MAYUR OS - History Repeats - page 61 -28-08-2010 - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
update on part 4-

fantastic mayur scene...........
simply love it.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Another OS

Cute confession
Mayank and his mom stays together.
Samrat and nupur are bro sis and stay together ,whenever he goes on business trip nupur stays at mayanks's home.

Mayank has confessed his love but nupur is still hiding her emotions

Mayank POv ( main aisa kya karu ki nupur mera proposal accept kare and something clicked on his mind) - yes dude you should do this

MN are working on the same MNC ,they were classmates and best friends infect more than friends but nupur is still not ready to confess or not ready to accept the truth.

In the office at lunch time

M was staring a girl named Nikita and nupur was looking at him
N : khana khane ka man hai bhi ya nahi ?
M : kaun kambakht khane ke liye yaha baitha hai nupur
N : to canteen me log kisliye aate hai mayu
M : tum us niki ko dekh rahi ho
N : haan aisa kya hai usme?

M : are ek bar dekho to sahi ,kya slim figure hia uska aur us par uske dress wow ,kitni hot lag rahi hai na wo

Nupur ( kahta hai ki pyar mujhase karta hai par najar dekho kaise lar tapka raha hai us niki ko dekhakar, pata nahi in ladkiyo ko sharm name ki koi chij nahi hai kya aise tang aur chote kapde pahankar ghar se kaise nikal jati hai)

M : tum kuch soch rahi ho kya nupur
N : nahi main kyon sochu .vaise bhi tum ladke kahte kuch ho aur karte kuch ho
M : ab maine aisa kya kar diya ?
N : Ab kahte ho nupur I love you aur najre kahi aur hai

M : to tumhe kya lagta hai Zindagi bhar tumhare intzar me hi bita du ,main koi Majnoo nahi hu Modern Romeo hu agar tum nahi to koi aur sahi.Vaise bhi loyality period ho gaya hai mera

N : loyality period matlab

M : matlab ye nupur bhushan ki ,its been 3 years ki maine tumhe propose kiya hai par tumhare to kan par ju tak nahi rengati, main koi kunwara marne ka sapna nahi dekh raha hu samjhi na (in mind - main tumhara intzar tahe dil se aakhiri dum tak kar sakta hu nupur par shayad tum hi mujhe apne aap se alag rakh rahi ho)

N (anger can be seen and even jealousy too)

M : ek kam karo tum ye tiffin rakho main jakar us sexy se milkar aata hu and he left but he has his gaze on her so that he can see the reaction

M to Ni : Hi babe kaise ho?

ni : hi handsome ,aaj us nupur se fursat mil gayi tumhe kyon?

M : aisa nahi hai nupur to hamesha se hi kahti hai ki i should talk ,par u know mujhe hi thoda uneasy lagta hai (nupur can hear this - maine aisa kab kaha ye mayank na bahut jyada hi hero ban raha hai aajkal)

Ni : oh really ,vaise tum to bahut handsome ho mayank ,aur main to vaise bhi tumhe kabse samjha rahi hu .do not waste ur time .Aaj rat mere ghar par

M(i know nupur ki tumhari aankhen aur kan mujh par hi hai ) _ wow niki briliant ides I will be there and she just hugged him

he too without any interest

Nupur ki aankho se to jaise jwalamukhi hi nikal raha tha she left from there and mayank aslo went back to her

When they were coming back nupur sat back on his bike and she was not holding him and mayank knownigly driving rash

this made her to hold him ,but in anger her nails were diging from his shirt to his neck which she did not realise

M : tum to aaj hamare yaha aaogi na ,samrat bahar gaya hai

N : main akele thik hu

M : koi jarurat nahi hai aur tum mujhase naraj kyon ho?

N : main kyun naraj hone lagi tumse.main thik hu

M : ok thik hai jao apne kapde pack kar lo main wiat kar raha hu

PAr nupur to nupur hai she made him to wait for one hour and he started getting angry - ye kahi sudharegi nahi and he started shouting
M : Nupur tumhari shadi nahi hai jo itna saj dhajkar aa rahi ho meri maa bhi ghar par nahi hai ki tumhari sundarat ke gun gaye abd chalo jaldi we are getting late

And she appeared and then mayu was gone because she was looking hot compare to any girl he has seen till now

