~ SaJan-one shot part 6 ~ romance inside the car - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
reallly nice part yaar..sorry for very very late reply as i m not thr on forums this days...anyway leave it.............the update was awesome .continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: lucario

reallly nice part yaar..sorry for very very late reply as i m not thr on forums this days...anyway leave it.............the update was awesome .continue soon.

thanks a lot avi and itsok u can reply whenever u r free there is no bonding my friend..... 😊😊 !!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

very nie story

lovely

plz do continue soon n ya pm me too nxt time u update

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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: cute_monaya_fan

very nie story


lovely


plz do continue soon n ya pm me too nxt time u update

thanks a lot and i will surely pm u okey!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
part 5
they both entered inside the cottage.
s-'chashmish yaha peh toh koi nahi hain !'
g-'haan samrat....dekho na baarish kini tez ho rahi hain'
s-'lagta hain aaj raat hume yehi peh raat bitaani padegi.'
g-'hmm...'
samrat saw a long kurta hanged on the rope. he took that kurta and says to her-'chashmish tumhe sardi lag jayigi ye pehen lo'
g after thinking she says-'thike'
s-'main bahar wait kar leta hoon'
g-'nahi samrat itni baarish mein tum kaha bahar khade rahoge ek kaam karo tum dooseri taraf hokar khade ho jao'
s-'lekin chashmish.....'
g-'koi baat nahi samrat'
s-'thike' saying this he turns towards the other side and opened his shirt as he was also drenched with rain.
g-'samrat ab tum is taraf dekh sakte ho'
samrat turns towards her and was mesmerized in her beauty because she was looking very beautiful.
g-'samrat..'
no answer
g-'samrat...'
s-'uh haan bolo'
g-'kya hua?'
s-'tum bohut beautiful lag rahi ho'
g gets shy and started looking down
s-'uh...main aag jalata hoon' he placed some woods and lighted it.gunjan sat beside him and they both were feeling very cold.suddenly gunjan speaks-'samrat...mujhe bohut pyaas lagi hain'
s-'mujhe bhi lagi hain'
just then he saw a pot which he thought that it was filled with water.samrat and gunjan both dranked it but it was a drink which rv has kept their according to his plan.
just after sometime samrat looks at gunjan lovingly and started coming closer to her.gunjan stands at her place and started singing
(tere liye song-movie prince)
the wind started blowing heavily and rain the also started heavily
Jaagi jaagi soyi na main saari raat,
tere liye - gunjan points her finger towards samrat
Bheegi bheegi palkein meri udaas,
tere liye - she hugs him
Haan jaagi jaagi soyi na main saari raat,
tere liye - she holds his hand
Bheegi bheegi palkein meri udaas,
tere liye - she placed her head on samrat's chest
Akhiyan bichayi maine,
tere liye - she kissed on his cheek
Duniya bhulayi maine,
tere liye - she runs from there

Ooo

Tere liye jhoomu deewana ban ke tere liye - samrat holds her hand
Vaada hai mera main hoon tere liye - he pinned her towards the wall
Hona kabhi tu judaa... - he kissed on her lips

...

Ho bheegi bheegi raat mein le kar ke tujhko saath mein- gunjan pushes him aside
Madhosh hue jaaye hum, aa faasle kar ne de kum - she calls him towards her
Zara paas tu aa mere, dheere se choo ja mujhe - he holds her shoulders and slided his hands towards her hands
Kho jaaun tere pyaar mein, baahon mein bhar le mujhe - he kisses on her shoulder

Ooo

tere liye jhoomu deewana ban ke tere liye -he twirls her round
Vaada hai mera main hoon tere liye - he pulls her closer
Hona kabhi tu judaa... - he hugs her

Hoo bhikri teri khushbuyein meri zindagi ki talaash mein- gunjan caressed her fingers on his face
Doobe lamhe mere har pal tere ehsaas mein -she comes closer to his lips
Mere khwab kehne lagey, palkon mein rakhle inhe - he kissed her passionetly
Thoda chain mil jaaye ga, tu ishaara kar de inhe- he gives a love bite near her neck

Ooo

tere liye jhoomu deewana ban ke tere liye- he kissed on her cheeks
Vaada hai mera main hoon tere liye- he kissed on her forehead
Hona kabhi tu judaa...- he hugs her

Jaagi jaagi soyi na main saari raat, tere liye-gunjan pushes him aside
Bheegi bheegi palkein meri udaas, tere liye-gunjan falls on the heaps of grasses
Akhiyan bichayi main, tere liye- samrat lied on her
Duniya bhulayi maine, tere liye -samrat slides his hand towards her hand and holds it.
the next day..........................................
gunjan and samrat were sleeping just an inch away from each other.just then gunjan woke up and saw samrat sleeping behind her.gunjan tries to remember the last night that happened and then finally she remembers it.
her eyes grew wider and she hurriedly wears her suit and sat on the floor and burries her head on her knees and started crying and starts murmuring-'kal raat ko jo bhi hua voh bilkul thik nahi hua'
to be continued.....................................................................................................................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
awesomeeeeeeeee ud dear..
mindblowinggggggg...
omggg.. ab kyaa hoga..??
n rv ne woh drink rakhi thi.... bt yyyy..??
pllzzzzzzzzz cont soon dear.. cant wait to read further..
n thnxx for d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: maisha.hossain7

hayyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! marjawaaaaaaa!!!!!!! mindblowingggggg..........................................awesome.............lovedddddddddd sajan................

thanks a lot....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

awesomeeeeeeeee ud dear..
mindblowinggggggg...
omggg.. ab kyaa hoga..??
n rv ne woh drink rakhi thi.... bt yyyy..??
pllzzzzzzzzz cont soon dear.. cant wait to read further..
n thnxx for d pm

thanks yaar and your questions will be answered soon dear...😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Really awesomme update yaar....waiting for next one
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
mindbloewing fab awesome too goood.. i loved it..

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