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Posted: 15 years ago
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omggggg awesomeeeeeeeeeee onee yaar

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lol apni date par qui khela tha kya
but sajan r sajan they can do anythingggggg
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awsom part
ples cont soon
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a good place to end, ab wait karna parega sam kya karta hai. do continue soon
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heyya amazing plss conrinue and m me when u have updated awesome too good mindblowong.. continue
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hello friends....thanks so much for all ur lovely comments n apologies for not being able to post this earlier as i was somewhat lost in other things.....as usual my OS has got extended to another part....i know am now sounding repititive ....but d gud news is i have completed it n will posting both d parts together.....hope u all enjoy d same.....n pls do let me know ur comments...

Luv u all

cheers,
Meenakshi


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Samrat's Challenge on d date--- final - Part 3A


Samrat went to switch on the TV smiling widely…."Poor chashmish she doesnt' know that I saw the actual telecast yest….but just for second he feels guilty that he's lieing to his chashmish n then thinks , no am not lying, she never asked me….jo use pata nahi usse woh khafa nahi, but reminds himself that he has to work extra hard on his memory to recollect those answers before gunjna does n he has make it appear natural or elese d whole game was off…

Samart comes back and sits on d couch where gunjan is sitting, gunjan shyly slides a little away….samrat edges closer….gunjan says "kya kar rahe ho samrat with mock anger"

Samrat " Kya chashmish main date me apni gf ke paas baitke tv b nahi dekh sakta…..tumhare khatir mai yeh quiz dekh raha ab itna toh tum mere khatir kar sakti ho na n takes her hand in his n sits comfortably . Gunjan tries to relax her mind n her erratic heartbeat which has gone haywire by sitting at such close proximty with samrat.

Samrat : "Lo shuru ho raha quiz , now lets start concentrating n see who wins"

Gunjan : Thinking in her mind , concentrate aur woh b samrat ke itne paas baitke, then she admonishes herself and says she cannot lose this challenge n she better concentrate

Quizmaster to d person on hotseat " First question
Sishu is the literary work of which Indian author?
1) Vikram Seth
2) Jawaharlal Nehru
3) Rabindranath Tagore
4) Arundhati Roy

Samrat quickly takes a look at gunjan, she is lil tensed n trying to assimilate d anwer. Thankfully he remembered d option to be Rabindranath tagore, n before gunjann can voice her answer, he shouts " c, option c, answer is rabindranath tagore option c"

Gunjan is surprised n gives him a suspicious look n nods her head.

Samrat decides in his mind even if he rembers he can't give away all d answers in a round, or else gunjan will get suspicious, so he decided one answer he will leave in every round or answer wrongly,

So next question, though he knew d answer acts as if trying to think hard, by which time gunjan gives d answer….. gunjan is confident n thinks yeah the first answer was a fluke guess or may be he knew it, now she is confident of winning d quiz, but at the third question, samrat cracks it without blinking an eye n her suspicions come to the fore again

But Samrat diverts her attention….dekha chashmish, mai jeet gaya….maine kaha tha na meri GK bahut achi hai, toh taiyyar ho jao apne pehle task ke liye…….(break going on in tv). Gunjan with a long sulking face" bolo kya karna hai"

Samart: (with a sweet smile) U have 3 min chashmish n ur first task is "I need a gunjan I mean chashmish drink"
Gunan: what chashmish drink….yeh kaisa mazak hai….tum kya bol rahe ho mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha

Samrat: Really chashmish ….n here I thot my gf is d most intelligent girl in d college. Cmon chashmish, b a sport, thoda toh socho, masti ke mood me aayo aur apna task karo.

Gunjan (stares at samrat for 15 sec, thinks hard n is clueless for d next 15 secs, then starts biting her lips as another 15 seconds go, and almost at d end of one minute an idea strikes her n she rushes to d kitchen….. She quickly makes a drink n comes n gives a glass of drink to samrat.

Samrat looks at d drink . It is almost greenish grey in color with frothing cream at d top n, on top…t there ia small smiley drawn in whipped cream. Samrat smiles n asks " yeh kaise "gunjan/chashmish drink" hai chashmish, explain"

Gunjan: With a shy smile and a lil confidence explains…."yeh ek mocktail hai samrat lime aur apple juice ka, yaad hai us din hum beech pe jab lime juice pee rahe the tumne kaha ki mai lime juice ki tarah hun, thodi katti thodi meeti aur thodi chulbuli si hoon, aur yaad hai jab hum market me us din apple kharid rahe the, tumne mujhe kaise embarrass kiya us dukanwale bhaiyya ke saamne ki who tumhe mere gaal ke jaisa red apples de aur jab maine tumhe daanta tha tumne kaha "dekho chasmish tum ho hi apple ke jaise, fruit of wisdom, ek apple woh hai jiski wajah se Isaac Newton ki zindagi totally badal gayi n ek apple tum hu , jiske wajah se meri zindagi totally badal gayi", aur last me woh joh smiley cream ki tumhe dikh rahi hai who mera pyaara smile hai joh tumhe is duniya me sabse acha lagta hai (by now gunjan is blushing red n samrat with a wide smile has his mouth gaping at her)..

