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Originally posted by: achoose

really loved it yaar...



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Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

a nice os.....

cute one.......




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Awww....i loved ur os.........do write more!!!!
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Bauji has gone for his business tour and not in the city
This is the Valentine night
Mayank and Nupur did not pick the phone thinking that Gang is disturbing them
after a long when they did not pick the phone Adhiraj and Benji came to their Flat

They were sad and there face was dull
They rang the bell
it was almost midnight

Mayank - Is waqt kaun aa gaya hai?
Nupur - Pata nahi mayank
Mayank opened the door and saw both of them
Mayank - Benji adhiraj tum yaha is waqt?
kya hua sab thik to hai na?
tum itne sad kyon lag rahe ho
mean while nupur also came

Nupur also started the same question
Adhiraj and Benji ne apni puri himmat jutai and said in one breath
"Nupur Gunjan ko goli lag gayi hai,aur halat bahut critical hai"

Nupur is in shock mayank is also got shocked but somehow apne aapko sambhalate huye
Kya bat kar rahe ho adhiraj?
Nupur is standing like a statue
Mayank ko laga ki ye sahi nahi hai aise Nupur par bahut bura impact hoga,
usane nupur ko shake kiya par wo reply hi nahi kar pa rahi thi now she was looking at mayank and mayank wanted her to speak something
so he said "Nupur Gunjan ko goli lagi aur uski halat bahut kharab hai"

Now nupur came in sense and started crying like anything
she wants to see her lil sis and then they left for hospital

In hospital

Nupur saw gunjan from the outside as no one is allowed near her she is in ICU
She is crying and no one is able to manage her
Samrat is also shocked but still trying to convence nupur - sab thik hoga nupur tum rona band karo plz.

Nupur- Par samrat ye sab kaise ho gaya ,gunjan to tumhare sath thi na ,she is hardly able to speak a word and mayank says her ,nupur sambhalo apne aapko
ye waqt himmat harne ka nahi hai ,sab thik ho jayega bhagwan par bharosa rakho
First time in life mayank is saying ki Bhagwan par bharosa rakho

Mayank Diya aur suhani se kahta hai ki take Nupur (just with the eyes)

Now he takes Samrat away (Sammy is not ready but mayank use samjhkar bahar le jata hai)
dono Lawn me baithe hai samrat continu ro raha hai aur mayank ko samajh nahi aa raha hai ki use kaise samjhaye
But still wo initiative leta hai

Mayank - Main janta hu samrat ki abhi ye sab puchana galat hai par ye que sabke dil me hai
ki aakhir tumhare rahte ye sab kaise hua??
main tumhe force nahi kar raha hu ,agar nahi kahana hai to koi bat nahi hai

Samrat is totally broken he hugs mayank and cries loudly
[Mayank is behaving like a elder brother for Samrat.
first time Samrat does in his life - he did not cry when he separated from his parents also,
but mayank wanted him to cry and did not stop,after some time Samrat came in senses and wipes his tears,
Mayank offer him some water ]

Samrat - Mayank ye sab meri wajah se hua hai
Mayank - matlab main samjha nahi ,achanak se tum khud ko responsible kyon kah rahe ho?
Samrat - kyonki main hi iska jimmedar hu mayank
Mayank is all confused
Samrat - Mayank aaj Chashmish ko laga tha ki main use propse karne wala hu ,
wo bahut khush thi par jab use pata chala ki aisa nahi hai to wo tut si gayi
maine use samjhane ki bahut koshish kari ki Shadi hi lige ka end nahi hai main use hamesha aise hi pyar karta rahunga ,par wo nahi mani
aur bahar chali gayi uske bad jo hua wo tum jante ho
wo gunde wo chashimsh ko pareshan kar rahe the aur adhiraj ne bachane ki koshish kari to ye goli gunjan ko lag gayi
and again he is crying

Mayank ab samjha ki samrat kya kahna chah raha hai,he puts his hand on Samrat's shoulder

Mayank - Dekho samrat Gunjan thik ho jayegi aur use kuch nahi hoga tum himmat mat haro
Suddenly nupur came running

Nupur - Mayank Dr ne kaha hai ki Gunjan abhi khatare se bahar hai,
Samrat is bit relaxed after listening this and Mayank all go to see Gunjan
But Dr did not allow anyone
Dr - She needs some rest aur khun bahut bah gaya hai to abhi hosh aane me time hai
aur hosh aane ke bad bhi aap ek ek karke hi usase miliyega

Nupur - Mayank bhagwan ka shukr hai ki Gunjan thik hai main to dar gayi thi
again she is asking samrat kya bat hai samrat ,jab gunjan ko goli lagi tum uske sath nahi the
Mayank - Nupur ,abhi ye sab bate karne ka waqt nahi hai hum ye sab bad me discuss kar lenge
abhi tum ek kam karo Dr ne kaha hai ki Gunjan ko hosh aane me time hai to tum jakar uske liye kuch banakar le aao
Nupur nodded her head and went with Dia and Suhani and adhiraj

Mayank - Benji Uday ek kam karo tum dono bhi fresh hokar aa jao main aur samrat yahi hai
Benji and Uday - thik hai mayank hum jaldi hi wapas aa jayenge

Now again Mayank and Samrat are alone -

Haan samrat ab to sab thik hai aur gunjan ki halat bhi thik hai
Main tumase kuch kahu agar tum bura na mano to

Samrat - nahi dude tumhari kisi bat ka bura mana hai kabhi aur main janta hu ki tum bahut samajhdar ho kabhi bhi mera bura nahi chahoge

Mayank - Samrat tum jante ho Nupur tumhare aur Gunjan ke rishte ko lekar itni pareshan kyon thi?

