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aashi

@aashizin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

dolly awesome update loved it , the way you portray each and every char. loved it, while reading it i was also visioning this part thanks for this superb update and thanks for pm and best of luck for your exams love u and miss you for sure honey 🤗

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#102

main mallu se pehle......yippie !!!

haay jaan tune to is baar mujhe rula hi diya yaar !! kaise bayaan karun ki how touching this part was. this was the best part so far in ue ff. & i loved the end dialogue. usi se to aankhon mein aansu aa gaye the. lov u jaan for writing sooo beautifully.

actually thnx 2 CVx for giving us a characters like sayank warna hum kabhi bhi unke pov se likh nahi paate. Mayank sach mein kitna suljha hua insaan hai, yeh tere is part mein bahut ache se pata chalta hai.

& samrat ki to baat hi alag hai.

plzzzz aage ka bhi update kar dena. and individually reply nahi bhi kiya to daudega.

loads n loads n loads of love
vinu

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#103

yaar peechli baar tu mujhe bol rhi thi aur ab khud jaa rhi hai

aur wo bhi do mahine k liye

yaar main jhagra kisse karungi😭

jo bhi ho, concntrate on ur studies

n njoy ur xams...................................sabse achche nos lana...................

aur jald se ljald wapas aana

lovely ud.......................loved sweeet sam as always....................n love u too my sweet dol😊😊😊

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sonal

@sweetsonal156

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

awsomeeeeeeee part

loved it

cont soon

n thanks 4 the pm

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

i really love your all 4 parts plzz contuied soon

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Doyel

@--Doyel--

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

loved all your 4 parts!!!! its simply superb dolly and simi!!!
i know i am very late to reply!! m really sorry for that!!! but awesome updates hun!!
do continue soon!!

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#107

awwwwww thanku so much guys 4 liking the work i am seriously sorry i can't reply to everyone individually but thanks sooooooo m uch guys .. may be i'll update this one sometime next to next week

sorry 4 delay

lov dolly

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Sanchita

@sanchita1410

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Today I read all the 4 parts simultaneously and I am speechless.Specially the last sentence. I can see each and every scene in front of my eyes. Thanks dolly and simmi.