~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136 - Page 81

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

well lite has just came back m now writing it
will updt in an hour

no probs....... i'll be waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

no probs....... i'll be waiting

thnx yr
you r toooo gud
sorry if i m making you awaited
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

thnx yr
you r toooo gud
sorry if i m making you awaited

of course not.........
after all intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai..........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

of course not.........
after all intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai..........

so to hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
i am looking forward to a long update
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome promo
loved it
continue soon
n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
all interns punished
girls angry over boys
boys were trying trying hard bit it of no use girls were not at all ready especially nupur
b: yr ye girls kyu itna gussa l ke chalti hai
s: ha benji in ko to maza ata hai ha gussa inki all tym hobby hoti hai gussssssaaaaaaaaaa
m: dude ab ye socho k karna kia hai
b: us nupur ko ek lagao sab thk hojayega
sayank gave him ha scary look
b: sorry me to bus aise hi bol rha tha
m: u better shut up(keeping his hand on his soulder)
s: ha my nups is best............. sorry our nups thik hai mayank ab kch plan soche
m: ha i thnk inko kch gift dete hai
s: nhe nups ko to gift dena hi mat wo to pakka usi gift se pitey gi
m: kyu
s: dude experince me buhat exoperienced hu in nupur matters samjhe dude
m: to tum hi btao kia kare mr experienced
s: hmmmmmmmmm.......... idea
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why not a
"sorry party"
m & b: kia sorry party ye kaise party hui???????/
s: ha ye mast hoti hai dekhna ise girls zarur maaanjayegi
m: to karna kia hai
S: real me nups tum ko thik hi kehti hai
m: kia
s: idiot jab hundred budhu mare honge na tab hi tum born hue hoge
m: hehehe very funny hua kia
s: kia kia kia laga ke rakha ha jab bola k sorry party to phir kyu puchte ho kia karna hai
m: arey me to ye puch rha tha k kia aur kaha ha i means kase arrange karege
s: oh to suno
he told them wht to do.
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after 1 hour
all girls were sitting in cafeteria
when one ward boy came and handed to them a letter
in which they were called in party room of hospital
all girls went there and were horrified as it was black completely
n: gunjan mjhe andhere se buhat darr lagta hai
g: mjhe bhi
n: plz yaha se chalo
d: ha babes chalte hai
as they tried to turn sum hold them by wrist
mayank to nupur
samrat to gunjan
benji to diya
and lites go on
as all girls were sared they all hugged then
but after 2 min all ended
all girls anger strted again
thn boys
started singing a song
O meri jaan na lele ke meri jaan
Teri ada 2
Jaan jala na tujhe pe deewana
Mein hoon fida 2
then boys hold their eyes and bow down to them
Gustakhi maaf karde
Abb to insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna to maan le
then they stand up
oooooo
Jaane bhi de bhi hua
jaane bhi de
( girls were controlling there smile as they dont wanted to show them that they are no more angry as they want them to do more to manaofy them)
Gussa tera jhootha
Jhoothi moothi berukhi hai
Jaanu main to jaanu
Teri naa mein haan chhupi hai
( thn boys bring the cake and asked girls to cut
but they refused)
Aye sanaam na kar sitam
Tujhko khuda ka vasta
( girls went to corner)
hey..
Gustakhi maaf karde
Abb to insaaf karde
Apna dil saaf karde
Kehna to maan le
o
Jaane bhi de bhi hua
jaane bhi de

( boys in serious tone )

Tanha na kategi zindgani jaanle tu
Meri hi zarurat tujhko hogi maanle tu
Mar ke bhi na chodunda Teri baahien tera raasta