Samrat - haan use galatfahmi ho gayi thi mayank

Mayank - Haan samrat wo to hai par tumhe nahi lagta ki us galatfahmi me bhi kuch sahi tha

Samrat - kya sahi tha mayank?

Mayank - dekho samrat nupur aur tum bahut achhe dost ho wo tumhe janti hai
use isi bat ka dar tha ki agar kabhi tumane Gunjan se shadi se mana kar diya to Gunjan to toot hi jayegi,aur Nupur gunjan ki ye halat nahi dekh sakti hai

Samrat - Par mayank main aisa kuch nahi karunga main chashmish se bahut pyar karta hu

Mayank - hum sab jante hai Samrat ,par pyar ko bhi ek rishte ka name dena padta hai
aur gunjan ko tum jante ho wo bina rishte ke to tumhare sath nahi rah sakti hai na

Samrat is listening all the things very silently

Mayank continues --
Dekho samrat agar aaj nupur ko pata chal jata ki ye sab is wajah se hua hai to shayad wo tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karti aur is bar main bhi use samjha nahi pata

Samrat is in deep thought -
Mayank main gunjan ko hurt karna nahi chahta ,aur main ye apne sapne me bhi nahi soch sakta hu mayank

Mayank - haan samrat main janata hu ki tum Gunjan ke liye best ho,par samrat tum commit hone se itna darte kyon ho??
Kya tumhe aisa lagta hai ki her shadi ka hal divorce hi hota hai
to samrat mujhe bhi Nupur se shadi nahi karni chahiye thi na par hum aaj sath hai
aur halat ke against hum dono khush hai.Jab hamari shadi hui thi aur Bauji ne hume accept nahi kiya tha tab main bhi Shadi se dar gaya tha,us waqt Nupur hi meri himmat bani usane mujhe sambhala.tum jante ho mere pas ek naukri hi hai par Nupur ne mujhase aaj tak ek bhi chij ke liye shikayat nahi kari ,uska yahi sochana hai ki agar hum sath hai to ye chti moti bato se fark nahi padta hai sabse jyada jaruri hai to dono ka sath rahna.Aur hum sath hai isliye main aaj ye sab tumhe samjha pa raha hu.
Main achhe se janta hu ki Gunjan tumhari life hai aur tum use kabhi bhi dukhi nahi dekhoge par tum bhi socho kya gunjan ne kabhi bhi tumhe dukhi kiya hai
Gunjan wahi hai jisane tumhe Suhani se milaya ,aur mujhe lagta hai jise rishto ki itni pahchan hai wo Shadi ke rishte ko bhi bakhubi janti hai

Ye sab sunte sunte Samrat bahut rone laga,
Samrat - Sahi kah rahe ho mayank aaj jab Gunjan ko khote dekha to uski ahmiyat samajh aai hai,aur main aaj hi use propose karunga taki jindagi bhar ke liye wo meri ban jaye

Suddelny Nurse started calling them - Patient ko hosh aa gaya hai
Mayank - jao samrat tumhari Zindagi tumhe bula rahi hai
Samrat ki aankho se khushi ke aansu bah rahe hia

He goes inside the room

Gunjan is looking very week and still tries to hide her pain
Samrat uske sir ke pas baitha hai aur uska hath apne hath me lekar kahta hai
Samrat- janti ho chashmish main bahut lucky hu
Gunjan aankho se hi usase que kar rahi hai kaise?
Samrat - Kyonki tum meri life me ho,main thoda sa stupid bhi hu
kyonki main jise sabse jyada chahta hu usase commitment dene se dar raha tha.
haan gunjan main ab samajh gaya hu ki tum hamesha se mujhe mere kahne se pahle samajh jati ho,mujhe kab aur kya chahiye tmhe sab pata hota hai,tum meri khush aur dukh me hamesha sath rahti ho.
Aur main yahi chahta hu ki tum hamesha meri hi raho isliye kya main tumase ek bat puch sakta hu.
Gunjan is hardly able to speak - But still says haan bolo
Samrat - Kya tum mujhase shadi karogi?
Gunjan ko apne kano par vishwas nahi ho raha hai she is asking again -

Samrat - Chashmish tumane sahi suna hai main tumase shadi karna chahta hu
Gunjan is very happy to hear all and has a tears but this is khushi ke aansoo
and Samrat kisses her forehead and gives her a light hug

Suddnly Nupur and mayank also enters in the room
And nupur also overhears this and says - oh samrat to tumane meri bahan ko chinane ki achhi chal chali hai and all of them laugh

