ETERNAL LOVE ON SK part 2 updated on page 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Sorry friends, I know I have told u that I will be updating the ff today but due to some problems in IF, m not able to post the part and Param is also not in the city, so U will have to wait for tomorrow. M really very sorry for the delay friends.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
hey nice intro......................love the progolue....................plz add me on pm ............n con't soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: preet09

Sorry friends, I know I have told u that I will be updating the ff today but due to some problems in IF, m not able to post the part and Param is also not in the city, so U will have to wait for tomorrow. M really very sorry for the delay friends.

hi
please cont soon
😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey dear
great work
thnx for the pm pinky
cont asap
Sur
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey dear

great work
thnx for the pm pinky
cont asap
Sur

ur most welcum dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

hey nice intro......................love the progolue....................plz add me on pm ............n con't soon



Thanks 4 liking the part dear
will be updating it in 10 mins
will send u a pm on next update
luv preet & param
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey dear

great work
thnx for the pm pinky
cont asap
Sur



Thanks Sur,
will be posting the part now
Luv Param & Preet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: pinky901

hi
please cont soon
😊😊



sorry for such a delay
will post the part in 10 mins
Luv Preet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Part-1


Sidharth and Khushi were talking with their friends when there is one more announcement:- "Friends, we know that our Major Sahab is a very good singer, so aaj itni special occasion par hamari pyaari si bhabhi ek liye ek song to hona hi chahiye na, What say guys?"


All went into cheers after hearing this.


Sid looks at khushi who has a broad smile on her face which tell him that even she wants to hear a song from him. He move towards the stage and then speak:-


"This is for the love of my life."


Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen

Utar Aayi Jeet Mein, Jaise Chaand Utar Ta Hai

Kabhi Haule Haule Dheere Se

He sing looking at her with love in his eyes

Gun Guni Dhoop Ki Tarah Se Tarango Mein Tum

Chhoo Ke Mujhe Guzari Ho Yuh

Dekhu Tumhe Ya Main Sunoo, Tum Ho Sukoon

Tum Ho Junoon..., Kyun Pehre Raat Aayi Tum

Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen

He walks towards her and bring her too on the stage indicating her to sing along with him.


Badle Raaste Jharne Aur Nadi, Badli Deep Ki Tin Tin

Chhede Zindagi Dhun Koi Nahi, Badli Barkhaa Ki Rimjhim

Badlengi Rituein Ada.., Par Main Rahoongi Sada..

Usi Tarah Teri Baahon Mein Baahein Daal Ke Har Lamha Har Pal


She sang looking towards Sid and tears started flowing from her eyes

Zindagi Sitaar Hogayi, Rimjhim Malhaa Hogayi

Mujhe Aata Nahi Kismat Pe Apni Yakeen Kaise Mujhko Mili Tu

He sang wiping her tears and taking her into his embrace giving her insurance that he is always with her in every moment of her life and his life belongs only to her The entire hall went into applause for the wonderful couple. Their friends have tears of happiness in their eyes because they know the real pain and the sufferings from which the couple has to go to get into this position from where there will be only happiness in their life. After some time, Sid and Khushi bid good bye to their friends and then they both move towards beach where Sid has planned a surprise for Khsuhi. Khushi:- "Sid, hum kahan ja rahe hain?" Sid:- "Beach, Khush." Khushi:- "Wao, really. Thanks Sid." Sid:- "Thanks, wahan ja kar kehna." Khushi:- "I got u, that means u have arranged some surprise for me and u know, I just loved the surprises given by u and do I need to say y?" Sid:- "Yes, u need to say it every time."

Khushi:- "Because I know that it takes just ur love behind these surprises and I loved ur this way to express ur feelings."


Sid:- "I know and I LOVE U."


Khushi:- "I LOVE U 2."


Sid then stops the car and asks khushi to step out of it too, then he places his palm on her eyes and takes her towards the surprise, after reaching there he removes his palm and makes khushi look at the place.


Venue:-




Khushi:- "OMG Sid, it's so beautiful. I loved it."


Sid:- "I know u will love it, that's y I have arranged it for u."


Khushi:- "Thank u so much Sid." She hugs him and gets emotional as tears start oozing out of her eyes.


Sid:- "Hey Khush, What's this? Y r u crying so much today? R u not happy with our relation?"


Khushi:- "Aisa kabhi mat sochna Sid, yeh hamara rishta hi to mere jeene ki umeed hai. Aaj itni mushkilonke baad hum mile hain, to tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakte ho. It's just m not able to believe my destiny. The days between u left me after the college and the day u met me in the court were so depressing for me. I searched u everywhere, then I got the information that u have joined INDIAN ARMY and I joined it too so that I can find u aur aaj tum keh rahe ho ki mein khush nahin hun." She started hitting him on his chest.


Sid:- "I know Khush, hamari zindagi me bahut kuch hua but I promise ab hamari zindagi me sirf khushiyaan hi khushiyaan hongi."


Khushi:- "I trust u."


Sid:- "I know, chalo ab dinner kare, nahin to me yahiin mar jaunga." He said making a face.


Khushi hit him on his arm playfully and said:- "Hamesha mazak mat kiya karo, let's have dinner now."


They have their dinner silently looking into each other eyes with all their love. Then Sid drops khushi to her home.