Samrat: "chashmish, amazing, maine b nahi socha tha ki tum itni innovative hogi…..wow tumne toh mujhe floor kar diya n starts drinking d juice n finishes it in one gulp n says" wow ek dam tumhare hi jaisa meeta n khatta, luved it chashmish n thanks so much, aaj se meri yeh fav drink hai "cahshmish drink"….n goes n gives gunjan a tight hug…gunjan reciprocates with a shy smile

They move back to TV….Round 2,

Neither of them answer d first two questions as samrat remembers he was talking to benji at that time n he had missed out d answers but third question he he answers which was a sports based question so gunjan thinks obviously he had to know d answer….n is sulking again that she has lost d round n readies herself for yet another task of samrat….

Samrat: (with a big victorious smile n naughty look n chooses his words carefully) "chashmish tumhe mere gaal pe poore pyaar ke saath ek aisi cheez deni hogi jo tum mujhe dena nahi chahti"

Gunjan ?immediately looks up with angry eyes)"Samrat yeh kaisa mazak hai, maine tumse kaha tha na, tum tum mmujhe kkiss karne ne liye nahi bologe….yeh cheating hai"

Samrat (acting innocent): Chashmish maine kab tumhe kiss karne ko kaha, maine toh ek aisi cheez maangi jo pyaar se tum mujhe gaal pe dena nahi chahti, soch lo, marzi tumhari hai, haar manna hai to maan sakti ho, its ok I can understand

Gunjan(is fuming n then thinks suddenly n comes up with a quick idea): Smilingly moves towards samrat, goes very close to samrat's face, looks into his eyes, all her love for samrat is reflecting in her eyes, n samrat is anticipating a beautiful kiss, eagerly waiting for his chashmish' lips on his cheeks, then phat comes a small playful slap of soft hands on his cheek while gunjan is still looking into his eyes n burst out into a mischevious laughter…..samrat'face was worth watching, he is shocked n his moth is wide open "chashmish, yeh kya, tha, tumhe mujhe maara kyun, task toh aur kuch tha"

Gunjan:" Really muje nahi pata maine toh socha maine task poori tarah se nibhaya, tumne hi toh kaha tha ki mai tumhe aisi kuch cheez tumahare gaal pe pyaar se dun jo tumhe mai kabhi dena nahi chahti"

(samrat understands his mistake of not framing d request properly n acting as if nursing a red cheek n gowls "Chashmish mai nahi jaanta tha tum itni voilent ho, this is not fair at all chashmish

Gunjan: "everything is fair in love n war" wink n flashes a dazzling smile at him

Samrat : (melting at d smile realizes his chashmish is really way too smart for him n joins in her smile but he has not given up yet)
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To be continued in part 3B.....look in d next post....thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Samrat's Challenge on d date- Final part -3B



Third round again, samrat loses d first question but wins d second n third n gunjan is miffed that too many sports questions were coming in today's episode which is why samrat was fatser than her

Samrat : Chashmish I want u to sing a lovely romantic song for me n saying so he lies down on gunjan's lap. Gunjan is schocked at d intimacy but luking at d affectionate smile of samrat's face she's not able to deny him anything n she is happy samrat is so comfortable n expressive about his love n emotions, affection towards her which he's not able to show in d same way openly to his own sister…uska dil pyaar se umad aata hai n she combs his hair lovingly with her fingers with pure love n affection n starts singing

"Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko Nazar nahin churaana sanam , Badalke meri tum zindagaani, Kahin badal na jaana sanam, Oh, le liya dil, oh haai mera dil ,Haai dil lekar mujhko na behlaana
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko Nazar nahin churaana sanam Badalke meri tum zindagaani Kahin badal na jaana sanam
(Bahaar banke aaoon kabhi tumhaari duniya mein Guzar na jaaye yeh din kahin isi tamanna mein) -
Tum mere ho, ho tum mere ho Aaj tum itna vaada karte jaana Chura liya
Chura liya hai tumne jo dil ko Nazar nahin churaana sanam Badalke meri tum zindagaani Kahin badal na jaana sanam"

