ETERNAL LOVE ON SK part 2 updated on page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Friends, this fanfic is specially on request of pinky901 aka pinky to preet09 aka preet. But she was not able to do that, so she requested me and so we are starting a combined ff, ETERNAL LOVE on our favourite RAJEEV KHANDELWAL and AAMNA SHARIF

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PROLOGUE:-

The scene starts from a party where all the people are happy and are waiting for the couple of the day, there is an announcement," CONGRATULATIONS to both of our friends SIDDHARTH and KHUSHI on their ENGAGEMENT. Finally in dono ne apne pyaar ka izhaar kar hi diya aur aaj yeh dono ek rishte mein bandhne ja rahe hain. So, please welcome them, SIDDHARTH and KHUSHI."

We see a beautiful couple walking towards the stage for their engagement ceremony. It seems that the couple is just made for each other. All the eyes were on them and all are giving their blessings to the beautiful couple. They come on the stage and exchange rings. The hall went into cheers for the wonderful couple.

Then their is an announcement again," CONGRATS once again but u guys have to dance for us as the day belongs to u only."

Sidharth:- "May I have the pleasure to dance with the khushi of my life."

Khushi smiled shyly and place her hand in his and they both proceeds towards the dance floor.

(tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon
kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon) - 2
kisi zabaon mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein bata sakun

Sidharth wrapped his free hands on her thin waist and brought her closer. He was gazing at her with lots of love in his eyes.

main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen, kaynaat mein nahi hai kahin
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

Siddharth twirled her around him once and then brought her back into the fold of his arms.

shokhiyon mein dooobi yeh aadayein, chehre se jhalki hui hain
zulf ki ghani ghani ghatayein, shaan se dhalki hui hain
lehrata aachal hai jaise badal
bhaahon mein bhari hai jaise chandani, roop ki chandani


Sidharth was not able to take his eyes from his life and his would be wife. He danced with her as if he was dreaming.

main agar kahoon yeh dilkashi, hai nahi kahin na hogi kabhi
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi
tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..

"I LOVE U" He said and khushi blushed and he was enjoying it as he loves the colour on her cheeks that chnges when she blushed. "I LOVE U TOO" came a reply from her.

tum huye meherbaan, to hai yeh dastaan - 2
abb tumhara mera ek hai karwaan, tum jahan main wahaan
main agar kahoon humsafar meri apsara ho tum ya koi pari
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi


Khushi smiled at Siddharth which he returns with much warmth. He turned her around and held her in his arms with her back fitting neatly against his chest.

tumko paya hai to jaise khoya hoon..
kehna chahoon bhi to tumse kya kahon


He waltzed her around and then brought her back into his arms.

kisi zabaon mein bhi woh labaz hi nahi
ki jeene mein tum ho kya tumhein mein bata sakun
main aagar kahoon tumsa haseen, kaynaat mein nai hai kahin
tareef yeh bhi to sach hai kuch bhi nahi

Both of them were lost in each other's eyes but a big round of applause brought them back into the senses. They both blushed at their action and came down from the dance floor.

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Hope u guys like it.

This ff will be continued only if u guys want that.

Param and Preet

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Characters Sketch:-

MAJOR SIDDHARTH KHANNA (played by RAJEEV KHANDELWAL):-
A very talented army officer, best pass-out of his batch. He loves his family and Khushi alot. His father is the one of the richest business man of the country but he wants to serve his country so he joined Indian Army after getting his B.Tech degree.

LT. KHUSHI SINGHANIA (played by AAMNA SHARIF):- A very sweet and bubly girl, loved her family and Siddharth very much. She has completed her L.L.B. anf then joined Indian Army because she wants to serve her motherland and also wants to be with Siddharth.

Other Characters will be introduced as the story proceeds.
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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INDEX




Prologue:- Page 1
Character-sketch:- Page 1
Part 1:- Page 9
Part 2:- Page 12



Please send me buddy req If anyone of u wants to read the story and wants me to inform u on updating the fanfic everytime.
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏😃Thank You So Much for starting this fic on my request.
I really like the title of story..Its beautiful as our couples.
Thank you so much for keeping up your promise n open it today itself.
I loved the prologue as well as charactersketch.
I like the names given to our couples as they are different from original.
U wrote the prologue very beautifully n romantically.
I 'm eagerly waiting for the1st part of the story.
I hope that all the readers will going to luv this fic like me.
U guys are really good writers.
Thank You so much for consider my request and start fic on rajeev-aamna based on army.as i really want to read sumthing like this on both of them.
Keep up the great work buddies.
🤗👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good start....i liked it
plz pm me when u update.......luv aarti
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey pinky and preeti awesome start....👏 👏 👏 ....very cute..😊 😊 ..n i loved the character sketch....sounds gr8888...... ......diff concept....i always luvd lrl concept....n even RA jodi....n u have combined them....woooooowwww.......rock it up....will b waiting for the updates...do continue soooooon....n plz add me to ur pm list.....
aur ha...bohot hi shubh mahurat chuna hai start krne k liye...⭐️ ⭐️
luv
sana
Edited by sweetangel_25 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Reallyliked the start..plz let me knw on update..!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetangel_25

hey pinky and preeti awesome start....👏 👏 👏 ....very cute..😊 😊 ..n i loved the character sketch....sounds gr8888...... ......diff concept....i always luvd lrl concept....n even RA jodi....n u have combined them....woooooowwww.......rock it up....will b waiting for the updates...do continue soooooon....n plz add me to ur pm list.....

luv
sana

Hey dear thank you so much for ur comment
i'm glad that u really like the concept.
i also want to read sumthg like this on r-a (the army background)
i would ilike to correct u dear that i jus requested for dis fic to preety but i'm not at all the writer of the fic .the whole credit is goes to preet09 n param12 only.
i'm jus the reader like u.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey sweet pinky and preeti awesome start sweet & very cute..😊 😊 I loved the character sketch.and story line please add me to pm list and pm me dear.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow another RA ff...............wonderful................and nice start...............liked the character sketch...................cont soon.................

PM me..................

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