She was in balck saree and it was so perfect ki he forgot what he is and where he is
She was blushing badly and called him mayank

somehow he gained his sense and she sat behind him and both came to his home

Mayank in teasing : kya bat hai nupur aaj saree means pahi bar tumhe saree me dekh raha hu.
N : haan aaj aise hi sochi ,vaise bhi aunty mujhe kabse kah rahi thi to sochi aaj pahna lu
M : par maa to ghar par nahi hai ,maine bataya to tha
N : oh main bhul gayi mayank
M : mujhe bore lag raha hai nupur shall we watch movie
N : SRK ki movie

M : no ways i will watch only english please hamesha SRK nahi

N : ok thik hai par decent one ok

M : fine and they sat for watching movie
during movie he was controlling himself to avoid nupur as mush as possible par dil kya kare,

Movie was good one but as english movie will definately have the dressess in the western style

M : wow kya lag rahi hai ,she is so hot
N : kaun hot hai ( mujhe to abhi tak ek shabd bhi nahi kaha aur us heroine ke piche pada hai ,bewkoof ,idiot stupid)
M : tum kuch kah rahi ho kya (whispering in her hear)
N : nahi main kyun kuch kahu ,tumhe to wo niki aur angrejan hi bahut hot lag rahi hai ,main to jaise aawas ka chand hu.subah se tum us niki ke gun ga rahe the aur ab iske

M : are niki se yad aaya ,mujhe usane dinner par bulaya hai aaj
N : to jao na ,usi ke sath rahna main kaun hu jiske liye tum yaha rukoge.pure samay bus yahi kahte ho nupur i love you nupur i love you par jaha dekhi nari wahi line mari hai na,tumhe meri parwah hoti to use kabhi bhi haan nahi kahte.modern romeo ye bhi nahi samjhate ki main tumse pyar karti hu bus kaha nahi hai to aisa behave karne lage mujhase and she ran to the bedroom

Mayank was happy and relaxed after hearing the truth that she too loves him ,he went back to her
she was crying and her back was shown
he went and hugged her from back and made her to see his face
her face was still down and she was not seeing him

M : Tumhe kya laga ki main us niki ke sath dinner par jaunga aur wo bhi tumhe akela yaha chodkar
N is still sobing

Mayank made her to look into his eyes and asked

M : tumhe mere aankhon me kuch dikh raha hai ,
N : haan main

M : aur kuch nahi dikh raha hai nupur ,kya tumhe apne liye mere andar koi feelings nahi dikhai deti
N : haan and she lowered her eyes, par aaj tumane ek bar bhi nahi kaha ki main kaisi lag rahi hu,maine first time saree pahni hai mayank

M : nahi second time ,first time acedemic meet me bhi to pahni thi na.Tumhe avoid karne ko kabse koshish kar raha hu par aankhen hat hi nahi rahi hai ,tum bahut sundar lag rahi hu ekdum princess ki tarah.Main janta hu ki ye tumne maa ke liye nahi mere liye hi pahni hai.kyonki mujhe saree pasand hai .hai na nupur

nupur nodded her head and buried herself in his arms
N : haan mayank Sorry maine itne din tumhe sach nahi bataya ,par really mayank I love you
M : pata hai nupur ,i too love you.Par satane ke liye saja to milni chahiye na nupur

N : saja kaise saja mayank.
M was looking at her pink rosy lips and she understood his intention and scremed nahi mayank
but wo use kaha bakhshane wala tha he did not leave her and sealed her lips with his.nupur tried a lot but gave up as she felt the sensation and his feelings at the same time and responded back


Thats all guys
Hope boreing na ho

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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
see i came first!

i hate girls wearing low dresses.....i mean yaar look at urself! u shud wear clothes!

i loved what mayank was doing!

awwle......atleast she confessed!

and i loved how he made up with her......

so sweet na.....

and yahan bhi kiss?

wow!

beautiful oneshot!

do write more!

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
wow...awwesome blossom os.
Really d confession vz so cute..
Thanx 4 d pm write more.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

Oye Hoyye Arunaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Loved the OS to bits... Haaye... Lovely!
Continue soon!
Love
Mina
Edited by mina_18secret - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
awwwww really cute confession...........jealousy is surely a biiiiiiiiig factor in all love stories...hehe.....do write more....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
Hi aruuuuuuuu
lovely OS
it was sweet,simple and nice
loved it so much
do write more
Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
lovely os aruna
to good
jealous nups was so cute
pls do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Cute one aruna..
its truly a cute confession...
loved it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
awww.....it was shooo shwweeeettt.....lovedd itttt.....
do write more....

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