Samrat is totally lost n mesmerized in her voice n when she finishes he is still drowned in d mood she has set with her sweet voice, n with gunjan's magical touch on his hairs, he goes into a trance n does not want to wake up at all,..gunjan gently shakes him awake….he opens his eyes with a beautiful smile n before gunjan cud react, he pulls her towards him n gives her a quick kiss on her cheeks n her throat. Gunjan blushing red, moves away from him n asks mock angrily, "samrat maine kaha than a ki aak tum munjhe"…..samrat cuts her short interrupting " sahi kaha tumne chahsmish tumne mujse kaha ki mai tumhe aaj kiss karne ke liye bol nahi sakta magar yeh to nahi kaha tha na ki mai tumne kiss nahi kar sakta…..aur waise bhi tumne itna beautifully gaya ki mai apne aap ko control nahi kar saka aur itna sundar gaane wali girl aur uska gala dono reward ke haqdar hai

Gunjan still blushing replies "but samrat this is not fair"

Samrat " with a wink n sweet lil face repeats her dialogue "everything is fair in love n war chashmish"

Gunjan realizes there is no point in arguing n they move on to d fourth round. In this round both of them answer one question each n they don't know d answer for d 3rd question…so its a tie…Samrat being d lovely bf he is says "chashmish this round is for u, i really want this date to be memorable for u in whole of our life, so main tumse request karta hun ki tumhare dil me kahin koi choti si aasha jo tum poora karna chahti ho is waqt mare saath, jo kuch bhi ho tumhe lagta woh crazy hai stupid hai, kuch bolna hai, kuch poochna hai, kuch bhi tum kar sakti ho, jo tumhara dil hamesha se chahta tha but tum kabhi kar nahi payi "

Gunjan is thinking n a dialogue flashes in her mind "rahul ke bare tumhe mai kya bataoon" n she quickly douses that in her mind but not before samrat has seen d spark of a longing in her eyes

Samrat : common chashmish tumhe meri kasam jo tumne abhi socha tumhe woh karna padega

Gunjan" par samrat"
Samrat "Par war kuch nahi, bolo tum kya bolna chati thi ya kya poochna chahti thi"

Gunjna (j\hesitating n cursing herself for even thinking this as she was sure she wud not be able to do this confidently says" woh woh…rehne do samrat mai nahi kar sakti…
samrat :"tum kya nahi kar sakti chashmish"

gunjan:"woh actually jab maine dil to paagla hai movie dekhi thi jo dialogue madhuri end me bolti hai, mai usse bahut impress ho gayi thi, maine socha tha kash mere jeevan me ek aisa insaan aaye jisse mai waisa dialogue kabhi kah saku…magar mai tumse tumse kaise(blushing)….mujhe sharm aati hai n she closes her face with her hands….

Samrat(removing her hands from her face "wow chashmish mai nahi jaanta tha ki meri chashmish itni romantic hai….ab toh tumhe woh dialogue mujse bolna hi padega….n u cannot say no to me rem chahsmish, mai tumhara sweeet sa pyaara sa bf hun, mera dil tum kaise tod sakti ho"

Gunjan (Finally giving in, closes her eyes recollects d dialogue n improvises it in her mind and opens her eyes, gains confidence from d love n smile shining in samrat's eyes n takes his face in between her hands n luks deep into his eyes n going into a trance says

"Samrat… Woh ekdum pagal hai, Bachcha hai bilkul
Apni baaton se kabhi hasata hai, toh kabhi Rulata hai
Jab woh bolta hai toh lagta hai ki din bahr uski baten sunti rahun
Jab use palat ke delkti hun, toh dil karta hai ki yeh pal yahin tahar jaaye, aur is pal ko main hamesha ke liye apne dil me kaid karlun
Jas uska chera dekti hun to dil karta hai is chehre se meri nazar kabhi hate hi nahin….
Jab who mujhe pyaar se chashmish bulata hai maano uske bol seedhe mere dil ke taar se connect hoten hai aur chashmish se meetha shabd is duniya me kuch hai hi nahi
Jab woh hasta hai toh mann karta hai naach utthun
Jab woh mujhe dekhta hai toh lagta hai ki main duniya ki sabse khubsurat ladki hun
Jab woh gussa hota hai toh dil bhar aata hai,
Jab woh rotha hai toh mann karta hai usse humesha k liye apni baahon me bhar lun
Woh mujhe ehsaas dilata hai ki main uske liye bani hun aur woh mere liye
Main usse bohut pyaar karti hun..ek pal ke liye nahi ek din ke liye aaj ke liey nai, kal nai nahi, zindagi bahr ke liye, Humesha..hamesh ke liye

