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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sam-18

I love ur all fanfics.....

All MayUr😳😳

This is really nice.....

Great work!!!👏👏

Do pm me for all ur updates.....

Do continue soon..............😊




Hey, thanks Sam...

I am glad that you liked all my FF on Mayur.

I will surely PM you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey, friends.... Thanks for liking my FFs. Now, here is the update... Enjoy:


Part 6:

Recap: Nupur tried to make Mayank jealous, but she too was jealous because of Suhani. Then one day, while chatting, RidzyDMG advices AmmyRocks to make his Ridhima jealous, so that she can understand her feeling towards him. Little did she know, that it was the starting of hard time for her only.

Next day:

Nupur was going on scooty to office. As Diya had taken leave today, she was alone. She was thinking what to do now. "By God! Itne dino se try kar rahi hu. Magar Mayank to bhav hi nahi de raha he. Ab to un Pranav aur Rishabh se baat kar kar ke me bore ho rahi hu. Thank God, ki Diya aur Sammy yaha he. Varna me to mar jati. Aur pata nahi, aaj Diya bhi nahi he. Koi baat nahi. Sammy to he."

She reaches the office. As she was parking the scooty, Mayank's bike entered. He saw Nupur there. He was going to say Hi, when he remembered Basket's advice. "Dude! Control yourself. Tuje us se baat nahi karni he."

Nupur saw Mayank.

N: "Hi, Mayank. Kese ho?"

M: Oh, Nupur, hi. (Just formal tone without any affection.)

N: Kya hua Mayank?

M: Kuchh nahi.

And Mayank leaves from there. Nupur was shocked by his behavior. She too, went up.

She kept glancing at Mayank, but in vain. When Mayank wanted to pretend to ignore someone, he could do it nicely.

Just then Suhani came.

Su: Hi Nupur....

N: Hi.

At Suhani's voice, Mayank instantly looked up.

M: Hey, Suhani... Kesi ho, yaar? Kitni der laga di?

Suhani was even surprised by this.

Su: Sorry, vo actually traffic tha. Kyu kuchh kam tha kya?

M: (Thinking) Nahi, mera dimag kharab ho gaya he, ki me Nupur ko avoid kar ke tum se sweet talk kar raha hu.

Su: Mayank...

M: Ha, Suhani?

Su: Kuchh kaam tha kya?

Nupur was trying to take it all as casually as she could. But meanigless. Kyuki, Mayank har kam hamesha ekdam perfect karta he.

M: Nahi, bas ese hi... Kyu friends ko miss nahi kar sakte he?

Suhani was beaming with happiness.

Su: Ha.. vo.. me bhi tumhe miss kar rahi thi.

Nupur left from there. She went and saw that Samrat was there on his desk.

N: Hi, Samrat.

S: Hey, Nups.

He saw that Nupur was not happy as her usual self.

S: Oops.

N: Kya hua?

S: Kuchh nahi. Aaj kiske upar apna gussa utarne ka irada he?

N: Gussa, me?

S: Aur nahi to kya? Apna chehra dekha he? Kitna angry young woman face bana ke fir rahi ho? Kya baat he, Nups?

N: Kuchh nahi, Sammy...

S: Kya hua? MAYANK se fighting hui? (Putting stress on Mayank in teasing tone)

N: Ha, vo dekho na... Vo sadu.

Samrat was smiling slightly. Nupur realized some thig is wrong and she stopped. After 1 minute, she frowned.

N: Tumhe kyu laga Mayank se fight hui?

S: Bas, ese hi.

N: Nahi. Mujhe Mayank se kya fark padta he? Vo chahe kuchh bhi kare mujhe us se kya?

Mayank listened to Nupur as he entered there. He became upset as he heard this.

He went back to his desk.

Rest of the day passed without much happening.

At night:

Mayank was thinking, lying on his bed. "Nupur ko sach me mujh se koi fark nahi padta? Me us se baat karu ya na karu.. Me uska dost rahu ya na rahu... Agar us ki life me mere liye koi importance hi nahi he, to...? Kya me thik kar raha hu? I mean, me jitni bhi koshish karu use jealous karne ki, magar vo mujhe notice hi nahi karti to matlab kya he iska? Us ki khatir me us Miss Fevicol se baat karta hu, magar koi fayda hi nahi. Pata nahi ye girls itni unpredictable kyu hoti he? Ab Nupur ki matter me kon meri help karega? Koi ladki.... Diya to mujhe jaan se mar dalegi.. Suhani, no ways... Arre, yaar. Obviously, Basket."

He looked time. "Oh! 9:30. Basket abhi online hogi ya nahi?"

He checks on DMGForum instantly and there she was.

A: Hey, Basket.

R: Hi, Arman.

A: Kesi ho?

