~~~do dil ek jaan MN ff~~ part 17 page 136 - Page 51

Originally posted by: daniella05

lovely update
promo is awesome
continue soon

thnkee dear
wll update asap

Originally posted by: kulsumd

part11
Wow nice update...Omg mayank imagination vz so romantic...aww gunjan z feelng jelous abt sanu...

Promo
Ohh mayur cute nok jhok.
Gunjan wantd 2 break sanu frndshp..it wil b fun wen she wil kno sanu relationshp...cant wait 4 next updat..continue soon.

kulsum

thnx a lot dear
will update asap

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Mayu's dream was aaye haaye

Loved it

Hop Gun dosent does sumthg that Sam will hate her forevr

Liked Armaan n Sam's caring For Nups

Loved the whole update

thnx for such nyc comment
will update asap

awesome dear!!

Originally posted by: samratrocks

awesome dear!!

luved it to da core....

fab one!

waiting for the next part.......

thnx dear for likin it
will update asap

part 12

mayur spent their night in cottage
in morning mayank wake up and saw nupur sleeping peacefully
m:(in mind) kitna angelic face hai but bolti buhat hai but itni pyari hai ..........control mayank tujhe kia hogya hai why u r attracted towards her tum to isse nafrat karte hona remember usne tumhari car kharab ki thi but ....................ab to hum besties hai na....................mayank tujhe kia hogya hai have you started likin her.... no its impossibl . oh god why i m so confused help me???????????


mean while sunrays falls on nuuprs face and she wake up
n: good morning mayank
m: (still lost)...........................................
n: goood morning idiot kin khayalo me ghum hojate ho
M: oh good morning
n: oh finally chale plzzzz mjhe lonala jana hai
m: ok get ready we are gong to find sum one who knw the way out ere as we r lost in jungle
n:ok 5 mins

they both got ready went out to find a way
but they didnt found it
nupur finally lost her patience
n: tum ek raasta nhe dhund pye me aur nhe chal; sakti plz tumhe jaana hai to go on i am not coming
thn she sits there
m: plz thora aur hum pauhnchne wale hai
n: nhe main nhe chalne wali
m: plzz
N: maine bola na nhe to nhe
m: ok fyn jo karna hai karo kisi ki sunti to ho nhe har waqt apni manmani karti ho u r just a arrogant girl(fully irritated)
n: listen hold your tongue zyada mat bolo ek to tumhari waja se humyaha hai aur mjhe daant rhe ho so mean
m: me meaan aur tum churail
n:listen hold it dont try to be over smart
m: well for ur kind info i am smart dso dont b jealous
n: ah forget it
m: ah .......
after sum tym they agai started their journey but while walking sumthing hit mayanks shoulder may be a glass piece due to this his hand started bleeding nupur saw this
n: mayank ye kia hua(in a concerned tone)
m: pta nhe achanak se kaise ye hogya( trying hard to control his pain)
n: lao mjhe dekhne do
m:choti si chot hai thik hojayegi
n: choti si chot hai ye idiot itna khooon behrah hai and tumhe ye choti dikhti hai
m:but
she put finger on lips
n: shhhhhhhhhhh
thn she took her scarf wrap around his arm
n: buhat dard horha hai
m: ab nhe horha(mayank just control man focus focus)
n: sorry me tumhe buhat tang karti hu na
m: dost ki har bbat manzur hai mjhe bus tum hamesha meri dost rahogi na
n: ha kuch bhi hojaye hum hamesha frndz rahege
then they hug each other and continued their journey
sooon they find a way out there
finally they reached to lonavla
they both entered the camp
mayank quickly went to gunjan and hugged her
g: bhai kaise ho ap aur ye chot(while having tear in her eyes)
m: me thik hu gunjan aur ye chot si chot hai
g: agat tumhe kuch hojat to me to
m: kuch hua nhe na aur plz aisi baatein mat kar tu kaisi hai
g: mai thk hu ap fresh hojao thk gaye hoge me ap ka lie juice le ati hu
m: ok


nupur quickly went to armaan and hugged her tightly
dr a: kia hua angel
n: bro i missssed you a lot
dr a: me toooo thnk mayank tumne meri behen ka khayal rakha
m: sir ye to maine apni frnd k liye kia tha
s: rite dude waise agar aj tm na hote to nupur pta yaha tk kaise paunchti
m: dude tension nhe lo ab wo yaha hai so dont worry
nupur quickly went to samrat and hugged her
s: kaisi hai nupz you dnt knw how much i missed you(tear was coming in his eyes)
n: maine bhi tumhe buhat miss kia(tear also formed in her eyes)
mayank smiled and wa really happy to see tht their bond is really strong
dr a: mayank humhe lagta hai chalna chaye kyki ye dono to ab kisi se na baat karne wale aur na kuch dono ab ek dusre se hi baatein karege after all 2 weeks ke baad jo miley hai
m(smiled) ok sir

nupur narrated whole story to samrat
s: oye hoye to tje wo ab pasand aane laga hai
n: shut up sam tu bhi na kuch bhi kehta hai
s: but kisi ne humari jaga leli na
listening to this nupur tears flow out and she went from there
samrat goes out to find her thn he sees gunjan
s: hey gunjan hi
g: hi(shyly)
s: tum ne kahi nupur ko dekha
g:nhe to(abhi bhi ye isi ke gungarha hai is nupur ka mam kia karu0
samrat went from there after searching for an hour he finally found her
s: nups tu yaha hai
n: ha( while wiping her tears)
s: kia hua angel tu ro kiu rhe hai
she tightly hugged her
(gunjan was watching all this from back side and was fuming in anger)
s: kia hua angel(while hugging)
thn they broke off samrat cupped her face
s: kia hua angel kisi ne kuch kaha mjhe bta use mai nhe choruga
n: teri himmat kaise hui ye bolne ki k teri jaga kisi ne le li tu special hai mere liye teri jaga koi nhe le sakta tu hai to me hu tere bagair me apni lyf soch bhi nhe sakti ainda aisa bola na to me to marr(samrat stoppped her by his finger)
s:shhhhhhhhhh bus aur kuch mat bol i am so sorrry ( from inside he was feelin proud )
s: hum saath hai aur hamesha rahege
n: exactly
s: chale aur ab ye rota hua chera saaf kar tu aise achi nhe lagi
thn samrat kissed her on forehead and she kissed her on his cheeks
s: chale
n: ha chal
they entered camp while holding their hands
g: in dono ki dosti to todni padegi but kaise jo bhi ho me unhe alag karke hi dam lungi aakhir samrat sirf mera hai sirf aur sirf mera
the end


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sehrish

Lovely dear!
Thanx for the p.m..

loved the part cont. soon

Originally posted by: NIDIZ

Lovely dear!
Thanx for the p.m..

thnkee you