pRiDa FF- AN UNTOLD STORY updtd pg21(part7)

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Hey Jhinki,

1st Thanks for the PM. Great Start dear. 👏

Like the Bro-Sis bonding. And you have brought in a sense of intrigue already...looking forward to know what went wrong between GauCha..😉😆...I mean Aditi & Saket. I can see loads of twists coming up😃

Please continue dear. Do update soon.

Khushi.

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

hey awsm Jhinki swts !!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

wat a start ?! wndrful.. n so dffrnt !..👍🏼

n saket..hmm wat does it mean dear ?! liked da name.. bt 2 say the truth ..missing ma prithvi.. a lil too much ! 😛 hehheee.. [ LOL jus kidding ! ]😉

by d way.. do open this thrd in our forum too dear.. it wil b mre easier 2 catch up n mre ppl can read this fab FF !😃

cnt soon..
-luv niki..😊

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Maz

@Maz.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hey jhinki!...great storyline...and nice bunch of characters..keep going..good work!

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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Wow jhinks! Gr8 start! What's wid d misunderstanding? Cont soon😃

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sonika.d

@sonika.d

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

jhinki it's awesome.great start yaar.storyline n character sketch was great

waiting 4 ur next update.plz pm me when u update

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maham

@...Maham...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Hey just read the update..! it looks nice..!!! so saket coming back for revenge.. this ought to be interesting!!! liked the whole bro sis bonding scenes..!!! poor aditti all wounded and hurt...!!

liking this fic... looking forward to more..

update soon...

Maham

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Tina Saigal

@TIA.Tia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Very nice FF... Sorry for commenting so late was little busy.. I am being inactive on forum these days so pls forgive me... Pls do continue my support is there with you..

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Keva

@Keva

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

I am so sorry I did not comment earlier. I definitely like the concept of the FF. Two of my favorite actors (Gaurav and Harshad) are in this FF hence I will definitely will be waiting for your next update.
Keep updating as soon as possible and again I am sorry for not commenting earlier.

Edited by 456kv - 15 years ago

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Kiran

@champakiran

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Great start!! Sounds v.promising!! Must say a v.educated family :)

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snehakapoor

@snehakapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

uhey jhinki,,,,,,,,firstly a big apology for commenting so late...........nw comes ur ff...................its brilliant, quite intersting..............waiting for more!!!!!!!!