MayUr/AR FF:Undefined Relationships..Upd:pg-135 - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago

Kiran, nice story and suspence.... loved all the updates... please add me to your PM list.... and update soon...

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Posted: 15 years ago
dear ur ff is really grt yaar
i luved it.......
plz add me in ur pm list
n do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Jess-

Kiran, nice story and suspence.... loved all the updates... please add me to your PM list.... and update soon...

Hi Jess...
welcum 2 my FF...
so glad u caught up with all da parts n lyked them...😊
i hv added u on my pm list...will b surely pming u nxt tym i update...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mehramanjeet88

dear ur ff is really grt yaar
i luved it.......
plz add me in ur pm list
n do cont soon

Hey there...
thank u so vry much 4 all da appreciation...
so so glad u read da FF n lyked it...😳
will surely pm u nxt tym i update....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi everyone....🤗 There's nothing mre sweeter than ur wonderful comments guys....luv u all....
I m being so-unlike-myself....updating soon....😆😆
But only if u ppl cn bear reading my FF n boring urself with my frequent updates, should I continue being punctual...LOL..
Well, too long a speech....
Lots of it opening up in this update....so here it is:
Part-9:
Mayank had been driving absent-mindedly for almost half an hour...having no idea where he was going. He finally stopped at a place which a few seconds later his mind recognised to be a beach. How had he reached there was something he didn't know. But that wasn't what his mind was thinking of. A few seconds later, he came out of his car and went and sat near the shore. Tears dropping down his cheeks..endlessly...People passing by gave him questioning and curious looks but Mayank's thoughts were far away from present. His mind was still trying to accept the truth he had read in Nupur's diary. She was married!!She had a 5 year old daughter!!He felt disgusted at himself for he had fallen for a lady already married!!How could he possibly be so stupid?!--he hated himself!!And even more, he hated Nupur...even though Mayank was unaware that Nupur was married, BUT Nupur knew about her life..so how could a mother of a 5 year old daughter possibly encourage a guy?!!--he finally spoke:"Shesh...I hate you Nupur...!!"
And that was all he could say...he felt disgusted, irritated!!!
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Ridhimma reached the hospital. The first thing she did was to brief her new bunch of interns. Once done with that, she gave searching looks here and there looking for a face she knew. She inquired a little before she got to know that Armaan was in a lab upstairs. She hurriedly ran upstairs..was it the curiousty to see him?Or was it the fear that she would lose him again?--she didn't seem to know. Once in the lab, she entered and found nobody but she turned when she heard a voice from behind from the entrance door.."Kisse dhoond rahi ho...mujhe?"
She gave a sigh of relief before turning...relieved that he was still there...but once she looked at him, she said nothing.
Armaan walked towards her, closing the door behind him and then said:"Is baar nahi Ridhimma...is baar main jaane k liye wapis nahi aaya...Aur agar jaana bhi para toh tumhein saari sachayi bataye bina nahi jaonga.."
Ridhimma tried to leave but this time....this time Armaan didn't let go of her.
Ridhimma highered her tone a little to say:"Armaan..."
But Armaan wouldn't let her complete:"Sssh...."he said placing a finger on her lips. She stared into his eyes. He continued in a very soft voice for he could never be harsh on her:"Yaad hai Ridhimma...tum hamesha kehti thi k hamesha apne dil ki suno kyunki ek baar dunya ki baaton mein aa kar dimaag galat faisla suna bhi de...magar dil...dil kabhi jhooth nahi bole ga..."
She gave a smile..for the first time..she smiled at him...she nodded while he continued:"Tum sab ko yeh hi samjha thi aur apne liye??Ek baar yeh keh do k tumhein aaj bhi aisa lagta hai k main tumhare saath itna galat kar sakta hoon?"
A tear rolled down her cheek and Armaan wiped it off. She said:"Par tumne itna bara faisla kaise le lia Armaan?Tumne...tumne sab ki zindagi badal di...meri...Nupur ki..apni...aur..."
Her voice died away..Armaan left her and took out a letter from his pocket and said:"Isse ghar jaa kar parh lena...sab samajh jaogi.."
And he left leaving behind a smiling Ridhimma for she now knew HER Armaan could never be wrong...
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Late that morning Nupur made it to office. It was basically an off for her because of the extra work load on her for the past few days. But she still wanted to go...just to see Mayank...
When she reached office, she gave a cute smile to Mayank who was sitting there in his office. Mayank just stared back blankly. Nupur could then make out something was wrong. What happened next brought up a heated argument between the two!!
Nupur:"Kia hoa Mayank sab theek hai?"She placed a hand on his shoulder.
Mayank immediately took that away:"Waah Nupur!Kia actress ho?Tumhein zara si bhi sharam nahi aati naa?"
Nupur was shocked..how could Mayank speak to her like this?She just managed to stammer:"M..m..Mayank.."
Mayank said in a high tone:"Haan...Nupur Bhushan. Tum!!Sharam nahi aati tumhein...ek bache ki maa ho kar tum yeh sab.."
When Nupur gave him questioning and shocking looks as to how he had known about it, he said:"Haan...aaj subah main tumhare ghar aaya tha aur wahan tumhari diary parh li."He then firmly held Nupur against his chest by her arms and said:"Kyun?"
Nupur started crying:"Mayank...M..mayank..mujhe dard ho raha hai.."
Mayank:"Acha hai...atleast doosro ko jo takleef deti ho uska ehsaas toh ho tumhein.."
Nupur tried to explain but Mayank just went on to say:"Kyun?Kyun mujhe encourage karti rahi..?Why was I attracted to you?Kyun nahi bataya k tumhari ek beti hai?Pari...ussi k liye job kar rahi thi na tum?Kyun?kyun nahi bataya?"
Nupur finally broke out in a high voice:"Nahi bataya kyunki Pari meri beti nahi hai...."She whispered again:"Nahi hai woh meri beti..."
And she left...Mayank closed his eyes and heaved a sigh...!!Of relief but then what was it about Pari?----he kept on thinking...
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Nupur sat silently on her bed. No single drop of tear in her eyes because her life had given her all the pain..enough pain to make her strong enough..she was emotionless. She didnt realize when Ridhimma had come to her room and sat beside her. She looked at Ridz who gave her a very understanding look for she was the only person who knew all...
Nupur rested her head on Ridz's lap and then started weeping silently. Ridimma tried to console her by gently moving her hand on her head and then Nupur said:"Di....meri zindagi mein....kabhi khushi nahi aayegi naa...kabhi pyaar nahi aayega...."
Ridhimma tried to console her:"Aisa nahi hai.."
Nupur:"Aisa hi hai Di....mujhe koi nahi samjh paaya...aur naa hi koi kabhi mujhe samjhe ga..."
And she wept silently till she got a little relief from her pain by a few hours of sleep but Ridhimma was still there...close to her...she didn't want to leave her sister alone...
Part ends...
Comments please...😳
Kiran=)
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Posted: 15 years ago
I love this very unlike kiran :) he he..cos u update faster n that makes me happy :)
wo this part was really painful for the both of them..(MN ie.. :D)
but love it loads :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
yeah.. i was a bit surprised to see ur PM so early... but man.. this update.. dhamaka tha.. aur parda faash kardo.... let mayur enjoy!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was a painful part..................aur Nupur................o, i feel so bad for her.....................

plz update soon..................u can stay unlike Kiran if u want............LOL


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Posted: 15 years ago
Kiran, very sad part for MN... but I hope at least AR will be together soon....
nice update... please update soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
kiran i love it whne u update fast
lovley update
maynk's word and now yaar plz soon tell na past
i am dying to read the flashback

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