~Weekend with Rahul-Muskaan 39! ~

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prajna

@cupid-struck

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: lovebapu18
nice part prajna!!

why dont you continue??if you dont mind😊

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lovebapu18

@lovebapu18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

well, i am a really bad writer...i did try once or twice at everyone's request but it didn't go too well.

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

well so which theme did u guys choose?..n where was the last part..? :P

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: aish_punk
well so which theme did u guys choose?..n where was the last part..? :P

the last part's on page 4, Aish!

the starting part is there as well. and the theme is explained there too.

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Nadz_YuNalover

@Nadz_YuNalover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Awwww new wwrm... CONGO SHONGO ppl😊

theme is awesum shaadi and meeting of gang😉 and RM😳😳

Pari: awesum part, luved the boy chat and atul ka khaana staring😆😆😆 awesum stuff, luved how rahul is such a cutee pie😳 atul a bhukhar😆😆 and abhimaan flirts😆😆😆

Awesum part👏 luved it to the core👏

im feeling so bad, im reading it now when u are in hosp😭 i jst hope pari gets well sooon😭😭

prajna: awesum short part😆😆 muski in yellow saree👏👏👏 wow gud girl but so short?? lol

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago

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Nadz_YuNalover

@Nadz_YuNalover

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Please note: its the mehendi function, i think we shud make the wedding a lil later but if sumone has a better idea u can bring it in the next part😉 i thought sum masti in the functions will be gud😊
Recap: Rahul and boys are getting bored while rahul tells them they shud be nice as its amit's wedding... rahul leaves to look for amit while the boys see the three beauties entering Ridz-Anjie-Nikz and muski is seen wearing a yellow saree.

Muskaan is asking some aunties if there okay...
"auntyji thora drink lijiye na... plz" she calls a waiter to serve the aunty but the waiter almost trips and drops sum water on muskaan's saree, she gets reli pissed.
"Idiot dekh nahi sakhte??? meri saree geeli kardi duffer, dafaa hojaao yahan se stupid" she shouts and the guy keeps pleading. "ramu kaka... issko kaho yahan se jaaye batameez"
"chotti maalkeen... isse maaf kardijiye na..."
"ramu kaka maine kaha isse nikaalo yahan se" she instructs annoyed and walks away blabering, she reaches the back of the garden and starts to dry her saree (it was just a little so she couldnt go look for another saree that wud take her another two hours so she decided to just dry the bit)...
Rahul was looking for amit "kahan hai yeh??" he looks around the are, he's phone rings but he cant hear coz of the noise so he goes outside in the garden...
"amit, kahan hai tu yaar??"
"sorry rahul main sapna ko bulaane gaya aur... we got busy talking about sumthing... sorry yaar main neeche aagaya hoon so the guys said u went looking for me... chal aaja we're starting the ceremony in a bit"
"okay dude, main abhi aaya" he says with a smile and hangs up, he turns to leave but the bright yellow saree catches his eye so he turns back...
Muskaan was just flicking/jerking😕 her saree to dry it, finally she was putting the pallu back on its place while rahul was trying hard to see the face... she finally puts it and has a smile on her face, she breathes in the fresh air with a smile and closed eyes then she starts to walk back to the door. while rahul was mesmerized seeing her... he just keeps staring at her while she was walking towards him she notices this and feels embarassed, she looks back to make sure she's the only one, she looks down to make sure her saree is on😆😆 **first timer** she then looks at him with pierced eyes and walks faster right to him. but he is still lost so she just makes a face and leaves...

Inside the hall:
she was reli annoyed "aaj to mera din kharab hai, ek to wo waiter and now this idiot, staring like pataanahi kya ho bloody jerk" she thinks annoyed and goes towards sapna.
"Muski kahan thi??" nikki asks all the girls and sapna looks relived.
"kuch nahi... chorna, waise u are looking fab" she looks her from bottom to top and smiles, nikki blushes.
"Thankz"
"inna kyun sharma rahi hai??' she asks and ridz cums in smiling.
"waise muski tu bhi bohot khubsurat lag rahi hai"
"Thanks" muski says "but why is she blushing so much??"
"you know that guy..." ridz indicates at the boys who are standing with amit, while abhi is staring at nikki...
"which one, that tall big build one??"
"haan the one without dimples, the one in blue sherwani yaar"
"oh yaa okay"
"he told nikki that she was looking very pretty and that could she give him her number" ridz laughs and muski joins her.
"great ek aur shaadi ki tayaari" she laughs "waise mummyji ko koi ne dekha??" she asks and they all nodd in a no, so muski goes to sapna.
"oye hoyye meri behen to aaj bohot zyaada khubsurat lag rahi hai... now stop blushing okay, main abhi mum ko dhoondh kar aayi okay" she says and leaves.
(yup i made her the sis😆😆 so now there sisters, dunno if u want sapna to be elder or twin anything will do😉)

Muskaan is going to find mummyji when rahul is coming to the ceremony side and they bump...
rahul immediately catches muskaan and they have an eyelock... rahul again cant get his eyes off her but she was getting hyper, finally she moves out.
"Dekh ke nahi chal sakhte?? kahan kahan se aajaaate hain" she says annoyed.

Okay guys i was reli bored today so jst wrote it, hope u liked it, came back after ages😊 sumone continue... u can continue the fight or watever i was not sure so yeah thats it😊

luv
nadz😳

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

nice part nadz.................who's gonna continue????
count me out!!!

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prajna

@cupid-struck

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Recap: Muskaan is going to find mummyji when rahul is coming to the ceremony side and they bump...
rahul immediately catches muskaan and they have an eyelock... rahul again cant get his eyes off her but she was getting hyper, finally she moves out.
"Dekh ke nahi chal sakhte?? kahan kahan se aajaaate hain" she says annoyed

muski starts walking away…feels her pallu being pulled….quikly turns around…only to find rahul giving *I dint do anything* look….*typical pallu struck in his wrist watch scene*….rahul takes it from his watch ands takes her hand…sending shivers to muskaan's spine….and puts it in her hand….leans forward and wispers into her ears

Rahul: Apko Dekh kar hi toh chal raha tha…(in low voice)

Muski: jee?kuch kaha aapne?(thinking he is soo near to her….but why is she not doing about it?)

Rahul: aapne kuch suna?(staring deeply)(note: there is no rule that caring guys don't flirt..lolz)

*they share an eyelock*

Muski(sensing):huh?...nahi…(takes hand back…and gets out of there as qiukly as possible)

Rahul: suniye….apna naam toh batha ke jaayiye(with a grin)(thinking: isse toh patina hi padega)

Muski joins the girls…

Muski: ridz kahan he

nikki: you know the dimple guy(give her an *obvious* look)

ajie:by the way...wht took you soo long?

Nikki: ha waha aisa konsa kaam tha(teasingly)

Muski: aisa konsa kaam tha ka kya matlab?(frustrated)…