MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: maloo19

awsome update

plz update next part soon and thanks for pm

thanx dear....glad u lyked it...😳
will surely update soon...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Kirannnnnnnnnnn

What was that?
Sooooooooooo short but it was cute part
Loved it
x x

Hey Zoah!!!
awww....sry sweetie....didnt hv a lot of tym....!!Glad u lyked it....😳
bt nxt update pakka bara hoga....😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
what an interview, the questions and answers both are hilarious. will be waiting for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
@aamirkhanfan:thanx buddy!!!glad u lyked it...😳
Hey all...
Here for all of u: Part-3: Nupur left for home n all her way bak home didnt do anything else bt cursed Mayank---she knew she wasnt gttn the job n so she had pointlessly wasted her day behind dt guy:"Arrrrghhh...hw I hate him!!!"
She reached home n Ridz opened da door..
Nupur:"Di...tum aaj itni jaldi hospital se aagayi?" Ridz:"Hmhh...aaj kuch khaas kaam nahi tha!!" Ridz noticed da frustrated look on her sister's face n said:"Tujhe kia hoa?" Nupur:"Dnt ask!!" Ridz:"Why??What's up??Arey...aaj toh tera interview tha naa?Bata na!!Kia hoa??"
Nupur was abt to tell hr abt da day n da interview bt she stopped there itself thinking:"Nahi yaar....meri hitler di ko pata chala k main ne Sharma Enterprises k owner se aise baat ki toh meri toh class lag jayegi!!"
Ridz interrupted:"Arey soch kia rahi hai??"
Nupur coming back 2 reality:"Huh??Nahi Di...kuch nahi....umm...main zara fresh ho kar aati hoon!!"
Wen Nupur had gone upstairs 4 a bath, da door bell rang again..
She opened da door to find a stranger yet a handsome guy in front of her..
Ridz:"Yes??"
The guy:"Hello ma'am....main Sharma Enterprises ka owner hoon...Mayank Sharma..aaj wo....Nupur Bhushan interview k liye aayein thi!!"
Ridz, surprised:"O yes!!!Please come in!!"
Wen they had sat down, Ridz:"Par...aap yahan??I mean--kuch problem hai kia?"
Mayank:"Arey...no no...not at all!!Infact, aaj k interview mein Nupur ne saare questions k itne............."he stopped 4 a while recollecting Nupur's answers...he then continued:"ACHE jawaab diye the k main ab aap ko kia bataon!!!"
Ridz was glad at ds:"Really?toh ab??"
Mayank smiling, said casually:"Toh ab baat pakki!!"
Ridz was shocked:"Kia?"
Mayank:"O...no no sorry..I mean job!!Job pakki!!"
Ridz:"Ohk!!!"
Mayank:"Wo...main ye news Nupur ko khud dena chahta tha...if u dnt mind!!!"
Ridz:"O..ofcourse nt...wo upar hai...apne room mein..."
Mayank:"Kaha?"
Ridz:"Upar jaa k left!!"
In Nupur' s room:
Mayank entered n dre...he saw Nupur in front of him...her back turned towards him...as she was drying her wet hair with a towel...Mayank watched her...n then:"Hi!!"
Nupur turned to give him da most shocked xpression!!!Da xpression on hr face was jst wat Mayank wanted to see...
Nupur was too frustrated with him to bear him in her own room n she said angrily:"Tumhari itni himat!!Get out!!I said....go!!Niklo!!"
She pushed Mayank..Bt ultimately due to the water on the floor Nupur fell n Mayank fell on her on da bed nearby...
Gosh....hw close they were...bt NO!!!!THE TWO WERE MORE INTERESTED IN THEIR FIGHT!!
Nupur:"Hato!!"
Mayank:"Chilaao mat!!!Tum koi pari nahi ho jo main tumhare paas aane k bahaane dhoond raha hoon!!"
He then turned his face away 4m her n said:"Main toh bas tumhein ye bataane aaya tha...k...u r appointed!"
Nupur, in shock:"What??Subah mujh par kheechad udaayi, phir interview aur ab mere room mein...aur main tumhare paas job??no way....Di ko pata chala na k tum yaha ho toh tum toh gaye kaam se!!"
At this, Mayank stood up n said:"Mujhe toh kuch kahe na kahe..par agar tumhari di ko ye pata chala k tumne subah SHARMA ENTERPRISES k owner se aise baat ki toh??"
Nupur gave him a worried look:"dekho tum..."
Mayank interrupted:"Tum sharaafat se kal kaam par aa jaana...wo kia hai na...i hate latecomers!!"
And he left n behind there was da most frustrated girl ever!!
Nupur imitated him:"I hate late-comers!!!!!!!!!!!Is ki aisi-ki-taisi!!!Ahhhhh...."
Part ends...
Comments please!!😳
As I always say...please add me as ur buddy if u want me to pm u da nxt tym i update...!!
Cheers--Kiran=)
Edited by kiran--madi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
tu hai meri kiran :)
ha ha..I cant believe he came home to give her the news
LOL n inspite of the closeness they were set to fight
gr8 going yaar:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
amazing update yaar

i loved the fight b2in mayur

hope they will together soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
loved mayur fight, thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
amazing yaar
but again short part and you complaint about my updates being short LOL
I want long update now OK?
Loved this part!
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
hey dear nice part
loved the mayur fight
do continue soon
n please a bit longer part
and pllz also have a glance on my fic
immensely in love [EMAIL=http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1212894]IMMENSELY IN LOVE[/EMAIL]
Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
Hi kiran,
lovely update.
loved mayur cute nok-jhok.
it was really very nice.
now looking forward for ur next part.
update soon.

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