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abb01

@abb01

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#251

Pari itni achhi update aur dukhbhari khabar kyon?

End kar diya tumane main to abhi tak shock me hu

aisa kaise pari please samjho na

Khair agar khatam kiya hai to kam se kam naye update jaldi jladi please

Mujhe to bada maja aaya good tumne stuborn hokar nupur ko majboor kar diya wo raj batane ke liye jise wo kab se chuppakar kitna sahan kar rahi thi

Aur unka kiss shem shem puppy shem Pari

End was superbs you told them the truth how you got to know the truth aur unka reunio was too beautiful

I will defi miss this beautiful FF

Love you sweety

Aru

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#252

Here really nice ending

Loved it

Kash Pari pehle hi gusse mein aa jati

Phr dono kad ke mil chuke hote

Liked the last trio convo it was jus fab😉

Really nice ending

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#253

Nice ending pari do write more

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sharanya

@shaaranya

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 15 years ago

#254

Such a cute end to the fan-fic!!

but will so miss readin this fan-fic

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#255

Awesome update pari..

pari toh bahut naughty hai..hahaha!1!!

Loved the update...

finally all is well..

i'll miss this Ff yaar..srsly!!

Love,
Akansha

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#256

at least kuch to sharm karo yaar parii ke samne hi ........
or tu parii sharm nahi hai ....san ke samne .....
at least you updated or truth was out i think this was written in hurry but tell you everything you write it was best and i love it....
ab dono mil gaye i hope ki parii ko bhi uska dream boy mil jaye i ask suhu about pari's dream boy but she said parii have to wait for six seven years ...........