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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lucario

To all, i will update on friday


cool bhai i will also update on friday😊
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cool bhai i will also update on friday😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part dear
sorry could'nt reply earlier
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ---ishita---

awesome part dear

sorry could'nt reply earlier

continue soon

thanx for the pm

its okay....thanks for commenting....will continue on friday.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

uu r best seriously

thanks a lot dolly for the comment....and i m happy that u liked my attempt of writing FF...keep reading.
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(sam didn't get it……he thought gunjan will be happy by the song….any girl will get happy then why gunjan got tears in her eyes...his doubts get solved in next few minutes only as nupur came to him)

N: samrat ye kya tha???……..tum kabhi apni pranks se baaj nahi aaoge na…….tume gana gane ki kya jarurat thi.

S: chill nupur…...gana hi to gaya tha…isme itni bhadakane ki kya baat hai.…magar yeh samaz nahi aa raha ki gunjan khush hone ke bajay uske aakh me aansu kyu aa gaye.

N: are jiss insaan ne apne sabse jigri cheeze kho di ho…who kaise hasega.

S: (got puzzled)muzhe kuch samazh nahi aya…..konasi cheeze gunjan ne khoi hai?????

N: USKE PARENTS…….and she tells sam everything ….what happened to her…..how she came to Mumbai and about her condition after her loss in life.

S: (after hearing that sam got tears in his eyes) OH god…..maine ye kya kar diya….woh pehele se hi itni dukhi thi….aur mere is song ko lekar use laga hoga ki mai uska majak uda raha hu…shit…par mera yeh bilkul motive nahi tha…..wo to bet ke bajah se.

N: kya??????? konsi bet……..???

Sam tells her about bet

N: tumhe gunjan se maafi mangani chahiye samrat……aur diya tuzhe pata tha na ki gunjan kis halat mai yaha aayi hai…..firbhi…...tune yeh sab nahi rokha.

D: di muzhe nahi pata tha ki gunjan aise react karegi….muzhe bohot guilty feel ho raha hai…..sorry.

S: sorry to muzhe kehna chahiye…….gunjan ko………mai abhi jata hu.(with that he leaves without saying bye to anyone and starts searching for gunjan)

S: I think woh washroom gayi hogi……..mai bahar wait karta hu…..bahar ate hi….mai use maafi mang lunga.

(and he waits for her coming out of the washroom…….after 15 minutes………still there is no gunjan……whenever a girl comes out of the washroom .sam looks for gunjan.but he didn't got success……..here all girls coming out of the washroom,became suspicious and looking angrily at sam……..sam got it and think…….he should ask someone to go inside and look for gunjan inside…so he calls diya.)

S: hi diya.tum jaldi se woman's washroom aa jao.

D: magar kyu???

S: aa jao.mai ane pe batata hu.

D: ok

(after diya came sam asked her to see for gunjan inside washroom.she goes inside and comes out..and tells sam that gunjan is not inside washroom )

S: are yaar.mai yaha pagal ke taarah yaha wait kar raha hu..gunjan kea ne ka.magar wo to yaha hai hi nahi………(.and just then bell rings and classes are gonna start now……o sam goes to classes.)

(sam didn't find gunjan anywhere………so he came in the classroom which was already full..as he enteredin classroom…… he saw gunjan there and watching vacant place beside her……sam thanked god that he finally found gunjan and more than that he can sit beside her and say sorry to her……..he goes inside and sits beside her )

on watching sam o other seat……..gunjan gets angry and stand up to sit on some other place but to her dismay she didn't find other place to sit and at that moment sir also came and so she has to sit with sam on same bench……...

even though she sat on same bench…..she was not paying attention to sam…...but sam was just watching her not paying attention to what sir is teaching…

suddenly gunjan's pen falls down and sam catches it…gunjan watching that….tries to take the pen from his hand but he is not allowing her to take pen and starts playing with that.