R: Thik. Aur tum?

A: Not bad.

R: So kya hua, Ridzy ka?

A: Basket, I think use mujh me interest nahi he. Vo mujhe notice bhi nahi karti.

R: Nahi, Arman... Girls ke bare me, ulta hota he. Agar vo kahe ki use tum se koi fark nahi padta to jaroor, use sirf tum se hi fark padta he.

A: Esa kese hota he?

R: Tumhe kyu esa laga ki vo tumhe notice nahi karti?

A: Mene uske muh se suna.

R: Great.

A: What great? Basket?

R: Arre, dumbo, tum Arman ke itne bade fan ho, fir bhi ye nahi pata ki girls ke is sentence ka meaning ulta hota he.

A: Matlab?

R: Matlab, ye ki she likes you, or may be she loves you.

A: Really, Basket?

R: Ha, Arman.

A: To ab me kya karu?

R:Idiot!!! Kya karu ka kya matlab he? Mene tumhe kal trick to di thi.

A: Hmm.. So should I continue?

R: Ha, Permission granted. ( 😆 she doesn't know for what she is giving him permission!!!)

A: Oh! Thank you. Aur tumhara kya haal he?

R: Apni to naiya he Raam ke bharose...

A: He he he. Good.

R: What good?

A: Kuchh nahi. Lagta he us Sadu ko kuchh samaj nahi aa raha he.

R: Arman, mere Ammy ko Sadu mat bulao. Aur vese, tumhari Miss Attitude kesi he?

A: Basket, Do not call her miss Attitude. Her name is, RIDZY.

R: Ha, and don't call him Sadu. His name is... AMMY. Got it?

A: Ok, done. I will not call him Sadu and you will not call her Miss attitude. Ok?

R: Hmm.. Better.

A: Vese, thanks, Basket.

R: For what?

A: I was really going to give up hope on Ridzy. It's just you that made me continue.

R: Welcome. Ok, now, I am going.

A: Bye. Good night.


And both went in deep sleep thinking about each other.


Next day:

Mayank saw Nupur entering the office with none other than Suhani. 😆

Mayank went up to them. And gave Suhani a quick side-hug.


M: Hey, Suhani... How are you?

Both were red, but Suhani was blushing, while Nupur got angry.

N: Ha, Suhani... Kal raat 7:00 baje baad tum dono mile hi nahi ho. Sab kuchh thik to he na?

M: Hey, Nupur... Tum kab ayi?

N: Suhani ke sath hi ayi. Ab agar apki ijajt ho to me, apne desk par jau?

M: Jao na, mene kab tumhe roka he?

N: To raste se hatoge, please?

M: Oh, yes, sure. (He gives her side and Nupur goes to her desk.)

Nupur went to her desk, but her attention was still here.

M: Why did you come so late, Suhani?

Su: Mayank, me to time pe hi hu.

N: (Murmurs): Ha, ha, par vo to tumhara kab se wait kar raha tha na?

M: Magar me to kab se tumhara wait kar raha tha na, dear?

Suhani again blushed.

Here Nupur was angry... "Dear!!! Mere samne flirt karta he? (In a mocking voice) Me tumhe miss kar raha tha... Suhani tum itni late kyu ayi?

Mayank noticed that she was frowning and murmuring something to herself. "Lagta he use kuchh to ho raha he. Wow! Mayank, you are genious!

He continues to talk to Suhani as Nupur was noticing.

M: Hey, Suhani... Ye dekho na... Is me transaction ki entry kis tarah se hogi?

Su: Mayank... Kal tumhi ne to mujhe samjaya tha na.

M: Vo ha... Magar me bhul gaya. Tum yaad kara do na please! (Says in a sweet request tone)

Su: Ohhh... Ab tum itna sweetly bologe, to me mana thodi na kar paugi, Mayank?

M: Thanks dear.

Nupur left from there for some time.

She went and talked to Diya and Samrat for some time.

Here Mayank is now in trouble. As Nupur leaves, he tries to get back to work... But Suhani was still there.

Su: Ye dekho, transaction entry jab hum Entry module me ADD NEW button par...

M: Ha, right... Mujhe yad aa gaya.

Su: Hmm.. To ab?

M: Ab kya? Tum apne desk pe ja ke kaam karo. Me bhi work continue karta hu. Bahot kaam he.

Su: But if you need help, I can do it, really.

M: (Thinks) Tum meri help karogi? Magar pura waqt to tumhare problems mujhe solve karne ko bolti ho.

Su: Kya hua? Mayank?

M: Kuchh nahi.. Agar mujhe help chahiye to me tumhe bul lunga. Ok?

SU: Ok.

She goes to her desk.


Few days passed in this manner. Nupur getting angry and jealous. Mayank has slight idea about Nupur's feeling. And Suhani as usual....