Khushi enters her room and was lost in her memories with Sid, this day is the best and the most beautiful day of her life because after lots of pain her love, her life is with her. She slept with all the beautiful memories and with a hope that her future will have only happiness stored for her.




In the morning, she receives a letter from the military board then now, she will have to join IMA in JAIPUR (guys, I don't know whether there is any academy of this name or not, but just imagine it na). She get tense after reading the letter because she thought now she will have to leave Sid again which she can't afford at any cost but she can't neglect it also as it's her first duty to serve her country. So, she decided to talk with Sid about this.


On the other hand, Sid also receives a letter from military board about his posting and he is also tensed as Khushi because even he can't afford to lose Khushi at any cost. So, he decided to talk with her and call her.


Khushi:- "Good Morning Sid."


Sid:- "Good Morning Khush, I need to talk with u urgently."


Khushi:- "Even I want to talk with u about something really important."


Sid:- "Anything serious?" He asked with concern in his voice.


Khushi:- "No, nothing like that."


Sid:- "Ohh...Ok, let's meet for breakfast then."


Khushi:- "Ok, then I will be waiting for u. Come soon."


Sid:- "Sure. Take care and Luv U."


Khushi:- "Luv U 2."


They both hung up. Then, both move towards washroom and get ready as soon as possible. Sid then move towards his car and Khushi went into the kitchen to make some breakfast for both of them. After sometime, the bell rang and khushi opened the door.


Sid:- "Hi Khush, How r u?" He said handling her some beautiful roses.


Khushi:- "Good and u?"


Sid:- "Ab apni zindagi ko dekh kar mein kaisa ho sakta hoon." He said placing his hand on his chest.


Khushi:- "Har waqt mazak, tum kabhi bore nahin hote kya?"


Sid nodded his head in no and gives his million dollar smile.


Khushi:- "Now, Come In. I need to talk with u sometime important."


Sid:- "What happened Khush? U look tensed?"


Khushi:- "Read this." She said handling him the letter.


Sid read that letter and a smile appears on his face.


Khushi:- "Tum pagal ho gaye ho kya Sid? Yahan me itni pareshan hoon aur tum has rahe ho?"


Sid:- "Yeh padho." He said handling her letter he got from the military board.


After reading the letter, khushi also smiled.


Khushi:- " I can't believe this. I am so happy Sid, we will be together in Jaipur now."


Sid:- "yes. Tumhe pata hai, mein bhi tumse isse bare me baat karne aaya tha ki meri posting jaipur me ho gayi hai aur mujhe aaj hi vahan ke liye nikalna padega aur dekho yahan aa ke to meri sari chinta hi door ho gayi."


Khushi:- "I am also very happy Sid, now we will be together there too."


Sid:- "Now, let's have our breakfast and then we will start the packing. We have to leave today only."


Khushi:- "Yes sure, Give me 5 mins. I will arrange the breakfast."


Then, they both took their breakfast and then Sid leaves for his home and then they both leave for Jaipur in the afternoon.


Sid:- "Khushi, What u will be doing there?"


Khushi:- "I have been assigned the job to teach the students about the law and order of our country."


Sid:- "khush, just be careful, yeh military academy ke cadets bahut hi shaitaan hote hain. U will have a tough time there."


Khushi:- "I know and I will be careful too. But will u be there for me?"


Sid:- "Of course Khush, I will be always with u today and tomorrow and forever."


Khushi:- "What will be u doing there?"


Sid:- "I have been assigned the job to take the drills and to protect the nuclear triggers there."


Khushi becomes tensed on the mention of nuclear triggers because even she knows that this is the toughest job that he has been assigned and a small mistake can make his life in danger. Sid notices the fear on Khushi's face and said:- "Don't worry Khush, I will handle it."


Khushi:- "I know Sid but it will be difficult for u too."


Sid:- "U trust me or not?"


Khushi:- "I trust u Sid, but still I am worried. I don't want to lose u, I can't live without u and this work is really dangerous."


Sid:- "Don't worry khush, It will be fine aur jab tum ho mere saath to mujhe kaisi chinta, dekhna yeh waqt bhi beet jayega, now please smile."


She smiled but she is still not able to relieve herself from the doubt. To lighten the mood, Sid switch on the music system in the car.


Humen aur jeene ki chaahat naa hoti..
agar tum naa hote..agar tum naa hote..


Khushi look towards Sid and places her head on his shoulder.



tumhe kyaa bataoon..k tum mere kyaa ho..
meri zindagi ka tumhi asra ho..


She remembers the moment when they both get engaged.



Main asha ki ladian ..naa reh reh piroti..
agar tum naa hote..agar tum naa hote..


She remembers the dinner with Sid last night.



Har ek ghum tumhara sahenge khushi se..
karenge naa shikwa..kabhi bhi kisi se..
jahaan mujh pe hansta ..khushi mujh pe roti..
agar tum naa hote..agar tum naa hote..


She remembers the time which she has spend in the memory of Sid and tears started flowing out of her eyes but she don't want Sid to notice them and closes her eyes and drifted to sleep in the same position. But, still 2 tears fell on Sid's arm, he also has tears in his eyes as this is not at all easy for him but still they r soldiers and it'd their 1st duty to serve their country.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi friends, we have updated the first part of eternal love

We are very sorry for the delay but form now onwards, it will not be delayed, its our promise

Please read it and post ur comments or press the like button

Thanks alot guys for loving the start

Luv Param & Preet

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Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago

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