G: mera pen do..(still in angry tone)

S: nahi dunga…….

G: ye kaisi battamizi hai.??

S: ye koi battamizi nahi……….jab tak tum muzhe maaf nahi karti tab tak mai tumhe tumhara pen nahi dunga..

G: kis liye maafi maang rahe ho???????? Muzhe mera pen do muzhe notes likhne hai.

S: nahi….pehele muzhe maaf karu…….aaj jo kuch college mai subah hua……….mai nahi janata tha ki tum kis halat mai yaha aai ho…aur jo tumhare parents ke sath hua.uske liye mai bhi dukhi hu……...aur wo sab mai tumhare sath nahi karta magar benji ne bet lagayi thi…...aur bet ko jitney ke liye maine ye sab kiya……….magar sabse important baat mera tumhara dil dukhane ka koi irada nahi tha………pls muzhe maaf kardo..firse aisa kabhi nahi hoga….pls.

(at that moment…..for samrat the forgiveness from gunjan became really important all of a sudden…...he also don't know why???……..but he can't allow her to be angry on him…..but don't know why???.)

(watching sincerity and pain in his eyes and she got that he is really very sorry for what he has done…….so she decides to forgive him……..as she cannot be angry on any person for long time)

G: ok maine tumhe maaf kiya…..magar firse aisa mat karna…….ab muzhe mera pen do.

(hearing this sam stands in excitement and ask in loud…...without considering about others in class)

S: Sach me tum ne muzhe maaf kiya..(whole class was watching him and sir was watching with full of anger )

SIR: samrat kya hume aapko discipline sikhana hoga????

S: sorry sir…….aisa firse nahi hoga….and got embarrassed….(whole class including gunjan starts laughing)

sam got angry on others and gave angry llok to all and all get quite…….even though he is angry on others……but after watching gunjan smiling his anger vanished…he was feeling so light like a big burden has been removed from his heart…....he liked her smile..(and thought….what a beautiful smile)…….he was happy that gunjan finally forgive him.

(the college continues and now evening time is there and all are leaving for home)

(IN canteen)

N: uday tu to yahi rukh raha hai na…….basketball practice ke liye???

U: ha dids kyu?

N: to tu gunjan ko leke aa jayega kya ghar????....... kyuki muzhe mayank ke ghar jana hai…….project ke kam ke bajah se.

U: magar dids gunjan diya ke sath bhi to ja sakti hai na…..

N: are gunjan ko library mai kuch kam hai………to use der ho jayegi aur diya ko party mai jana hai kisi to wo ..college se hi……party jayegi.……..tu akela yaha rukane vala hai college mai isiliye mai tuzhe kah rahi hu.

U: ok dids……….i will bring her.

(With that nupur leaves and uday goes to BB court for practice.)

Gunjan is in library and finding the books in the library for term course……...whereas sam is in BB court practicing basketball with benji and uday.

(after some time in evening)

B: hey dude aaj ke liye bohot ho gaya……..mai thak gaya hu…...ghar pe chalate hai..

U: ha sam…...mai bhi bohot thak gaya hu……aur muzhe bohot bhuk bhi lagi hai…...bhuk ke bajah se muzhe chakkar ane lage hai.

S: tum dono bhi na…..ok jao………..ghar jao………..mai thodi der aur yaha rukuga.

(coming out of college)

U: are yaar mai kuch bhul raha hu kya?????

B: aab muzhe ye mat bolna tu ghar ka rasta bhul gaya……...mai tuzhe ghar nahi chod ne vala.

U: shut up benji….aur chal ghar chalate hai…...muzhe nahi lagta mai kuch bhula hu..

B: chal bhai chal.

(In college its 9 O'clock now)

(in library)

G: (watching time) are bohot time ho gaya…….ye books ko padne ke chakkar mai kitni der ho gayi….uday bhaiya wait kar rahe hoge…..muzhe nikalana chahiye…..(and she went to BB court).

