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Posted: 15 years ago
pari it's shocking promo
plz don't let any thing happen to mayank
update soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
shocking n interesting promo.....
hope nothing happens to mayu!!!!
do continue soon n thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
shocking promo yaar i m crying for mayur plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....


Update soon....


Yaar aise promo dekar dara deti ho....


Waiting!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Oye hoye

Action se bhara promo

Looks Mayu was hurted much

Update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyya guys.....

thanx a tonn for yur comments......

cant reply to you all individually..............

but i read them all and they are very precious to me...

scroll down for the update..

pari..

Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

heyyya guys ....... i know i m updating after a very long tym but still....... its a long update....... i dont know but its all boring....... just few more parts in this ff and it will end soon...... enjoy..

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.next morning...
.
we were going on a picnic.... as per demanded by anji....... as a
treat on the recovery of mayank......
while we were going, we also planned to go shopping...... so first we
stopped at a mall....
i took anji and we both were busy with eachother., it also gave us
some more tym to discuss abt our plan..
we anji said "pari di,, look...... police man"
p: yes anji..... they must be on duty.....
anji: yeah right.........
i dont wen she left my place and went to that officer.... wen i
noticed anji's absense i found her near the officer......
i went to her.....
p: i am extremely sorry sir. she is just...
police man: oh dont worry.. she is a pretty girl.. and you know wat
her way of talking reminds me of someone close....
p: ohh. and anji wat were you doing here???
anji: i was asking uncle his number,,,]
p: why dear??
anji: coz he's a policeman ... and if ever any of my class mate took
my pencils i will inform him...
and both of us started laughing.....
wen mayank called: anjali........ i hav selected a dress for you..
anji : papa cum here,,,,,, i hav got a police bodyguard.....
the police man took anji in his arms and said '' sure madam"
mayank came with a dress and saw the police officer...
m: tum...
policeman: tum???
and the officer put anji down and both hugged.......
i was still confused as who this person was...
m: pari... meet adhiraj.... my college frnd........
i was lyk..... ohkk so this was adhiraj....... remember adhiraj
guys??? mayank's roomate during his college days. and he was the who
had to suffer wen nupur came at midnights.
p: pleased to meet you adhiraj......... (isaid forwaring my hand)
he shaked hands
adhi: so mayank..... yur daughteR?? (pointing towards anji)
m: yeah.... anjali....
adhi:" and where is the great NUPUR BHUSHAN SHARMA........
they both shared a naughty wink///////
n: somebody called me?? (nupur said coming from another direction)
n: adhiraj..... tum yahaa??? after a very long tym hn??
adhi: yes mrs. sharma.... and you hav changed a lot...... wearing
formals??? (nupur was wearing a formal salwaar kameez unlyk old nupur
with bright colors and all that)completely different....... i still
remember wen i first saw you...... in yur night suit and two big
pony's.........
and all three of them burst out laughing........
i too wanted to laugh but pretended not to coz nahi to meri chori
pakdi jaayegi.....
adhi: and benji is also with me....... there he cums...
i see a boy.....
and he rushed to mayank..: dude...... tum.......
he almost jumped on mayank...... and then he looked at nupur.: aap
kesi hai sweet heart???
and again all four of them started laughing, i was feeling left out......
adhi: remember, benji nupur ke saath flirt kar raha tha wen he did not
know she was yur wife........
b: and nupur ki language......... BY GOD........ saale kaminey, tujhe
to mein dekh loongi....... and all that......
adhi: seriously guys tum dono ke saath jo samay spend kiya , sabse
best tym period tha humaari lyf ka.........
b: aur tum dono college chodne ke baad waapis mile hi nahi......
m: dude....... tumhaara kya hua??? shaadi waadi huyi ya nahi??
b: huyi na........
n: diya se.........
b:" jhansii ki rani kabhi galat nhi hoti....
m: aur adhiraj tumhaarri?
a: suhaani se.....
n: dekhaa mayank mein to humesha kehti thi inke beech mein kuch
hai..... aur tum ho ki dhyaan hi nahi dete the..........
and i coughed..........: aheeeeeeeemmmmmmmmm aheeeeeemmmmmmmmm
trying to show my presense......
and they turned to me.. and anji.....
n: yeh hai pari.... humaari frnd.......... pari humaare college frnds.....
adhi: achaa guys abhi humme jaana hai,.......
n: thik hai but keep in touch.....
adhi: sure....
and then we moved to the picnic spot........
we all were playing wen we heard the sound of the gun
shot............. and i almost got an heart attack...
we all came out......
i saw some goons had caught nupur and the gunpoint was on her......
only we were there and noone else.....
i was not understanding anything.........
m: chod do usse....
mayank shouted from behind.........
one of them said: nahi chodenge kya karlega.....
then one of them twisted nupur's wrist and she screamed in pain.
m: (shouted) usko chod de......
wen one of them hit him hard on his back......
he fell on the floor.....
at that tym i noticed that the goons had iron rods in their hands.....
i was not moving a bit....
a goon came to me and tied my hands.... i did not try to protest