Slowly Gunjan recovers

I hope you guye would have liked it
Do write your comments Good/Bad always welcome


Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤗..........

beautiful aruna....just too too gud.....really a perfect sayank os..this is my sayank....n u hv done full justice.....thanku....thanxx a lot....🤗
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Originally posted by: nikki028

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beautiful aruna....just too too gud.....really a perfect sayank os..this is my sayank....n u hv done full justice.....thanku....thanxx a lot....🤗



Thank you very much Nikki Dear
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I guess a part from nikki no one liked it :(

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I was getting bored so wrote the next part of the previous post

Continuation with the previous one

Gunjan recoverd and started going college,so the concentration shifted to MAYUR story

After a long time Mayank and nupur are sitting together to discuss there own life

Nupur - Just resting and kept her head on mayank's shoulder ,Mayank pichale kuch dino me kitna kuch badal gaya na
Samrat ne Gunjan ko finally propose kar diya ,gunjan bhi ab thik ho gayi hai
mujhe to aisa lag raha hai ki kitne dino bad main aisi rahat mahsus kar rahi hu

Mayank - Chalo nupur tumhe rahat to mahsus hui
haan last kuch week kafi hectic the ,main bhi kafi busy busy feel kar raha tha
hume to jaise waqt hi nahi mila ki kuch bat kare .
Par thik hai ab Gunjan thik ho gayi hai us waqt use hum sabki jarurat thi aur humane bhi samay ke sath bahana sikh liya hai

Nupur is looking with love and respect to mayank and listening him very carefully

Mayank is not aware and talking with her all the things, janti ho nupur tumhe aur gunjan ko ek sath dekhakar bahut achha lagta hai
dono ek dusare ki har bat bina kahe samajh jati ho,sach me bahne ho to aisi and laughing

suddenly he looks at nupur ,kya hua tum mujhe is tarah kyon dekh rahi ho nupur??

Nupur - kuch nahi mayank.mujhe to kabhi kabhi khud se hi dar lagta hai,lagta hai ki tumhe meri hi najar na lag jaye???
lagta hai main her din ek naye mayank ko dekh rahi hu
jaise jaise din gujar rahe hai tum aur bhi jyada pyare lag rahe ho aur meri najro me tumhari izzat aur bhi bad gayi hai

Mayank - Are wah mere liye to compliment ho gaya ,vaise ab maine aisa kya kar diya Mrs Sharma ki tum mujh par itni fida hone lagi ho
taking away hair for mher face.

Nupur just holds his hand and looks into his eyes

Nupur - Tum kitne achhe ho mayank ,tumane Bauji ki kisi bhi bat ka kabhi bura nahi mana,
Meri har galti ko maaf kar diya aur mujhe kabhi bhi akela nahi choda.chahe main tumhe kitna hi bhala bura kyon na kahu??
Gunjan se jab meri missunderstanding hui tumane bina dare mujhe ye bataya ki main thodi galat hu ,tum jante the ki main naraj ho sakti hu par tumane sach ka sath diya aur mera bhi
Aur jab Gunjan ko meri jarurat thi tum hamesha mere sath the.
Mayank aisa banana bahut mushkil hai main shayad tumhe ab samajh pa rahi hu ki sadu se mayank ke andar emotions ko samajhane wala ek aisa dil hai jise koi dekh hi nahi pata,
aur main is duniya ki sabse jyada khushkismat ladki hu jise tum jaisa Pati mila.and she started crying

Mayank - (to light the env) Are baap re Nupur tumane to aaj sare records hi tod dale meri itni tarif kari ki mujhe ab khud shak ho raha hai ki main wahi Mayank hu na jo hamesha tumase ladana pasand karta hai aur tumane to sare dialogue ek hi sans me kah dale,tum thaki nahi nupur itna kahte kahte

Nupur just smiles and says nahi mayank maine koi tarif nahi kari ye sach hai aur tum shayad apni tarif sunana nahi chahte ho.

Maynak (close to nupur and Holding her face in his hand) - Nahi nupur main janta hu ki ye sab hua hai,aur main ye bhi janta hu ki main ye sab kar paya kyonki tum hamesha mere sath thi.
tumane meri Patni meri Friend banakar hamesha hi mera sath diya hai.
Aur nupur hum dost bhi hai aur Pati Patni bhi to kya humare liye sato vachano me ye shamil nahi hai ki ek dusare ka sath do aur hamesha ek dusare ke himmat bano

main to sirf wahi kar raha tha nupur.

Nupur goes close to mayank and tells him ki mayank tumhe aur kuch kahne ki jarurat nahi hai
aur main ab apne Pati ke sath samay bitana chahti hu Friend ke sath nahi and surrenders herself with all dedication to her hubby
He hugs her and tells "I Love you Nupur"
Nupur bhi "I love you Mayank"
and light goal 😳


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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update!!!!!
please write more.....
waiting for next one.....
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Originally posted by: daniella05

awesome update!!!!!
please write more.....
waiting for next one.....



Thanks dear
will write soon

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