( all girl came to them hugged them as they were touched by this line and dont want to lose thm)
samrat nuour
mayank gunjan
benji diya
now they cut the cake
and feed other
s: to maaan gaye nnups
n: ha sam tu to jaaanta hai na mjhe k mera gussa kaisa hai sorry hum kch zyada gussa hogye
m: waise don worry bare bare shero me aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai
n: wah aj mayank filmy dialogues kia bt hai
s: to ghar chale m tooooo tired
n: ha chal
then all left
sanu went to nupur house
as samrat want to knw her feelings for mayank
n: tu yaha beth mecoffee leke ati hu
s: wow! coffee jaldi la cant wait
n: sabr kar yr
s: han a jaldi le a
s: (Mumbling) aj to is k dil ki bat jan ke rahuga pta to chale is k dil me u k liye kch feelings hai bhi k nhe
after 10 min nupur came with two mugs of coffee
n: le sam
s: really teri coffee to wrld best hoti hai and tu bhi
n: thnx yr aj ka din ktna tiring tha na
s: ha mayank bhi yhi keh rha tha
n: kia kehrha tha
s: kch nhe aise hi( samrat understood she is eager to knw abt him so he stated checking her feelings)
n: bta na sam plxxxxxxxx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
s: aise hi yr
n: ja nhe btana to bhau mat kha
s: acha baba btata hu
( nupur interestingly listening him)
s: wo kehrha k buhat thak gaya hai
n: bechara us ko rest karna chaye na
s: waise ti thk hi kehti hai
n: mai kia
s: k mayank buhat idiot hai
n: ha but itna bura bhi nhe hai sweet ha and caring bhi hai
(nupur gets lost in his thots)
s: kia hua
n: kuch nhe
s:(mumbling) to aaag yaha bhi lagi hai
n: kch kaha tu ne
s: nhe to acha its getting late me chalta hu subah ready rehna me tjhe pick karne aonga
n: ok take care love you
s: love you tooo
thn both hugged each other
nxt day
samrat came to mayank
s: so ready for mision nupur( thumbs up)
m: but kal itna mushkil se maaani hai phir naraz hogye to
s: to guru samrat kis liye hai bus aj tumhe use complete ignore karna hai samjhe plan me koi gharbar mat karna warna phir bhuljana nups ko
m: nhe me nupur ko khona nhe chata jo tum kahge whe karunga pakka
s: thts gud dekho wo arhe hai 1 2 3 ... start
thn gunjan and nupur came in
nupur said hi to mayank but he didnt replied
n:ajjeb insaaan hai jawab hi nhe deta lagta hai is me koi manufacturing fault hai
thn she again call him
again no repl
g: mayank nupur kch bol rhe hai
m: wo me ata hu
n: jao jao idiot stupid samjhta kia ha apne ap ko
she angrily left over there
g: kia mayank ye galat hai na
m: my swweet sister choro na usko
thn samrat share hi 5 to mayank
s: kch to aaag lagi hai dil me ab to nupur ko to maaanna padega
m: but dude agar wo mjh se pyar nhe karti hui to
s: relax yr guru samrat k hote hue no worry rite
m: ok ab tum pe hi bharosa hai
frndz this is it
well sajanians dont kill me
i will give sajan part in nxt update
pakka pakka
do comment and hit like tab
Edited by sizzlingsis - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Me first one to comment
I loved it a lot
wow mayank ko guru samrat gyan de rahe hai aur cute mayu follow bhi kar raha hai 😆😆😆😆😆
Aag to dono taraf barabar lagi hai
Wow Song was just amazing aur best fit tha
ab next update plz jaldi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

main first nahi aa payi........

koi baat nahi bade bade shere mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rahti hai..........
update rocking tha by god.......
shuru mein benji, samrat aur mayank scene was so nice.......
loved the angry glares that benji recieved from sayank........
and the manofing scene was so cute....
my guess about song was so right......
but a party too was awesome.......
glad you used my suggestion for the song......
the song was well potrayed......
loved the sanu scene at nupur's place........
i have always loved the sanu bond........
so nupur makes world ki best coffee.....
and she was interested to know abt mayank.....
she couldn't take in his burai......
the begining of the plan was rocking.......
mayank was scared but guru samrat gave him the confidence,..........
can't wait for the plan to go on......
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Me first one to comment

I loved it a lot
wow mayank ko guru samrat gyan de rahe hai aur cute mayu follow bhi kar raha hai 😆😆😆😆😆
Aag to dono taraf barabar lagi hai
Wow Song was just amazing aur best fit tha
ab next update plz jaldi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

for being first
well will updt nxt tomorow nite till 12 but short updt
luv sehrish

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