One day....


In office, there was an announcement of dance competition. Some international delegations were coming for some important project meeting. So employees had to perform something for their entertainment.


Everyone was excited by this news, of course! The competition was after 15 days. They had to register within 3 days.

Mayank was working on his desk. As he heard the announcement, he thought... "Ye ek final step he. Ab tak ke mere anlysis ke hisab se, Nupur likes me more than just a friend. So I will ask her to be my partner. And while rehearsing, I will also figure out that does she love me? And I think it's high time that she knows about her feelings towards me now. So be ready Nupur."


Nupur heard the announcement. "Dance! Wow. Mujhe bhi dance karna he… Mayank ke sath. Kash ye mumkin ho."
She looked at Mayank. He was thinking something and smiling alone. Just then Mayank looked towards her. Nupur looked away from him. "Ye Mayank mujhe ese kyu dekh raha he? Kahi vo mujhe dance ke liye to nahi puchhne vala? I hope so."
After lunch…
Nupur was sitting with Diya nd Samrat talking about Dance competition.
Mayank was searching Nupur to ask her to be his dance-partner. He thought she must be at Diya's desk o went there.
S: Ye dance competition kyu ho rahi he? I am not at all interested.
N: Tum pagal ho kya?
Just then Mayank arrives…
S: Really, Nupur.. Mujhe dance me participate nahi karna he.
N: Sammy, mujhe dance me participate karna he.

Mayank heard this. He was going to ask Nupur that will she be his partner... But as he heard this, he turned away and went to his desk.
S: Achha, to phir ja ke Mayank se puchho na…
N: Sammy, tum na…. Ab mar khaoge, Samjhe?
S: Ok, baba, sorry… Ab jao, Mujhe bahot kaam he aaj. Is project ki target date he.
N: Ok, bye.
As she was going to her desk… She saw Suhani talking with Mayank. Now a days, it was not new. Either Suhani kept talking to Mayank or Mayank kapt talking to Suhani. But her attention was caught as she heard dance partners.
M: Dance partners?

Su: Ha… Mayank, hum dono partners bane dance me?

M: Lekin me to...

Su: Please...

Nupur was passing from there. She thought Mayank would ask her but…
Mayank saw her passing from there. She was walking towards her desk in her thoughts. Just then Mayank saw that her leg tripped over the CPU wire, and she was about to fall. He moved as soon as possible, and reaching her, held her by waist. As Nupur was about to fall, she had closed her eyes, and she grabbed something tightly. She opened her eyes to see herself safe in Mayank's arms. They kept looking in each other's eyes forgetting the surroundings.
M: (Thimks…) Kash, Nupur… Me tumhe bata sakta ki me tumhe kina pyar karta hu… Magar tum to… Me jindagi bhar tumhara intezar karne ko taiyar hu. Magar ek bar koi ishara to do ki mujhe pata chale kit tum mujhe pasand karti ho.
N: (Thinks…) Kyu? Mayank har waqt mera sath dete ho? Jab bhi me problem me hoti hu, to tum mere sath hote ho. Kya ye sirf ittefaq he, ya kuchh aur? Bas ek ishara de do Mayank… Fir chahe jindagi bahr intezar karna pade to bhi me taiyar hu.

Intezar… Intezar… Aur kya he ye pyar?




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Posted: 15 years ago

uffff the MayUr last part were Awesome...................😳😳

ohh gosh this suhani didnt believe anythings yaaar dont let Mayuu dance with her or even talk to her...............
haha Nups what said to Mayuu is working Now she is getting jealouse hai😳😳😳
Do Con Sooon Sherya i really loved the update...............😳😳
Edited by ArTiToTheEnd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
shreya
its an amazing update
loved it
loved the way how they fell for each other
and nups was so jealous to suhani
or kiyu na ho
ye har waqt mayu ki peche kiyu pdhi rehti hai?
pls make mayur partner in the dance competition
loved the ammy ridz chatting
ab confession bhi jaldi kardo na
update soon
love u
Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy!!
well done with the part!
loved it!!
m glad that they have the same feelings for each other..
ab intezaar hai toh sirf confess karne ka...
do update soon
will be waitin!!
=D
HiNaL 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
kab bolenge ye dono apni bat
Please yaar missunderstnding dur karo
Wonderful update
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hehehehe.. Intezaar.. kitna intezaar.. donon ko bana de yaar dance partner.. kya prob hai.. mujhse in donon ki takleef dekhi nahin jaati.. aur uss Suhani ki toh.. Fevicol kahin ki.... Nice update haan..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part
loved it a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
very cute part............ very nice ha ha mayank calling suhaani a fevicol ............. lol nice one
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowww...wonderful part...loved it....update it soon dear...

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