Mayur FF- Eye Locks Pt 2 Pg 2

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Part 1-

'Don't they say when it blossoms, its usually all through the season. So don't wait for the next season, just because you couldn't have your bit of fun in the beginning.', read mayank, as he passed a nod to bhavya fretting out, 'i like the lines! Where did you copy it from?'

'from the times article', bhavya retorted, as always trying to be the big guy, 'and anyways this is so not the time for all this mayank! Im solely dependant on you! Please study for the paper, or ill suicide!'

'dude could you stop being a bum!'

'a bum!?!'

'a bum as in-'

'im not asking WHAT a bum is YOU BUM! Im asking you WHY you called me a bum!'

'because a bum is by definition a BUM!'

'arggghh! Shutup clone! Give me my smart bum back!'

'there goes another proof you're a bum bhavya!'

'hun?'

'see i don't have YOUR BUM!'

'fine! Study dude!', bhavya placetted before rifting of for a quick chat with the literature teacher, rajini.

Rajini had a huge puffed up structure, with an uncaring, indifferent feel to her, but she hugely favouritized the guys. And so she became their favourite teacher.

'bhavya, my boy, studied anything? Or you wanna break all the records like last time? Failing in all the subjects!', rajini asked as her hands played with the question paper.

'maam! Don't underestimate me! It takes alot of hardwork to achieve such levels!'

'yes of course bhavya, we should have an assembly in your honor! Shameless boy! Look there! Mayank is studying so sincerely. Learn something from him'

'dont worry maam, when the paper starts ill learn loads from him', he sniggered, as mayanks attention suddenly shifted from rajini maan to nupur.

She had just come back from the viva, and had a happy-go-lucky smile on her face as she boasted, 'oh my god! I swear shreya! It was so easy! The teacher asked me all the dumb questions! My viva was amazing!'

Mayank read her face with a frown on his, as he wondered how she could never looked at him when he looked at her but she looked at him, when he was busy doing work!

As he rubbed his cheeks in a manly fashion, he felt her eyes contact his for a milli-second. It was as though he had fridging floated on cloud 9.

But alas, that was the last glance he had off her that day, since she left home with pallavi, leaving him staring wearily at her.

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Faria. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey.
nice start.
plz continue it.
and try to pm me.
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Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey.
nice start.
plz continue it.
and try to pm me.
all the best

thanks yaar... call mee yuvi
definitel pmngg u!
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hey nice one dear
do cont soon
n pm me when u update
but update a bit longer part next time
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Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey nice one dear
do cont soon
n pm me when u update
but update a bit longer part next time

thanks rabi yaar
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im trying yaar
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Oye Pm list yaad hai naa????

anyways loveable concept

Lekha
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it was so nice
plz provide character sketch and concept
luved it
connt soon with a bigger part
pm me when u update
love sehrish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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seems to be nice plz add me to pm list
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Originally posted by: -Destiny-

Oye Pm list yaad hai naa????

anyways loveable concept

Lekha

lol ofcourse!😆
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Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

it was so nice

plz provide character sketch and concept
luved it
connt soon with a bigger part
pm me when u update
love sehrish

character sketc nd conc?!
ill givee it
waiitt upp!

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