S: are yaar bohot der ho gayi……….muzhe ab nikalana chahiye……..chalo washroom jake fresh ho jata hu..( as sam goes to washroom gunjan comes in BB court and she didn't find anyone there.)

G: lagta hai canteen me hoge……..she goes there also but didn't find uday anywhere in college….finally she decides to see in parking lot.

G: (in parking lot ) yaha bhi nahi……...ab mai kya karu??.lagta hai wo chale gaye….ab muzhe akele hi ghar jana padega……..gunjan ye teri hi to galati hai….nahi tu unn books ko padne library rukhti aur nahi tu late hoti……..aur nahi ab tu akeli hoti……….chalo khair ab ghar chalate hai and she goes out of the college………..after her departure, sam comes in parking lot and takes out his bike to go home.

Gunjan is walking on the road and looking for auto but at that odd time the college road was completely silent…..no one was there…….gunjan is feeling scared now because of silence…….still she is walking her way to home…...when she watch some people coming towards her…they were goons…….so she tries to avoid them and walks fast.

But to her dismay they spotted her and blocked her way

Guy 1: are meri jaan kaha ja rahi ho…...agar chaho to mai tumhe chod du?????

Gunjan is really scared now and says

G:koi jarurat nahi…… mai chali jaogi…….thanks.

G2: are jarurat kyu nahi…….hum aako aise chod nahi sakte…….chaliye aap humare sath chaliye……...hum aapko ghar chod dete hai..and comes closer to gunjan and touches her shoulder.

Gunjan shrugs it off and saying loud

Pls muzhe jane dijiye……muzhe aapki jarurat nahi…….mai akeli ja sakti hu ghar..

G1: magar hume to aapki jarurat hai and he comes forward and takes off her dupatta.

Gunjan is now crying and she pushes that guy and start running back..towards college to find someone to help her.

G1: with her dupatta in his hand………are pakado use

And all goons start chasing her………gunjan is running to save her life when she comes in front of a bike…….the bike stops suddenely

G: pls muzhe bacha lijiye….kuch log mere piche pade hai……pls.

The guy takes out his helmet and is no other but our SAM.

Watching sam.gunjan hugged sam immediately and says.

G: (still crying) pls samrat .muzhe bacha lo………..mere piche kuch gunde lage hai.

(Watching the state of gunjan….. sam get concerned and asks).

S: gunjan tum yaha…...iss waqt?………..tumhe to ghar hona chahiye na aab.college to kab ka khatam ho gaya hai….

G: ( watching sam) samrat who mai…….between her tears……mai ghar ja rahi thi to kuch log mere piche pad gaye…..as soon as she completed…….the goons comes there and starts shouting.

G1: are oh ladki……apne aashik se toh tum roj milti ho..aaj humse bhi milo……hume bhi acha lagega …….(and starts waving gunjan's dupatta in his hand)

(watching this sam got furious and tells gunjan)

S: gunjan tum yahi ruko……..mai abhi ata hu.

G: nahi samrat…….hum ghar chalate hai….tum un logo se mat ulazo.

S: mai ne kaha na gunjan tum yahi ruko…….maiabhi tumhara dupatta leke ata hu……(said in more angry and authorative tone to gunjan )

gunjan stays there near bike.and sam comes towards goons and says..

S: toh tum kya kah rahe the……chodo……..muzhe who dupatta de do.

G1: kyu be ladki ke sath dupatta bhi chahiye kya?????

(this was the limit and sam got really mad and started beating the goons single handedly)

During the fight sam got cut on hand by knife by one of goons…….but he didn't care about it and beat those people to the death when gunjan interrupted him saying.

G: pls samrat chodo unhe………..mar daloge kya unhe???

S: haaaaaaaa……...mar dalunga…….unki itani himmat ki tum par aakh uthaye…….and again start beating them.

G: samrat chodo unhe…….hum ghar chalate hai……...unhe unke kiye ki saja mil gayi…...ab pls chalo.