bcoz i knew it was useless...
i saw mayank's neck was bleeding...... he was on the floor......
nupur too was on the floor a but far from mayank as one of the goon threw her on the floor.....
the goons hit nupur hard with the rod and she cried in pain....
m: nupur.......... (he screamed at the tip of his voince while i was crying to leave us)
mayank in no second rolled towards nupur and was now on nupur........
i was shocked and was watching all the things quitely.... wat was all this happening??
then i saw anji watching all this from the second floor (we were on the ground floor)...
but i had no guts to match her eyes as she was not understanding anythin too.........
.
mayank was on nupur, securing her from getting hurt,,,
but
the heartless creatures, those goons were continuously
beating mayank, in order to move
him aside and beat nupur.
"hat jaa saale tereko nahi maarna hai" one of them said...
i cant understand why they were targetting nupur?? what did she do.
but mayank was mayank
he did not even move a bit....... he was completely over
nupur and was looking
into her deep eyes.... nupur was trying hard to make him move aside
even she was pushing mayank.
i know why bcoz both of them loved each other.
so much that mayank was
bearing those hunters and iron rods's hits............
and nupur was
trying to make mayank aside so that.. so that he
do not get hurt....
but mayank was too strong for her............
and i,... who was standing there
crying for there well being.
asking the goons to stop..........................
it was paining me...
to see nupur crying (although she was not getting hurt)
for mayank.
this incident brought into
deep sense of respect for mayank and nupur...
how much they both loved each other.
mayank had not a single tear.
he was just ..... just saving his love..
now tears were in all of our eyes.
in nupur's coz her love was in pain.
mayank had
tears of happiness (i think so)
as he was saving
nupur, and i..... i was crying for them....
i was crying
tears were not stopping.
the scence
in front of me was horrible.....
and full
of pain...... thank god anji was not here....
wait..... where is anji??? damn..... where is she...
and look.... mayank fell on nupur.....
till now he was on nupur in such a way that nupur
didnot have to bear his weight...
but now.....
crap////////
he fell on nupur........
nupur sceamed "MAYANK"
mayank went unconcious...................
his whole body was bleeding...
he was in a pool of blood..
same with nupur...
but she was in the pool of mayank's blood.....
i tried to open the ropes
tied in my hands to do sumthing...
'but all in vain......
the goons then picked mayank up who was unconcious..
one of them hit him hard on his head which was already
bleeding, and said, "chalo chalo isse pehle
koi police case ban jaaye hum chalte hai"
and they went..........
nupur quickly rushed to mayank......... she put his head
on her lap and cried... "mayank wake up"
i interrupted.. "nupur...." indicating her to open my ropes...
she came to me, helped me opening my ropes..
and we again went to mayank.............
.
nupur took him in her arms,,,,, she took her duppatta and tied it round mayank's head....
did i tell you that she was wearing white?? her duppataa wwas red now...... her dress was red now..
nupur was crying.... and i was consoling her and i called the ambulance..
but wen i was calling we saw some policeman.... coming towards us..
with the goons who were here a minute b4.. who hit mayank and nupur... they were under arrest..
we see the same man "adhiraj" with sum of the inspectors.......
adhi: nupur move aside...... we will take mayank to hospital....
they took mayank in the police van only as waiting for the ambulance was useless....
i and nupur looked at each other thinking who called police??
then adhiraj told us that anjali called him and told him everything....
nupur hugged anjalii tight and was proud to hav such a sensible and understanding child...
