..

Armaan came running with blood all over his face''.. as fast he could reach riddhima n took her in arms

Riddhima tumay kuch nahi hoga.. mein hoon na'.. tum mujhe inti jalthi chod kar nahi kasakthi''

Armaan' this what she could say''. Took his hands n tied a bracelet which has her name in that'' n smiling at him n kissed his cheek'. I love u armaan' She took her last breath'..

Riddhima utto.. tum mujhe asa chod kar nahi jaa sakthi' I love u riddhima

Riddhima''''' crying loudly.. screamed at top of his voice''



this it guy's a small intro to the story......


now its time for u ppl to comment.....


please do comment friends... with out that i cannot proceed.... please friends please do reply n comment


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it yaar....
Kya baat hain....
Awesome....
Concept kya hain???
Please cont soon jaan..... 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh God
itna sad start
i loved it
plz do start soon
i'd love to read it
n yes do add me to pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy ishwariya di
nice concept
n the intro was cool
cont soon
n pm me whenever u update
luv dhruvika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice update
con soon
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it's a sad start but an interesting concept ... do continue. looking forward to the update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice concept i liked it plzzzzzzzzz pm me wenever u wil update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really interesting story dear... do pm me plz,,, luved the line where ammy says he'll except em for me... awww. wow.. deep man... lolzzzzz... thanx- misha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: boshaa

Loved it yaar.... thanks jaani
Kya baat hain....
Awesome....
Concept kya hain??? will let u know in later parts
Please cont soon jaan..... 😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhan

nice concept i liked it plzzzzzzzzz pm me wenever u wil update



ya thanks..... , ya sure

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