S: (now calms down and takes dupatta from the ground and gives it to gunjan)chalo mai tumhe ghar chod deta hu.

Both came to bike… and sam sit on the bike and waiting for gunjan to sit on bike but gunjan is feeling nervous.

S: kya hua gunjan……...baitho na.

G: samrat mai kabhi bike pe nahi baithi……...muzhe bohot dar lagta hai bike se.

S: gunjan don't behave like small child…….mai hu na tumhare sath…kuch nahi hoga tumhe……ab aa bhi jao…..varna puri raat yahi rukana padega?????/

G: nahiiiiiiii………mai baithati hu……and she sits on bike.

(as sam starts the bike gunjan tightly holded sam's shoulder…...which sam liked)

(during whole journey there was silence between them…….. which sam didn't liked at all…….he thought gunjan is very scared of the whole incident so he has to do something to make her mood nice…….and so got an idea)

S: gunjan tum pakki apne di pe gayi ho.

G: kya matlab???

S: tum apni di…..nupur…… jisse hum zhassi ki rani kehte hai……..unke tarah mussibat ko davat deti rehti ho.

G: nahi mai di ke jaisi nahi hu……....woh to….(and again she got silent recalling the incident.)

(after some time sam again starts)

S:tumhara koi dusra naam hai kya..pet name like……..as muzhe tumhara gunjan naam pasand nahi.

G: kyu.mere naam mai kya galat hai??????

S: are tumhara naam tumhari personality se match nahi karta……chalo mai hi ek naam deta hu……tum chashme lagati ho……….to mai tumhe chashmish bulaoga.

G: nahi muzhe mera naam bohot pasand hai……...tum muzhe gunjan hi bulaoge….chashmish nahi.

S: nahi mai tumhe chashmish hi bulaoga.

G:chashmish nahi gunjan.

S: chashmish

G: gunjan

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G: gunjan

S: chashmish

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G: chashmish……...aur ye final hai…..aab aur kuch nahi

S: ok chashmish……..as ur wish…….mai aaj se tumhe chashmish hi bulaoga…….ab koi change nahi………(she didn't noticed what she said right now…..and sam successfully trapped her in his word game)

G: (after getting all the word game thing.)samrat tumne muzhe phasa diya.

S: ab kuch nahi ho sakta chashmish…....its final now…and see ur mood is also better now.

G: (now finally getting why sam done all that……….. just to shift her attention from that incident)thanks samrat…tumne ye sab sirf mera mood acha karne ke liye kiya..really thanks.

S: are friends main thanks aur sorry nahi chalata……...aur ab hum frends hai…..hai na.???

G: (smiles and says) ha.

Sam got very happy.

(they reached home)

G: aab mai kya kahungi aunty ko……...ki muzhe der kyu ho gayi…aur jo kuch hua aaj woh.

S:Don't worry chashmish……….mai hu to kya darna………chalo…..(and he comes with her in her home)

Watching gunjan…...aunty hugs her and says.

A: are gunjan tuzhe kitni der ho gayi…..muzhe bohot fikar ho gayi thi….uday jab tuzhe leke nahi aya……...to mai bohot dar gayi……….kyu ki tuzhe yaha ke raste nahi pata..

(before gunjan could say anything sam interrupts)

S: aunty gunjan mere sath aai hai………..jab gunjan college se nikali tab mai vahi tha……uday nahi tha to maine socha ki mai hi gunjan ko chod du.

A: thanks samrat…..

S: oh kuch nahi aunty……….jaise diya meri dost hai………..waise hi gunjan meri dost hai.

(Gunjan got puzzled why he is referring her gunjan now and not chashmish?)

A: u r so sweet samrat………aao na anadar aao.

S: nahi aunty……….aab muzhe jana hoga……….bohot der ho gayi hai

A: ok gunjan tu andar aa ja.

G: ji aunty.

