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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Cupid the Spider - Very innovative concept
@Thoda Gussa Thoda Pyaar - romantically realistic
@ No Pain in Love - So much love among DM and Santu and kabab mein haddi was include at the right moment 👏
@ You Are My Life - the shawl gives a greater impact to the story you conveyed!
@ How to say Thank You - DM gives great lesson to amateur Santu love 101 😃
@ Sleeping Beauty - the pictures were so apt! never before had i noticed DM looking great even while sleeping! naughty DM!! fun and romantic!

The picture enhance your writing.nice concept! This provides ample concepts to be stolen from by the show writers 😆 😆 😆

Awaiting your next post......
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Posted: 15 years ago
FIRST OF ALL I JUST WANT TO SAY - WOW WHAT A REPSONSE - EVERYONE HAS ERRUPTED SEEING DM ASLEEP (told you hes cute)
hey ritwika thank you sooo much - im glad your read all my posts you missed the kurta buttons😆
nah seriosuly seriosuly thank you everyone - the response im getting is amazing
see the thing is i think of an idea first and then write the scene and then try to find appropriate pictures to make the scene more realistic
because if i get the picture first then i would end up copying the scene which i dont want to do - i will always try to add a different side/concept to it
Anyway i dont know when i will post my next sanraj scene - my mind is blank at the moment(tweety pie is flying around) - the thing is i have a new idea whihc focuses on mayavanshi family - btu i dont know whether to start that or shall i just stick to sanraj scenes - i am thinkgin to do mixture - but then again i dont knw- im in a dilemma!!🤔
Edited by s000 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Scene 8 - Mat Jao (Dont Go)

In SanRaj room:

Santo is sitting on the bed crying, DM walks in (not looking at Santo), Santo quickly gets up and pretends to be sorting out the pillows on the bed

DM: "ey santuddi you seen my watch", she does not say anything, DM looks in the wardrobe, then approaches the draws near the mirror.

DM (still looking): "ey santudi you seen my watch", Santo does not reply, DM closes the draw and turns around and looks at Santo, who is still pretending to sort the pillows then sorting the bed quilt (which is already done), then puffs the pillow on the chair(she has her back turned to DM while she is doing all of this, so he cannot see her), DM looks at her while doing all this, and thinks what is she doing, I am asking her something and she is not replying.

DM: "ey santudi", Santo does not turn around, neither does she reply. DM approaches grabs her by the arm and turns her around. He sees that she is upset and had been crying.

DM: "su che?, why are you upset?"

Santo does not reply (head down eyes looking at the floor)

DM: "ey santudi im asking you something, first i was asking about my watch and realised you were not answering but you was correcting things which are already done, now tell me whats up?"

He moves his head slightly down and looks up at her.

Santo not reply, tears begin to drop along her cheeks.

DM: "whats up santuddi, someone said anything to you?,................bol na"

Santo (crying): "Malik.........Malik mat jao".

DM: "kyun what happened?". She hugs him tightly, DM is hit back by her hug, as he did not expect it.

Santo (whilst hugging): "Malik mat jao (don't go), please" (cries more)

DM smiles, grabs her by the arm and releases her from hugging him: "aray duffor thats why your crying, because im going, keri duffor chi nahi, aray im only going for a couple days and your crying like im going forever, look you don't worry everyone is home and you won't even realise i am gone and i will phone you everyday, understand?" (wipes her tears)

Santo nods her head still crying.

DM: "come here" (pulls her towards him and hugs her tightly)

DM unhugs her, puts his hand on her cheeks:

"look santuddi, don't worry okay i will be back before you know it, and promise me you wont cry............promise"

Santo nods her head, DM pats her cheek and smiles.

DM: "chal lets go downstairs everyone is waiting and if i stay here i will miss my flight", he holds her hand and walks out of the room with her (hand in hand). .........................................................................................................................They walk upto the stairs and then DM lets go of her hand (because everyone is downstairs). They walk down the stairs and everyone is waiting to say goodbye to DM.

DM takes blessings from Baa and Bapuji.

Baa looks at Santo and says: "what happened to you". DM turns around (talking to htien): "aray baa isse kuch samhja (baa make her understand), shes upset because im going."

Baa smiles, Toral and Kaddu go to Santo and both put their arms around her and say

Kaddu: "santo don't worry were here with you, Papa will be back in a couple days"

Suraj comes running and hugs her legs: "haan maa, im here". Santo smiles (but still upset inside).

DM: "see i told you, everyone is here"

Santo looks at DM. DM then gives santo a look (as if to say aww, dont cry please for my sake) (as shown in picture below)

Santo smiles

DM: "chal baa bapuji, im going, jai shree Krishna"

DM leaves..............................................................

Hope you enjoyed it!!
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oh and this last pic of DM shall be my next profile pic, so girls its copyrighted for me!!
Edited by s000 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Reserved..

*Unreserved*

Soo lazzy mee.. I read it and forget to update my comment.. Silly silly.. 😲 Im spamming..

Loved your post sweet gulabo..!! As always fantastico.. The pics are so apt for each and every part.. Like i'm watching the scene before my eyes.. 👏⭐️

Aaaw DM looked sooooo cute in the last pic.. I'm going to steal him.. 😳 😳


Edited by SanRajDeewani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi , your photo features are fantastic. really really good and bring fiction alive. well done
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SanRajDeewani

Reserved.. Will read and edit..😃

lol i know i kind of posted at wrong time i know you all busy with live update - take yout time - you got all weekedn - read and edit?? edit?? you mena comment
Edited by s000 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
😍 too gud yaar n ur pictures r perft nic wrk keep going yha
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Posted: 15 years ago
relly.......nice.....nd d pictures relly givs d real feel................ 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sapna ur written is superb🤗 specially with photos it makes me😍keep continuing like this😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh and this last pic of DM shall be my next profile pic, so girls its copyrighted for me!!
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Pinky don't worry u have full copy rights on DM only. then why u r so bothered abt one of his photo.
BTW nice episode. i enjoyed it a lot

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