Gunjan removes her hands from his face but is till looking at him n somehwre half way in d dialogue gets really emotional n has tears pouring down her eyes…..Samrat is equally moved n has tears shining in his eyes….he holds gunjan's face in his hands, brings her forehead forward n kisses her on her forehead n says " thanks chashmish this is best gift I have ever received in my life n this moment will always be etched in memory, much beyond this life, for eternity, as long as my soul exists n gives her a tight hug n says " i love u chashmish….more than my life more than anything in this worlds for as long as I have any life, any soul this heart will always love u, have only ur name etched in it … Gunjan with a lump in her throat says" I luv u too samrat"

After wiping each other's tears, they hear d title music of d quiz coming back after d break

There was only one question in d final round, samrat has forgotten that he has to be cautiously answering d last but in his excitement he blurts out d answer even before d quizmaster completes d question….gunjan is shocked ….she looks at samrat questioningly….samrat caught in his own act, evasively replies "woh chahsmish woh…woh sawal bahut obvious thana….itna aasaan sawal…n he evades…chalo mai quiz jeet gaya….mai tv off karke aata hun…".

Gunjan:(angrily)" Samrat shergill tum kahi nahi jaa rahe jab tak tum muje nahi batate ye sab kya tha"
Samrat: not wanting to lie he says "woh chashmish, woh maine kal actually yeh episode dekh liya tha….magar kasam se mujhe saare answers yaad nahi the….magar…

Gunjan (fuming n starts hitting him on his chest with her hands n pushing him back)…"u cheat u liar…, samrat removes her hand n starts running around d hall saying "magar chashmish maine kab jhoot bola, maine toh nahi kaha that na ki maine yeh episode nahi dekha n ducks as gunjan throws a magazine at him" chahsmish suno toh"
Gunjan picks up d cushion n throws it at him n misses it again n starts running towards him….he circles around d sofa n gunjan is almost about to ctach him when he slips around d edge of sofa handle n falls with full length on d sofa n before he falls tries to catch gunjan to avoid his fall n in d process she also falls on top of him….

Samrat luks up n says sincerely "sorry chashmish tumhe bura laga toh, maine tumse jhoot nahi bola bas tumhare saath thode masti bare pal bitana chahta tha"….by now gunjan's anger melts down n she realizes that she had never enjoyed a day more in her life n says with half reluctance "its ok ….jao maine tumhe is baar maaf kiya, magar agli baar don't expect me to so nice"

Samrat " great jab tumne mujhe maaf kar hi diya ab mera final gift b de do,(when giunjan is about to object), pls don't' say no chahsmish,,,,mai quiz jeet chuka hun toh I deserve my final gift as well….aur waise bhi maine tumse jhoot nahi bhola, agar tum ek baar b poochti ki mujhe answers kaise pata hai toh mai tumhe sach bata deta, magar tuimne pooch nahi yeh tumhara decision than so I have won d challenge fairly ….almost fairly…so will u or wont u?…"

Gunjan: (not wanting to spoil d happy mood, releuctantly agrees to give him d gift n asks) bolo kya chahiye

Samrat: "ek proper victory kiss"

Gunjan:" samrat"angrily trying to get up "ek toh mai tumhari baat maan rahi hun magar tum ho ki, maine kaha than a ki aaj tum mujhe kiss karne ke liye nahi kahoge, phir"

Samrat : preventing her from getting up n holding her a prisoner in his arms " nahi chashmish tumne kaha tha ki mai tumhe kal kiss karne ke liye nahi kah sakta tha, magar aaj toh mai kah sakta hun"

Gunjan is confused n wondering what he is saying

Samrat " time dekha, 12.15 ho chukka toh matlab kal ka din gaya aur aaj mai tumhe kiss karne ke liye kah sakta hun aur tum mana nahi kar sakti kyunki tumne abhi abhi mera gift dene ke liye haan kaha tha....pls chashmish sirf ek kiss hi toh maang raha hun....pls mere khatir"

Gunjan (not wanting to spoil d mood or break his heart mood , n smiling at his smart move n cornered by his witty answer sportingly comes forward n with a shy smile n hesitatingly moves closer to him n blushing red, closing her eyes she gives him a kiss which speaks her depth of love, pure affection, promises for tomorrows, dreams for their future n most of all a need to be with him, be his love for today tomorrow n forever

---------------The End-------------

Sorry friends, had to drag it to four parts….hope u all liked it…psl let me know ur frank comments n thanks a million for ur kind comments n 4 encouraging me to complete this story…thank u so much ….luv u all for ur support


Cheers,
Meenakshi




Edited by meens1981 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i really love your part 3 a and b plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsomeeeee update
thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uc...
luved it to d core..
thnxx for d pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey meena fantastic part yar loved it please ho sake toh continue karo na , by the way i am aashi and thanks for pm

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