S: aunty kya mai gunjan se kuch baat kar sakta hu?

A: ha kyu nahi……mai andar wait kar rahi hu gunjan…….tum logo ki bate ho jane ke bad aa jana.

G: ok aunty.

S: chashmish to kal ready rehna……...mai kal tumhe lene aaunga college ke liye.

G: tum kyu aaoge…...mai di ke sath aaongi…...aur aaj jo kuch tum ne kiya…..uske liye thanks.

S: chashmish maine kya kaha tha…...ki friendship me thanks aur sorry nahi…..aur tum muzhe thanks kehna chahati ho to muzhe ………….. nahi nahi ………..2 promise karo.

G: kya?

S: ki tum mere sath kal se college jaogi…aur ye request nahi…...order hai dost ka dost par…..aur aab to tumhe pata chal hi gaya hoga ki mai bura ladka nahi…so ……..pls pls pls plsssss plssssssssssssssssss maan jao……… ab itne pls bol chukka hu….itne to maine apne life mai nahi bole hoge kisi ko………ab to maan jao.

G: (smiles)ok samrat tum jit gaye……mai kal se tumhare sath aaungi college…….ok…..ab dusra promise kya hai???

S: uske bare mai nahi socha…...magar badme mang lunga…..ab jao aaram karo.

G: ok samrat…..tum bhi ab jao.

Gunjan is about to go home when she sees the cut on arm of sam and asks in concerned voice.

G: samrat ye chot kaise lagi tumhe?????? Kitna khun aa raha hai……tumhe dard nahi ho raha???

S: are yeh to woh gundo se ladte hua lag gaya tha……...chotisi chot hai……….thik ho jayegi……….tum chinta mat karo.

G: kya????? Choti chot hai…….dekho kitna khun nikal raha hai…….ruko yaha……...mai first-aid lati hu………….kahi jana nahi.

S: ok miss as ur wish….(and goes to bike and stands there)

Gunjan comes with first –aid and starts cleaning sam's wound….here sam is just watching gunjan only……..when gunjan applies dettol on cut to clean it…….sam shout……gunjan gets concerned and asks

G: bohot dard ho raha hai na………aur muzhe keh rahe the ki choti chot hai……agar mai nahi dekhti to tum to isse aise hi rakh dete.

S: ok ok ab lecture mat do pls….aur ab to tumne iss pe medicine laga diya hai na…...to ab ye jaldi thik ho jayega.

G: hmmm….chalo yeh to ho gaya.

S: kya mai ab ja sakta hu???????

G: (after watching wound again and making sure that it is well taken care of says) ha…. ab tum ja sakte ho……..magar apna khayal rakhna.

S: tum bhi chashmish……..ab mai chalata hu.

G: ok bye…ab jao.

S: after you miss.

Gunjan smiles and goes to door

(sam thinking while gunjan is going towards the door……..pls chashmish palto

and before going inside gunjan palatati hai and says bye to sam and goes inside.)

Watching this sam got really very happy and goes to home on bike.

That day he was feeling really great…...as he found her mysterious girl and now they are frends now…..the day worked out to be best for sam…and he is feeling more happy as from tomorrow chashmish will be coming with him to college.

Here in gunjan's room, gunjan is also thinking that what she thought of sam in first meeting was really wrong and he is a very good hearted person……….and she was happy because she made today her first frend and that also a really very good and caring one…...who cares for others before him……and thanks god for it and sleeps.

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Posted: 15 years ago

WOWWW AWESOME update dear

just mindblowing fantastic fabulas aur kya bolu
hayye sammy was so helpfull to gunji yaar
loved ur part to the core
plz try to ontinue son
n thanx for the pm
sajan rocks 😉
love
sana.
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee ud..
it ws mindblowingggggg...
awwwwww sajan.. 😍 😍
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzzzz cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

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argh sanu u beat me her tooo

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😆😆😆😉 yup after all im the gr8 sana 😳
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago

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