MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 79

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part bt 2 short.........neways no probs...........thnx fr d pm n cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
great updt dear
loved armaan n mayank's 'all-boy' CBI talk
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update kiran.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey....🤗
Thank you so so much for all the comment friends....I am glad you guys enjoyed reading...would have loved to reply to each one seperately but was just a little more curious to update...so here it goes....
Part-22:
Mayank spoke in a louder tone:"Nupur..Nupur bas bhi karo....reunion aaj hi hai...tum bhi had karti ho..." All he heard was Nupur's voice and he could make out that she was on the far end of the room...possibly still busy with make-up and it only made him more frustrated. N:"Kia hai Mayank?!Thodi der toh lagegi na...pata hai tumhare liye main kitna jaldi jaldi tayaar ho rahi hoon?!" M:"Puraane zamaane mein log jhoot bolne se pehle sau baar sochte the aur aaj....log itna confidently jhooth bolte hain...do ghante!!!do ghante hone ko aaye...ye toh bhala ho Chinky ka jo Bui ko apne saath baher le gayi...warna pata nahi kia hota...bas bhi karo Nupur....agar tum do minute mein baher nahi aayi toh...toh main tumhein chod k chala jaonga..." But Nupur was Nupur...she could get the most irritated side of Mayank out...even after 5 minutes Nupur didnt open the door and Mayank continued complaining:"Nupur..Samrat reunion mein aa k chala bhi jaayega aur humein pata bhi nahi chalega...kyunki humari Nupur rani jo tayaar ho rahi thi....Nupur tum..."and finally he spoke no more.. The door opened and who stood in front of him was surely no less than a beautiful princess. Dressed in a beautiful purple gown....she looked gorgeous. The beautiful glittering earrings and the necklace only added to the beauty of her glowing face. Her hair was in curls and for a moment or two Mayank stood just holding his breath absolutely mesmerised by her looks. For a while, Nupur felt a little shy because Mayank's looks were just....!!!!!But then to change the topic she said:"Kyun Mr.Sharma...?maante hona...aisa lagne k liye do ghante toh intezaar kar sakte hona?" Mayank smiled at her adorably...she was looking stunning and the innocence and chirpiness in her tone made him love her even more..he walked a little closer to her and said:"Agar tum rozz itni khoobsoorat dekhogi...toh main do ghante kia...poori zindagi intezaar kar sakta hoon." At this Nupur's heart skipped a beat. He was so close to her and her words. In her eyes, she felt she looked even more pretty because it was her Mayank who had appreciated her looks.
"Ahem ahem..."
And the two parted to maintain some distance for who were coming were Armaan and Ridhimma. Armaan looked handsome with the blazer...a properly dressed gentleman...just the way Mayank looked!!!And Ridhimma...as if the two sisters were blessed with beauty....she looked as gorgeous as her younger sister with the red gown and perfect curls of her hair.
R:"Mayank...are you sure?matlab...tumhein lagta hai k humein aana chahye..."She was referring to herself and Armaan. Mayank had made it clear to them that they had to come for the reunion but Ridhimma insisted on them not going since neither she herself nor Armaan had been a student of Excel!!
M:"Ridhimma....hum logo k liye ye reunion koi party nahi hai...hum wahan sirf Samrat k liye jaa rahe hain...reunion k card mein ye likha hai k apne saath ek partner ko laa sakte hain...is liye Nupur mere saath jaa rahi hai..aur raha tum dono ka sawaal...toh main ne khud ye reunion organise kia hai is liye mujhe kaafi free cards mile the....just so I can invite people...toh tum dono invited ho...aur phir main aur Nupur akele poore hallroom mein nahi dekh paayeinge...tum logo ko bhi toh dhiyaan rakhna parega na..."
A:"Mayank theek keh raha hai..But dude!!Samrat se mil kar us se baat kaise shuru karni hai...I mean...wo toh Pari ka naam sunte hi..."
M:"Armaan...Samrat bas ek baar mil jaye aur meri bas usse ek mulaqat ho jaye!!!"
Armaan smiled encouragingly and the four headed towards Excel.
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The atmosphere at Excel was just so enthusiastic and undeniably beautiful...old mates met....friends hugged and met each other with the same old touch and shared some laughs in the place where they had spent so much of time with each other. When Mayank met a few of his ex-classmates, he told them he was looking for Samrat...the more people knew about that one person...the better and easier it was see him...
The couples were asked to move to the dance floor to dance on the tunes of salsa. Armaan insisted on Ridhimma accompanying him to the dance floor as it was just a refreshing memory for them...Ridhimma still remembered how Armaan had arranged a surprise birthday party for her, during the days of their internship, and the salsa when for the first time Ridhimma stared directly into his eyes to see his feelings for her. Ridhimma was reluctant to go when Armaan made a sulky face....on the dance floor reliving the moments of the past....a past passed 5 years ago....the dance was just as perfect as it had been for the first time...and as it ended, it only brought the two more closer...a few moments after it, as the two stood at a side, Armaan started:"So?"
R:"Soooo??"
A:"Maza aaya?puraani yaadein..."
R:"Haan...puraani yaadein...come on...ab ye sab puraani baatein hain...I don't think tumhein koi farak pada hoga is dance se...its just a normal dance.."
Ridhimma said it on purpose just to know Armaan's feelings. As for her, this was the most cherished moment of her life.
Armaan smiled:"Pata hai...us pehle dance ne mere dil ko ye ehsaas dia tha k things are different when you are around....us din tum itni achi lag rahi thi....Nupur k filmy style mein kahoon toh...waqt tham gaya tha..."
Ridhimma teased:"Acha?Aur aaj?"
Armaan took two steps to get closer to her and Ridhimma actually felt the time had stopped. He came closer to her ears and said in that killing soft voice which, even after years, didnot fail to make Ridhimma's mind go crazy:"Aaj??aaj toh jaise...jaise meri saans tham gayi ho..."
Ridhimma looked at him holding her breath. She couldnot explain how happy she was to have Armaan back in her life. He and he alone meant the world to her.
Part ends....
People...I am still drooling over Nupur's purple dress in that Mohabatein song sequence🤪...so all the reason why I chose her dress color to be purple...
Lady!!!Rati Pandey can actually bring any man on his toes!!!😍
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Love all--Kiran =)
Edited by kiran--madi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'll be back.. i missed out some parts.. will read them and comment together for all the parts
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Posted: 14 years ago
kya yaar tum kabse itne chote parts likne lagi...........poora maza bhi nhi uthe paayi..............ne ways thnx fr d pm n cont soon plus it was soooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago

soooo sweet part...

but yaar....it was so short....

thnx for the pm.............

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update

loved it
short but sweet
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kiran sweet n brilliant update loved mayu moment n u right nup's purble dress in morena she was looking amaznig thanks hun 4 d pm

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