then we too moved to the hospital////////
i was scared only bcoz mayank had just recovered from his previous injuries and now this......
i cud only pray,,,,,,,,
nupur too was in the ward... assisting the doctors as she was also a doctor.. (remember!!)
wen nupur came out i asked her abt the condition of mayank...
but she already was crying so much tha i cud not understand... she said doctors told her to move out as she was not in a state of performing an operation..
p: but nupur... if you are a doctor than how cum you are the boss of our company.. i mean you did not hav commerce....
n: it was our family business so..
wen the doctor came and we stood up./
doc: the patent is in a critical situation......thank god that his backbone is saved..... he will gain conciousness in an hour or two..... you may visit him afterwards......
we sat on the chairs outside the ward...
p: nupur....... i wanted to say sumthing..
n: hmm...
p: mayank tumse bahut pyaar karta hai nupur..... mujhe..... mujhe poora yakeen hai wo,,
n: i know........
i was left silent.....
p: you know then..... then why are you guys not together?? i mean..... i mean..........
n: saari cheezein aapki marzee se ho jaayein.. its not possible.....
p: but you both luv each other dearly.... plz nupur..... if there is sum problem sort it out....
n: i cant....... i hav not got the ability to solve these problems....'
p: but nupur lyf is very short..... abhi to tum yahaan thi isliye tumhe pata chala ki mayank is in this state... wat if tumhe pata hi na hota..... wat if wo tumhaari absence mein.....
n: nahi...
p: come on nupur... you hav already wasted yur 5 years...
n: yes but..... wait... tumhe kese pata 5 years??
i bit my lip in foolishness...... gosh... why i hav to speak so much...... she was waiting for my reply.....
p: umm... anji told that you both got separated after her birth and she is 5 years......
n: !@$#@%%^
uhhh.. i gave such a calculative answer......... i m such a big stupid........
p: i think you shud change yur dress...... (i said changin the topic..)
she went from there to change.....
she came back within minutes....
we went to the glass wall which showed us mayank....
he was lying on the bed..... full of white bandages..... on his head, neck, legs.
OMG... i cant see someone in that state...... i turned my face to oher side..
anji was not here...... adhiraj took her with him.... as she wud really get scared after seeing her father.... anji.. hn.. such a smart little gal..
wen i heard sum sobs... nupur had kneeled down and was crying badly.......
i consoled her.... i was feeling really bad......
wen the doctor came and informed us that mayank was awake...
we went in........ i was on the door only wen nupur fastend her steps and reached the bed....
she held his hand.......
n: tum thik to ho..... (she said almost in tears)
mayank nodded.....
i was really touched by this couple seriously... i tell you i love both of them......
n: kya thik ho?? itni chotein aayi hai.... tum bhi na... kya zaroorat thi........
m: mein thik hoon nupur....... (he said in a very low pitch and extremelt low frequency)
nupur cried...... she bbroke down in front of mayank .......
n: why ??? why.... (she cried more..)
m: dont cry nupur....... i m ... ahhh.........
n: dont you dare say a word more...... either i will kill you......
i chuckled in tears and mayank smiled and nodded......

.

here ends a prity longgg part...... plz dont forget to comment.........

muaah....... love ya

pari..😉

Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey pari... it was nice.. but whats the suspense???😕

👏👏👏 I m second to comment...😃
Edited by sam-18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was just fantastic pari
even i was having tears while reading this
amazing update
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part .... so emotional ..... i hope they sort out the problem soon ..... thanks for the pm

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