AR FF 'TALAASH' new Part 20 on Page 123 (26/02/2015) - Page 56

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Originally posted by: princess52

bohat hogaya

bye

ur not uodating huh

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Originally posted by: princess52

bohat hogaya

bye

ur not uodating huh

bye

Originally posted by: princess52

HEY SIM HEY HABUUU

ok i had kina missed 4 partsss...n lollzzz the most await8ing partsss... yaa you did hehe

thnk god mujhe tujeh explain nahi karna hoga ke mien kaha thi itne din....hmm no need yaar , as main to anteryaami hu mujhe to sab pehlee se patta hai hehe

nahii to jaha per bhi comment karti hoon waha pehle explaination deni parti hain lolzzz to itane tention kya hai , copy paste karte reh hmm 😉😉😉

lekin i think mene tujhe itni baaar explaination de di hain ke ub tujhee yaad ho gaya hoga...

wese good going haaa 12 partsss n plus 5o pgs congratsss my sweeet sister......awww , ya 12 parts , and 50 pages and i won't say thanks hmm 😉😉😉 😆😆😆😆

already pg 50 ....

sirf soch agarye shuru ke parts kisine parhe nahi hote to i m sure abhi tuk to aram se....naya thread khol liya hota ...haa yaar i wish , per kya karru that stupid link was not working hehe
but chal koi baat nahi abhii to i m sure age bohat hai ....3 thred aram se ho jayega..haaa haa kyon nahi aggar aap logo ki morcha mandli kaa saath rahha to to hoo hi jayengee hmmm

ok ok ok ...i know ...will u stop screaming n getting irrated...? nahi nahi countinue kar mere paas bahut free time hai , hehe , ab update hi to karnaa hai hmm 😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆 i know me bakwaas kiya ja rahi hun lekin ...kya karun i have misssed u so much n misssed talking to u abut everything n nothing ...so lolzzz... aww i missed you too yaar hehe , glad you r back
.ok chal mein abhi apni bakwaas band karti hun...hmm if you wish hehe

or part pe ati huun aajaa , jaldii

welll pehle to yahii batatu.....

keeee

simmmmmmmmmm i love u hon...n i love the way u wrte n explain ...gosshhh itss simply outstanding seriouslllyyyy......awww i love you too haa , hehe , thank god warna i thought i m not that good in expressing proper feelings hmmm

n 2 thing i dont hate armaaan cozzz i think his probably right hmm i knewww soo even i don't

since 2 yaers he was craving for his son..... n now he know where he is....n who snatched it away....he was not at all wrong ...n wht he did was kinda right i mean it was wrong but any1 would do tht .....it was an instant reaction.......haa i knew it was okk ok

infiact ...i cried for him specaily in the last prt where he was talking to rahul abt hi sfeeling ntht is he wron? u reallly made me cried over there..aww really do you want me to send you another tissue box hmm

n well ya id id felt bad for ridz as wellll....i mean ....true she was going to be paid for it but still for 9 months she kept tht baby in her sotmach .....tuk care of her n now she has to give away ...so running away was an instant reaction as well but it was kinda wrong on her part......hmm i knew that as well hehe

n becoz of this 2 insane ppl....the most whu sufered n shue still sufferening the most cutest krish ....his just a baby...n his not allowed to see his mother.....his crying his having fever his not havng anythig ..aww really yaar , krish suffering hehe hehe , .n here these two ppl r discussing wht to do next,....now here where i think armaaan is wrong n felt likeee...kicking him n saying ur FOR GOD SAKE UR SON IS CRYING.......chal ja jaakar keh dee lol's

anywyz,.....

n tht stuoid naina....i so hate her........seriousllly feel like killling tht women never seen a mother like tht who would do tht to her only son ....n the most dashing handsome young guy heheheh

hehehe . ahem ahem , ok ok continue

soo simzzzz.....i want talaaashh update as sooon as possible coz i cant wait the ending was gud....armaan has reaslisd tht in a way is his wrong n krish will need a mother....soo i m really waiting for the next update

n u better give me the next updat coz if u dont ....i wont talk to u ...I N MSERIOUS haa haa i knew your threatening maine sab dekh hii liyaa hai

got it mam....i want it as sooon as possible

n oh ya 1 more thing...i just saw ur pm list n didnt saw my name over there i fel reallly bad....cozzz i was there since part 1 .....n u 4gt me to add in ur pm list out of all the ppl u 4get me...i think i have allready done with that explanation and i have now even added you there

n hey i m serious...no mello drama queen i really felt bad i kinda chcked the om list twice....but anywaz it sok if u dont want to add m e...coz i still gonnaaa read ur fff n keep commneting

anywaz sweeetsss
hehehe love you tooo , mere drama queen missed you like hell , and stop coppying me for god sake with these essays hmm , inhe likhneee ka copyright sirf and sirf meraa hai got you ...love ya loadz

n plzz update as sooon poosible

Originally posted by: Wild.Aimee

Hwaa Simi? Ye kya? kya kya dii 😕

Tumne is baar apna hi record tod diya...ohh voo hmm haa hehe kya karuu

Maine abhi pichle part pe comment kiya bhi nahi... Ruk ja zara, ab main pahle is part pe comment kar lu, phir naye part pe baadmein karungi...hmm i knew , i m seeing that lol's ok okhmm

The way you have portrayed emotions of both side of the river was very nice. Instead of using story-like impromptu results, I am glad you have kept it realistic. i knew ki aur koi hoo na hoo aap jaroor sab samjh jaayengee hmmm 😊😊 you r always right you knew

I know most of us (yes me too), didn't feel good about the fact that Armaan and Riddhima are standing on opposite corners of the blade, but it is still adds to the natural flavor to the story.
hmm it is dii , ye nahi hooga to story ka kya hooga hmm hehe but don't worry the blade is surely blunt here bahut jaldi they will cross it hmm 😊😊😊😊

It would be unfair to expect Armaan forget every pain, all that craving for his child in gust of air.

yes i knew , i tried to show that only , how can hee , do that in instant

Similarly, the pain of a mother for loosing his only solace in life is also very natural. hmm glad you liked it as well

I hate people like Naina and Maya though, who are kind of expert in using every delicate situation in their favor. They are disgusting. ya i knew they r i to hate them yaar I felt worst for the poor child. I mean, what he has done to buy so many aches. Instead of getting love of both parents, he has to go through all this hmm yaa dii , in all this one suferring the most is that baby only Naina is obviously a greedy selfish woman. I hate her... i hate her too , but you knew i love you hehe 😉

Originally posted by: princess52

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